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Mansi

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Awesome update 👏So that Brahmin is none other than Chanakya himself 👍🏼That time Dev took it lightly but after the death of the dance master he came in form 👍🏼Loved how Sujan found Dev ❤️Their bonding is nice...Moora meeting Chandra was lovely ❤️So I think Chandra had got a misunderstanding during the Swayamvar day right?Happy Moora accepted Nandini Wondering what will happen next

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AshtaVasus

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Nandinisharmaa
Sangeetha...Sorry for delay . I can understand writers frustration . Even a small comment,feedbacks be it positve or negative like suggestions ,compliment , enocuragment do wonders .After along time I logged in .Can't wait to read . Looks very tempting ,interesting.Shall comment soon 😳

Thank you !

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AshtaVasus

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Posted: 7 years ago

#403

Originally posted by: Vampire2468
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After so long u updated it 👏On one way Moora is not wrong but on the other she is wrong in judging Nandini due to Avantika n Nand 🐷Nand is so 😡He made it look like a tiger attacked Suryadev n he died but good Moora sent her trusted spy behind them Great plan by her 👍🏼She lost her child 😭Happy she raised Sujan as her own son n he too is waiting for Dev

I know.. i wasn't in the right frame of mind to write. People are silently reading the story, but dint bother to even leave a feedback. Mood nahi ta likhne ke liye.

Moora is absolutely not wrong. When the kings of yesteryears married their enemy's daughter as war compensation, the kings were in equal power and both stand to benefit from such a relationship. But Nand was already thrown from his throne. Marrying his daughter wouldn't, in Moora's view, benefit their family or their kingdom. She asked all the right questions. But yes, all fingers are not alike. So she underestimates Nandini, judging by Nand and Avantika's nature :)

Nand is so power hungry... yucky guy he is 😡

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AshtaVasus

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Posted: 7 years ago

#404

Originally posted by: Vampire2468
Chapter 14-
Awesome update 👏So that Brahmin is none other than Chanakya himself 👍🏼That time Dev took it lightly but after the death of the dance master he came in form 👍🏼Loved how Sujan found Dev ❤️Their bonding is nice...Moora meeting Chandra was lovely ❤️So I think Chandra had got a misunderstanding during the Swayamvar day right?Happy Moora accepted Nandini Wondering what will happen next

Everyone's life turning point starts with some inspiration event or a gruesome event. DEV was a child. He was 3 yrs old when he lost his Prince title and became a pauper.

He was 9 yrs old when his dance master was killed in front of him.

So its like our mothers teaching us Shlokas when we are children. We just follow rote memory without actually giving importance to the information. only later, we start understanding the meaning and each shloka has a different purpose and made for different devtas.

He was a growing boy. So things hit his head a bit late :)

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N_sharmaa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#405

Sangeeta ..beautifully written .You are one brilliant writer 👏Loved the way you have represented the charcaters .You have given clear cute pictures of them .Wish in the show we had got to see something like this . Use of langauage is also very beautiful . Loved the way how you have explained CN point of views and also thier qalities you have metioned it intelligently and also pictures you have used wisely 👏 and all the conversations have been well penned and loved the fact how you have come up with beautiful tracks , story of your own using the shows' track shown in the show and in fact you have shown it better than them 👏 .Loved the idea of how you hjave included flahbacks and present togther .👏

Brilliantly wriiten Sangeeta . The show indeed had beautiful concept and leads .Wish makers had given more concentration on their script and used the tracks like you have used then sure show would have still on air but no use of saying now but happy that we have got to see things through your beautiful writing 😳

Update soon next part 😳😳

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diya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#406

Awesome update👏

Good Moora accepted Nandini by end of it..I hope padmanand and avanthika stay away from nandini now. Also it will be interesting to see nandini's reaction on seeing chandra for the first time . Looking forward how chandra and nandini going to progress in their relationship.

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#407

Of course Acharya had never seen Moora so agitated

She was a calm and composed lady till now

and used to hide her emotions well as a queen should

but the sudden turn of event had shocked her a lot

They say a woman's heart is as deep as the ocean

and there are so many secrets hidden in her heart

so this was also one secret that Acharya did not know

I understand that he was upset by her harsh words

but he was an experienced and learned person

so he had understood this was a reaction to something

so he had kept quiet at that time and waited for the right time

so that he could clarify the issue with her later

he was right to warn Chandra of her mood before hand

now he can be prepared mentally to meet her

this is interesting that he told Chandra to get the paintings

Acharya felt that the paintings would help convince Moora

I think any one who sees the painting will understand

how much Nandini loves Chandra as the paintings speak

Some how I found this gesture very romantic

this whole Chandra going to the attic and searching for the paintings

then picking them up and bringing it here

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#408

She was right to tell them everything about Avantika

this way they will understand her concern better

of course it is natural that she expected history to repeat itself

she is a mother after all and her worry is totally justified

but she is judging Nandini by her parents which is wrong

Nandini is nothing like Nand or Avantika at all

I also understand she wants to cancel this marriage

she is just worried for Chandra and Magadh now

she also feel Nandini is bad luck for Nand and Magadh

but I loved how Acharya explained that she is a good luck

I think the paintings was actually the real ice breaker

those really started to soften her a bit towards Nandini

a piece of work or art always says many things about the artist

an art is a way for an artist to express himself / herself

Moora surely saw that in the paintings and that assured her to an extent

I also loved how Acharya supported Nandini here so well

How I wish Surya and Moora had not come to Pipli

that was the biggest blunder of their lives

I was reminded of the invitation to the Pandavas

for a game of dice from the Kauravas

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#409

That was a trap for the Pandavas from the Kauravas

this was a trap for Surya Moora from Nand

Sadly here there was no Krishna to guide them

A woman always had a good sensory instinct

she can identify bad look and bad touch so well

Of course Moora too could do that easily but she was helpless

Moora did right to send her spy behind them

she at least knew the truth of the events that way

Of course they killed Surya soldiers by poison darts

no one would do post mortem of their body there

but they were sly to let Surya go to the tiger asleep

that way the tiger will eat him and all will know it

in a hunting expedition in a jungle it is very common

also there is no way to do post mortem here

this was worse than the way Abhimanyu was killed in Mahabharat

there he was fighting alone against so many strong warriors

but here Surya did not even have the chance to fight and defend himself

nand is a real coward to attack from behind this way

I applaud Moora that she kept her cool in such a situation

and though of ways to take quick action wisely

she is really the perfect queen in all ways

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2filmy

@2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#410

mention of owl as messenger reminded me of Harry Potter

I thought at that time only pigeons were used as messengers

I feel so bad for the nurse and her son they died for Magadh

this reminded me of the old lady and her 5 sons who died

in the house of lac instead of the pandavas but that was different

there those people were actually killed in their sleep in the fire

So Moora sent message to both the spy and the nurse

for the same thing and the nurse got the message first

so what will the spy do now that Dev is already safe in the place

by the way this was quite common in those days right ?

nurses and their sons dying to save the baby prince and the kingdom

I had read a similar incident about Panna Bai and Uday Singh

she also had killed her own son to save Uday Singh

I can't believe how she still kept her cool with that scum

I would have kicked him with my chappal then and there

So Avantika standing outside theroom was also a plan

It was not a mere coincidence but a part of the conspiracy

Nand had kept 2 options for the proposal to Moora

chit bhi uska pat bhi uska a real shrewd player

Of course Nand had planned her death as well

she was clever enough to understand it

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