Seven Vows Part 3 -Part 259 Page 147 - Page 46

Created

Last reply

Replies

1.1k

Views

83.4k

Users

21

Likes

2.7k

Frequent Posters

shruthiravi thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago

Chapter 197- The Decorations

Suman, Sreedhar, Vindhya, Vaishnav and Poornima were at the shop decorating it for the next day's inauguration. Everyone was in a good mood. Vindhya and Poornima were tying flower garlands at the entrance and at the sides of shelves. Sreedhar and Vaishu checked on the lighting arrangement and were also arranging the furniture inside the shop.

Suman was dressing up the two display mannequins in sarees. She had chosen richly fabric painted silk saree for one mannequin and embroidered cotton saree for the other. She was working day and night to complete the fifty sarees. In between she had to finish orders, take training in the army camp and also teach dance. Now she had relegated her dance classes to week ends only as she knew it was not possible to run it on week days also. One good thing that happened with her six month training in army camp was that she had got two women to support her in the shop.

Sreedhar was feeling happy as he arranged the furniture along with Vaishnav. Suman's parents along with her brother's family had come. Suman's mother was dotting on him and he hoped when she knows the truth, she will love him the same way. She had bought a big dabba of gajjar ka halwa for him.

Soon most of the work was done. Now only the sarees had to be arranged in the shelf and some small decoration arrangement in the steps and front of the shop.

" Sreedhar, you and Suman sit inside the shop and spend some time. Let us do the remaining work" told Vindhya.

Suman tried to protest but Vindhya and Poorni pushed Sreedhar and Suman to the designing area to the extend they slipped and fell together.

" Poorni, Vaishu turn this side. Don't spoil the romance " teased Vindhya as she dragged the kids.

Suman tried to get up, but the way they fell it was impossible without holding him. She held his shoulders and he supported her as they got up. Suman very much wished she could keep her head on his chest. Sreedhar just wanted to wrap her in his arms. But then they left each other quickly.

" Sreedhar I forgot to tell you something. See this " Suman opened her handbag and took the Ganesha Key chain which now had the key of the shop

Sreedhar took it from her hands not able to believe his eyes. He took the key chain from her hands " How, how did you get it Sumi. I thought you might never get it back".

" Maa gave Sreedhar" told Suman.

" Bhavani Aunty. Does she know " asked Sreedhar.

" Take it as Maa's blessing for our union Sreedhar. She doesn't know who gave it. But the way she talked I understood she knows it is given to me by the man with whom I have been in love. By giving me this she has indicated she wished to see me united with the man I loved. I wanted to tell her who it is , but then Papa came " told Suman.

Sreedhar gave the key chain back to her. " Sumi do you know how happy I am. Bhavani Aunty has given her blessings. This symbol of our love has come back to you. Everything will be alright" told Sreedhar and Suman could see he was crying. She gently wiped his tears smiling at him.

Naina tied the decorations for her second sister in laws wedding. Her mother in law came out.

" How long will it take you to tie the decorations. Simply eating food and not doing any proper work. Is this the way flowers are tied. There are no servants here. Finish it fast. There is more work to do "

Naina nodded her head. Post Rawat's death things didn't go good for Naina and her mother. ED confiscated all the properties of Rawat, Bhaskar and Shyamlal. They took the haweli telling it was a benami property. Naina's mother in law made a big hue and cry of calling her a criminal's daughter and refused to have them at Rajat's house.

Since Rajat was a nice man, he spoke sternly to his mother that Naina was his wife and she will stay there. He made arrangements for her mother to be taken to a widow home with the help of a student who had worked for " Dignity for widow campaign". He spoke to some people, paid something called income tax on the deposit money and got the remaining money back.

But her mother law ensured the money they got was in Rajat's name and not in her name. Rajat tried to reason out, but her mother in law was impossible. Now Naina had nothing and was completely dependant on Rajat for her survival.

Before the fiasco his one sister's marriage was done. Now with the remaining deposit money the marriage of her second sister in law was happening. Naina knew by the time her third sister in law was married there will be nothing left and they will have to live on the income from Rajat's kirana shop.

That meant more abuses from her mother in law. Naina gently touched her belly. She had to tell Rajat. A new life was on its way and she hoped it to be a boy. If not she knew her mother in law will not spare her.

" Chudayil not yet finished tying a flower garland. Finish it fast. You need to make Churma ladoo. Guests will be coming any time for Haldi." hissed her mother in law.

Naina closed her eyes. All she could see was Suman's hurt face when she had called her Chudayil in the party. Tears started flowing from her eyes and she knew there was none to see it as she went about doing the work.

JRia thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
feel sorry for Naina.. now Rajat and Sudeepta union is kind of impossible..
happy to see Suman and Sree together.. yes they are a bit far off but way closer than they were..
Siya-Ram thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
The way of karma indeed...
Nainas world seems to have toppled.
shruthiravi thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
@Sanju, Ria yes Rawat destroyed many young girls lives in brothels. Today his own daughter's life is miserable in her marital home.
Sree and Suman their love is sublime, it is beyond the realm of physical attraction.
JRia thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Naina seems to understand her mistake yet she has a long way to go.. she still considers that having a son is the key.. Rajat seems to have kept his feelings for Sudeepta hidden from Naina.. which I feel was wrong but i guess he has moved on.. but will it not get complicated when Sudeepta comes?
shruthiravi thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
@Ria tell me what was Rajat supposed to do. Not love the woman he married. Naina is his present. What is Sudeepta's condition now. Will she harbor any hopes of marriage. Will she feel bad Rajat married. Definitely no. No woman expects a man to marry a prostitute in front of the society. She herself knows her life is done with. That girl lives for revenge and revenge alone. She doesnt even want to come in front of her brother as she feels that will be a stigma for her family.
It is better for them to know she is missing than the knowledge she has become a prostitute.

Naina has no value in that home. Rajat also cannot stop his mother beyond a point. She rules. If Naina has a girl her MIL will make her do more work or even pressurize her husband to have a second marriage. Rajat is unable to stop his mother's behaviour as many times such woman emotionally blackmail I am your mother and he will have to give in.

So her existence, security depends on getting a son as per the societal norms of those days. She is in a very vulnerable situation. On the verge of used and thrown away, just like what her father did to many girls. Only thing is that the one who is doing that to her is not a man, but a woman. All her money is used to marry off Rajat's sisters while no value is being given to the lady who bought the money.
JRia thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Hm.. though I wish Sudeepta atleast can live with her brother and lead a happy life with her head held high.. Naina is bearing the punishment for her father's deeds but one can't say it's not her fault.. had she not misbehaved then maybe things would have been better for her..
ThePirateKing thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Good to know that the talks with the publishers are progressing well. Hopefully you will find a good way to market it as well.

Contrasting feelings during the decoration, one of happiness and the other of apprehension, though both the events are happy events in themselves.
shruthiravi thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
Marketing at this point I am depending on my online readers the most though the publishers do have their strategy. Word of mouth of people who have read it online will help the book for sure.
See for one it's a new hope, from a room, to running a shop, acknowledged in a family. Suman didnt come with anything to MV's family. Infact even before she entered the house she became a widow, but MV nurtured the girl playing an important role in bringing her out. Her tears matters to everyone in the family.
Naina who was pampered on the other hand comes with money to Rajat's family. Her money is taken, she is not valued. From a girl whose whims and fancies supported she becomes someone whom no one cares. In fact a woman emotionally kills her irrespective of she being the one because of whom the marriage of her daugther's is happening.
JRia thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shruthiravi

Marketing at this point I am depending on my online readers the most though the publishers do have their strategy. Word of mouth of people who have read it online will help the book for sure.

See for one it's a new hope, from a room, to running a shop, acknowledged in a family. Suman didnt come with anything to MV's family. Infact even before she entered the house she became a widow, but MV nurtured the girl playing an important role in bringing her out. Her tears matters to everyone in the family.
Naina who was pampered on the other hand comes with money to Rajat's family. Her money is taken, she is not valued. From a girl whose whims and fancies supported she becomes someone whom no one cares. In fact a woman emotionally kills her irrespective of she being the one because of whom the marriage of her daugther's is happening.


yes the contrast so clear.. Suman from nothing she has gotten even more than she ever expected.. and Naina from everything to bare minimum. u cant say nothing as she has Rajat.. and now her child..

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington

1 years ago

⭐Back⭐ Arhi FF | Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon: Chapter 3 - Part 3/3

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050

9 months ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1013 page no 26 Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1013 page no 26

Welcome to the new thread of Ranveer's unsaid feelings. Keep enjoying the world of Ishveer. Their unconditional Love, their friendship, their...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050

3 years ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #13 updated episode 971 page 155

Welcome you all to the new thread of RANVEER'S UNSAID FEELINGS #13 Keep Travelling in the world of ISHVEER LOVE Warm Regards sakshi ❤️ Index...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

9 months ago

PreRish FF ~ Purity Of Souls (ch 6 - page 5)

[NOCOPY] P U R I T Y O F S O U L S T E A S E R "bungle ke piche teri beri ke niche aha re aha....kanta laga!!!" The song was too loud in the...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: goodkashish

6 years ago

Kassir ...Sujal&Kashish...Part 28 - Pg 33

Kassir Extremes Intro 9pm - London Airport - Christmas Day It was a cold chilly night in the beautiful city of London. We arrive at Heathrow...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".