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Posted: 7 years ago
phew finally I have reviewed this update completely
I was doing it in between my assignment
OK I have a small request
whenever you write for the marriage part
please make it only a marriage update with all the rituals
that update should be Nalini Duru free
Nand has to stay for the kanyadaan I know
but the rest vamps / villains should not be there
no plot or conspiracy in the marriage function at all
Chandra can plot something of course I wont mind then

I can't help but observe Nalini Duru are so similar
in fact they can be best friends and start a I hate Nandini club
Except Neela every one in her family wants something from her
Good these 2 girls are going away from this prison
Once Nandini knows of the bathroom incident she should trust Chandra
I hope she wont be blind to Nalini and disbelieve Chandra
She should seriously think of what Neela had told her about Nalini
she has a tendency to trust her family blindly
but if she continues to do it even now then she will be in trouble later
Every one will try to use this weakness of hers against her
Edited by 2filmy - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Oh wow Duru will be a mere spectator
Nalini will see her defeat this will make me so happy
I want Chandra to show them both their places
he should make it clear to them he has his own mind
and he wont ever tolerate anyone trying to control him
Once and for all he should do something to show them
Ok so that washroom incident will be forgotten I see
She needs to know the true colors of Nand and Nalini
only then she will take the right decisions in the future
PS did you mean to write Nalini and wrote Adhira in her place ?
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: 2filmy

I can understand how scared Avantika is of Nand

she does not have the courage to face him now
she knows that he can't bear defeat at all
and he can blame her for the result of the war

The fear of many years will not go overnight. she has just learnt to be by herself in his absence. His sudden return brings the fear back and makes her stumble.

I am shocked that she can feel guilt for all that she did
she has the audacity to feel relieved after all that happened
may be she still has an ounce of humanity left some where in her heart
I think years of staying with Nand has made her know the reality
what a grave mistake she had made all those years back
Moora being Rajmata was the bigger surprise for her
I think she had never imagined Moora can be alive

Yes, over the years, she has realised her mistake. But she always felt nobody can overpower Nand and had learnt to obey her master like a dog. But seeing Moora again brings back the guilt alive and fresh.

Nandini was never a princess by birth and blood
but she is a true princess by heart and actions
how does Avantika define being a princess ?
clearly she does it just by blood and birth
she was born as a princess but is she a real princess ?
no she is just a power hungry greedy selfish creature
who does not care about any one except herself

@BOLD - that is the inherent difference between her and Nandini. Avantika was born a princess, but forgot her royal reponsibility to protect her People when the need arose. Nandini was raised a princess, yet she rose to the occasion to stand by her People (atleast after she took incharge in the absence of Nand). Chandra was born a prince, turned into a civilian and rose to protect his People by overthrowing a tyrant King.

fate made her eat her own taunt of Chandra being a commoner

hahah. foot in the mouth situation now. 😆

now she should learn being a commoner is not shameful
but being a pathetic creature like her is really shameful

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: 2filmy

wow that will be the perfect situation

CN getting married and Nand staying in prison
again a difference between Nandinin and Avantika
Nandini really brought Nand good luck
where as Avantika brought him only mere freedom
she has the guts to even think of waging a war now ?
after seeing Chandra power thinking of that is a folly
she is still concerned about Nand after all this
she really has become his puppet now
can't even think of taking a step without him

Avantika was Nand's ladder to success. True to the meaning of a ladder, he kicked it as soon as he climbed and kept it under his feet 😲 She has now really become his puppet.


I just hate to see Nand here now
he should shed tears of blood not have a grin
Avantika spoke to him as if she made a blunder
Nand replied her in his usual scornful way I presume
Of course it means he has planned something
and Avantika agreeing to CN marriage is good for his plan
I some how feel their relation similar to Shakuni Duryodhan
Shakuni was the manipulative master planner
Duryodhan used to do all just as Shakuni used to say
he never used his own brains
same is the case with Avantika
She always did what Nand used to tell her to do

Wow. nice inference from Mahabharata again!

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: 2filmy

Nand proves he is Nalini's father here with the plan

now I know why he had smiled evilly after Acharya met him
he had made that plan there and then what a devil villain

Yesss ! You're spot on, again. 👏

of course his daughter thinks like him - that is natural
as they both have the same bad blood in their bodies
I don't know why I some how feel Nalini is bad luck for Nand
she will somehow bring about his down fall now
I mean he has already lost many things by now
but this plan will make him lose whatever little he has now
This is just my hunch I may be wrong too

Nalini will bring his downfall, no doubt. But she is not bad luck for him. She has been raised by him to be a vamp. whatever he has lost till date, is his own doing - tyrrany, arrogance, cruelty, war with Chandra - everything is his own doing. can't blame Nalini there. She's just a pampered princess.

Avantika still thinks Nalini will change after marriage ?
she thinks Moora will help change her ?

All mothers think well for their children, even if they are dictators like hitler...

If I was in Moora's place I would chase Nalini with a broom
Avantika is still living in a fool's paradise then

🤣 I would give her a broom, and ask her to sweep the whole palace. EVERY DAY... she would forget about men, when she hits the bed by the end of the day 😆

like Nand can never change Nalini too wont ever change
both are like a dog's tail that will forever be curled
Nalini is Avantika's own daughter so she is thinking of her happiness
but she isn't thinking at all what will happen to Nandini
how she will feel when she is cheated and betrayed
poor girl has already been through a lot in life
may be she wont be able to take this shock at all

The first thing that strikes her is the shocking attitude of Nand and Nalini , planning to kill her brother's son - even while staying at their mercy... Second thing that strikes her is the informaton of Nalini getting a golden chance to marry and become a disciplined wife to someone... Third thing that HITS her hard in the head is the Widow part. Thats when the mother loses herself. because she puts Nalini in her shoes and sees her in teh same state. same adrenaline rush that Nalini has today, Avantika had it yesterday. Hunger for xxx was what brought her own downfall. Nalini is Avantika in the making... so she gets scared.
In all this, Nandini does not strike her at all. nandini has always been considered step-daughter who got undue advantage of a princess life and enjoyed royalty... she did not know that Nandiini and chandra are married. she did not know that her own daughter neela is in love.. she lives in a bubble. so, Nandini doesnt strike her at this juncture.

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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey..when are you planning to post the next part? Eagarly waiting for it.😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Waiting for next part 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: diyak

Hey..when are you planning to post the next part? Eagarly waiting for it.😊



One chapter will be up - By tomorrow mostly 😉
I will be posting a couple of chandu Nandu sequences shortly... Back to back...
Edited by FrankPunch - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Nandinisharmaa

Waiting for next part 😳


By tomorrow mostly...
Did you read chapter 15 and 16?
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Posted: 7 years ago
I can understand the extent of fear Nand has instilled in Avantika
but it is high time she should try to learn to overcome this fear
Nand is mainly powerless now neither he has much money nor his empire
she should slowly turn things back in her favor
She has understood that she was mistaken and Chandra has overpowered Nand
Her guilty conscience should be alive from now on always
so that she always remembers her past actions and regrets them
you distinguished CN and Avantika so well as prince and princesses
foot in mouth for Avantika I am loving it

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