~*If I Told You I Love You..*~Page 14! ❤️ - Page 7

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Heyyyyyy wen r u going to continue... i jus luv this ff, n cnt wait to read da nxt part 😭 Pls do cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was cool!!Man I want gagets now!!Anywayzz waiting for Angad to show up and flirt in his manner 😆 Continue soon as you have more than 7 comments so yippie 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great part continue soon 😳 😛 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg i missed this part! dude seriously cont soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Please continue soon! Where are you ❓ ❓ ❓ Please continue I dont want anyone else to continue! where are you 😭 I'm dieing to know what happens next! 😭 And what about angads entry!!!!!!!!!!!! 😭 😭 😡

Edited by savina_101 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i just read it and it's really gud! 👏
hope you continue soon!!!! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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well con asap its been ages ur fics awsome so mysterious and exciting
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Posted: 18 years ago
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If I Told You I love You,

I'd Have to Kill You.

"Crap!" Liz whispered. I shook my head, disappointed as well. I would never admit it, but I was looking forward to meeting new people- guys especially. My mother just continued; ignoring everyone's reactions.

"The last thing- those who will succeed in this mission will get an extra hour every week, to go out and have fun."

"Yay!" Liz silently cheered.

Mom continued, "And the pair that wins the mission, will get 5 personal hours, without any supervision."

A gasp spread across the room. This was a first in the academy. Liz and I looked at each other, smiling. When I looked up, Matt winked at me, and mouthed something. After taking numerous classes on lip reading, I could tell what he said- "I know you're gonna win!"

I laughed quietly, and mouthed back- "Aww! Thanks. I hope I do."

******

"Kripa! Ew. That's so drab! Wear something more……I don't know….sexy?" Liz said. I sat on my bed, and frowned.

"But I don't own anything sexy!"

Liz walked over to her closet. She turned around and I appraised her outfit. It was perfect for her body. She wore a denim skirt, that at the moment was just above her knees, but we all knew that the minute we were at the fair, it would be just below the top of her thighs. With the denim skirt, she wore a white cropped top, showing off her (fake) tan. Her platinum blonde hair was stick straight, as always, and showed off her layered hairstyle perfectly. She wore a lot of make-up, I had seen her do it myself, but if I was to look at her now, I wouldn't notice. Her face looked bright, and natural, with her pink glossed lips glimmering in the light.

I looked in the mirror, and gasped at the dissimilarity. I always knew that Liz was the sexy one, but I never really noticed the difference as I did now. I had on a pair of simple jeans, no flare, no style. With that I wore a baggy sweatshirt, hiding my body. My hair was pulled in a ponytail, like always, and I wore clear lip-gloss, and nothing else.

She noticed my frown and sat next to me.

"Krips, today is the day that I don't listen to you. You're gonna be wearing what I tell you to wear, and im so totally giving you a makeover!" Liz smiled. I was about to protest, like I always did, but then I stopped.

Why not? If I didn't like it, I could always just go back to the old me.

"Fine." I said. Liz bounced on the bed and squealed.

******

"Woahh…." I gasped, looking at the same mirror. Liz had outdone herself!

I had on a white top that did wonders for my complexion, and jeans- sexy jeans; they fit my slim legs perfectly, showing of my slender figure, and making me look like I actually had a butt. My hair was wavy, and looked like I had just brushed it- not fussed with it for hours. Liz had traded her earrings with me, because hers went better with my outfit. They were simple diamond studs, with the camera imbedded inside the diamond. I had on a heart necklace, also encrusted with diamonds. But what I loved the most was my face. I knew I was pretty, I had heard it a million times before; but I didn't think I could ever be beautiful. Liz had said my complexion and skin was perfect, and thus had only used cover-up under my eyes, to get rid of my dark circles. I had on eyeliner, and mascara, with a little bit of eye shadow- making my eyes looked HUGE. A little blush enhanced my razor sharp cheekbone (Liz's words), and my lips were glossed with a natural looking color, that I loved.

"Wow! Im sure the boys won't be able to keep their eyes off of you tonight." Liz smirked, teasing me.

I smirked back. I couldn't wait.

******

"Alright people. Off you go. Remember to check in with me by tapping your earrings twice, every two hours." Mr. Mackenzie warned.

20 of the top students from the academy nodded, me included. This field mission was extremely difficult, because we didn't know how we were going to be tested- it could be anything. The only directions we had received were to check in every two hours and the no flirting rule. For all we knew, we would have to stop a terrorist attack, or even diffuse a complex bomb!

Pair by pair, we climbed out of the limo (which was actually, a high-tech lab filled with monitors and computers). Liz and I were one of the first pairs to climb out, and as we stepped onto the pavement, I slipped. Ooh this would hurt, I knew it! I squeezed my eyes shut and braced myself for the cold, hard pavement. I waited…and waited. Confused, I slowly opened my eyes and found myself staring into a pair of gorgeous hazel eyes.

"You ok?" the person asked. I nodded, not able to look away from his eyes. Liz poked me from behind, and I regained my composure. I tore my eyes away from his, and quickly looked at his face. It was….breathtaking. His jaw was well-defined (something I absolutely loved in guys!), and his lips were full. Crap, now I knew I was staring at his lips. Could this be any more embarrassing?! I took a deep breath, and tore my eyes away.

"Um, ya. Thank you." I replied, out of breath. He smiled and ran his hand through his dark hair. I took this brief moment to look at his body.

Oh boyyy! It was sculpted, and perfect; not too muscular, and not too lean- a perfect combination.

"I haven't seen you around here before." he asked, "Where are you from?" I smiled at his look- it seemed like he was checking me out as well. Sweet.

"Im-" I started and then stopped. S***, s***, s***! I was right outside the van- and there was a camera aimed right at this face. I would get into soo much trouble! Not knowing what to do, I grabbed Liz's hand and made a run for it.

"Hey!" he called after me, with a confused (and adorable) look.

That's the part! Its pretty long. I haven't continued all my ff's for a while, but im thinking I'll start now. =P anyways, because of this reason, I don't know how many people are still interested in this ff. So please do comment and tell me if you are. Ill need 10 comments to continue.

Prakriti

Edited by prakriti - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Im soooooooooooooooooooooo happy u continued!!!! U dont know how long i have been waitin for u to cont this ff, I actually check it everyday in hope that uhave continued it!!!!!! FINALLY!!!!!!! It was an amazin aprt!!!! N im sure that guy was the one n only angad, i mean hu else can it be rite????? 😉 It was totally awesome pls do cont soon!!!! Seriousily cnt wait!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was great!! im soo happy u finally started updating again lol!! plz update thrill ride as well lol u left off on a really hilarious part when mishti came lol! continue soon!

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