Revolutions of My Heart~Final Note - Pg 79~ - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
i love Kripa.. continue sooon...
do all the guys treat her like a sis ?? even angu '??? oh gosh... not a good sign..hehe..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Nice part!
I like kripa!
She's so kewl alwasy taking revenge!
continue soon!
😃


~~~Mahak~~~

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Posted: 18 years ago
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AWESOME part!!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 continue soon!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
just read it and its simply awesome pls cont soon i wanna read mor i luv it 😛 awesome
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Numera89

omg no man it has to be a-k! quit joking around nearly giving me a heartattack! LMAO!! yeah i think aaliya will come and change kripa to a girly girl then angad will be all over her!! oh and make her grow out her hair too when u do the make over thing like make aaliya prevent kripa from getting a haircut lol! contineu soon!


lol...nice prediction and thanx for the suggestion, ill think it over 😉

Originally posted by: mitali_s


thanx 😳 ...whoops that was a mistake..no angad doesnt consider her a sister, he doesnt knoe what he considers her yet 😉


yup...she still wants revenge from him, that was only the first part 😉


i noe rite..not a good sign..lol...but he hasnt realized his feelings yet...or actually...he hasnt developed any 😉 ...ill cont today!


thanx! 😛


i love the revenge part about her too 😆 😳 ..thanx n ill cont soon 😛


thanx!! 😳 ill cont today 😊


thank you!!! next part coming up in 10 minutes!! 😳 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#26

Four-Lettered Words

Next day was a Friday. Perfect. We have two major tests today, and get dismissed two hours early. I quickly took a shower, changed, and went down for breakfast. Everyone was sitting down on the table. I grabbed a granola bar and started to run out when dad stopped me. "Kripa, why are you in such a hurry? Sit down and have a proper breakfast." Crap. I didn't want to sit down because then dad would ask me a bunch of questions like why I had detention, and give a boring lecture. But I took one look at my dad's face and was at a loss of words. He looked a bit angry. I took a seat next to Sahil and took some pancakes in my plate. I slowly began to eat my pancakes avoiding my dad who seemed to be looking at me. I almost felt like looking up and snapping, "What?" But I didn't.

Dad started talking to Sahil and Josh about college and etc. They were getting sports scholarships. Suddenly, I felt sick. Two more months till graduation. Then, my brothers would go off to college. Both were going to end separate universities. I was going to miss them terribly. I put down my fork and gulped down my juice. Then, I got up, said, "Bye!", and ran off with my stuff not bothering to turn around because I knew I would not be able to talk any more. I quickly got into my car and drove to school. Angad, Raj, and Prithvi were already present. They were throwing around a football. I went and sat down near a tree and took out my laptop. I clicked on a forward that Aaliya had sent. It went something like this:

A girl asked a guy if he thought she was pretty,

he said... no .

She asked him if he would want to be with her forever .

...and he said no .

She then asked him if she were to leave would he cry?

and once again he replied with a no .

She had heard enough . As she walked away, tears streaming down her face the boy grabbed her arm and said....

You are not pretty you are beautiful.

I don't want to be with you forever .

I NEED to be with you forever ,

and I wouldn't cry if you walked away...I'd die ...
I like you because of who you are to me. Your a true friend , if I don't get this back I'll take a h i n t. Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they like you. Something good will happen 2 you at 1:00-4:00 PM tomorrow , it could be anywhere AOL, yahoo, outside of school , anywhere . Get ready for the biggest shock of your life. If you break this chain letter you will be cursed with 10 relationship problems for the next ten years. If you send 15 ppl this in 1 5 min you're safe.

Another one of her stupid forwards. I hate them. Though, I had to admit it was pretty cute. Who wouldn't want a guy like that. But thing is, that doesn't exist. This love crap. It only exists in movies, books, and these silly forwards. By now, all of my friends (the whole gang) were sitting next to me, and reading the forward over my shoulder. I forwarded it to all my contacts and shut my laptop. I don't know why I do it, but every time I get something like this I forward it to everyone I know. I mean I am not gonna believe this stuff about relationship problems that someone invented but its just that I don't wanna break this chain, I bet this thing would go around the world. Someone around the globe might stumble upon it and see my name on the list. Weird, but whatever. I got up and stretched. By now, even Josh and Sahil were present. "Why did you forward it?" Prem asked. I looked at him. "I mean, do you believe in this stuff?"

I shook my head. "You mean this love crap?" He nodded. "No. I don't. I don't believe that such a thing exist. I don't believe that there is a single guy who would say all that. And I certainly don't believe that something good will happen to me tomorrow, like, "the love of my life" will meet me. Romeo and Juliet is a story, its fiction. All those movies we see are fiction, nothing is based on true facts." I looked around and concluded my little speech. "Hate, loss, envy, zeal, lust," I paused. "Love is just another four-lettered word" and left. That was straight from my heart. Okay, okay. I got that last line from the title of a book. Not that I read those kind of books. I saw it in a girls' bookshelf. You must be wondering how I saw a girls' bookshelf. Well, like I said before, I don't have any friends that are girls. But I do have acquaintances. I believe that friends and acquaintances are totally different things. But I wont start talking about that now. So, I am acquainted with many girls and I have been to their houses for projects and etc.

Anyways. I went to my first class and took a seat next to Prem, who to my astonishment was already present. We were partners for a project and I decided this would be the perfect opportunity to get some words out of him about that girl. But before I had a chance to start a conversation, he spoke. "Kripa?"

"Hmm?" I asked.

"Do you really think that love doesn't exist anymore? That all that stuff the guy said to the girl in the forward will never be said by any guy?"

"Yes I did, why?" I asked, a but curious. He didn't say anything for awhile and that gave me some time to think over what he said. Oh my god, does Prem think he is in love? Hmm. I shouldn't let his hopes down about this crap. I suck at this but whatever. "Uh, Prem?" I asked.

"Yeah?"

"Do you…have a crush?"

I swear I saw him blush. Oh.my.god

"Can I trust you?" he asked.

"Of course, you are like my older brother, if you ever need to talk to me about a girl, or anything" I said anything because, well, what if he was gay. Ew. Lol. "Don't hesitate, even though I am a total tomboy and stuff…you can always count on me for girl advice" I gave him a warm smile. It worked.

"Ithinkiaminlovewithnandini"

"Huh?" I asked.

This time he spoke slowly, "I think I am in love with Nandini, I know you don't believe in love and stuff. But Kripa, I see her in my dreams, I cant stop thinking about her, I am not at peace until I see her." Uh-oh. Wrong person. I was baffled. "Prem…" I said slowly, "Maybe its an infatuation, or.."

He cut me off, angrily, "Its not!! It had crossed my mind to talk to you about it, but I knew it! Wrong person! You would never believe me! Sorry! Just…just forget about everything I told you!" The bell rang and he walked out. Nice job Kripa. I just ruined the perfect moment. Crap. What should I do now? I cant go talk to him because I just cant get myself to believe in this love and stuff. And I cant tell anyone. I am gonna put that somewhere behind in my brain right now. I cannot think about that anymore.

I went onto my next class. I had a major test today. As usual, Angad sat next to me. The teacher passed the tests. I picked up my pen and began to do it. The problems were quite easy and simple, because I had studied my notes the night before. But as expected, Angad hadn't and he didn't know a single answer. He nudged me, "Kripa, what is number, 5?" I ignored him. He kept on asking me but I ignored him the whole time. Same thing happened for the next class as well. We had a major test and I bet he flunked both tests. At lunchtime, he was quiet furious. He sat across from me and gave me a glare, i gave him a frosty look in return. Everyone noticed this. "What's with you two?" Raj asked. No one answered. "Hello, I am asking you, two, Kripa, Angad, what is wrong?"

I gave a little smile and said, "I am perfectly fine, Angad here, doesn't seem in a good mood, ask him. What is wrong Angad?" Another glare. Haha. This was fun. I smiled. "Oh, I know" Everyone looked at me. "Angad, you're still sulking at the fact I didn't give you the answers for that test today? Don't blame me! Its not my fault you didn't study! And anyways, what will you do in the future? I wont always be there! I cant be giving you the answers forever! Its about time you start studying and stop depending on me."

"Who said I am dependent on you" he said angrily. But I just ignored him. I turned to the person sitting next to me. Prem. Crap. Two people fuming at me. "I am going to go and sit with Nandini and Samiya." This caught Prem's attention but he ignored me once again. I picked up my lunch and went on to chat with them. "Hey!" I said. They looked up at me, shocked.

"What?" I asked.

"How come you aren't sitting with your brothers and friends today?" Samiya asked.

"They are acting like jerks and two of them are really pissed at me, so I decided why not have some girl company" Silence.

"So…" I began. We started talking about things. Somehow, I came up with a bunch of girly stuff and we talked on until lunch was almost over. When I felt like they were comfortable with me, I decided to find out how Nandini felt about Prem. To my luck, and surprise, she stole a glance at him at that exact moment. "Do you guys believe in love?" I asked.

They both nodded and started talking about their dream guys, etc. "So, did any of you find your dream guys yet" I winked. They both blushed. Yes! I was getting somewhere. "Oh my god!! Who is it!! Tell me everything!!" After a lot of promises, I finally got some stuff out of them. Big Stuff. Not only did I find out whom Nandini liked, but I also found out whom Samiya liked. Prithvi and Samiya. Prem and Nandini. Perfect. I said my goodbyes and left the table with a triumphant smile, not forgetting to pass by the guys' table. They all looked at me curiously; obviously wondering what I was so happy about. Raj caught up with me. "Kripa…" he said slowly. "Why are you grinning like the Cheshire cat? What have you been up to missy?"

"Oh, nothing much, just some girl stuff that I will not tell you about. Its top secret" I winked. He made a face and walked away. I love to annoy them like this. Now, I have one more class and then we all will be going on a trip, I wonder where we will go this time…

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Coming Up: What happened to me the next day between 1:00-4:00 PM!!!😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awsum part just luv da character of Kripa!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part
OMG i thought i never see that forward again...the last time i got i deleted 😆and then again my friends sent it to me 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: virgo_gurl

Awsum part just luv da character of Kripa!!

thanx😳..

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: candyprincess

great part
OMG i thought i never see that forward again...the last time i got i deleted 😆and then again my friends sent it to me 😆

thanx! i noe its so annoying i forward it to everyoen on my list and since i am on theirs, i keep on getting it back😡😆

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