Hridaya Paksha (Wings of the heart)

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Hridaya Paksha

(Wings of the heart)

Clunker Falcon😃

"Amma the plans for the Pondicherry spa are delayed, it looks like Meenakshi Hari adjusted her glasses on the bridge of her nose

"What happened? Shobana sipped her coffee flipping pages on the Hindu, skipping "Page 3

"The architect is saying what ever you want for vastu he cannot make it happen ma

"Don't tell Appa Shobana whispered, her daughter and her co-owned a chain of wellness spas across Tamil Nadu called Swasthya

"Amma please how many things will we hide?

"Ennadi? We haven't hidden state secrets, just that plumbing leak in the Coimbatore location, and that power trip last night at the Chetpet location

"Amma Appa already thinks we are expanding too fast

"Left to Appa, we wont even have one spa Shobana leaned on the couch and stared outside

Blazing hot Nungambakkam sunshine blinded her eyes, the front courtyard was a beautiful lush paradise of mango, guava and hibiscus trees. Hari Narayanan her husband was bent over his favorite 1960 Ford Falcon.

"Amma sema ugly color ma, ask him to get rid of it

"Po di, its his year of birth, he absolutely wont do it Shobana sighed

"Then you should tell him the truth about the problems at all three locations

Meenakshi stood up and stretched, like her father she was above average, 5'7 tall, with eyes exactly like her name, but hidden behind large glasses

She wore it adamantly even though she could easily wear contacts

She dressed simply, in fine cotton sarees, a wave of revival sweeping Tamil Nadu

Today's saree a Maheshwari Cotton in bright yellow with a purple border

She was good with business, she had the natural aptitude for it Appa called her the "Boss Lady

Amma rolled her eyes

The two younger brothers Sriram and Srihari were bums in comparison, both wasted the family fortune in "study abroad programs and were still "finding themselves

"Amma Cheechu (Sriram) wanted to try some mridangam lessons this year no?

"He wants to try something every year Shobana set her paper down and got up

The help brought their 4th cup of filter coffee

Amma purposefully walked towards Hari

"Enough! How much longer are u going to stand here? Its 10 AM and already 41C Amma wiped her brow with her pallu

"Is Meenakshi still at home? he asked longingly

"YOU are parked in front of the gate, her car is before your clunker how can she go? Amma mocked

"Not clunker di... Falcon Appa corrected

"She wants to go, edatha kaali pannungo (move ur car out)

"Where is she going? Appa asked eagerly

"WHERE ELSE? Nungambakkam spa first, Chetpet, and then Adyar Amma sighed

"Not for anything else huh?

"Nope Amma shook her head lowering her gaze

"Ask her to date di

"Yes, AND I will ask her to get some tattoos

Amma and Appa looked inside, their daughter was bent over the Pondicherry spa plan unmindful of her parents' worried gaze piercing through the glass French doors

"Avana pathi nenaichukaralo illeyo? (does she even think about him?)

"No I don't think so Amma responded too quickly

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Congratz and next update pleaseee...
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You have this ability to make us want more!!!!!
Not a boring single line in your stories!!!!!the kine where one update stops,we crave for more!!!!
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Meenakshi stood up and stretched, like her father she was above average, 5'7 tall, with eyes exactly like her name, but hidden behind large glasses
She wore it adamantly even though she could easily wear contacts

She dressed simply, in fine cotton sarees, a wave of revival sweeping Tamil Nadu
Today's saree a Maheshwari Cotton in bright yellow with a purple border

This was superr❤️this first convos
Reminds me of first update in sosy...though II is different in her words n costumes with this meenakshi Hari...
Who is this He????
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Woow
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Nice start Nisha...
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Something to keep us all connected...
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So excited about a new story!! That too one set in Chennai!!!! Woo hoo...🥳
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Woah!! This is the best ever possible comeback pick me up that you could give us all after a short break.

A bit late to get here I guess but love this as always. My wings of heart 😉 is soaring high after a flutter

And And And wishing the best for Hridaya Paksha to take wings for a fantabulous take off and landing.

Good luck and Chennai it is for a blast . 😊

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