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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#381

So Chandra is Dev

here he became Maurya from Dev

so similar to Dev becoming Advay in our show

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#382

there were so many things wrong at that time

even now there are so many wrong things

teenage is such an immature age

very few can take right decisions then

and here teenage was the motherhood age

of course normally one wont like some one so older

but yes marriages used to happen with huge age gaps

even 10 years difference is too much for me

it has always been a male dominated society

so men can get away with anything

even Voldemort was very charming

and he used that as a weapon

same is the case for Nand

OK will wait for Pipli king details

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#383

girls used to get pregnant so early in those days

that is why there was a high mortality rate too

many mothers and children used to die

apart from the plots to get the baby aborted in palaces

getting pregnant and having a baby at 15 is really scary

a baby is a huge responsibility for such a young girl

I think now in villages this still goes on

I must give it to Nand for his detailed planning

no actually that detail is not required

his profession was not that important

this is enough that he was a common man

and of course he could get any post when he paid for it

hmm Avantika did not want to hear anything then

she was in her dream world with Nand

she thought they were balanced and equal

as for both it was not the first marriage

and both had a child from the previous spouse

but she should have thought he could do that to her too

if he loved her truly he would never try to influence her

or touch her inappropriately

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#384

loyalty and responsibility should always come with honesty

one has to speak out his/her mind when it is very necessary

she was just used to the luxuries and was upset without them

she never had any feelings for the common people

strangely enough she was bewitched by a common man and ruined

Nalini is like her younger version exactly

the first murder from her is the start of her bad karma

did not know about Chandra sister

God so Chandra sister ruined his life too ?

Pipli people should really have told Surya everything

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#385

she was so selfish right from the start

she always just cared about her own needs

Nand Avantika really deserve each other

they are such a perfect heaven made pair

both are so conceited and cruel

guys always have ready excuses

girls going for tuitions or jobs are raped

there they are no way lured they are just the victims

but did they not keep a count of the servants in those days ?

palaces must have had good security right ?

of course he never had imagined his sister to play such a game

Nand had just attacked them unaware

Edited by 2filmy - 7 years ago

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NONIE

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Posted: 7 years ago

#386

Awesome chapter😊

The description of Avantika's journey was so wonderful⭐️

Edited by Nonie12345 - 7 years ago

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AshtaVasus

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Posted: 7 years ago

#387

Originally posted by: Nonie12345
Awesome chapter😊
The description of Avantika's journey was so wonderful⭐️

Thank you Nonie 😳

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AshtaVasus

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Posted: 7 years ago

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AshtaVasus

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Posted: 7 years ago

#389

A WORD FOR ALL SILENT READERS

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Dear Silent Reader,

I understand that most Readers silently read the Prologue and a Chapter or two to find if the story interests you. But if you are reading this story SILENTLY even after 10 CHAPTERS, then there's something wrong with you.

I imagine that your time is way too precious to you to leave a comment. But, it's very frustrating and almost insulting to an Author too - when they spend time Plotting a story, working on the development of each character, drafting the plot, typing, editing the story, formatting - all for the readers entertainment - and the readers don't even bother to leave a word...

Is it so difficult to say whether you liked it or not, which part you enjoyed, which part you didn't like and why? It's not that high an expectation as an author, isn't it?

I mean, nobody's asking you to write praiseworthy words in each post. It could be criticism, grammar mistakes, suggestions, how you imagine the next chapter to flow.. what you think about the characters, things that confused you in the story etc - ANYTHING - just anything to show that you are interested in the story...

You can't force people to leave a comment... But nobody's forcing you to read as well. So, if you read something and like it, would it hurt to inform the Writer about it ? I am NOT writing for money here. I dont get a penny for any of this. I am writing with passion. Just say something to let the Author know that you are atleast reading...

This is a plea to everyone who reads posts on this Thread.. Else, I will never know what you loved about the story...Never mind if a thought is repeated by someone else.. just post what YOU FEEL.

So silent readers, please come outside, and start commenting, Lets see if there any silent reader in this Thread at all !

Edited by FrankPunch - 7 years ago