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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: 2filmy

Of course Nalini was ecstatic Nand had chosen her over Nandini

he had promised to fulfill her wish and break Nandini's heart
err can she please keep her lewd thoughts to herself ?
I am really not interested to know what all she thinks about Chandra
seductive charms ? from when does a snake have seductive charm ?
I am shocked at her audacity to walk in the bath room
but considering she is Nand's daughter I think that is expected

😆 You really love that nalini, dont you? 😆 love your comments about her...
Yes, she is Nand's daughter. The royalty gets to roam around anywhere they want... the arrogance and purani aadat gave her the audacity to walk in, thinking that Chandra is just another guy who would want nothing but lust...
here, there's one similarity with Nandini and Nalini - both grew up in the palace seeing Men including her father and brothers lusting over women, using them, raping them and taking them for granted. Precisely the conduct / behaviour that impressed Nandini in the first place. But here, Nalini tries her charms on him and realises that he is not the usual guy.

it is almost an action replay scene of Nand Avantika with the roles reversed
but Chandra is a lot sharper smarter than Avantika and knows Nalini well

Oh yes, i didn't notice the role reversal here... Nalini tried her charms like Nand, but Chandra did not fall for it like Avantika !

this also reminds me of old stories where witches used to dress up as pretty girls
and lure unsuspecting lost travellers in the jungle to their huts
then mesmerize them with their charms and later kill them and drink their blood
she also reminds me of Surpanakha who had wanted to marry Ram

🤣 You're totally obsessed with Nalini. I am so loving your comments about her. Oh YESSS, she suits Surpanaka role superbly... Even surpanaka tried to remove Sita to get Rama or Lakshman. Similarly, Nalini is trying to take Nandini's place.

I can understand how disgusted Chandra is feeling but why is he so silent
why is he not calling any guards ? why is he still giving her the respect ?
how is he still so polite with her ? I would have slapped her right then

You will know the reason shortly.

she is such a shameless fathead that she does not get that he rejects her
or may be she understands but is just not bothered
uff she also in in her la la land if she thinks he was expecting her
She is just too over confident by now may be so feels every one worships her ?
thank God he pushed her aside abruptly and left

She is shameless, no doubt about it.
@BOLD - thats a cheesy line she tries on him, thinking that a wet body can get him on bed. Hahahh She doesn't know Chandu has seen much more...
The marriage is tomorrow, Father has agreed. That gives her the overconfidence. 😉

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: 2filmy

it is very interesting that 3 people think the same thing

one more day and they will get what they want
first Duru then Nand then Nalini
sadly all 3 are evil and all have plotted something
how I wish to see Chandra Nandini too think of one more day

Actually, i started with Nalini, then i wrote Nand saying... then i thought why not the others also...
Yes, yes, your wish is on its way 😛

Chandra should tell Acharya what happened in the bathroom
hopefully Acharya will understand there is something fishy
why were there no guards in the bathroom ?
and were girls allowed to go to boys bathroom like that ?

Actually, i should have written that Chandu wanted to have sometime alone, after the exhausting day schedule. I forgot.
Boys are generally not allowd in girls Hamam, except when the King walks in, then nobody has a say on it ! Or, when queen walks inside when King is taking bath...
Here, Nalini watches Chandra being alone and tries to take advantage and bites the dust...

I don't want Moora to punish for what Nand Nalini are planning
Moora should know Nandini cannot be involved in all this
Even if Duru says something Chandra / Acharya should not believe it
they know Nandini so well by now they should know she can't so it
once Moora knows of the plan she should blast Nand
When Nalini is not bothered about her reputation and self respect
Chandra and his family also should not bother about her

It wont go that far... I wont make Nandini cry for justice in front of Moora.. they are both gentle but very intelligent women.

Neela Krishna marriage will also happen with CN marriage right ?
Nand wont go in his treasure caves now I hope for some time ?
that should give Chandra time to empty them all and shift them
Nalini should stay with Parvatak and carry on her leela there

yes, Neela-Krishna marriage will happen along with Chandu-Nandu marriage.
Chandu will take away his key along with his Lady, right in front of Nand... dont worry.
We will make Nalini learn her lesson the hard way...

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Posted: 7 years ago

Author's Note : Hello Readers, I am re-writing this story in Wattpad. The Book has won "The Preserving of History Awards 2018" under the category "True Love".

If you know anyone who has an account in Wattpad, please ask them to go through the book "The Eyes that met Yours..." .



Chapter 17

Nandini knocked on Chanakya's chamber door. He had sent message for her. May I enter, Acharya? She asked politely. He turned with his stick and gestured politely with a smile. She entered the chamber and touched his feet with respect. Chanakya was taken aback for a moment. He was a man with a straight face, with no expressions. Its always difficult to study him. Having taught many young students over the years, he was good at camouflaging expressions to avoid his students from doing mind-reading. But Nandini's touch on his feet gave him goosebumps.

Sukhi Raho... He blessed her. You know who I am? - he asked, gesturing her to sit. He put a little pressure on his stick and sat on the chair opposite to her.

Yes, Acharya. You're everything to King Chandragupta Maurya.

You mean, I control him?

Not at all, Acharya. It's a blessing to obey elders and serve them. What I meant was that you're everything to Chandra as a person and as a King. You are like his father, guru and guide... and now Magadh's Prime Minister and guide also.

We haven't had an opportunity to meet till date. So I would like to talk and know a few things about you... Chanakya spoke authoritatively with a plain face.

That would be my good fortune, Acharya.

I met your Acharyas and asked them for a feedback about you... he studied her expressions. Her face was crystal clear.

She bowed with respect and said "please do let me know if I have erred or disappointed them in any way. Allow me an opportunity to correct my mistakes, Acharya.

I have heard that you talk very sweetly. I understand now that you are a sweet talker.

"Forgive me, Acharya. I haven't had the opportunity of meeting and conversing with many people in my life. So, I apologise if I have upset you in any manner. Please teach me the correct manner of speech and I promise to practice the same henceforth". She folded her palms and spoke .

Acharya smiled. No wonder Chandra likes you very much. Is this how you impressed him?

I ... I don't know how much you know about us, Acharya. But I guess Chandra is not the kind who will be impressed by just any woman. She spoke looking at the floor, but a smile played on her lips, thinking of the past.

You were to marry Prince Malayketu of Gandhar. How do you feel changing your stance at the warfield ?

Relieved. Chandra saved me. Iam alive and breathing today because of him.

You mean, you didn't like marrying Prince Malayketu? You do know he is a royal by birth, just like you. How do you feel marrying a common blood like Chandra in his place?

I believe any person who stands for his People and protect them has the right to become a King. Having lived a Princess life and as a civilian, I know that blue blood alone does not define a person's character. I had a civilian friend from the jungle, who was destined to become a King. A learned scholar like you had taken him under his wing a long time ago. So I don't believe royal birth begets royalty and civil birth begets slavery.

She spoke with her eyes mostly fixed on the floor with respect, time and again looking at him for some kind of an acknowledgement and then lowering them back to the floor. Acharya's expression was as usual flat, unreadable and his voice as usual unpredictably calm but authoritative.

Suffice to say that you did not like Prince Malayketu?

By all means, Acharya.

What do you think about Chandragupta Maurya?

A People's King. In the last two years, I have heard nothing but blessings and prayers from People for him. And today, while distributing the gold, I had the opportunity to even witness it. She smiled again, thinking of the afternoon spent with him.

I meant, as a husband.

I belong to him.

We didn't purchase you as a slave, Princess. We agreed for a war compensation. You will be duly declared as his Queen. So, tell me, how do you feel about him as your husband?

Allow me to rephrase my words and express my point clearly, Acharya. My heart belongs to him. Therefore, I belong to him.

Does he belong to you?

A king is first and foremost responsible for his People. He belongs to the People, Acharya. He is public's property. Hence, I cannot own him.

But he says his heart belongs to you?

Iam blessed to hear that, Acharya. She smiled.

That would mean that you are his weakness. A king cannot afford to have weakness that too, of a woman.

Nobody can understand that better than me, Acharya. I have seen how my Father and my brothers treated the women in this very Palace. There was a moment of pain in her eyes. She cleared her throat and said "Sorry, I digressed from the topic, Acharya. Chandra used to say that I am both his strength and his weakness. I would ensure that the weighing scale tilts more towards his Strength part".

Chanakya got up from his seat smiling. Nandini also got up. He shifted his stick to his left hand, kept his right hand on her head and blessed her.

I was just testing you. Chandra is like my son. I wanted to assure my old heart that you accepted Chandra wholeheartedly and not out of pressure to get your father released. Iam sure you will make a great Queen, Nandini.



Nandini folded her hands and took his blessings. Acharya? Do I have the permission to ask you something?

Yes?

Every mother desires her son to bring her the best daughter she deserves. Every mother wants a woman who will take of her son just like her, in her absence. I... I haven't seen Rajamata yet. I am her son's arch rival's daughter... She wasn't there when the Peace Treaty was agreed at the war zone. I dont know how she feels about this. Will she agree to make me as her daughter-in-law?

Chanakya laughed. Yes. I understand your predicament. Don't worry, Rajamata will treat you like her own daughter. But let me give you a brief. You are not just her son's arch enemy's daughter. Your family has been the sole reason for everything that went wrong with Chandra's family.

He looked at her troubled face and spoke to her tenderly. There are many things about Chandra and his family, that you don't know about. You've already been through a lot lately. So I wouldn't burden you with those information now. I will tell you all in good time. In the meantime, just ensure that you keep Chandra happy. That poor boy hasn't felt happiness in a long long time. Ensure that you keep this family intact.

Yes, Acharya. I will be a good wife to Chandra and a loyal member to the family. I promise you that I would not become the reason for Chandra's downfall or his empire.

Trust him. Chandra's words might sometimes sound bitter and straightforward like mine. But he means well. Whatever he does will be for your good.

Yes Acharya, I learnt my lesson the hard way. I trust him now.

Remember, you are his heart. Don't let it break.

I will keep your words in mind and live by it, Acharya.

I heard that you were suffering from fever yesterday. How are you feeling today? Do you want me to send a Vaidji?

Nandini remembered her Vaidji the previous day and blushed. No Acharya. I am fine now. The fever has come down now. I was treated well by my Vaidji yesterday.

Chanakya chuckled. Ofcourse, he knew who the Vaidji was. But she doesn't know that he knows.

Now, off you go. Its getting late. I don't want my son's favourite queen looking dull on her wedding day.

Good night, Acharya.

She touched his feet again, took his blessings and left.


Acharya calmed his nerves as he saw her go. She looks just like her mother...

Moora pushed the curtains and came out from the attached room, as Nandini left. My heart is at peace now, Acharya. Its the same girl. I recognise her voice and her eyes. She will keep my Chandra very happy. She smiled.

He walked to the balcony silently and looked at the stars alignment. He took out a natal chart from his bag, compared it with Chandra's natal chart and did some calculations.


Is there a problem, Acharya?
The nearest future is going to be very tough for the children, Rajamata. Especially for her.
What can I do to help?
Nothing is in our hands, Rajamata. We can only standby and watch...
In short, we need to trust our children's instincts for a change and support them in what they do?
For the time being... Yes. We dont have an option.
Your wise words have always helped me and my family, Acharya. I will do as you say.

Moora nodded her head as a sign of taking leave and left from the room.

Chanakya looked up at the sky and prayed in silence for a minute. One day... just one more day. Magadh, Chandra and I will get what we have been waiting for...



Precap : Chandu-Nandu flashbacks coming... Fasten your seatbelts and stay tuned...

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Posted: 7 years ago
Avantika has just woken up from her sleep
I understand but now slowly she can take back control
it is not that she can't be shrewd when she wants to
Nand should also face some one just like himself
of course he has always been breaking promises
Till date I wonder if there is a single good work he has done
I wont take taking care of Nandini into consideration
as that too he did for his own selfish purpose
Good to know Nandini will know about Nalini soon
Once when we were shifting our house
I found many things that I had lost a long time back
but when we moved to the new house I misplaced a few things as well
Only Nalini is like Avantika's liking so she pampered and spoiled her rotten
now that same pampering is biting her back
Nalini is a thick head and shameless so she wont understand subtle hints
Chandra has to physically kick her out to make the point clear
You can understand I am a nit impatient to see Nalini bite the dust
so please bear with me a bit for that
Please take my punishment for Nalini into consideration
no one will mind if she has to work as a servant
Nandini need never know
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nand has done things a certain way all life
and so he thinks that will work even now that tje p
but he has forgotten that change in constant in nature
so what worked earlier wont work now as well
also the time has changed and so had his luck
but he will understand that a lot later I think
the later he understands the better for every one
I wonder how will he react and what he will do
when he knows Chandra is Moora's son
is there any chance he will be paralysed after a heart attack ?
Nalini should get a major jolt now and see the bitter truth
Not only in office it happens in colleges too
certain maths teachers think there is only 1 way to solve a sum
but they don't want to see that the process may be different
but the end result is the same and that is all that matters
Nand forgot time and tide wait for no man
Soon he will know his luck is not with him now and never will be
Some one should start whispering rumors of what all Nand had done
Moora knows most of the things she can start the rumor
I am sure Nalini wont be bothered even if she knows Nand history
as long as she is getting what she wants she is not bothered about anything else
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks for clearing about Duru
I was confused there a bit
Now I understand the time and situation
Of course Chandra may marry many girls
but Nandini will always be special for him
no one else can take that place in his heart
Duru must have come some time later
she did not hear Nand say he wont marry Nandini to Chandra
In Bengali we have a saying that means
putting the responsibility on an action on some one else
the same thing is happening here
she is just assuming things a bit too much
also she can't tolerate Nandini so Nandini is all bad for her
she can blame Nandini for anything very easily
if this father daughter i.e Nand Nalini gets killed
I really have no problem at all though
Ruqu never actually loved Jalal but she thought she loved him
she couldn't bear Jodha at all so always conspired against her
Nalini is a selfish greedy jealous brat and wants everything Nandini has
Avantika woke up too late but now she is alert
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I get Avantika has had too much to handle from the morning
she has more on her plate than she can chew
so many things happened one after the other together
If ever Nalini marries and becomes a widow
I will have my full sympathy for the guy and his family
not an ounce of sympathy for that vamp
I know things are happening too fast now
But now that Nand is not in power
and the vamp is not a princess
there can be whispering rumors about her
I would love if she hears them mock and taunt her
she should give them entertainment that way
they should always be at Chandra's mercy
She feels after being a widow she will still sleep around
she loves her freedom and waywardness too much
I will love when she knows she has no power whatsoever now
what Avantika wants does not matter now as Nalini thinks differently
Till Nand is there what Avantika wants wont matter too
if Nalini herself wants to ruin her future no one can stop it
till now Avantika has pampered Nalini
now she will reap the result of this
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Posted: 7 years ago
she realized and knew everything late
but even then she did not try to do anything
when there is a will there is a way
also I think she is too addicted to all the lavishness
she could not survive in a tough situation like Moora
Avantika is too greedy and can't stay without any luxury
so she chose to be a doormat and get all the privileges
every one pampered Avantika and spoiled her
if she has killed Nand she would have got to rule too
but she never thought of removing Nand
I think she had become too dependent on him too
when her son's death could no move her nothing could
It is said a mother son bond is the purest bond on earth
when that did nothing for her and she stayed lazy then nothing could do
blaming Nandini was the easiest way out so she chose that
all Nand's past sins should catch up with him in the future soon
Nandini is the victim for almost every one insiders and outsiders
I am happy to know justice will prevail
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Hmm so he wanted to protect Nandini from Avantika
so the extra security and also she was his golden goose
It is strange that Nand being a commoner denied a royal
Avantika could not do anything against him so tortured Nandini
Nand the common blood showed that he could never be royal
he was a crow and will remain a crow - Nalini is ditto like him
Nandini was born to Nand but grew up to be completely opposite
children have to pay for the sins of their parents
unfortunately Nandini too had to pay for Nand actions
we have a saying in Bengali - catch the weakest and shortest one
Nandini was an easy target for Avantika as she was powerless against Nand
he did not care for any one except himself
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I am surprised that he did not keep spies near Avantika
if he had then he would have known she tortured Nandini
But I doubt if he would be even bothered even if he knew that
power had made him blind arrogant and over confident
his secret about Nandini ? that she was a commoner and not Pipli princess ?
I find Nand similar to Kansa of Mahabharat
He too had killed 6 sons of Devaki and had tried to kill 7th and 8th child too
Nand plan is the worst and most ghatiya plan that will back fire
Avantika is too lazy to even find out something
as I said before she finds it easiest to blame Nandini
Nalini too is just like her mother so she also blames Nandini
Nalini too stays in her own la la land
Acharya should have left 3 spies in the palace
one for Nand one for his daughters one for emergency
but even he would not have thought Nand would plot now

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