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yaar plzzz continue jaldi se 😭
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Awesome parts continue soon 👏 😳
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Gr8 part Guriya 👏 luvd the scenes btwn shayan & manial 😊😳 ab ye darwaze per aaima to nahi aagayi?

have a safe journey 😊 will be w8ng 4 the next part😊

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I thank u all...who commented n liked it so far....n thnx 2 all 4 showing patience...here is da nxt part 4 u all...hop u will like it...n will show patience in future 2....😊
Part 25

Recap: shayan n manial once again were attracted a bit 2ward each other...manial's bro gt married...her mom seems nt 2 be happy and is missng manial...manial is alone at home...when door bell rings n she hesitant 2 open the door....
now story further.....
Manial was consfused n was thnking wht 2 do...as da perosn was nt in mood 2 leave...she wid lt of courage..looked from da hole...n whom she saw outside...made her more nervous...n she had no choice...so she opened da door wid a fake smile...n there on the other end of da door was none other than aaima...she was exhausted...ringing bell after bell..n when da door was open...she widout thnking wnet inside...this made..manial more puzzled...n when aaima..looked back...as she thought it was shayan...n she was waitng 4 him 2 say sumthng...she gt shocked 2...see manial there...
A:app yahan??i mean...yeh flat tu...
M:ji woh mein...actually...
A:agar mein ghalat nahee tu..we hav met befor right?
M:ji...woh us din parlour mein...mein sadaf k saath thi...
A:haan yaad aya...aur mein aur shayan bhi waheen the..par app yahan..kaisey..i mean..mein ghalat ghar pe tu nahee...waisey kal tak tu yeh flat shyan ka he tha..
M:ji yeh shayan ka he flat hai....
A:hmm..mein bhi kahoon h can i be wrong...par app yahan..m confused...
manial was frst confused wht 2 tell than she remembered her all time fav lie...frm last so many days...n said..
M:woh mein...shayan k cousin hoon..actually...i live in hostel...par...woh meri aunty aye hui hain ajkal..is liye mein...weekend pe yahen agaye..unse milney..woh shayan k pass he tehre hain..
A:oh ok...shayan k kabhi tumhara zikar nahee kiya..aur us din bhi tum log milay par like starngers...no one cld hav guess tht u 2 r related...
M:woh mujhe he pasand nahee hai..sab ko batana k..mein unhe janti hoon..is liye..bas..
A:koi baat nahee...mein aaima...naam tu yaad hoga..
M(thnkng..h cna i 4gt ur name):ji...mein manial..
A:very sweet name...manial...waisey..shayan kahan hai..dekh nahe raha..kahein bahir gaya hai...
M:ji..woh aunty ko leke bahir gaye hain..kal sham tak woh chale jayengi..na tu..is liye..thori shoppng karni thi...
A:oh acha..
M:plz app bethye...khare kyun hain..
n both gt seated infront of each other...
M:app kuch lenge..chai..juice..
A:no thanks..mein tu shayan se milney aye the..kal woh aisey he chala gaya..aur subah se..no contact..so meiney socha khud mil aoon...
Manail jus smiled...
n there was silence in room..as both didn't knew...wht 2 talk abt..then
A:ok mein phir chalte hoon...shayan ko bata dena..k i came...aur bolna..2 call me..soon..
M:ji..
n then she went him till da main door...n bid bye...n aaima left..she closed da door..n a sigh of relief came...as she gt seated again on da near by seat...
It was night time now...shayan came back...manial was confused 2 tell him or nt...n she was sittng in her room ..alone...n wasn't feelng gud 2...as after so many days...she was mising her mom like anything..she wante d2 talk 2 her...bt she had no idea how...shayan...who was outside...doing some work...felt hungry..n went 2ward kitchen..as it was dinner time...bt saw...manial..wasn't there...in so many days..it was da frst time..she hasn't prepared 4 dinner..on time...so he went 2ward her room..n saw her...standng by da window..deep in thought...he came close...n as she was nt in this world...n was thnkng of somethng else..she didn't notice him comng..n now standng near him...he was lookng v keenly 2ward her...no lights were on in da room..only moonlight whch was comng frm da window..was there...making her beautiful face more beautiful...bt da fact is dat it shld hav smile wid tht on it...as it always had...bt there was sadness visible...2 him...it felt strange..coz...frstly she used 2 hav..those expression wid fear ones 2.....bt frm da time...they became..gud frnds...he saw smile...happiness on her face..bt then...wht happened 2day tht she was lookng sad...n he out of worry...was abt 2 touch her...break her trance..n ask..when he saw..tears in her eyes 2...now smthng happened in his heart...n he was suddenly unable 2 see tears..in her eyes...n he came v close 2 her now...n touched her shoulders...she felt sumones hand on her shoulders..n when she saw him...she herself had no idea...wht she had done..bt she did...went ahead....n hugged him tightly...n was now crying bitterly...he gt so confused...bt he knew..he has 2 clam her..down..n he made the grip of arms..around her body...n patted on her back..as if tellng her 2 be quiet now...
they were in this position 4 like ages...n then..she moved back....when she realized wht she did...n was feelng embarassed 2...she faced da other side ...n said..
M:m sorry...woh pata nahee..kya hogaya tha mujhe...
S(4 a moment lst all his senses...n now..when came back..):its ok..par tum ro kyun rahe thein..kya hua..any problem manial...
M:nahe bas aisey he...(n she sat on da bed..nt facing him...he came n sat on da floor infront of her...n held her hands)
S:aisey tu koi nahee rota na...chalo..bato..gud grl..kya baat hai.haan..
M(lst her control over herself again..n strted crying again..n said in b/w her cries..):woh mujhe...majee k buhat yaad arahe hai..pata nahee kyun...mujhe buhat darr lag raha hai..kahein unhe kuch...(n she strted cryng again..he left her hands...n now seated beside her on bed...n gave her a side hug..)
S:rona band..chalo..anso saaf karo...aur agar yaad arahe hai.tu phone milao aur baat karlo..pagal hona tum..aisey roney k kya tuk hai...chalo...stop cryng now...mein abhi pani lata hun..tab tak...go nw ash ur face...phir phone mila lena..ok..
manial jus noded...n he went 2 take water..n she wnet 2 wash her face..he came back..she was still inside...he sat on da bed...n was waitng 4 her...she came back...n saw him sittng..he smiled...n she smiled back..
S:hmm..now thats like a gud grl..chalo ab..yeh pani peo...
n she sat next 2 him..n after drinking water...
M:woh baat..
S:hmm..sure..mein abhi mila deta hoon..n he dialed no..frm his mobile..n gav 2 her..n wnet out..so tht she ca hav privacy while talkng 2 her mom...
Someone picked on da other end..n she asked 4 her mom..as she doesn't want 2 talk 2 anyone else..4rm tht house...then a voice came..
Majee:kon bol raha hai??
M:Asalam u alikum majee..mein manial baat kar rahee hoon..
Majee(wid full emotions..tear rollng down..as even she was missng her daughter):Walikum salam..mainal..mere bachi...jeete reh..kaisey hai beta..merey tu kaan taras gaye the..teri awaz suney ko...kaisi hai meri chanda..
M(even she was cryng):mein achi hoon majee..app sunao..app kaisey ho..app k tabiyat tu theek hai na..??
Majee:mein changi ho bacha..meri fikar maat kara kar..bas apna khayal rakha kar...tu tu shadi k baad bas bhool he gaye hum sab ko..
M:aisa nahee hai..majee..app ko buhat yaad karte hoon mein...aur sab ko bhi..par jo kuch..howa..us ke..baad..mera ab kisi se bhi baat karney ka dil nahee manta..appko tu pata hai..
Majee:theek he kehte hai beta..yeh tu humari duwain rang laye..jo tujhe shayan jaise..shuhar mila warna..tu terey agha jee ney koi kasar na chori the...afshan k tarah tujhe bhi tabah karney k...
M:chorye yeh sab..majee..app bataye..afshan bajee..kaisey hain..hakeem ji k dawai deti hain app...unhe..kuch tabiyat achi hui unki..
Majee:bas beta kuch na hee puch te acha hai..
M:kyun kya hua unhe...sab theek tu hai na..
Majee:beta hakeem ke dawa ka asar tu bas waisa he hai..jaisa jab tu thi tu tha...kabhi chnagi bhali hojate hai..tu kabhi..par ab tu ik aur he wawela daal chora hai..terey agha jee ne...pata nahee unko..kya soojhte hai..khair is mein..unka bhi koi kasoor nahee..woh tu uske bhaley ko he sochein hain..magar..woh bhabhi hai na...pata nahee usko kya khar ayee hai meri thee(beti) se...
M:kyun mamji ne kya kiya...aur unki baat agha jee ne kyun mani..
Majee:woh tere ko tu maloom he nahe...tere veer da nikkah hoya se..raheela de naal...
M:kya rahim bhai..aur raheela baji..par woh tu unsey kafi bari hai na..phir..
Majee:tu janti tu hai..yahaan umrein kahan dekhi jate hain..bas..jaydad ka chakar tha..phir teri mami ke sar se tu bala tali na..par raheela khush nahee hai...aur yeh baat teri mami ko bardasht na hui..rahim ke tu wahe dhang hai jo phele the..na badla woh...meiney we bara smjhaya par..khair..ab woh teri mami...afshan k liye ik rishta layee hai..aur tere dono veeron ney aur agah je...n bhi bas samjho haan kar he de hai.
M(shocked):kya..par bajee ki..tabiyat kahan theek hai..aur shadi...kon hai...woh..jis se tai k hai..
Majee:teri mami ka bara phira hai na(big bro of ur mami)
M:kya...agha jee..ko kya howa hai...phele bhi unhoon ne..afshan bajee ke zindagi kahrab k...unki shadi..ik barey umar k..admai k saath kar de...aur ab jab woh...itna kuch sehney k baad...apney hosh mein he nahee hai..,..pagal hogaye hain...mano...a woh phir unhe..use agg mein jhonk rahe hain...nahee maje..app unhe..ik baar phir aisa gunha karney se rukye...
Majee:mein kya karoon putar..sab se baat ke...koi nahe manta...
M:nahee mein..aisa nahee honey doonge..meri baji mar jayeinge...agar aisa hogaya tu,,app fikar na karein..mein chacha ji se bhi baat karoon ge...woh zaroor..agha ji ko manaye gein..mein kuch karte hoon..app bas duwa karo aur hosla rakho...
Majee:bas beta ab tu usey rab ka asra hai...aur duwa he kar sakte hai...tu koshih karna bache..mein bare fikar mand hoon..afshan ko leke...acha chal..apna khayal rakhein..aur shayan ka bhi...
M:ji majee..app bhi fikar na karein..sab theek kareinge ...Allah je...ab chalti hoon..Allah Hafiz..
Majee:Allah Hafiz bacha...rab tujhe..dhair khushiyan dein...
n she disconnected da call...n was in tht position 4 so lng....when shayan entered da room again..n sat near her..waved hand infront of her...
S:kya howa??baat hogaye..
M:haan..kuch nahee..ji hogaye..(n gave da mob back..)
S:sab theek hai na wahan par..
M:theek he tu nahe hota wahan kuch bhi...
S:matlab kya howa..??
n she tld him evrythng frm A-Z wht her mom tld..
S:hmm..tu aise baat hai..par woh tu zulm hoga....tumhare behna par...as u said shez nt in a gud state 2...par karein tu kya...
M:plz shayan..app meri help kijye...mein apni bajee k zindagi phir..nahe kharab karna chahte...(n she cried)
S:relax...i promise...i will help...kuch sochte hain..acha ab stop cryng..yaar..kab se ro rahe ho..kya ajj tumhare ansoon se...pait bharoon ga..m hungry...
M:oops..sorry..mein bhool he gaye...mein abhi garm karte hoon khana...app bhi ajayae...
n she left.n he stayed there..thnkng wht 2 do...n then she called n he came..n both ate quietly...after dinner was ova..n he was helpng her..pickng dishes...she remembered aaima came..n thought 2 tell him..
M:woh main ab ko batana he bhool gaye...aaima aye thein ajj app se milney..
S(shocked):kya kaha kon ayee the..yahan??
M:aaima..
S:oh no...aur tum ghar par he thein..manial.tumhein kis ne kaha tha..k use darwaza kholo..chali jate woh.bell de kar jab response nahe milta tu..tum na..
M:relax...woh kabse bajaye chale jarahein thein..ajney ko tayaar he nahee thi mano..so..mainaey khol diya..par don worry...unhe kuch pata nahee laga..meiney bol diya..mein apki cousin hoon..aur hostel mein hoti hoon..yahan sirf holiday par...apni aunty se milney aye hoon..aur app unke saath bhair gayen hain..
S:wow gud...waisey ik baat hai..merey saath reh ke yeh ik kaam tum acha sekh gaye ho..
M:ji maloom hai..jhoot bolna..mujhe itna bura laga..par..kya karti...
S:come on..koi itna bara jhoot bhi nahe..hai chota mota...2 be on safe side is ok...anyways..thnx yaar..warna ab jab milege tu mera sar khaye ge woh madam...u don knw her...
Manial jus smiled...
S:sachi mein...us ko na..mere pal pla k khabar rakhney k adat hai..zara jo baat na hui.madam warid...jaise ajj hui..kahiar i will tackle..balke phone kar he leta hoon...m sure..usne yeh msg tu diya he hoga..k call asap..
M:ji...
S:mein aya...ballke..ab tu subah mulaqat hogi..call will be lng..so gud night...n haan don take tension...kuch na kuch sochnge..4 ur sis..ok...n no more tears..theek hai...(n he himslef didn't noticed wht he did...he kissed her on forehead n left..leaving behind a shock...manial...)
M(herself):aisey kitney he lamhe hai..jo app ne mujhe diye hain..jinhe shayad mein yaad bana kar ta umar apne sang rakhoon ge...kuch pal...jis mein..apne mujhe...woh sab diya...jo kabhi mera haq he nahe tha...sach mein..aaima ji kafi lucky hain..jo app unse pyar karte hai..app ne dosti mein mujhe..itna kuch diya hai..agar app mujh se pyar karte..humara rishta bhi har normal miya biwi jaisa hota...tu kya hota....
n she blushed on this thought..n then strted cleang dishes..thnkng of all sweet moment he gave her....n she wa cherishng them...lik a treasure is cherished by a hunter...
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ok guyz this is it 4 now....i hope this is as lng as promised....n now i won't be continuing this ff till 7th sep...as i will nt be here...so do comments all...n tell me h da part was...i will be waitng eagerly 4 all ur comments...
nxt part: Shayan n Manial Visit manial's house...a hell lt of arguments take place there...n 2 knw da result...of wht happen 2 afshan...she gt married or she wa rescued by both are hero n herione...keep readng....
till next time...tc u all..
wid luv...
guriya....😊
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amazing parts guriya 👏 so it was aaima 😡 😕 thank god usse koi shaq nahi hua 😊 😕 😕 the shayan-manial hugging scene 😳 it was soo cute 😳 😳 😳 poor afshan 😭 😭 😭 can't even raise her voice abt the biggest decision in her life 😭 that's so unfortunate 😭 i'm sure shayan'll do something abt it 😛 can't wait any longer cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh my god........u wont continue till 7th sept 😭

im gonna miss your ff sooooooooooo much 😭 😭 😭

nice part!!!!!!!!!

luv,
vandu 😉
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nice update 👏
so now shayan n manial are more than frnds...well shayan cant see tears in manial's eyes....he wants to see a smiling face all the day 😳 😳 ..so thats begining of love....i hope aaima understands 😉 😉 that shayan is not made fr her... 😉 😉 !!

7 sept thats tooooo looong!!
bt give a loooong update then also 😊
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Originally posted by: Paru_M

amazing parts guriya 👏 so it was aaima 😡 😕 thank god usse koi shaq nahi hua 😊 😕 😕

thnx 4 likng it dear....hmmm..so true...ho jata tu kya scence hota na...😆

the shayan-manial hugging scene 😳 it was soo cute 😳 😳 😳

i m glad u liked tht....even i luved tht one...2...😳

poor afshan 😭 😭 😭 can't even raise her voice abt the biggest decision in her life 😭 that's so unfortunate 😭 i'm sure shayan'll do something abt it 😛

even i hope so...he does sumthng now...

can't wait any longer cont soon

sorry dear bt u hav 2 wait this time a bit longer....bt promise 2 gave u a compensation of tht wait soon...😊

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Originally posted by: togepe30

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oh my god........u wont continue till 7th sept 😭

im gonna miss your ff sooooooooooo much 😭 😭 😭

nice part!!!!!!!!!

luv,
vandu 😉

thnx a lt dear 4 likng da part n my ff so much...m so glad...its gives me more strength 2 write n perform better....will cont soon...😊

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Originally posted by: liquidfantasy

nice update 👏
so now shayan n manial are more than frnds...well shayan cant see tears in manial's eyes....he wants to see a smiling face all the day 😳 😳 ..so thats begining of love....

yah u can say...begining of luv...bt hop all thngs reamin as we want them 2...

i hope aaima understands 😉 😉 that shayan is not made fr her... 😉 😉 !!

u thnk she will....as u all knw...shez 2 possesive abt him....ab tu manial k khair nahee..agar she gt 2 knw..wht say...😉

7 sept thats tooooo looong!!
bt give a loooong update then also 😊

will surely give a gud treat 2 all my readers when i will come back...😃

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