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Popping bubbles...

Prakash divvied up the special tip encashment, netting thousands for the three waiters and Rao Anna and an equal portion for the slacker bum of a part time cook.
Five silver stars worth over 10,000 rupees each was a good pay day for them.

"An lonely old man" Prakash sighed pocketing his share and the collections for the day
He was feeling terrible for his daughter he was going to buy her something, there had never been a Rs.10,000 rupee tip, ever in his lifetime.

He wanted to fix the leg of Trisha's bed, or get her a new one, or buy new frigs for the restaurant, or buy one for the home?

He would fix her bed, or give this old ancestral one away and buy her a new modern one with a nice mattress

Give her the rest so she could buy herself something nice, he didnt understand her fashion at all
She wore colorful clothes but he had no idea where she bought them

He smiled locking up the steel safe with goddess Lakshmi's picture on it

"Lonely man will not hand daily tips like this Prakash" Rao Anna prodded him to think

"Well then he may not be lonely then, he might just have liked the one or two traditional
Konkani items we have on the back page of the menu" Prakash told him confidently

"Nah... I still dont think so" Rao Anna paused
"what are you trying to say? Prakash asked

"I think he was here for Trisha"

"You think Trisha married HIM?" Prakash was deeply hurt

"Oh no..."

"You have not met the boy she married... umm.. he was very handsome, tall, expensive clothes, nice hair. But he did not wear socks" Prakash said

"Is this man the father then?"

"Umm.. I dont know" Prakash looked confused

"It is bothering you too... Prakash, sit down" Rao Anna urged

Prakash sat reluctantly

"Face it... its hard... she has behaved recklessly, but some one in that family still likes her"

"the boy does not" Prakash choked up

"Yes they are very rich, and uncaring, but this man seems to like her"

"Lets call her and ask" Prakash tried to get up

Trisha walked out after locking everything up on the inside, it was the night after she had walked him to his car

"What are two best friends talking about?"


"Come sit" Prakash urged, patting the red vinyl seat by the front windows where diners waited for seats

"Lets go home, I am tired"

"Yes, you must be tired, you must have chopped 100 onions today" Rao anna patted her head

"Who is that old man?" Prakash asked softly

Trisha blushed gloriously

"Umm.. he is" she swallowed

Rao Anna noticed the self conscious look of pleasure flit across her face

"He is Ashwin's grandfather"

"I TOLD" Rao Anna was loud

She looked at both men accusingly

"You both are talking about me?"

"Only to unravel the mystery love" Rao Anna said

He patted his shirt pocket the folded 10 grand sat there

"I know there wont be a penny of this if it werent for you" he said

"It would have" she tried to be flippant

"Does he want you back?" Prakash asked stunned

She shook her head... "I dont know he is just coming everyday, not today... u know last 5 days?"


"He must want something" Rao Anna smiled

"Has the husband called?"

She shook her head, shrugged and shook her head "No...I dont know I... No... I dont know I dont use that number anymore" she said softly

"WHY?" Prakash was baffled

"Because I didnt want them to know"

"what happened there to make you so wary?" he was protective

"Aanu nothing, really, they were all nice... I didnt want to be connected to that place... or (him?)

"Your father says he looks like a prince" Rao Anna said

"Father always thinks anyone that dresses well is a prince" Trisha mocked

The trip got up and trudged home

"what is his name?" Prakash asked his daughter later that night dozing off on his easy chair
"Sharanbir Narang" she said softly picking up his empty milk glass from the floor, there was still some froth lining the
walls of the tumbler, popping slowly as she walked back to the back of the house where the kitchen was

"Husband?" he asked closing his eyes, his arms going over his head

"Ashwin" she said softly her heart thudding

She went inside washed the tumbler locked up, went into her room lay down





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Posted: 8 years ago
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CURRENT THREAD

Chapter 78. Popping bubbles...

Chapter 80. Clear as glass
Chapter 81. Clever or nice
Chapter 83. Hurt

Chapter 84. Rehashing nights


Chapter 86. Peace in parting


Chapter 88. The father

Chapter 89. Love & Punishment

Chapter 90. Native Konkan


Chapter 92. Dangle

Chapter 93. Handicap

Chapter 94. Analgesic fibs


Chapter 96. Egg Thief

Chapter 97. Life & Love


Chapter 99. Well check

Chapter 100. Not Friends
Chapter 101. Do overs...

Chapter 102. Bigger and deeper
Chapter 103. A's Wife

Chapter 104. Out with it...

Chapter 105. Incredulous

Chapter 106. Arms of protection

Chapter 107. Heartburn
Chapter 108. Couple 101

Chapter 109. MIL 101

Chapter 110. SIL 101

Chapter 111. In your mind..

Chapter 112. Bits & Bytes

Chapter 113. Kindred souls
Chapter 114. Dadu Groupies


Chapter 116. Big & Influential

Chapter 118. First Fight

Chapter 119. Cat company

Chapter 120. Leela the guard


Chapter 122. Lost at sea

Chapter 123. Making a case

Chapter 124. Web sensation

Chapter 125. Trauma & Tattoo

Chapter 126. Dinner @ home

Chapter 127. Never say never...

Chapter 128. Burn..

Chapter 129. Resolution

Chapter 130. Caught in between...

Chapter 131. Jennifurr

Chapter 132. Short Reasons

Chapter 133. Love arguments

Chapter 134. Reluctant Refusals


Chapter 136. Sibling Sojourn

Chapter 137. Sleepless shenanigans

Chapter 138. Grandpa's grandson

Chapter 139. Rattling...

Chapter 140. Bath arrangement



Chapter 143. Paws & pas

Chapter 144. Polite Loathing

Chapter 145. Lost love
Edited by KM03 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats Nisha for yet another feather in your cap
👏
And waiting for many many more to come...
Edited by sonalgupta2004 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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"You have not met the boy she married... umm.. he was very handsome, tall, expensive clothes, nice hair. But he did not wear socks" Prakash said 😆

Sharanbir and Ashvin now he remembers maybe 😲

Congrats on new thread Nisha!
Edited by KM03 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congratulations!!
Is Trisha's Dad going to remember Ashwini now
Or we have to wait for the mystery to unfold
Anyway we are going to wait, it is going to be very interesting.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congratulations on the new thread.
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Popping bubbles of details and memory. The judging from his friend prompted the father to ask his daughter what drove her back. What prompted the old man to visit everyday. The reason for his not calling ,the fact that they were all nice to her, the way the father had noted that he was Socks less...does it have a connection to the mystery?
Will she in Ullal and he in Bangalore lay in bed sleepless thinking? She of her HUSBAND,he of his WIFE?
Bubbles are popping in my head as I go to sleep again.
I for sure am thinking of star fish and kitten.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for update Dee.
Congrats for new thread
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's Hypnotic story telling.
Congratulations on the new thread. Thank you. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Popping bubbles kind of felt the sparklers. Like how the top surface needs a lot of preheat to catch before it sets off the next layer of unburnt compound of the sparkler , Mr. Shanbag's memory is also slow to catch the Narang fire. It's on preheat for him now. When he finally catches it and layers exposed it's going to be lot of heat and sparkle all around. Hope none of them burn their fingers more than they have already burnt. The scars are as it is telltale.

But what was truly bubbles was Mr. Shanbag asking for her Husband's name and she acknowledging that query 😳 . I love that joy of the initial flicker that sparkler gets when it catches . It's all about compounds and chemistry 😳

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