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Posted: 8 years ago

Chapter 196- The Crack

" Uncle can we also come for Suman bua's shop opening or only chote Dadu and choti Dadi can come" asked Anwesha.

She was talking on Sreedhar during their scheduled weekly call. Much to the displeasure of Rajputs Sreedhar called the child regularly as promised and Anwesha was happy talking to him. The little girl asked many questions on the theory of female inferiority and Sreedhar answered them taking examples from mythology, literature and contemporary Indian history. Though Anwesha didn't question the any practice at her home directly the Rajputs knew that her thoughts were changing radically as they heard Anwesha asking her mother in private why only she and Bhavani dadi did most jobs at home.

So now this question of accompanying Suman's parents to Jaipur made them really uncomfortable as they were not sure what all Anwesha will see in Varma's household.

" Papa Sreedhar uncle wants to talk to you " told Anwesha now looking at her father Amrit.

" Amrit you are going to politely decline the invitation. It is his courtesy to extend the invitation and don't forget it is Suman's sasural. It is not good for many people to go there" told Vikram to his son.

Amrit looked at his daughter's eager face as he took the phone " hello Sreedhar" told Amrit.

" Bhaiyya Anwesha really wants to come for the shop inauguration next week. Why don't you and bhabi come along with her. Please consider this as my personal invitation" told Sreedhar.

" Sreedhar Anwesha.." started Amrit.

" Bhaiyya I know you want to decline. You might be thinking it is your sister's sasural, will it look good if you all come. Don't worry like that Bhaiyya, anyways your Devika didi is here. You can stay at her place. Bhabi and Anwesha both can see Jaipur. Please don't say no Bhaiyya. If you want I can ask Papa to speak to Virender uncle to bring you along with them"

" No Sreedhar. I will come with family" told Amrit and gave the phone back to Anwesha who looked very happy.

" Why didn't you say no" asked Vikram

" Bauji Sreedhar told he will make Rajasekharji speak to Virender Chachu. I thought that was not needed. Hence decided to go" told Amrit. Vikram tried to tell something but Viren indicated that let the call finish.

Once Anwesha finished the call Vikram looked at his son, " Amrit you are not going. Your daughter is learning lot of unwanted things now. I don't want her to go there, observe the so called modern things. Don't forget she has to go to another home tomorrow"

" Bauji I am going with Anwesha and Sayyali and it is not going to change." told Amrit and tried to walk away.

But Vikram blocked his way " Amrit I told you are not going and that is final. Virender knows what to tell to Suman's family on your absence "

Amrit looked at his father " Bauji I said I am going. If Virender Chachu does not want to take us, we will go separately. But don't ask me about family image then"

" Amrit you have already done one crime by lying about your second child. Sayaali has not had another child for past 5 years. Without giving you a son you are giving royal treatment to your wife by taking her to Jaipur " hissed Viren.

" Yes Tauji. I did a crime. Not one, couple of them. I didn't had the courage like Pritam to run away from this family and protect my daughter. I thought atleast when you all see my baby you wont hate her. No I was wrong. My mother itself killed her six month old grand daughter by putting her in a tub of water. Again I was a criminal because I couldn't protect my sister Suman who was pleading for mercy. I was forced to be silent as I didn't know what I will do if I go outside this family.

But Pritam has taught me Tauji if you want to stand by what is right you have to take first step. I am taking that first step now. I will make my daughter a Pilot. At eighteen I wont have mehendi in her hands instead she will go to Aviation Training Institute or some other reputed organization to be a commercial flight pilot. I want to be the proud father of Anwesha Rajput. Yes I have got an opportunity now to show my daughter a new place and I am going for it.

Coming to your question why Saayali didn't had another child. The day you killed Amita I decided I wont be a father again. Anwesha will be my only child. I went to the hospital and did that surgery which will ensure Saayali wont be pregnant again"

" You did what ... " told a stunned Vikram.

" Bauji I can never be a father again. Anwesha will be my only child. "

Virender looked at Bhavani " You are the root of all problems. You are supporting all these things here. You were the one who told right we killed Amita" he tried to slap Bhavani. But Amit held Virender. But Amrit held his hand.

" Enough Chachu. Chachi that day tried her best to save Amita. But she reached late. And from today if I see you raising hand at Bhavani Chachi believe me I will cross the boundary of being your nephew"

" Amrit you are crossing boundaries " shouted Virat

" You all have crossed boundaries long back Virat Chachu. I can always go out with my family. I will go to Jaipur. Stay with Devika didi and get some job. But you will have to answer why two months after Pritam went, Amrit also went " told Amrit sarcastically as he led Sayyali and Anwesha to their room.

Virender slammed his fist on the table. " Why Virender has the mirchi got too hot for you handle. One son is gone. Another son is as good as gone. Vikram Jethji you have only one son. Listen to him, else there will be no one to take care of you and bhabi in old age" mocked Bhavani walking towards her room. The Rajputs brothers looked at each other. They were not understanding what was happening. Most important they didn't know how to stop it.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh this is getting even more intensified.. Suman's going to get more help and support from her mayka.. her feeling of being unwanted by her mayka will reduce to a large extent..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing. Lovely nice to see the new revolution taking place in the rajput house. Bhavani has become so confident all of a sudden how come? May be there is nothing more to loose thus she has put everything so that there can be some improvement at least at their place. Who were those brothers of suman who were rude?
As both her tauji me bache are so good. Or have they changed post marriage? Good change. Waiting to see the drama when they come to jaipur
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Posted: 8 years ago
@Swati Bhavani knows Rajputs have a reputation to protect. The reputation of being progressive. She is playing with that. Second her daughter is pretty much taken care of. Power of what will happen with Suman rests with Suman's saasural and no longer with her family.
Then she hears the whispers of revolt in the family. She supports those whispers. Because she no longer has to care for Suman. Infact that is the one thing that gives her courage. Because when Suman was there Maa-Daughter duo was each other's weakness. To make Bhavani agree they will beat Suman and to make Suman agree they will beat and burn Bhavani.
To be frank all such houses will have repressed feelings and you only need a spark for fire to spread.
Sreedhar is the real spark, but what Rajputs see is Bhavani.

Also it is only 2 of Suman's brothers. There are some more Bhaiyya's dont worry who follow their father's rule. But with 2 men challenging the status quo equations will change.
Edited by shruthiravi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Cluny13

Sandhya Di thanks for pointing that centums were less in math 2 yrs back. I will work out that years math question paper.

Pretty good score di coz above 480 for 500 is what is expected in most good schools for admission.

thanks sanju... actually the question paper was not that much tough... only the compulsory sums were creative as far as I remember... i didnt know that in exam hall and only after coming outside, others told me that it was a creative question...anyways work out that question and I hope it will be easier for you... all the best
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update shruthi sis... change is happening in rajput's house... finally the five brothers will be left alone...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks sandhya Di for the info. Will check it out.

Revolt in the rajput family. Wow loving it.
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See Rajput family kept people in constant fear. Now couple of instances have shown them the need not fear this people. Actually that family has no mutual respect. So once fear goes it will start breaking. More to come. Dont worry.
It is not about 5 brothers. There are other sons in Rajput family who follow what the previous generation followed. So there will be a tiff between the brothers.
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Posted: 8 years ago
The so called brotherhood was based on fear, with that gone the dominoes will fall and pretty quickly at that. Despite being silent for so long at least now Amrit showed some courage to speak, though he had already shown the courage silently by having the operation done.

BTW did Bhavani lose the ability to conceive after the forced abortions? Looks like Virender is the only brother not having a son (considered important by the family), so when the break comes he is going to be at the mercy of the one person he has hated all his life : his daughter. Suman and Sreedhar seem to be forgiving types, but I don't want Bhavani to be forgiving. She may not openly be critical but I really hope she gives him a total silent treatment.

BTW how are your talks with the publishers? Is there any talk at all?
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Posted: 8 years ago
@Pirateking yes in one of the first chapters where Bhavani prays to the Krishna idol it is told Bhavani's uterus was damaged so much after the second forced abortion she couldnt conceive. Since the family loved pretense and Virender's other brother's had sons they asked him to keep her which he didnt wanted. So he goes and sleeps around with prostitutes abusing his wife and daughter day and night.
Exactly when one broke away, the other got voice. Now the pretense they used to silence people is used against them
Second you need to know is that all the fight in Rajput family happens in front of children. When Amrit speaks Anwesha was there, whereas in Varma family you can see that such sensitive matters kids are not allowed.
See problems cannot be pushed under the carpet for long. It will start coming out.

Coming to publishers yes I had a talk no couple of them. They have given a package. My hubby and myself looked through it. My hubby felt since we are new to it, we should visit Chennai go to their office, talk the contract in detail, meet the publishing agent etc.. before proceeding. So he has told me since the unedited version of Seven vows will finish sometime in April we will plan a trip. I spoke to the publishing agent, he told it is fine. I can give him tentative dates and he will give the meeting dates based on availability so that we can plan the travel. So it will be anyways post April the next step will happen.

My hubby, my cousin sister and my niece was completely supporting me to publish it. They feel I should not be apprehensive on how the content will be received. It is an interesting content and there is audience for it.

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