Arshi OS series sequel: Clipped wings #7 updated page 13, New - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv_panipuri

Hi Pooja! (I hope that's your name?) First, thank you so much for your detailed review and for expressing the confusion regarding the story. I will try to clear the confusion as well as I can. Arjun Singh Raizada is Arnav's grandpa, not his dad. Aidashisha, Arnav's mother, is Arjun and Iwbin's daughter. I hope the confusing family tree is not so confusing now. Arnav's father and Aidashisha's story will be revealed as the story progresses. And yes, Aidashisha is a pretty name. But it is entirely a Khasi name. And that is exactly why Aida's aunt wanted to change it to something north Indian. Aidashisha's family that is Manohar, her cousin and his wife have their own reasons for their inability to save Aida, which is very general in my opinion. And you will be able to hit the bull's eye easily in that matter much to the storyteller's displeasure. Haha!
I thank you again for being so patient and consistent when I myself am guilty of not being regular.

Thanks for the answer! That's what I wanted to know about the appearance of arnav's father. I have a feeling Aida married Arnav's father against the family's wishes. Maybe arnav's father belongs to the lower strata of the society or wasn't rich. But the reason for Aida's tragedy maybe totally different and a more vital one.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very intriguing story. Could not understand why khushi is feeling so guilty. Waiting for update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ninaatwal

Very intriguing story. Could not understand why khushi is feeling so guilty. Waiting for update.


Hi! thank you for your time and effort to convey a word to the author as well. I would like to know if you have read the first series and answer your question accordingly.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I'm loving this. something very intriguing about the storyline. Looking forward to reading more amazing chapters. Thanks for the Pm. 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good going
Khushi avoiding arnav and getting caught
And arnav also knows she was avoiding him
Good he didn't ask for any clarifications
But I want to know why arnav's mother was killed by khushi's father
Will be waiting for next parri
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26
One Step at a Time

Khushi doesn't want to go back home. It is 7 in the evening already and the library is about to close. She has no other choice but to return home. She contemplates going to the quiet cafe at the end of the street that runs down to her university. She is a regular at the cafe, mostly because she loved coffee and quietness. But then like every other quiet cafe in overcrowded Delhi, it is expensive and doesn't really offer a good view of anything from its air conditioned interiors. She always had a dream of discovering a cafe with the cosy atmosphere everyone is always talking about. But it is futile. She never felt at home, anywhere. Quiet cafes with overpriced menus looking down at overcrowded streets, street vendors selling street food and figures made of only skin and bones bagging for their sustenance, are all she got. She often observes the life below when she is at the cafe. It unsettled her at first when she really looked. She saw how the able, nicely clothed men and women pretended that the baggers, asking them for something to spare, didn't exist. They looked right past them and walked ahead. Only the slight increase in their pace would suggest their awareness of the other kind of human beings, (if one could put them in the status of being human) the kind that doesn't look like they have all the rights of being human. She is no stranger to the practicalities of the baggers being controlled by contractors and people giving alms to a beggar actually helping those who relegate the poor to the identities of bagger. What unsettles her is the invisibility of these people. As if they are ghosts, transparent and incapable of grasping anything tangible. It is as if, if you threw a stone at them it would fly right through them and land on the other side. Like the look in the eyes of those nicely clothed people they are begging from. She tries to stop her mind from wandering into things that are considered no body's business. The poor are poor because they are lazy, undeserving and most people believe that. And then they are happy to have nothing to do with people being poor or killed. But Marx has f**ked up her life and her mind, she concludes. She decides to skip the cafe plan for today. Home sweet home it is.

She has no idea how she ends up somewhere four miles off her home while walking on the pavements with a wandering mind. Shit!! She can't stop her brain from pointing out that she is alone, a good distance away from her home, at 8:10 in the night, in a street of Delhi. It would not be a big deal if she was a regular commuter of Delhi evenings. But she is not and that along with all the horrors she had heard and been warned about made her queasy. She tries to locate the nearest metro station on her and searches for her metro card. It's a good thing she keeps all her card in her purse!!

She jostles along the escalator in the metro station. Her timing couldn't have been worse. Delhi metro during going to work and coming from work hours' is something her vocabulary miserably falls short of describing. Overcrowded is a gross understatement. She curses her own absent mindedness for wandering off somewhere literally she didn't intend to. She squeezes her way inside the ladies coach and mentally pats her own back for making it inside without getting squashed. However once inside she can't say the same for her journey. People still making their way inside to a coach that is almost on the verge of having no breathing space, pushes her towards the end of women's coach. For a moment she contemplates walking over to the men's coach but decides against it remembering her past experiences. At least no one will seek opportunities to grope her in the women coach. Rather she stands at the end of her coach leaning her back against the metallic body of the metro.

Past one or two stations she finds herself facing Arnav. He had come over to tap her shoulder to the women's coach as it seemed. She crosses the protective barrier of women only coach that empowers women to escape groping and touching (even if for a short while in the men's space) and enters the other side where you expect the above mentioned behaviour because "why don't you go the women's coach then?'. They don't talk during the entire duration of their journey except when she smiles, amused at Arnav glaring at fellow passengers for gawking at her, his glare turns to her then.

"It's considered normal, you know." she tells him as soon as they get out of the metro station.

"By who? I am sure as hell not you." He knows she is talking about people of his gender staring at her in metros.

"Everyone who thinks it is their birthright to look wherever they pleased. Even if it makes someone uncomfortable. No one can put you in jail for that. And who cares about etiquette?"

"So you are okay with it? People making you squirm under their gaze?"

"Well, if I am not then I am difficult, a crazy feminazi'. I am a woman after all. I deserve to squirm under anyone's gaze. That's how I am to be put in my place."

"How are you extra sour today?"

"Nah! Actually today I am being easy going you see. You left early!"

"Had some work. I didn't imagine you would notice!" He says with a straight face, the smile in his eyes hidden by the darkness of the street.

"Who would have thought Arnav Singh Raizada knows how to flirt".

"Many in fact. Aradhana to start with, Pooja, Shraddha..."

"So I am the only one to whom you are a recluse."

Was that hurt in her voice?' Arnav looks directly at her, surprised.

"You can't blame me. You avoided me like I am a disease."

"Because you made it clear that you would like to avoid me as much. Never let go of a chance to..."

"Khushi, if we start with the past we might as well lay a stone on whatever it is that we are trying to" become. One step at a time. Please?"

"Okay. Coffee?"

"Are you asking me out on a date, Gupta? I believe you could have done better."

"Home it is then." She walks ahead in rapid steps with ice in her eyes. He chuckles to himself; he hadn't expected crimson painting her cheeks either at his blatant flirting.

"Seems like you need your coffee. I know a great place. Expensive and phony. Totally your type."

"Just like the games you play and call it love, friendship or whatever. Don't you ever get tired of weighing your moves and thinking of playing the dice right all the f**king time?" She hates the games people have relegated human relationships to. A carefully placed word here, another there and voila, you have won yourself a friend. Sometimes she wishes there was a manual for how to behave, act and talk around people. So much for blood and lives wasted on free will. That's another reason why she never can be sure of the relationships she has with people around her. She sucks at this game, she tells herself while justifying her distrust in relationships.

"Khushi relax. I am only trying to avoid awkwardness that is looming just right around the corner bidding its time. With us, do you think it is going to be easy? When so much of history suffocates even the thought of us being in talking terms. You are going to want to hide when choices become difficult, like you always do. And me, I don't even trust myself with anything or anyone."

"What are you saying Arnav? You, who is so sure of himself even when he is wrong can't trust himself?" She can't keep her disdain away from her voice.

"You know nothing about me Khushi. Don't assume."

"I don't Arnav. That is your job."

"Khushi, for once in your life, stop pushing people away just because you are not sure. No one is certain of everything Khushi. People learn to live with uncertainty. Your tendency be sure of victory even before the race has began can only bring misery. Nothing good comes out of trying to be ahead of time."

"I am not trying to measure our friendship."

"Aren't you? Aren't you already calling this a game in your head? Are you not trying to guess my moves and finding your own meaning to everything I do or say?"

"Who is assuming now?"

"I know you Khushi. I don't assume."

"How are you so sure that you know me? We haven't been around each other for..."

"Because I see myself when I look at you."

Edited by luv_panipuri - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks so much for the update! Brilliant string of arshi's conversation as always. No matter how toxic or bitter or misunderstanding their conversations become towards one another, they always are an interesting and witty read. Khushi I must say, should cut herself and arnav some slack because he's doing his best to bring some cordiality between them and trying to invite friendship in. Even though he's the one who has been most affected and left shattered by their interlinked past, still he's willing to bury the hatchet and extend the olive branch. I so want to know what really had happened in the past with their families.
The wandering of khushi's mind was well described. The state of the nation where the great divide between the rich and poor sees no end, and the nonchalant attitude of people in general towards those usual scenes on the streets is something very overwhelming in a disturbing way. Until 2 years back, I had only a vague idea of how foreigners may perceive this scenario of our country when they come to travel. But now, after learning from them first-hand how they really feel about all this, unsettles me all the more. They feel just how khushi here has felt - unsettling. On one hand is the grandeur and privileges which surrounds a section of the society, but on the other there is the other side, and it's this 'other' unfortunate side that shakes the foreign traveller's consciousness, making their experience a bittersweet and confounding one. No matter how much splendour you bring upon the eyes, you just can't avoid seeing the destitute section of society, the reality. Someday, I hope we can be able to move on from this problem, and that can only happen when that elusive better day comes.
Edited by poojasidd123 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb part.. ArShi never leave a chance and here Khushi is too much.. Last sentence by Arnav was killer.. he knows her so well as he sees himself in her.. well hope Khushi takes a note of it and stop being so hard on him and herself.. one step a time.. Arnav is trying hope Khushi take a step with him.. loved amazing update..


thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Update after such a long time
Arnav is feeling little possessive of khushi
At least they are talking and khushi is not avoiding him
The last line by arnav was superb
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: poojasidd123

Thanks so much for the update! Brilliant string of arshi's conversation as always. No matter how toxic or bitter or misunderstanding their conversations become towards one another, they always are an interesting and witty read. Khushi I must say, should cut herself and arnav some slack because he's doing his best to bring some cordiality between them and trying to invite friendship in. Even though he's the one who has been most affected and left shattered by their interlinked past, still he's willing to bury the hatchet and extend the olive branch. I so want to know what really had happened in the past with their families.
The wandering of khushi's mind was well described. The state of the nation where the great divide between the rich and poor sees no end, and the nonchalant attitude of people in general towards those usual scenes on the streets is something very overwhelming in a disturbing way. Until 2 years back, I had only a vague idea of how foreigners may perceive this scenario of our country when they come to travel. But now, after learning from them first-hand how they really feel about all this, unsettles me all the more. They feel just how khushi here has felt - unsettling. On one hand is the grandeur and privileges which surrounds a section of the society, but on the other there is the other side, and it's this 'other' unfortunate side that shakes the foreign traveller's consciousness, making their experience a bittersweet and confounding one. No matter how much splendour you bring upon the eyes, you just can't avoid seeing the destitute section of society, the reality. Someday, I hope we can be able to move on from this problem, and that can only happen when that elusive better day comes.

Thank YOU for inspiring me to write. I am glad you liked the update. I was sceptical whether it is any good or not because the break was too long. Khushi's thoughts mostly reflects the person she is, sensitive to things that others consider benign or get used to. Circumstances build people and Khushi's circumstances are surely major impacts on life, hers and the people around her.
Thanks a lot for reading and for such a detailed review.

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