Rajveer-Naina - His Ignorance is Her Punishment - SS - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Reply for part 3:-
Finally Naina knows the truth and we should thank Alekh for that who first denied but soon realized that in no way Naina is going to listen.

Naina is happy for obvious reasons and so do we.

I am sure Huda is the only one who can help her in making Raj realize that ignorance is not a right way to run with your feelings.

It's great to see jealous Raj and let's see what he does to stop them?
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Chapter 6

As she is pulled by a pair of strong hands, she tries to protest, in order to get out of the grip, but fails. In fact, the person keeps a firm grip, so, she won't escape. Due to it being extremely dark, Naina is unable to see the person who pulled her.

Naina keeps struggling to get out. When the person notices that she is not stopping, the person moves his lips towards her right ear, keeping her safe in his grip. Moving his lips towards her ear, he breathes slightly.

This causes Naina to shiver and makes her heart to skip a beat. She immediately sense who the person is. Yes, he is none other than Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat. Moving his lips further, extremely close to her ear, he smirks. Rajveer enjoys the effect he has on Naina.

"Stop trying to get out of my hold Naina, because now, I won't let you go"

whispers Rajveer, huskily

Naina's eyes widens as she hears these words from Rajveer, leading her heartbeat to pick up pace. Today, she feels as if she is meeting a new Rajveer.

Within few minutes, everyone leaves from Mess, leaving Naina and Rajveer behind. Dr. Shalini made sure that no one disturbs the love birds.

Suddenly, there is a spot light right on Rajveer and Naina. Naina's heart skips a beat on realising their closeness and their current position, She finds herself tangled in Rajveer's arms, both her arms at her back, in Rajveer's arms, her chest is colliding with his. They are able to feel each other's breath on their faces. A smirk is prominent on Rajveer's face as he sees his effect on Naina. Rajveer does not fail to notice the sudden change in Naina's breathing rate due to their proximity.

Suddenly, Rajveer's smirk vanishes and his gaze towards Naina turns dark as he notices her carefully, Wearing a beautiful black saree, her hair left loose into soft curls, wearing matching earrings that compliments her outfit, and her eyes cascaded downwards, she looks not less than an angel.

Naina waits for Rajveer to let her go. When she feels no movement from him, she hesitantly looks up in his eyes. His intense and dark gaze succeeds in making her heart to skip a beat and leading her to lower her eyes again, out of shyness.

Not ready to face the consequences, she pushes him off slightly, in order to get out of his hold. This succeeds as she is finally out of his grip. Wanting to leave from there, with her eyes cascaded downwards, she takes a step back. Turning her back towards him, she takes a step forward to leave, but she stops with a jerk as she is pulled back by Rajveer.

Not wanting to let her go so easily, he grabs her left hand's wrist with his right hand, pulling her closer, leading her back to collide with his chest. Naina shuts her eyes tightly due to their closeness and his touch. She feels her body heating up against his warm body. Suddenly, she feels her right hand coming in front of her stomach. Taking her hand in his, Rajveer brings her right hand in front and places it on her stomach, his hand on top of hers.

"Itni bhi kya jaldi hai Cadet Naina Singh"

whispers Rajveer, intensely. hIs voice reflects his jealousy and possessiveness.

Naina's heartbeat picks up pace at this. What is up with him? Why the sudden boldness? She knew her's and Dr. Shalini's plan will work, but, she was not expecting Rajveer to react in such a bold manner. With a lot of courage, she opens her eyes, out of breath.

"sir...plesse...mujhe...jaane..diji..."

whispers Naina, stammering.

She tries to speak further, but gets cut off by Rajveer. Moving his lips closer to her right ear, he whispers suddenly.

"sshhh"

Hearing this from Rajveer, it succeeds in giving her goosebumps in her entire body and her eyes opens wide. She can feel his breath on her ear. By every passing second, she feels weak in her knees by his sweet torture. Does she want this torture to end? No she does not, in fact, she feels a sweet pleasure in his sweet torture

Suddenly, "Nazdeekiyaan" starts playing in Mess.

Raaton ke jaage subah mile hain
Resham ke dhaage yeh silsile hain
Laazmi si lagne lagi hai
Do dilon ki ab nazdeekiyaan


Slowly turning Naina's face towards him, Rajveer puts his hand on Naina's bare waist, due to the saree, giving her shivers in her entire body with his touch. Naina gasps at the sudden movement. With his other hand, he takes her hand in his. With his eyes, he demands her to put her other hand on his shoulder. Surprised by his demanding gaze, she does what he has asked for. Being in the perfect position for a couple dance, without giving Naina a warning, Rajveer pulls her closer with a jerk. With this sudden action from Rajveer, it makes Naina to look directly in his eyes with surprised expressions. As soon as she meets his gaze, she gets shocked on finding his eyes blazing with anger and jealousy. She knows why he is angry and jealous, and this is exactly what she wants. She will do anything to make him confess his love for her. Today, she will make sure that he doesn't hide his feelings. but, his intense gaze scares her a little. She wants to lower her eyes, but his demanding gaze does not give her the permission to do so. Giving up, she keeps the eyes contact. They start swaying with the music.

"tum kya karne ki koshish kar rahi ho Naina?"

Rajveer finally questions.

His voice starts turning stern by every passing second. Naina's heart skips a beat at such a bold and sudden question from Rajveer. Even though she knows exactly what he is pointing towards, she pretends to be unknown.

"maine kya kiya? What are you talking about sir?"

questions Naina, her voice reflects her nervousness.

hmm dikhti nahi par ho rahi hain mehsoos nazdeekiyan
Do dil hi jaane lagti hain kitni mehfooz
nazdeekiyan


This succeeds in reaching up Rajveer's anger level. Changing the steps, he starts to twirl her around. When done, he pulls her back closer with a jerk, getting back to their initial position.

"zayada bholi banne ki koshish mut karo Naina, tumhe achi tarah se pata hai ke mein Cadet Huda ke bare mein baat kar raha hoon. Maine tumse kaha tha na ke us se door raho or tum..."

confesses Rajveer, his voice turning stern by each passing second.

Annoyed by the fact that he cannot confess his feelings, she pushes him off slightly, wanting to leave from there.

"kis haq se ye aap mujhe keh rahe hain? Lagte kya hain aap mere?"

Naina snaps back

Zariya hain ye aankhein zariya
Chhalakta hai jinse ek armaano ka dariya
Aadatein hain inki puraani
Ankahi si keh de kahaani

Rights? she is again talking about right? How dare she. With his right hand, he grabs her wrist and pulls her back to their initial position, leading her to gasp. This time, Rajveer keeps a firm grip, so, she wouldn't be able to escape this time.

"ye baat tum bhi janti ho or mein bhi ke tum par mera kitna haq hai. Or agar tum nahi janti toh mujhe koi problem nahi hai tum par abhi apna haq jatane se"

speaks Rajveer

His voice is slow, yet stern. It's loud enough for Naina's heart to skip a beat, but low enough for anyone else to not hear. Naina is feeling afraid by Rajveer's jealousy, possessiveness and his anger. She is getting weak by every second, but she is also Naina Singh Ahluwalia and future Mrs. Naina Singh Shekhawat. There is no way she will give up so easily. She takes a deep breath with a lot of courage.

"akhir chahte kya hain aap?"

questions Naina, angrily

This is it for Rajveer to react. Oh Naina, you shouldn't have asked this question. Today, he will tell and show you what exactly he wants.

Parchaaiyaan do judne lagi hain
Dekho hawa mein udne lagi hain
Pankh jaisi lagne lagi hain
Do dilon ki ab nazdeekiyan

Grabbing her left elbow with his right hand, he drags her to a nearby wall, pinning and hovering her, putting both of his hands on either sides of the wall. This all happened so suddenly that there was no time for Naina to react. Her breathing turns shallow and her heartbeat picks up pace.

Without giving her a warning, with his right hand's index finger, he puts it under Naina's chin and forces her to look in his eyes. They lock eyes immediately. By each passing second, his gaze turns intense and dark.

"mein chahta hoon ke tum cadet Huda se sagai na karo"

he finally confesses, rather demands

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Posted: 7 years ago
#23
Awesome...This Captain still doesn't want to spill the truth..Itni boldness dikha kar apne dil ki baat zuban par nahin lasakte..Sirf order de sakte hain.. Typical officer.

Naina my lioness... Don't give up to his order..You have all the Haq to make him confess..Not only he has rights on you
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update
Love it
Raina moments are amazing
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25
Wow interesting start loved it so much.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice part 5:-

Raj's confession was heard by Shalu and I am happy that she teamed up with Naina.

Now Shalu and Naina both will bring him on root.

Raj's has smelled something fishy. Now he will definitely ask Naina that why she agreed to get engaged to Huda.
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It was beautiful and passionate..
I just loved this bold Raj and his anger mixed with jealously made me blush at his actions..

How much we missed to see this side of him in the show!!!

He demanded something hain not going to accept it that easily but I am sure Naina will make him do that soon.

Continue soon dear!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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grt part again...ye mr captain confess kb krenge...😕😕😕...apna army attitude dikha rhe h...but i guess vo bhul rhe hain tht naina is also a soon to b officer...so rajveer dont mess up wid her...anyways now wht next...is he going to confess oh how badly i want him to tell naina tht how much he loves her...waiting...continue asap...n thanks for pm...😊😊
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Chapter 7

His words keeps ringing in her ears as she stares at him with wide eyes. A smile starts to creep on her lips as for the very first time, she has seen Rajveer showing his right on her, by demanding something. But, suddenly, Naina's smile vanishes as she realises something else. What the hell? Instead of confessing his feelings, he is basically ordering her to break this engagement. This is not done Captain Shekhawat. Again, anger takes place inside her.

All this time, Rajveer has been waiting for Naina to respond, keeping their precious eye-contact Naina also gives him a tough competition.

"kyun?"

questions Naina with a stern voice, looking intensely in his eyes.

Rajveer's expressions changes at this. Why is she asking this question? Can't she just fulfill his wish without questioning? Rajveer clenches his fist at her bold question.

"kyun mathlab?"

he questions her again

Naina's anger increases by every passing second. With her right hand's index finger, Naina puts it between Rajveer and her chest, pointing towards his chest, in order to maintain a little distance.

"aap kyun chahte hain ke mein Huda se sagai toor doon?"

questions Naina, sternly, without moving her finger.

Rajveer stares her for couple of seconds. Why is she doing this? Does she not understand why he has put such a demand? or is she really pretending.? Changing his vision from her face towards her finger, he stares at it with anger. How dare she distance herself from him? With his hand, he jerks her finger away. Taking a step towards her, he minimizes the distance between him and her. By putting both of his hands on either sides of the wall, he hovers her again as he looks intensely in her eyes. Cadet Naina Singh Ahluwalia, you are forgetting that he is a master of strategy and communication.

"kyunke tum Cadet Huda se pyaar nahi karti"

utters Rajveer with full confidence

This succeeds in making Naina's heart to skip a beat. Rajveer's confident and stern voice makes her to lower her eyes out of nervousness. How the hell did he know? Is her plan going to backfire on her? NO! She cannot let this happen.

In order to gather some courage, Naina closes her eyse. After few seconds, she opens her eyes back, still her eyes being lowered. She does not know how to face him at this moment. She is not able to lie while looking in his eyes. Moving her head to her right side, she ignores his gaze as anger urges through her.

"yeh galatfehmi hai aapki. Mein Huda se karti hun py..."

says Naina but gets cut of by Rajveer

Not wanting to let her complete her lie, he pulls her even closer with a jerk by her waist, leading Naina's heartbeat to pick up pace and leading her to look directly in his eyes. Instead of anger, Naina sees determination in his eyes.

"jhoot bol rahi ho tum"

he says, rather yells

Rajveer isn't able to hear his Naina telling him that she loves someone else, that too a lie. He wouldn't have interfered between her and Huda if she actually loved him, but clearly, she does not. He will not let anyone take his Naina's happiness away from her. Even she doesn't have the right to do that.

"mein jhoot nahi bol rahi hoon"

Naina snaps back

He stares at her continuously for couple of second.. Suddenly, a smile starts to creep on Rajveer's lips. Why lying Naina when you know he'll make you utter the truth?

"toh ye baat meri aankhon mein dekh ke kaho ke tum Cadet Huda se pyaar karti ho and I promise you that ke us ke baad mein tumse koi sawal nahi poochunga"

says Rajveer, smirking

As soon as Rajveer utters these words, it succeeds in making Naina's cheeks to go bright red, out of shyness and leading her to lower her gaze. Shoot! he knows her weakness. He knows that she cannot lie while staring him in the eyes. In nervousness, she bites her lower lip. How did the tables turn? Wanting to leave the argument, she decides to not answer his question. And in order to do that, she decides to leave from there.

"bohut raat ho chuki hai sir, I think ab mujhe jana chahiye"

says Naina with her eyes being lowered.

Wanting to escape, she decides to leaves from the right ride, just then, Rajveer blocks her way, same repeats with the other side.

"aaj tum mere sawaloon ke jawab diye bagair kahin nahi jaogi Naina. Hamesha tum bhaaghti ho lekin aaj nahi Naina. I have had enough experience with your running away"

he says softly, smirking

Just then, a memory starts to play in both of their heads. How for the first time Naina sneaked in his room in order to get some proofs. And when she was caught red handed by him, behind the curtains, she tried her level best to escape. Yes, he is right! Definitely she is bold, but in front of him, her boldness goes down the drain. She goes speechless in front of her Rajveer sir, her mentor, her inspiration and her LOVE!

Smirking, Rajveer notices her very carefully, how she is avoiding to make eye contact with him while a small smile is prominent on her face. Clearly something is going in her head. Taking a step back, he gives her some space, in order for her to calm herself down. Smirking, he crosses both of his arms over his chest.

"So Cadet Naina ah Singh, kya aap mujhe ab bataiyengi ke aap Cadet Huda se sagai kyun kar rahi hain?"

questions Rajveer

His bold question makes Naina's heart to skip a beat. How can she let the tables turn? in nervousness, Naina changes her vision from one thing to another, yet she avoids making eye contact with him.

"sir...wo..."

stammers Naina still shifting her vision.

Rajveer's smirk gets wider at this. Oh how badly he missed his shy and nervous Naina. She is acting exactly the same way she acted when he caught her red handed behind the curtains, in his room.

"haan mein sun raha hoon"

says Rajveer, trying to bring back the old memories

It success as Naina gets more nervous. Her cheeks starts heating up under his intense and constant gaze.

"sir..."

she tries to speak but again gets cut off by Rajveer

"mujhe sunai nahi dia zara zoor se boliye Cadet Singh"

he says, smirking

At this moment, Naina realises Rajveer's motive - so he is doing all this on purpose. This is not done Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat. You are forgetting who you are dealing with. Sure you are her mentor, teacher and her love, but don't forget that she is also YOUR protege, YOUR cadet and most importantly, YOUR future wife. There is no way she will let the tables turn.

Irritated, Naina crosses her arms over her chest and looks directly in his deep and mesmerizing eyes.

"pehle aap mujhe ye bataiye ke aapko kyun farak padta hai agar mein Huda se engegement kar loon?"

Naina snaps back

This sudden, direct and bold question from Naina makes Rajveer's heartbeat to pick up pace. His smirk vanishes and his cheeks starts turning bright red under her intense gaze. This makes his gaze to turn dark and his expressions changes back to serious.

Still keeping the eye contact, he takes a step towards her, leading her to get nervous and she takes a step back. She turns nervous but there is no way she will show her nervousness to him this time, so instead of lowering her eyes, she gives him a tough competition; by staring directly in his eyes.

"sawal pehle maine poocha hai"

he says sternly

By every passing second, Rajveer's gaze turns dark. Naina's heart skips a beat as she notices and realises what exactly he wants, by looking in his eyes, yet, she is not ready to give up so easily.

"lekin jawab pehle mujhe chahiye"

she snaps back

Damm! She is turning bold leading Rajveer's heartbeat to pick up pace. Taking another step towards her, he stares at her. At this point, Naina's back hits the wall as she takes her steps back.

"Do not test my patience Naina. I am very impatient when it comes to my PERSONAL matters"

warns Rajveer

His warning skips Naina's heartbeat, especially the word "personal". Rajveer can clearly hear the rhythm of her increasing heartbeat. But not today, she will not give up so easily. Today, she wants to know the truth. Right now, at this moment, she needs him to confess his feelings, does not matter what she has to do for that, or how far she might have to go in order to make him confess his love.

"I need an answer Captain Shekhawat"

demands Naina, coldly

This is it for Rajveer. He has had enough. Yes, he might be the most patient person, but that is professionally, he is not at all patient when it comes to his personal life. With his right hand, he grabs her left elbow and pulls her closer. At this point, their faces are just few inches apart!

"Now, my words won't speak, my actions will! Get ready for the answer Cadet Singh!"

says Rajveer

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Posted: 7 years ago
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awesome n wonderful update dear

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