Hridaya Paksha (Wings of the heart) - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey Nisha. The story base hits home. Varadhan group as a conglomerate kept me connecting it to the TVS group and that kind of family and business dynamics. The paiyan is indeed chamathu kanna... well we will seee for real soon.

Brilliant start... I'm so looking forward to see things unfold ... like I said the names are home , in fact one of the names here is the apple of my eye❤️ ... this story is going to be special in more ways than one.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: jaschick

Wow ... Nisha ! Chennai setting - love it ❤️


Fantastic openings... Thank u for the new story !
Eager for more 😃



Jas glad you got here soon. Otherwise you would hv recd my note today evening.Ha Ha. Now pls get the other ladies here as well. 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Shoreee

SO Sorry
I will translate in the morning



I kinda figured out but yes more English would be good.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Paisley Prayer

"We cannot allow this Seshadri growled

"He is a grown boy... Man... he is 30 years old

"Vasudha is happy he is not saying yes to marriage?

"After whatever happened she has completely drowned herself in temples and religious activities Srinivas fought the feeling of shame valiantly

Seshadri sensed it, and turned to his computer

"These days, the new computer programs require me to go back to college joking

"I agree... Vikram wants to study more. Anirudh is saying "Let him go Appa I will be here no

"Ask him to travel... go to Wisconsin Seshadri whispered, scanning Srini's table for any more paan

Srini rang for Charu

"What Mama?

"Kanna can u please order some... he laughed

Charu nodded and snuck out

"What about her da? Seshadri quipped

"Ivala? Her? She is barely 20 Seshu... 21... or something. Umm... no... Srini's face took on an aloof look

He was extremely status conscious and class obsessed

"Seems like a good girl Cheenu

"Umm... good girl seri... OK... but... umm... uhhh Srini grunted and rubbed his greying hair

"Has Vasudha seen her?

"Umm...hmmm Srini laughed

"What is her opinion? I will have to talk to Manni" (Bhabhi)

"Chancey ille da "

no hope

"Why?"

"He is THIRTY kanna. Umm.. inda kalathu paiyan (boy of these times) "

Srini grunted pausing meaningfully indicating Anirudh might have had relationships

"Let me try"

"No... paavam she is only 21 "

Srini sighed and leaned back and switched the play list to Sikkil Gurucharan

The men worked away for the next 4 or so hours

Anirudh peeked around 4 "Appa naa varen... see you"

"Kanna!!!" Seshu uncle hollered

Anirudh paused

"Charu pidichirkala? "(do u like her?)

Anirudh gasped quickly shutting the door, letting himself in

"She is as old as my daughter, so no I haven't thought about her"

"Idu romba extreme da that's an exaggeration" Srini scolded his son

"and the Suggestion isn't? "Anirudh bristled

"Its OK kanna... just head to the temple " Srini approved

Anirudh rolled his eyes and turned to the door

Amma came from home and he drove up from OMR road, it was almost 6:30 when they entered Kapaleshwar Temple in Mylapore and took the footwear off

He bend down to turn down the faucet as the tiny stainless steel nozzle sprayed everywhere, soaking his mother's peacock blue silk cotton saree

He noticed a foot adorned with the most gorgeous paisley patterned anklet on clean scrubbed feet with no nail color, her orange underskirt soaked from the spray from his faucet, he quickly twisted it down or atleast tried to

Couldn't help let his eyes, follow the glistening foot all the way up to the flawless face hidden under oversized glasses

She had seen him before he had

She turned her faucet off, staggering back as a man's strong arms steadied her

Not as tall as him but he too had mickey ears Anirudh noticed

A heat wave surged inside him as his heart raced

"Meenakshi? Epdi Iruke? " Anirudh growled with proprietorial familiarity

She turned crimson when she heard her name being called

"Hmmm... neenga? (yourself) she asked instead, respectfully inserting that distance

Vasudha Varadan looked like she was about to have a heart attack...

Edited by Nisha0604 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25
Sudhi
I added translation as much as possible in the previous chapter
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Jeez louise...Kapali kovil - mylapore!!! One of my fave temples ever-used to go there weekly when I was younger😃
Lovely update...looking forward to finding out more about Anirudh and Meenakshi...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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His father had a different expression while saying the name meenakshi and anirudh is with a different one...waiting for more...
Thank u nisha😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28
I think i have a hint... are they divorced ? Or have they been bethrothed and then split due to differences? Kalyanam nadake ve illeya?
Next update Nishaaa
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Kalpana

I am going to make the guy a chamathu paiyan😛
Lets seee😆


Hey Nisha!!! Congratulations on the new story. What is chamathu paiyan???
Hola my Sosy co-readers
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Neha07


Hey Nisha!!! Congratulations on the new story. What is chamathu paiyan???
Hola my Sosy co-readers



goody goody boy :)

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