~*If I Told You I Love You..*~Page 14! ❤️ - Page 9

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Posted: 18 years ago
#81

yay...first one😆

amazing part 👏 ...liz is such a gr8 frnd .... vry nyc fic

Edited by mitali_s - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#82
angad is here!! i am soooooo haapppyyyy!!!! now cant wait for the "date!!"

i so thought she'd say no to liz but then shes like K!!

lolz

continue sooooonn
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Posted: 18 years ago
#83
yes!!!!!!!! u continued loved it!! continue thrill ride soon too loL!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#84
Excellent part..... awwwwww kool!!!! Smart Liz seriousily... n lets see angad n kripa hang out together thatll be awesome!!!! PLs cont soon..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#85

awesome part Prakriti! i wonder what's going to happen now! can't wait! continue soon

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Posted: 18 years ago
#86
kripz gunna get busted 😉 😆

nice part 👏

kanwer 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#87
awsome magnificent just caught up kripas naughty 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#88
OMG! 2 hot..! jus 2 hot..! not only angad lol but the part aswel... i mena woz jus perfect! u gotta continu! wana know where they's gona go.. wot they mite do.. 😉
xx MWAH! xx
xx Saz xx
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Posted: 18 years ago
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"Even sweeter." He said. "So you're alone?"

Common sense told me to say no- he was, after all, a perfect stranger.

"Yes." Stupid me.

He smile broadened, showing off his perfect teeth.

"Me too. Im Angad by the way."

"Kripa."

We smiled at each other.

"Nice name. I haven't seen you around here before. Where are you from?"

I hesitated for a second, wondering if he would still be interested if he got to know that I went to that snobby private school.

"Im from AGG."

"Oh. But still, I've seen girls from that school before."

"You have?"

"Uhuh. They're in town a lot, walking around and doing whatever they do." He said.

"Oh. Well um I don't really come out that much."

He dropped the topic.

"Well, whatever the case- I think we should enter the fair. Have you been to this one before?"

"No" I replied. He smiled.

"Well then, since im such a gentleman," he winked, "I'll show you around." I smiled wide and nodded

We purchased the tickets, and walked in the fair gates. The place was bustling with townspeople, and different stalls were set up.

"So I was thinking we should grab something to eat first and then we'll go look around. What do you think?" he asked, looking sideways at me as we walked.

"Sure."

"Sweet. Waddya wanna eat?"

"Uh. Whatever. Im not picky." I replied.

"Awesome. I really don't like picky girls."

"What about you? Are you picky?" I asked.

"Nope!" he replied cheekily.

"Oh. Well I like picky guys." I teased.

"Sorry, but im not the type of guy who changes their personality for girls." He replied, looking serious.

"Awesome, cuz I don't like guys who do." I teased again. He smiled and winked at me. My heart started thudding.

What was wrong with me?!

We came to a picnic area, with wooden benches; which were all unfortunately, occupied.

"Crap." He muttered, then looked at me. "Do you mind sitting on the ground?"

I looked down at my legs. I was wearing dark jeans. "No problem."

"You're sure easy to get along with Kripa." He teased. I smiled.

"Ya, I've heard that before."

He laughed his wonderful laugh.

"So then, let's go get something to eat?"

"'Kay"

We walked together in a comfortable silence. A little shack came in view, and he ordered drinks and food. We both paid for our food.

"Follow me." He said. I nodded, and we walked for a bit until we reached a thick band of trees. We made our way slowly through the low branches, until we reached a small clearing. It was a totally parallel universe; away from all the noise and people. I couldn't help but think that it would make a totally awesome place to make out.

We sat by the trees, and just ate in silence.

"So…" he began.

Yes, I know im leaving off at a really bad point. Sorry. It wasn't intended. I have a huge SS test tomorrow, so I really should be studying. Erm….what else….? It's a short part, but if you read any of my other ffs you should be aware of the fact that im updating more often with shorter parts. I need more comments than last time! I only got one page. If only that many people are reading it, then I don't think I should continue. && especially the silent readers- I get a lot of views, and not that many comments. PLZ COMMENT! Grazie, Ciao.

x3 Prakriti

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Posted: 18 years ago
#90

If I Told You I Love You,

I'd Have to Kill You

"Even sweeter." He said. "So you're alone?"

Common sense told me to say no- he was, after all, a perfect stranger.

"Yes." Stupid me.

He smile broadened, showing off his perfect teeth.

"Me too. Im Angad by the way."

"Kripa."

We smiled at each other.

"Nice name. I haven't seen you around here before. Where are you from?"

I hesitated for a second, wondering if he would still be interested if he got to know that I went to that snobby private school.

"Im from AGG."

"Oh. But still, I've seen girls from that school before."

"You have?"

"Uhuh. They're in town a lot, walking around and doing whatever they do." He said.

"Oh. Well um I don't really come out that much."

He dropped the topic.

"Well, whatever the case- I think we should enter the fair. Have you been to this one before?"

"No" I replied. He smiled.

"Well then, since im such a gentleman," he winked, "I'll show you around." I smiled wide and nodded

We purchased the tickets, and walked in the fair gates. The place was bustling with townspeople, and different stalls were set up.

"So I was thinking we should grab something to eat first and then we'll go look around. What do you think?" he asked, looking sideways at me as we walked.

"Sure."

"Sweet. Waddya wanna eat?"

"Uh. Whatever. Im not picky." I replied.

"Awesome. I really don't like picky girls."

"What about you? Are you picky?" I asked.

"Nope!" he replied cheekily.

"Oh. Well I like picky guys." I teased.

"Sorry, but im not the type of guy who changes their personality for girls." He replied, looking serious.

"Awesome, cuz I don't like guys who do." I teased again. He smiled and winked at me. My heart started thudding.

What was wrong with me?!

We came to a picnic area, with wooden benches; which were all unfortunately, occupied.

"Crap." He muttered, then looked at me. "Do you mind sitting on the ground?"

I looked down at my legs. I was wearing dark jeans. "No problem."

"You're sure easy to get along with Kripa." He teased. I smiled.

"Ya, I've heard that before."

He laughed his wonderful laugh.

"So then, let's go get something to eat?"

"'Kay"

We walked together in a comfortable silence. A little shack came in view, and he ordered drinks and food. We both paid for our food.

"Follow me." He said. I nodded, and we walked for a bit until we reached a thick band of trees. We made our way slowly through the low branches, until we reached a small clearing. It was a totally parallel universe; away from all the noise and people. I couldn't help but think that it would make a totally awesome place to make out.

We sat by the trees, and just ate in silence.

"So…" he began.

Yes, I know im leaving off at a really bad point. Sorry. It wasn't intended. I have a huge SS test tomorrow, so I really should be studying. Erm….what else….? It's a short part, but if you read any of my other ffs you should be aware of the fact that im updating more often with shorter parts. I need more comments than last time! I only got one page. If only that many people are reading it, then I don't think I should continue. && especially the silent readers- I get a lot of views, and not that many comments. PLZ COMMENT! Grazie, Ciao


x3 Prakriti

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