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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg its too good!! continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: candyprincess

great part and cont. soon


thanx yea ill cont soon 😛

Originally posted by: kyphkamahbuba

neat ice part can't for the next part


thanx next part will be up soon! 😛

Originally posted by: Rajeev fan

great part
loved the way u described kripa
your fanfic sounds really intresting
cant wait 4 the next part


thanx!!! ill post next part asap 😳

Originally posted by: Mini786

Very interesting
plesase continue soon!



~~~Mahak~~~



thank you!! 😳


thanx!!

Originally posted by: Mulle

yay you started a new one
i just looove your fanfics, and as always am liking this story so far
continue soon


aww thanx!! i hope you like this story too!! i think it is gonna turn out better than my other ones, hopefully! 😛

Originally posted by: .:KYPHlOvEr88:.

awwwww...its soo sweet jaanu...
poor kripa... no girl influence...
oh well... i know she will win!


yup course she will! even though she doesnt have girl influence she has girl power 😉...nd like "she" said, Kripa Kapoor never loses- especially to Angad Khanna 😉 😆 😳

Originally posted by: jyotsna13

hey its dam interesting
plz cont soon


aww thanx! ill cont soon 😛

Originally posted by: ~*Milly*~

i love it continue soon


thanx milly!! ill cont soon

Originally posted by: Numera89

omg its too good!! continue soon!


aww thanx im glad u likd it...im gonna cont in 10 mins.! 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#13

Meet My Family and Some Others…

After school ends, I usually hang around the gym to watch basketball/football or whatever sport's practice is going on. Sometimes, I get to play too. I am in, like, all the sports teams, you can say I am pretty popular around here. I do not have any mortal enemies. There are people I despise, but they are not my enemies. Take Myrna for example. She considers herself the prettiest girl at school. With her bleached blonde hair,"angelic" blue eyes, and a zillion zits on her face—Myrna is head of the cheerleading squad. All stupid wannabes look upon her as if she were a queen or something. I think she is just an annoying trifle. Even though she has a boyfriend, (Jessie-who I have to admit is quite good-looking) she pounces on any hot guy she can find. Currently, she has been trying to get Sahil's attention. Ha. Wrong guy. She ain't his type and he aint hers, but I am going to keep my mouth shut about it. So, I was watching basketball practice in the gym when Myrna enters with her hideous golden outfit and Coach bag. She was wearing so much jewelry, you couldn't even see her skin. It's not like anyone wants to see her skin anyways. She was obviously looking for Jessie. He is in the basketball team. Sahil is the captain. The best players are, of course, Sahil, Prithvi, Josh, and Prem is not that bad either.

She spots me sitting with my diary propped on my legs and my backpack write next to me. She sniffs a little and when I look up gives me a pukey smile. Ha. She could have done way better but whatever. No matter how much she tries, she cant help showing how much she hates me. You might be wondering why she would want to hide it. Well, its because I am the most popular girl at school whose friends are the hottest, most popular guys at school. Sahil is my brother. So she has to act all nice to me, or else, she knows that he wouldn't even look at her. I stare down and my eyes fall upon her huge pencil heels. How does she carry herself around in those? I stretch my leg and the blind princess trips. Ha. I so don't regret that. I pick up my backpack and my diary and turn around. She is flat on the floor and everyone is staring at us. They are trying to hold back their laughs because they all know that no one has ever behaved this way with Myrna.

"Oh whoops, Myrna, dear, I think you should avoid wearing those long heels of you cant balance yourself, would you like a hand." She gives me a frosty glare, I pretend to just notice that my hands are full, "Oh, whoops, sorry." I give her a toothy smile and walk off. Fifteen minutes till practice will be over. Hmm. What should I do. I look across the street at Starbucks. A mocha frappuchino. Perfect. I cross the street and enter.

The place is quite full, and I look around for someone familiar to sit with. There is Myrna's best friends group. A group of guys I don't know. A cozy couple. A group of familiar girls at school. I decide to go join them when I look back at the cozy couple and do a double take. I smirk. I need to stop doing that. It's his influence, he smirks all the time and now I am doing it too. Back to the couple. It is Josh and some girl I don't know. They are having a nice little snack as you may call it and seemed to be having an interesting conversation. Probably planning on their wedding, honeymoon and future children. Perfect revenge. I go up to them but they don't notice me. I clear my throat, "Ahem, Ahem" They look up. The girl is some unfamiliar chick. Josh looks at my mischievous smile and knows something is up. "Hi" I say and extend my hand towards the girl. She looks at my hand and makes a face. "Who are you?" I put up a hurt face. "He didn't tell you?" Josh raises an eyebrow. No bro, this is a new trick. "I am Josh's sister, Kripa" He takes a breath that he had obviously been holding for a long time. "Oh" she looks at Josh and then me. "Nice to meet you, I am Rena" Hmm. She is not sister-in-law type. Not that pretty. Looks quite dumb.Flirt.Nope. Doesn't fit any of the qualifications. I am gonna go on with my act. "Are you a colleague?" I ask.

She gives me a look as if I am stupid or something. "No, I am his girlfriend"

I put on a shocked look. Josh sinks deep into his seat because by now he has realized where I am heading. "Oh.my.god" I say. She looks at me questioningly and I give Josh a fake-accusing look. "Tina and Sia are waiting for you at home and you…" Rena interrupts me.

"Who are Tina and Sia?" she asks crossly.

"His wife and daughter" I reply in the exact same tone.

She is shocked and angrily gets up. Josh tries to explain to her but obviously she had heard enough and she stomped off without even bothering to thank me for the information. Girls. Lol. I sit in her seat across from a fuming Josh. Before either of us has a chance to say something, we are joined by the rest of our group. I make room as they sit with us. Time to introduce the gang. Angad, I already did. Sahil. Okay, so Sahil and Josh are my brothers. They are both identical twins. They look slightly different. Eye color is brown-chocolaty type. Hair color is same as mine- auburn brown. Hmm. Josh is the typical flirt. Sahil can be a flirt too, but he is more on the serious type. They both are over-protective of me but sill find time to tease me on my boyish behavior. (Both are 18) Sahil is more serious about his studies. Many girls at college think he is hot and are crazy over him.

Okay, now lemme introduce- Prithvi. Another flirt. Cool guy. I have a feeling he has a crush on this girl, but he doesn't tell us anything. But I think I am going to ask him about it. It never hurts to try. More about him-he is really good in sports-gets average grades-and is closest to Sahil in our gang. Next, Prem. Prem is more of the quiet kind. He doesn't flirt much. He is the smartest of us all-17- has never dated anyone before-has no siblings- lives across town. That leaves Raj- He is 16 like me and Angad. Angad's brother. Both are spoiled but Raj is more spoiled. Typical flirt, has a lot of girlfriends. I think that is pretty much it. Our gang. I am the only girl in it, but they never make me feel left out. All consider me their sister. I love them all. They are my whole family—not forgetting dad. Dad is a businessman. His name is Rishab Kapoor. He is a very hard-working guy. Really loved my mom and misses her terribly. I never really knew what happened to my mom. All I know is that she died when I was five. Dad does not like to talk about it and so I never pressurized him.

K. Now back to the Starbucks scene. So everyone comes and sits and looking at Josh's face they all look at me questioningly. I tell them what I did and they burst out laughing so hard and tease my dear bro so much that he angrily leaves. Then, we were all sitting their quietly smiling. I got up and went to get myself another frappuccino when everyone starts requesting coffees. "I am not a waitress, get it yourself" I tell them. Mean, but, they deserved it. They make puppy faces, "Nice try, but no means no." I get my drink and sit down with them, taking small sips and showing how good it was with my face expressions. They were too lazy to get up but finally, they went and got themselves drinks. When they sat down, we talked about random stuff and fooled around. My cell rang interrupting things and I picked up. "Hullo ?" I asked.

"Hey Krips!!" the girl on the other line screamed.

"Aali!!" I screamed. "Whats up??" Everyone looked up. I had been a bit overexcited and screamed a little too loudly. I give a sheepish smile. They all tell me to say Hi. We talk for a while and planned a chat conversation that night. As I hung up, I looked at my phone. Crap. It had a bunch of ugly scratches on it. I hate that, my things just have to be perfect. It was a Black Motorola Razr. I could afford a thousand more. But still, you could say I just have some issues. Hmm. Time on my phone says…woah. We have been sitting here for 4 hours. Odd. Josh still hadn't returned. I gave him a call on his cell but he didn't pick up. That was weird. His phone always worked, he never shut it off. I picked up my things and left, giving the guys a lem excuse. They would never understand- maybe it is because I am closer to him, and even though he is older than me, I am always worried about him. There was only one place he could be. The beach. I arrive there in my car. Btw- my car is a Saturn Sky. I love it more than anything!! Well not my ipod, lol. When I got to the beach, I saw Josh sitting on the sand, staring out at the ocean. I had half-expected him to be flirting with someone else. He seemed so different, it seemed like at totally different side of him. I slowly went up to him and sat down. He looked at me and quickly looked away. But I was able to catch the fact that his eyes were red and swollen and he was crying. I asked, "What's wrong bhai?" Obviously this had nothing to do with the Starbucks incident. He would never cry at something like that. He was a tough person, I had harldy seen him cry before. "I miss her today" he said. I was a bit confused. Who could he be talking about? "Its her birthday today, Kripa. I heard dad talking to her picture this morning."

Everything froze for a second. February 5th. Of course, how could I forget. It was my mom's birthday. Josh was really close to her and missed her terribly but never showed it. I gave him a hug and let him cry, shedding a few tears myself. We stayed like that for a while, and then I said, "For a minute there, it thought you were crying because I ruined your date"

"Idiot" he said as he laughed at me. It was a great bro-sis moment. We hardly had those anymore. But I ruined it, actually, I spiced it up a bit more.

"I think this is the perfect time to tell you that, bhai," he looked at me questioningly because I put on a fake guilty look on my face. "I.."

"You?" he asked.

"I think you are the biggest jerk and flirt ever!" I said that and ran off.

"You!" he screamed coming after me. I was in track and ran really fast so it was hard for him to catch up. Finally, he caught me and tickled me until I apologized. By the time we got back to our cars, we had bright smiles on her faces and were laughing at lame jokes. My mind was somewhere else though. I was making up my next plan for revenge…😈

Edited by erier101 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was awesome hun! som im guessin kripa planning revenge refers to our beloved Angad lol i wonder wat she's up to! lol continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part
is kripa always going to be a tom boy 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Numera89

that was awesome hun! som im guessin kripa planning revenge refers to our beloved Angad lol i wonder wat she's up to! lol continue soon!

glad u liked it!! yup her plan refers to angad...and trust me ....i wonder what she is upto too because at the moment i have no idea.😆..i still have to think about that😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: candyprincess

great part
is kripa always going to be a tom boy 😆

thanx..i dunno.. should i make her a tomboy throughout the whole thing?😉..cuz i never did say if this was gonna be A-K or anything....anything can happen😉..lol😆..ull c😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg no man it has to be a-k! quit joking around nearly giving me a heartattack! LMAO!! yeah i think aaliya will come and change kripa to a girly girl then angad will be all over her!! oh and make her grow out her hair too when u do the make over thing like make aaliya prevent kripa from getting a haircut lol! contineu soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Our gang. I am the only girl in it, but they never make me feel left out. All consider me their sister.
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noooo...angad cant consider her a sis 😆 😉
just kiddin'

newayz awsum parts 👏 👏 👏....i just luved them and i really liked the gang
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
she still wants revenge from angd.. lolzz
awesome job!!
continue soooooonn

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