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Posted: 7 years ago
No worries 😊 take your time :)
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Posted: 7 years ago

Awesome chapters Sangeetha
The scene between Acharya Chanakya and Nandini was nice
The conversation between Acharya and Moore was wonderful

Dev and princess Nandini scene was so cute

I liked how Dev helped the Brahmin

The conversation between Dev and Chanakya was amazing

I liked Chanakya's planning

I am glad that Chanakya look at the matter in a different manner

I hate parvatak and Malay

The scene between Chandra and Nandini was so beautiful

I loved how Chandini were thinking about each other

The conversation between Chandra and acharya was Amazing

Finally Chanakya realised his calculations were right

I am happy that Chandra witnessed that Nandini kept the fast for him and also broke her fast by sending her fruits

I hated how durdhara treated Sujan like a mere servant

I liked how You described the struggle between Chandra's heart and brainl

I loved how Chandra abducted Nandini and challenged nand

I hate how parvatak and Malay were talking about Nandini like she is a thing

I can't believe how selfish Nand is

The scenes between Chandini were fantastic

Badal and Bijli love story was cute

I liked how Chandra and Nandini were thinking about each other

The conversation between Chandini was just unbelievable

Chandini scenes are awesome

I liked how Chandra was jealous of his own self

I loved their conversation about how many times their marriage has happened

Chandini parting scene was nice

The conversation between Acharya and Chandra was wonderful

Chandra's thoughts about Nandini were so thoughtful

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Awesome chapters Sangeetha
The scene between Acharya Chanakya and Nandini was nice
The conversation between Acharya and Moore was wonderful

Dev and princess Nandini scene was so cute

I liked how Dev helped the Brahmin

The conversation between Dev and Chanakya was amazing

I liked Chanakya's planning

I am glad that Chanakya look at the matter in a different manner

I hate parvatak and Malay


Hi Nonie,

I left writing the story after I saw that nobody was reading / responding. After reading your feedback, i feel a bit better now.

@BOLD part - I guess you caught on with the story after a long time. So, I couldn't make out what you mean by those statements of Chanakya, Malay and Parvatak in the BOLD part.

The scene between Chandra and Nandini was so beautiful

I loved how Chandini were thinking about each other

The conversation between Chandra and acharya was Amazing

Finally Chanakya realised his calculations were right

Yes, I wanted to bring out the fact that even Chanakya could make mistakes in his youth (like his miscalculations of horoscope) and he also corrected himself... A teacher who practiced what he preached...


I am happy that Chandra witnessed that Nandini kept the fast for him and also broke her fast by sending her fruits

I hated how durdhara treated Sujan like a mere servant

I liked how You described the struggle between Chandra's heart and brainl

@BOLD - I enjoyed writing Chandra's dilemma and how his heart skips everytime when he is with Nandini 😛

I loved how Chandra abducted Nandini and challenged nand

I hate how parvatak and Malay were talking about Nandini like she is a thing

I can't believe how selfish Nand is

@BOLD - Not just selfish. Cruel. More on this later.


The scenes between Chandini were fantastic

Badal and Bijli love story was cute

@BOLD - I wanted to expand the love story bit between Sujan, Durdhara, Badal and Bijli a bit more, but seeing the response I curtailed it.


I liked how Chandra and Nandini were thinking about each other

The conversation between Chandini was just unbelievable

Chandini scenes are awesome

I liked how Chandra was jealous of his own self

I loved their conversation about how many times their marriage has happened

Chandini parting scene was nice

The conversation between Acharya and Chandra was wonderful

Chandra's thoughts about Nandini were so thoughtful

@BOLD - I wanted to bring it to the table that not every man thinks of a woman as a toy. There are / were decent men who looked at women with respect too. So, we have cruel minded men like Parvatak and Nand, lechers like Malay, pious men like Chanakya, there are decent chivalrous men like Chandra too, who would not touch a woman even when she is at his disposal / mercy and would treat women with utmost respect.



Thanks for writing in, Nonie... I was dead beat with the flat silence of this thread.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: FrankPunch


Thanks for writing in, Nonie... I was dead beat with the flat silence of this thread.


You are welcome Sangeetha
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Posted: 7 years ago
Well well well CN relation is progressing so well
she is understanding that he is so different from the others
he is impressing her at almost every step of their meeting
he is a man now so he has to control himself a bit
but it must be hilarious to have his older self as his competitor of sorts
at one time he is really exasperated with her chants of her friend
of course he wants to be much more than just friends now
the sweet little moments they had together was so special
she has realized that he is really a true gentleman at heart
and she really feels she is not that charming to attract him ?
she really has such low opinions of herself isn't it ?
actually no one gives her any real value in the palace
so she underestimates herself a lot
some of her talks must seem very amusing to Chandra
but atleast this way he is getting to know the real her
I am simply awed by all the types of marriage they have had
of course I now want a full fledged marriage with all the complete rituals
I also know that it will come soon
this is not at all a review but my comments on the flashback chapters
detailed comments will surely come soon sorry for the delay
I just had too much to handle at once Di
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Posted: 7 years ago
This is such an amazingly written story... You are exceedingly talented! Thoroughly enjoyed reading every chapter... Do keep writing!
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Originally posted by: -GrilledCheese-

This is such an amazingly written story... You are exceedingly talented! Thoroughly enjoyed reading every chapter... Do keep writing!



Hey Grilled Cheese,
Welcome to this humble Thread.
Thank you for such lovely words. You made my day ! No, my weekend infact 😛
Will continue with further chapter very soon.

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Posted: 7 years ago
Fantastic chapter Sangeetha😊
I hated how Avantika was torturing Nandini
I am just disgusted with Nand🤢
I hated how Nand manipulated Nandini again😡
I like how loyal lopamudra is to Nandini❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago


Thank you so much, Riddhima 😛

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