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Posted: 7 years ago
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First dsay of school

"Hum pack karke de tumaara school ka pack?" Suvi asked a sullen Nihar softly

"No... no... its a BACKPACK" he hissed breathlessly, trying to stuff his books in
It was the first day of school

Aadhya was beyond thrilled she had conjured up many many scenes in her mind as to how she would walk into school holding her "Nihaad hand"

"te apalacya vadeelace, annna... annna shakkara" she cooed to her daughter

"Aai tumhala vaatate ki to mala aavadato?" she asked her mother sadly

"Khoop" Suvi sighed... "Khoop" she repeated trying to convince herself

"Soyi nahi aap?"

"Aadhya ko sula rahe hai mein"

"Rahe nahi rahi" he winked

"Mera Hindi ekdum perfect hai Neel" she smiled

Aadhya sat up curiously

She was sure her mother had feelings for this man. It piqued her interest, they were together all the time. Aai looked very happy AND they lived in NOIDA now

Now Tai

No mosquitos in this house

The bed was great too


Neel sat on the edge of the bed

"Yeh meda BAD hey" Aadhya waved her finger

"Sorry" he stood up

"Aadhyaaa" Suvi scolded

"Kalaji karu nakka" Neel's eyes twinkled

Suvi smiled shyly

"Yeh barobar nai haan? Bata rahi hei tumhe... tum Mumbaiich 30 years rahe, main khaali dilli ek saal"

"Barabari karengi?" he asked softly his eyes roving over her form

"Neel" she warned

"Aai...to ooncha maanus aahe" Aadhya reminded her mother she cannot be "barabar:

Suvi chuckled at her daughter's innocence

"Nihar ko unifrom pasand aaya?"

"Pata nahi... kuch bola nahi mere ku"

"Aapne poochha?"

"Khaate time bola nei... Umm umm... umm.." Suvi sighed

"I am sorry Suvi" he said defeatedly

"Neel aapko sorry nei khene ka hei... Nihar apni Aai ko miss karenge na?" Suvi was trying to be brave

With each passing day she had less and less reserves to tap into sadly

"Hum subah chhod dete hain... aap le aayen afternoon mein?"

"Main subah bhi leke jaayegi na?"

"Umm..."

Please Neel... aapko dilli bhi jaane ka hai"

"Umm" Nee got up swiftly

Aadhya was asleep now

Suvi picked up her toys from her bed

"Subah baat kar lenge" Neel stalled

"Neel pehle DPS phir office... phir shaam ko ghar... kitta driving"

"Umm"

He pulled the curtains to close it

Sat on the couch, she went on to rattle off everything about what a first school day should be and how she would make it fun for Nihar and what all she would do in the morning,
and how she will wake up early and make sheera

Suvi sat by him and rubbed his back soothingly

"Tension hai koi?"

"Nahi..." he fake smiled

"Chalo theek hai main chhod degi jaake sotey hain apan?" she asked

"Umm... Suvechha... Nihar humko kahe... aap ke saath nahi jaayenge first day of school" he said


Waves of gried swept over her, she controlled it... or tried to, her tears flushed out

"Umm... barobar" she nodded and got up turning away

As he leaned on the couch weakly shutting his eyes





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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you Nisha.
Nihar, how do we make you understand Suvi isn't bad and she isn't trying to replace your Mom.

Waiting to see Suvi happy.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Grim reality !!! but this update was like manna to parched hopes like mine !!
Thanks Nisha...I see the status quo continues and the situation has not changed a bit as far as Nihaar is concerned. Wonder when or if ever he would begin to accept the inevitable

This new family deserves all the happiness they can get but the road seems so rocky and hard. Hope we get to hear more and the ID saga continues to a joyous conclusion !!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: VeeIyer

Grim reality !!! but this update was like manna to parched hopes like mine !!

Thanks Nisha...I see the status quo continues and the situation has not changed a bit as far as Nihaar is concerned. Wonder when or if ever he would begin to accept the inevitable

This new family deserves all the happiness they can get but the road seems so rocky and hard. Hope we get to hear more and the ID saga continues to a joyous conclusion !!

Even i want to see how nihar begins his story of acceptance
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey Nisha. A beautiful ID update and got me thinking deep. Will post my thoughts post noon. Thank you very much for indulging us .Congrats on ID 4.

Thanks Pritee very much for the tip off.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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An adult like conniving Tai with her treacherous schemes has rejected Suvi every second that they lived together but it wasn't that difficult for most times irritated Suvi to sleep and wake over it brushing it off to start another day but ... A child's rejection ... that's something else altogether. Nihar's rejection of Suvi on something always exciting like the first day of school is like somebody punched you in your gut. I'm thinking being Rejected by child and the emotional hurt and the guilt should pain her in a visceral physical way that should feel as if she had been dealt a neat right arm jab under her ribs knocking her breath out . This is not mere irritation but pain .

No wonder she got up quickly moving away from Neel struggling to breathe distressed. We though will continue to hope that this pain is temporary.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Folks need help with the Marathi part .. what was Aadhya and suvi's convo about Nihar.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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te apalacya vadeelace, annna... annna shakkara" she cooed to her daughter

They are your father, brother ... brother sugar

"Aai tumhala vaatate ki to mala aavadato?" she asked her mother sadly

Mom do you think he likes me

"Khoop" Suvi sighed... "Khoop" she repeated trying to convince herself

Very much

Kalaji karu nakka" Neel's eyes twinkled

Don't worry

"Aai...to ooncha maanus aahe" Aadhya reminded her mother she cannot be "barabar:

Mom he is tall man
Right
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Originally posted by: PriteeMisra

te apalacya vadeelace, annna... annna shakkara" she cooed to her daughter

They are your father, brother ... brother sugar

"Aai tumhala vaatate ki to mala aavadato?" she asked her mother sadly

Mom do you think he likes me

"Khoop" Suvi sighed... "Khoop" she repeated trying to convince herself

Very much

Kalaji karu nakka" Neel's eyes twinkled

Don't worry

"Aai...to ooncha maanus aahe" Aadhya reminded her mother she cannot be "barabar:

Mom he is tall man
Right



Thanks Pritee. Much appreciated 👍🏼
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Uneven & rough

Neel spent the morning trying to bridge the gap physically and emotionally.
He threw an olive branch at Nihar during breakfast, when he served him dahi with the cream on top, just the way Nihar loved his paranthas
Suvi tried her best to roll out the stuffed aloo paranthas in perfect round shape

They werent

Nihar stared at the misshapen stack pensively not attempting to reach

Neel served him one

"Its not round and its not cut up like pizzas" he mumbled

"Hahah" Neel laughed easily trying to play along while he trimmed the uneven edges and turned them into perfect triangles

Aadhya ate her mis shapen paratha wordlessly, in awe of the new man

Neel noticed that and offered her a perfect round one

She smiled like she had just received the happiest news in her life, a trip to Disney

Suvi peeked from the hallway leading to the kitchen

Nihar noticed he was being watched and tried to extend his dahi eating time

Soon it was time to rush and he eventually began eating the triangular scraps

He left a triangle and almost 70% of another as he got up

She wrapped up in the kitchen

She heard loud noises in the living room and shouting

"Well she stepped on my CLEAN NEW SOCKS" "with her dirty went shoe foot" Nihar screamed

"Its drizzling, she was excited to go in the car so ran outside to check it out, lets go Nihar, get another new pair from your drawer" Neel hissed

"Mitti kar diya inhoney" he yelled

"Cmon now Nihar... enough" Neel was patient

Nihar sat on the couch arms crossed across his chest

It was already 7:08

"I wont go if she rides with us" Nihar yelled

Neel was inside bringing him a new pair

"Is she going with us?" Nihar asked again

"Umm.. no... u didnt want her to remember??!!" Neel was furious

Suvi was washing the dough off her hands frantically, hoping she can change out of her night suit and take an auto to school with Aadhya


"Main chhod degi Neel" Suvi said softly

"Baat AAPKI ho rahi hai Aadhya ki nahi" he scowled


She looked at him confused

"Aai Nihaad school nei jaayegi?" Aadhya pulled on her arm worriedly

"Jaayega beta" he cupped those tiny cheeks

"Sooo nei payna?" Aadhya was dismayed

Neel smiled at her, amused

"Aadhya, mee tumhala saleta gheuna jato" I will take u to school

Aadhya began to cry loudly

"Suvechha yeh kya nayi problem khadi kar di aapne?" Neel was shocked

"Neel aap Nihar ko leke jao, umm.. mei..." she mumbled trying to whisper

"Aadhya hamare saath jaayegi"

"Umm.." Suvi stole glances... Nihar, Aadhya and Neel... back and forth in a constipated look

"Nihar socks pehanen aur gaadi mein baithen" Neel ordered

Nihar was fine now... since he got what he wanted


He walked to the car obediently

Neel carried a howling Aadhya

Suvi sprinted behind him in horror

"She is GOING?" Nihar was furious again pulling on the car door

"YES, Nihar... GET IN RIGHT NOW" Neel spoke through clenched teeth

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