Rajveer-Naina - His Ignorance is Her Punishment - SS

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Chapter 1

Cadet Naina & Captain Rajveer Poori shaam aur aadhi raat tak jungle mein akele aur ek saath...
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Standing right in front of the board, with no emotions on his face, Rajveer is reading each and every word very carefully. He does not know how to even react to this. Firstly, he was sent to solitary confinement due to Major Bharghav's lies and fake trap, and now this. What is he suppose to do at this moment after realising his love for Naina?

Suddenly, he feels someone's strong presence. Without turning around, he understands who the person is, yes she is none other than his Cadet Naina ah Singh. He does not need to turn around in order confirm this, he can smell her scent and he can recognize her footsteps. This is the last thing Rajveer expected. After realising his feelings for Naina, he does not know how to face her.

She was going towards her class, but she noticed Rajveer standing right in front of the board, reading it. All the cadets are present in the hallway, watching her, yet she does not care. The only thing she wants to do is talk to her Rajveer sir and question him regarding all this misunderstanding. With her eyes cascaded downwards, nervously, Naina starts taking baby steps towards Rajveer.

Reaching there, she stands few steps away from Rajveer while Rajveer does not turn around. Naina shifts her vision from Rajveer towards the board and then back towards Rajveer, trying to find proper words in order to speak to him.

"Sir pata nahi kis ki badtameezi hai ye..kis ka idea tha ye"

says Naina, nervously, her eyes cascaded downwards .

And before she could speak any further, they both hear Dr. Ritu Mishra's voice from the back.

"Cadets! Aapki classes nahi hain? Move it"

Turning around, Naina looks towards Dr. Mishra and finds her talking to the group of cadets and ordering them to move towards their classes. Within few seconds, all the cadets leave from there, and now are left, Dr. Mishra, Naina and Rajveer.

Walking towards Naina and Rajveer, Dr. Ritu stands few steps away from Naina.

"Cadet Singh! tumhe toh ye bhi idea nahi hai ke tumhari wajah se tumhare sir ko itni sharmindagi or pareeshani hui hai"

scolds Dr. Ritu looking towards Naina.

Naina immediately looks towards Dr. Ritu with confused expressions.

"ma'am"

Now looking towards Rajveer, Naina speaks further.

"Sir...sir aap bhi toh jante hain...sir please kuch boliye..ye..ye sab log..sir please boliye kuch"

says Naina, pleading with her eyes for Rajveer to say something.

Naina is unable to understand why Dr. Ritu Mishra is blaming her for all this. What is exactly her fault? That she respects and trusts Rajveer the most in this academy?

"Cadet tum bolo..."

yells Dr. Mishra, confronting Naina

But before Dr. Mishra could say anything further, she gets interrupted by Rajveer. Without turning around, Rajveer speaks.

"Dr. Mishra mujhe Cadet Singh se kuch baat karni hai"

his voice is stern and cold with no emotions whatsoever.

His cold voice skips the heartbeat of both Naina and Dr. Mishra. Without uttering any other word, Dr. Mishra leaves from there, but not before giving a dirty look towards Naina which confuses Naina but she decides to ignore it for now.

And here they are now, alone, standing in front of the board. There is silence for couple of minutes as Rajveer does not move his gaze from the board even for a single minute, without blinking, while Naina shifts her vision from one thing to another.

This silence is killing Naina, she wants to say something, ask questions and what not. She cannot take this anymore. She needs to be the one who should break this silence. Unable to bear this anymore, Naina decides to speak, but not before closing her eyes tightly in order to get some courage. Opening her eyes, she looks towards Rajveer.

"Sir"

calls Naina softly

The way she calls him, it melts his heart. Right now, he wants to turn around and take her into his embrace, wipe all her worries away, but, he cannot. He cannot fall weak. Not just for himself, but for her, for his love. He needs to start keeping his distances from her, for her sake. He does not want anyone talking rubbish about her. Without looking towards her, he decides to speak in his cold and stern voice.

"Kya chahti ho tum cadet Singh?"

questions Rajveer

A cold shiver goes through her spine as for the very first time she hears him speaking in such a cold tone. Her heartbeat picks up pace and it feels as if someone has dragged the Earth from underneath her feet. For the very first time, she is scared today.

But she cannot just stay quiet, she needs to answer him.

"Mein..kya...chahti?"

stammers Naina

Immediately, Rajveer turns towards her. Naina gets stunned on finding his eyes blazing with anger. She immediately lowers her gaze . She is unable to face his anger. She waits for him to speak up, but he does not. Yes, he is waiting for her to look up in his eyes. Understanding his demand, she finally surrenders and looks up in his eyes immediately.

"Kyun tum yoon baar baar apni har choti si problem ka solution lene mere paas dhori chali aati ho?"

questions Rajveer, raising his voice

His sudden question stuns Naina. Why the sudden question? Wasn't he the one who told her that he is also one of her friends? Doesn't he know that he is the only one whom she trusts the most in the entire academy. And above all that, he is her mentor.

She wants to lower her eyes, but, Rajveer's intense, constant and demanding gaze forces her to keep the eye contact. Lots of emotions are evident in both of their eyes; hurt, guilt, helplessness, and what not.

"Kyunke aap mere mentor hain sir or mein aap par sab se zayada trust karti hoon"

utters Naina, looking intensely in his eyes

He knows whatever he is about to do or say, it is wrong, but he has to do this for Naina. Still keeping the eye contact, Rajveer takes a step towards Naina.

"Mentor hone ka mathlab ye nahi hai ke mein tumhari har choti choti problem ka solution doon or agar tumhare liye mentor hone ka yehi mathlab hai toh mein abhi or issi waqt tumhara mentor hone se inkaar karta hoon"

shouts Rajveer

Naina shivers at this sudden yelling from Rajveer. She feels as if someone has splashed cold water on her face. She has no idea what exactly she is feeling. Her eyes starts tearing up, but she manages to keep her tears inside. She wants to look away but his authoritative gaze does not give her the permission.

"Sir aapko pata hai ke mein aap pe trust karti hoon"

whispers Naina

Even though Naina is trying her best to hide her tears, but they are not hidden by Rajveer. And this is what breaks him the most, her tears. But today, he needs to keep himself strong. He needs to do something which he would never want to do, but to keep her away from himself, he needs to do this. Yes, she might hate him afterwards, but he has to do this. He cannot let anything happen to his Naina.

Taking two more steps towards her, Rajveer grips Naina's right elbow and start making his grip stronger by every passing second. He hates doing this, but he has to do this. On the other hand, Naina feels a sharp pain in her body, but she needs to be strong. Even though his grip is hurting her to the core, she does not show it and keeps staring in his eyes.

Now, he is about to tell her something which will change her life completely.

"Tum us insaan pe kaise bharoosa kar sakti ho jis ne tumhare bhai, Captain Naveen Singh Aaluwalia ko maara ho?"

shouts Rajver

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Hey,
nice start
Wating to know how Naina will react
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Chapter 2

She freezes right in her spot after hearing these words from Rajveer. Her eyes go wide in shock and automatically tears starts to brim in her eyes, yet she makes no effort to end the eye contact.

This is what hates and breaks Rajveer the most, seeing tears in his Naina's eyes. By every passing second, his grip is getting loose on her elbow, yet he makes no effort to lower his eyes. He cannot fall weak like this, he needs to stay strong, for her happiness.

He waits for her to say something, but all she does is stare at him with teary eyes. Her heart does not want to believe Rajveer. This frustrates Rajveer, why is she not uttering a word? Grabbing both of her shoulders, he shakes her in order to get her back to reality.

"Tumne suna nahi maine kya kaha? Maine hi tumhare bhai ko maara hai. Kuch bolo dammit!!"

yells Rajveer

Instead of anger, a smile starts to creep on Naina's lips. This shocks Rajveer. Why is she smiling after knowing that he killed her brother? Without getting out of his hold, she looks intensely in his eyes.

"Jhoot bol rahe hain aap"

utters Naina

It surprises Rajveer. Why is she not believing him? Letting go of her shoulders, in nervousness, Rajveer takes a step back and turns his back towards Naina.

"Mein jhoot nahi bol raha. Maine hi tumhare bhai ko maara hai"

admits Rajveer

His shaky voice reflects his nervousness which ensures Naina that either he is lying or either he is not telling her the whole truth. Her heart is not able to accept that her Rajveer sir killed her bhaiyya, his best friend. She feels as if there is another side to this truth which she will find out, no matter what!

Naina's smile gets wider by each passing second. With her right hand, she grabs Rajveer's left hand and she swings him around, towards her, so now his front is towards Naina.

Then, taking a step towards Rajveer, Naina looks directly in his eyes, her smile vanishes and her expressions turns serious.

"Kyun kar rahe hain aap aisa?"

questions Naina

Now it is Rajveer's turn to get anxious. He wants to lower his eyes, but her constant and intense gaze does not give him the permission to do so.

"Kya kar raha hoon mein?"

Rajveer question back, sternly

His stern voice makes Naina's heart to skip a beat. But she will not give up. If he is Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat, then she is also his protge, his cadet Naina ah Singh. He is the one who taught her how to deal with any kind of situation. Sure he is a master of strategy and communication, but she has also learned lots from him.

"Aap kyun jhoot bol rahe hain ke aapne bhaiyya ko maara?"

questions Naina

This irritates Rajveer to an extent. Why is she not believing him? In anger, he grabs both of her shoulders.

"Mein jhoot nahi bol raha Cadet Naina Singh Ahluwalia. Maine hi tumhare bhai ko ek pagal kutte ki tarah maara hai. Saboot chahiya na tumhe, mein deta hoon tumhe saboot"

yells Rajveer

Without waiting for Naina's reply, he grabs her left hand's wrist with his right hand and starts dragging her towards his room. Smiling and without uttering a word, Naina starts following him. Even she wants to see what proof he is talking about, There is no way she will believe that her Rajveer sir can kill her brother.

After few minutes, they finally reach Rajveer's room. Angrily, dragging her inside his room, he closes the door behind him and locks it as well. Now leaving Naina wrist harshly, Rajveer walks towards his closet. Opening it up, he takes out a recorder.

Now turning back towards Naina, with the recorder in his hand, angrily, he starts walking towards Naina. Reaching her, he harshly grabs her right hand with his left hand and he puts the recorder in her hand.

"Pehchaanti ho isse?"

questions Rajveer, yelling

Naina shifts her vision from Rajveer towards her hand. Her eyes widens in shock on seeing the recorder.

"Ye...ye toh Naveen bhaiyya ka hai"

utters Naina, stammering

In order to get her to look at him, he puts his right hand's index finger under her chin and forces her to look at him. They lock eyes immediately.

"Saboot chahiya tha na tumhe? Is mein Naveen ki awaz hai or us ki maut ka sach bhi. Play karo isse!"

orders Rajveer

His dominating and authoritative tone makes Naina's heartbeat to pick up pace. A lone of tear escapes from her eyes and falls on Rajveer's hand. He wants to free her from all her pain, he wants to wipe her tears away, but he cannot. He shuts his eyes in order to control his emotions. Opening back his eyes, he looks back towards Naina.

"Tumne suna nahi? Maine kaha play karo isse"

he orders again, sternly

Shifting her vision from Rajveer towards the recorder, she extends her thumb to play it while her hands starts shaking. Somehow, she manages to hit the button. Her shaky hands reflects her nervousness and fear. As soon as she turns the recorder on, Naveen's voice starts to play.

"Naina, meri pyaari behna, ek baat yad rakhna, tera bhai ek desh drohi nahi tha"

Other sounds starts to play in the background. Lots of voices are heard. Suddenly, Naveen's voice is heard again.

"Nooo Rajveer"

And before Naveen could complete his sentence, a gunshot is heard along with Naveen's scream.

The recorder stops playing and as soon as Naveen's scream is heard, Naina screams right away. Her eyes starts brimming with tears and she goes down on her knees, crying continuously, kissing her brother's recorder.

Her sobs are silent. She cries without uttering anything. Rajveer feels weak seeing her cry. He wants to comfort her , but he cannot. He needs to stay away from her, for her sake. His ignorance is not only her punishment, but his as well. By ignoring her, he is hurting himself more. But for her reputation, he needs to do this, and it does not matter if he has to behave rudely with her. If it saves her reputation, he will do this.

Rajveer comes back to reality and finds Naina on the floor still crying and hugging the tape recorder. He closes his eyes in order to get courage to take his next step. Opening his eyes back, he starts to take steps towards her. Harshly, he grabs her shoulders and makes her to stand back up which forces her to look in his eyes.

"Ab mil gaya hai na tumhe saboot ke maine hi Captain Naveen Singh Ahluwalia ko maara hai"

yells Rajveer

With that, he lets go off of her shoulders. Turning his back towards her, he starts to go out of the room when he hears Naina's voice from the back.

"Mera bhai ek deshdrohi tha"

says Naina

This was enough for Rajveer to react. He stops in his tracks. How the hell can she say such a thing? Turning towards her, his eyes blazing with anger, his right hand turns into a fist, he rushes towards Naina. Reaching her, he grabs both of her shoulders and grips it tightly.

"Tumhari himmat kaise hui Naveen ke baray mein aisa soochne ki?"

yells Rajveer

There is silence for few seconds while a wide smile starts to creep on Naina's lips. Rajveer fails to understand Naina's strategy. She looks intensely in his eyes.

"Jab aap bhaiyya ke baray mein aisa sun hi nahi sakte toh there is no way you can harm him in any way possible so maarne ka toh sawal hi nahi uthta"

says Naina, smiling

Rajveer leaves her shoulders right away and he takes a step back as he lowers his eyes. Naina takes a step towards him.

"Sir mujhe nahi pata aapke is jhoot ki wajah kia hai lekin mein us wajah ko or aapke is jhoot ka sach jaanke hi rahoongi"

informs Naina, determined .

With that, she goes out of his room leaving a shocked Rajveer behind. His heart swells with lots of love for her on finding how much she trusts him. But no, he cannot let her find out that he loves her. But Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat, you are forgetting that she is YOUR protge and YOUR cadet. Try to hide your feelings as much as you can, now watch what she will do.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update
Naina trusts rajveer so much
Hope everything will be fine soon
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Excellent FF.
Cont soon.
Yaha to story kuch different hai.
Kash aisa actual series me hua hota.

Waiting...
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Beautiful SS 👍🏼
Adorable couple 😳
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woahhh...naina trusts raj from the core...m imagining raj's condition...it was damn difficult for him to make her ignore him...but he had to...so wht next...??...update soon and thnks for pm...😊😊
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Update please it's been long
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Chapter 3

Pacing up and down in her room, Naina is extremely restless. She is unable to understand why Rajveer is lying to her and why is he ignoring her? His ignorance is like a punishment to her and she cannot bear this anymore. She needs to find out the truth behind his behaviour. But now the question is, what should she do? What should her next step be?

Just then, a thought crosses her mind. Right, after Rajveer, Alekh knows her the most in the academy and she is sure that he'll have answers to her questions. Everyone judged her at some point, but Alekh, he was always there for her like a true friend and like a brother. She decides to speak to Alekh.

Walking out of her room, she heads towards the boys hostel. Within few minutes, she reaches there and thankfully, there is no one in the room except for Alekh.

Without knocking, she pushes the door open with her full force and rushes inside.

"Alekh mujhe tujhse baat karni hai"

Says Naina

Alekh, who was busy drinking, he puts his drink on the side and gets up from his bed on seeing a worried Naina. Naina is like a sister to him and from the past few days, he is worried for her as he knows exactly what's happening with her and Rajveer.

Getting up, he walks towards her and now stands right in front of her, looking directly in her eyes and holding her by her shoulders.

"Kya baat hai Naina?"

questions Alekh

Naina's eyes starts tearing up as she tries to explain the current situation of her and Rajveer's.

"Alekh, Rajveer sir mere sath aisa kyun kar rahe hain?"

questions Naina

This sudden question from Naina surprises Alekh. He does not know that Rajveer's ignorance is affecting her to this extent. Alekh, somehow, figured out Rajveer's feelings towards Naina. Not just him, a lot of people in the academy figured this out, except for Naina. Alekh is shocked, how come Naina did not understand the reason behind Rajveer's behaviour?

He does not know if he should tell her that her Rajveer sir is in love with her and this is why he is ignoring her, for her sake. Pretending to be confused, Alekh lowers his eyes and leaves Naina's shoulders.

"Apun ko nahi pata ke tu kya bol rahi hai Naina"

replies Alekh

But before Alekh could lie further, Naina points her right hand's index finger towards him in frustration.

"Jhoot mut bol Alekh. Mein janti hoon ke tujhe sab pata hai"

yells Naina

Alekh knows how stubborn Naina is. If she has decided to find something out, she'll find it out somehow. Looking back up in her eyes, he looks at her, concerned.

"Tujhe sach mein nahi pata ke Rajveer sir aise kaiko kar rahe hain?"

Questions Alekh softly

Getting surprised, Naina moves her head from left to right; as a sign of telling him that she does not know.

"Nahi Alekh! Please mujhe bata"

Requests Naina.

With full confidence, Alekh holds her by her shoulders and looks at her softly. He knows that this is the right time, Naina should know the truth.

"Naina tune kuch nahi kiya. Captain Rajveer ko tujhse pyaar hogaya hai issi liye wo khudko tujhse door kar rahe hain"

Explains Alekh

Naina's eyes widens at Alekh's confession. What the hell is he talking about? Her Rajveer sir is in love with her? She looks towards Alekh with shocked expressions.

"Ye..ye..tu kya keh raha hai Alekh? Ye..ye sach nahi hai. Tujhe koi galat fehmi hui hai"

Stammers Naina

She is not able to understand anything. Where on one hand she is shocked, on the other hand, she feels happy somewhere deep down in her heart, but shockingness overpowers her happiness. Alekh knows what Naina is feeling.

"Apun sach bol raha hai Naina"

says Alekh calmly.

Closing her eyes tightly, she tries to calm down and tries to think through the situation. She is unable to believe that in order to hide his feelings, Rajveer is telling lies and behaving rudely towards her. At the moment, she understands that he is hurting himself more by pushing her away.

Unknowingly, a smile of satisfactions creeps on Naina's lips. This shocks Alekh. Why the hell is she smiling in such a condition? He looks at her shockingly and is sure that something is going on in her mind. He shakes her a bit, in order to get her back to reality.

"Tu theek toh haina? Kaiko itna muskura rahi hai?"

questions Alekh.

Naina's smile gets wider at this questions. Opening back her eyes, she looks softly at Alekh.

"Rajveer sir mujhse door rehna chahte haina? Toh yehi sahi. Mein bhi dekhti hoon ke kab tak wo apni feelings se bhaagh sakte hain"

says Naina, happily.

Alekh does not understand a single thing that Naina has said. He looks at her with shocked expressions.

"Tere dimagh mein kya chal raha hai? Tu karne kya wali hai Naina?"

questions Alekh

Naina's smile gets even wider at this.

"Here starts the jealousy game"

replies Naina

With that, she exits from Alekh's room, without waiting for his answer. Alekh just stands there dumbstruck, trying to understand Naina's words.

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Next Morning

Rajveer, in his room, sitting on his couch, is thinking deeply about the entire situation that took place with Naina yesterday. He has lied to Naina about Naveen's murder; not exactly lied, but he told her half of the truth. He knows that if he tells her the truth, she will never go away from him. In fact, she'll be sympathized towards him, and this is what he does not want.

His heart swells with so much love for her after seeing her trust on him. His eyes twinkles with hope. He thinks maybe she'll understand his feelings, but no! He cannot let this happen. There is no way he can confess his love for her. He needs to make sure that she does not find the truth about Naveen's murder, that he is hiding. He will help her find Naveen's murderers and the people who framed him, but not yet, this is not the right time. Right now, he needs to stick to his lies.

Wanting to have a cup of coffee, he gets up from his couch and makes his way towards the Mess. Locking his door, he gets out of the door and walks in the direction of Mess.

With in few minutes, he reaches there and walks straight towards the front counter. Smiling, he looks at Suriji.

"Suriji ek coffee please!"

requests Rajveer in a gentleman style

Smiling, Suriji gives him a warm and a big smile. Suriji loves Rajveer just like his son. Even though he is not married, so, he does not know what a son is, yet he considers Rajveer as his son.

"Abhi laya puttar!"

replies Suriji

Smiling, Rajveer makes his way towards one of the tables. As soon as he is about to sit down, his gaze falls on two people on a table right across from him. He is shocked to see whatever is happening in front of him.

There they are, his Cadet Naina ah Singh and Cadet Amardeep Huda, holding each other's hands tightly, smiling, looking intensely in each other's eyes.

Rajveer is not able to believe this. These two are so into each other that they do not even realise that he is standing here. Suddenly, jealousy and possessiveness takes place in Rajveer's eyes. His right hand turns into a fist and he looks towards both of them, angrily as he decides to make his way towards their table.

Isn't this what he wanted? Didn't he want Naina to stay away from him? This is exactly what's happening and he is not happy, in fact, he is angry. He cannot take this anymore. He needs to do something, before reaching their table, he clears his throat loudly in order to get their attention.

His eyes starts blazing with anger when none of them even move even an inch and stays in their position. He has had enough. Now, he cannot take this anymore. This is not done Cadet Naina Singh Ahluwalia. Yesterday, you were showing so much trust and today, you are busy with Cadet Amardeep Huda.

Rajveer's anger reaches to another level. Stomping his feet, he walks towards their table, angrily.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved it.😊Eager to see what jealous rajveer will do.😉plz Update the next part soon.

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