Hogaye Hai Mohabbat..RA Last Part (Pg:43)

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Imaan-Ki-Duaa

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Posted: 17 years ago

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hi evryone...sorry 4 updatng late....i knw..u all were eager 2 read it...herez part 4 u all..

Part - 26

Recap: aaima visits shayan's house...there manial n she met n she gts curious n ask lt frm manial n manial tries 2 giv reason 4 her being there n satisfies aaima...after she left shayan came...saw manial looking sad...she tld shez missng her mom...she talks 2 her on phone n gts 2 knw abt her sis...n then she ask shayan 4 help...n shayan says he will try his best...

now story further....

shayan calls his dad n tells her abt da prb manial tld..n his dad agrees 2 go wid them 2...as he wants 2 save tht poor grl...both shayan n manial head 4 shayan's home n frm there wid his father they head straight 2 manial's village. It was late evening when they reached there..when beamma saw his son she became v happy ...all were happy 2 see shayan n manial comng after lng time...even manial dad was happy 2 see her daughter...bt she wasn't n when shayan's dad tld them 4 da reason they came n tld manial's dad tht they r doing wrong wid da poor grl..tht they hav no right of treatng her again so badly..after all shez a human being n we all know in wht state shez...after hearng this manial's dad also became furious n he said u hav no right 2 speak in b/w this as shez my daughter i can do anythng wid her i want 2...then manial speaks up wid lt courage n tells that shez my sis 2...n i can speak 4 her...bt hers bro shut her up...n shayan cld nt see tht..he neva liked these ppl n there ways...n now h they treated there own sis made him more angry..he was jus quiet coz he did not wanted 2 make any scence infront of anyone...bt..now he can't tolerate more..n when he spoke..all became quiet n at last when manail's dad was nt agreing wid wht shayan was talkng..as he was nt interested in there talks n all he was thnkng abt da money he will gt my marrying her daughter there..yes the person 2 whom he was lettng her daughter gt married was paying him large sum...naming lts of land 2 his name...n giving him top position in village jurga n all crap..whch he wanted 4 so lng..was now being fulfilled...so why he wld be agreeing wid them...when shayan gt d aidea..tht this man would nt listen anymore...he jus gav him a threat tht..he will see..h he does wht he wants..coz now as shayan was here..he won't let him do anythng wrong..n he left da room..leaving behind furious agha jee...who later took all there anger on shayan's dad...he didn't said a word..bt jus b4 leaving he said..one day u will pay 4 wht bad u did or even thought of doing wid ur daughters..be proud of da sons u hav...bt one day..u will be ashamed of them..coz there iz no reason of u being proud of them...

later tht night...three sat together 2 decide wht 2 do...bt knew there was no way..they can convince agha jee..shayan came wid an idea..whch his dad didn't lik bt manial accepted as there was no other way 2 it...n then his dad had 2 agree..they called up...manial's mom..n manial tld her abt wht she want 2 do..her mom was hesitant bt she saw how gud now her duaghter was lookng she knew she was fine wid these ppl..so wht they decide 4 there other daughter will be gud 2...n she agreed...n they decided 2 work on there plan in late night...when they were sure all were asleep...

Later tht night they implemented there plan n were abt 2 enter afshan's room...when some one came infront of them..n both shayan n manial...gt shocked 2 see da person...

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ok guyz i knw its short....bt..m out of ideas 4 it...hav 2 finish it off....bt dono..whts happening...i will cont now this one regularly...bt wid small updates like this...so..bear me...n till nxt time..reply n tell me...h was this part....will be waitng 4 u replies...n if it was bad also..do tell me..i will improve..

nxt part...who was tht perosn...now wht will happen 2 there plan...??

tc...njoy u all..

wid luv...

guriya...😊

Edited by **-**Guriya**-* - 17 years ago

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zaira

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Posted: 17 years ago

#272

hey guriya!!!!.....welcome back!!!....so sayan n manial also asked sayan's dad to join in the plan 😉...sayan got angry when manial dad n brother talk rudely to her 😉 😭 😉 ......he loves her but he hasn't realise that till now 😭 😉 😭....hope he does realize his love before is too late!!!!!........now what's the plan?...whom did shayan n manial saw n are so shocked 😲?????.......continue soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzz.........can't wait 😭 😭 😭!!!!!!!

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Daebak

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Posted: 17 years ago

#273

hailaaaaaaaaaaa............u cant do this to me sweetz,itna chota sa part😭😭..........i waited soooooooo long..........And i want to see shayan-manial's love story.............not her behen ki kahaani........ 😆 ..........so now u have said u will continue this regularly.............toh next part jaldiiiiiiiiiiiiiii post karooo 😳

Edited by togepe30 - 17 years ago

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Imaan-Ki-Duaa

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Posted: 17 years ago

#274

Originally posted by: le_me_star
hey guriya!!!!.....welcome back!!!....so sayan n manial also asked sayan's dad to join in the plan 😉...sayan got angry when manial dad n brother talk rudely to her 😉 😭 😉 ......he loves her but he hasn't realise that till now 😭 😉 😭....hope he does realize his love before is too late!!!!!....even i hop da same dear....now what's the plan?..u will knw soon...whom did shayan n manial saw n are so shocked 😲?????....u will gt 2 knw in a while...continue soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzz.........can't wait 😭 😭 😭!!!!!!!i m ...in a while...don worry..

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Imaan-Ki-Duaa

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Posted: 17 years ago

#275

Originally posted by: togepe30
hailaaaaaaaaaaa............u cant do this to me sweetz,itna chota sa part😭😭.....sorry dear...i had no idea...wht 2 write.at tht moment..bt knew..u all will kill me if id din't post...so..i will compensate 4 it soon........i waited soooooooo long..........And i want to see shayan-manial's love story.............not her behen ki kahaani........ 😆 .....i gt da point dear...bt...this track has an imp impact on stry..n on both shayan n amnial's luv stry 2..so...u ahv 2 bear a lil bit....so now u have said u will continue this regularly.............toh next part jaldiiiiiiiiiiiiiii post karooo 😳 am postng in a while..

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Imaan-Ki-Duaa

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Posted: 17 years ago

#276

Part - 27

Shayan and manial headed toward afshan's room and when they were near to the door they saw someone standing there and got shock......

The person was none other than raheela..(sangeeta ghosh)..manial's bro..rahim's wife...both manial n shayan were speachless n thought now therez no way...they will take afshan out of this hell...bt fate has some otehr thngs in store..

R:app log ghabraye nahee...mein jante hoon app afshan ki madad karna chahte hain..usey yahan se le jana chahte hain...aur mein app ke saath hoon..

S:hum kaisey maan le k app humara saath denge..yeh nah ho k app sab ko bata dein..akhair app is ghar k betey k biwi hain..app kyun humari help karein ge..is ghar mein tu waisey bhi betyion k koi kadar nahee karta..

R:app yakeen karein mein app ki madad he karoon ge..agar app ko koi yahan dekh le ga tu app phans sakte hain..phir mein bhi ap ko bacha nahee paon ge..mein afshan k room mein atey jatey rehte hoon..mujh par koi shak nahee kare ga...aur app mera bahir intezar kijye mein khud in ko app tak le aoonge..waisey bhi..app se tu sab naraz he hain..app ke janey ka koi notice nahee le ga...

S:par afshan ji ke ghayab honey ka pata tu lagey ga na...

R:woh tab k tab dekhe jayegi..abhi app jaldi karien aur yahan se jayein..yahan k dewaroon k bhi kaan hotey hain...

S:waisey ik sawal ka app ne ab tak jawab nahee diya..app humari madad kyun karna chahte hain..??

R:mein thori matlabi hoon...ik naiki karna chahte hoon..meri zindagi mein koi khushi nahee hai..aur shayad he kabhi aye...kisi k zindagi mein khushi lakey..yah kisi k madad kar k...shayad us khuda ko mujh par bhi reham ajaye..

M(comes close 2 her n hug her):app fikar na kijye bhabhi...khuda ko ik din app par bhi reham ayega...app ki zindagi mein bhi zaroor khushi ayegi...aur shukriya humari madad k liye..chalein shayan..

n then both shayan n manial go 2..inform shayan's dad...n then after biding bye 2 manial's mom...they leave..n were now standng out beside there car..waitng 4 raheela 2 come wid afshan...after some while she came n they drove away wid her...

~~~~~~~ After Two Weeks ~~~~~~~

shayan was sitting wid mahad...on a bench in da backdrop was a beautiful house...

S:thnx mahad agar tu na hota tu..pata nahee kya hota..

M:come on yaar what are frnds for..par tuney abhi tak mujhe bataya nahee who this grl actually is..n wht happen wid her(he was actually askng abt afshan...as shayan n manial after comng back 2 city ..knew manial's dad would surely search 4 there place..n if hey found afshan wid them...they won't leave them...so shayan asked mahad 2 help...n mahad helped them...)

S:actually yaar..shez my cousin n shez in deep trouble..u saw her state...shez nt well..shz in this state 4 past 2 yrs...she has been in shock...n she gt panic attacks at times...bt therez no one 2 take care of her..n no medical facility could be provided...

n then shayan tld mahad all da stry abt wht happened wid afshan..n wht was gng 2 happen...

M:hmmm...thts bad..duniya mein aisey bhi log hotey hain..i can neva thnk lik tht...apni behan beti ke saath..gosh...bt anways...don worry..humarey yahan usey koi khatra nahee hai....so relax...

S:yaar thts why tu i came 2 u...k i knew..only u cld help me in this prb..

M:aray no thankng ...aur waisey bhi ik baristar ka beta honey ka kya fayda..apney dad k so called political relation kisi din tu kaam aney chahye na...u don worry...ab tu dad ko pata laga k this they were bat 2 do wid grl..he will be so against...n then no one wld dare touch her....(mahad's dad was a baristar..n he had v high connections wid...big shots...so no one cld knew..where da grl was...even manial's dad who had...v high links...cld nt find...when someone was in mahad's dad protection)

S:ahan yeh tu hai...chal mein ab ghar chalta hoon...terey se baad mein miloon ga..

M:haan..ok..waisey ik baat aur the..jo mein poochna chahta tha...can i??

S:aray ask na..y u need permission...

M:woh jo dosri larki thi..wid u...i mean...woh kaun hai..??

S:oh manial...shez afshan's sister...my cousin 2...yahen humarey college mein he parhte hai...teri mulakat nahee hui na..so u dono..umair mila huwa hai us se..

M:shez really ur cousin yah phir..??

S:haan na...cousin he hai..aur kya hogi..tera matlab kya hai..(was scared..wht he meant...)

M:woh actually..sorry...its wrong 2 hear..some one's perosna talk..bt u knw...mujhey kafi tajasoos ho raha tha na..so...when u were talkng inside..i heard sumthng n gt more curious n stayed back..n wht i heard...was nt wht ur sayng..shayan...

S:(worried)kya suna aisa tuney??

M:woh manial..woh tu apne sis se tera introductio kuch aur he karwa rahee the..

S:matlab??(pasiney choot rahee they shayan k now...halanke it was v cold sesson)

M:woh bol rahee the k...tum uske shuhar...i mean ur his husband...kya yeh sach hai..

Shayan remain quite ..so mahad spoke again...

M:shayan..tuney itni bari baat..chupai..hum mein se..kisi ko bhi..aur tu tu aaima ko pasand karta tha..phir yeh sab kya..

S:buhat lambi kahani hai merey dost..khair sun...

n then he tld..h he gt married 2 manial..n under what circumstances..n he neva wanted 2..bt had 2..under pressure..

S:par mein...ne humesha aaima ko he chaha hai..aur mein kisi aur k saath..n i hav tld her d afact..n we r jus livng till she completes her studies..n can hav a degree in hand..so shez nt dependednt on anyone in future...then i will leave her n move on wid aaima..coz..no one can take aaima's place in my life...

M:par yeh tu zyadti na hui us larki k saath..aur woh kahan jayegi is ke baad tuney socha...akele aurat kab tak is samaj mein reh sakte hai bol...

S:come on..she can strt a new life wid someone who will love her..if i can't giv her life...why shld i keep her..

M:yeh achi hai...come on yaar...aisa thori hai...itna asan hai..na kisi se bhi shadi kar lena..aur jab ik admi..kisi aurat ko talak deta hai..tu..koi aur usey apnata nahe hai...koi bhi aj kal mahan nahee bana chahta...u see...even u will nt marry a woman ...who was already married 2 some one b4..will u...bol..

S:pata nahee yaar..par..mein aaima ko bhi nahee chor sakta...aur manial ne khud kaha hai k..bas usey ...parhai..khatam kar leney doon...phir woh khud hat jayegi merey rastey se..

M:yeh tu uskey barai hai yaar...tuney uskey liye itna kiya is liye woh teri ehsan mand ahi..aur terey liye haan kehdi..warna..woh khud nahee janti..k agay kya karei..mein sach keh raha hoon..kabhi poochna us ney soch hai..agay k barey mein..

S:i dono..

M:aur kya pata tu suey chor de...phir uske baap ko pata laey..woh phir ajaye...usko..saath le jana..aur uske saath phir wohi hua..jo ajj afshan k saath hotey hotey reh gaya...aur abb tu..us k par apni behan k bhi responsibility hai..kyun laya usey bhi yahan..dono ko is duniya k reham pe chorney..itna khudgarz tu shayan tu kabhi nahee tha..

S:mein abhi bhi khudgharz nahee hoon..yaar..par...kya karoon..mein nahee..uske baap ko kabhi nahe...itni mushkils e tu..uska un se peecha choota...nahee..kya karoon yaar...i won't be able 2 see her tehre again...shez v dear 2 me..a v gud frnd of mine...kafi kuch kiya us ney merey liye...par mein nahee kar sakta kuch us ke liye aur...i can't..

M:acha yeh chor..kya aaima ko yeh sab maloom hai..k woh teri..??

S:nahee yaar...mainey tum sab ko nahee bataya..aur u knw..aaima woh kitni possesive hai abt me..usey kaisey bolon..meri himmat nahee parti..i knw..i lied 2 her..tht shez my only cousin bt...kya karoon..

M:meri maan...bata de usko..tu kehta hai na..k she loves u lt..le le test phir...ab hojaye..us ka bhi imtihaan..agar woh waqai he tujhe chahte hai..tu tujhe maaf kardegi...warna she neva loved u...

S:yeh asaan nahee hoga merey liye..

M:duniya mein kuch bhi asaan nahee hota merey dost..bt u hav 2 face reality..u have 2...

S:will try..thnx yaar...main kabhi nahe soch sakta tha k tu...kabhi aisey bhashan de ga mujhe..lekin..kya baat hai...ajj pata laga..tujh mein bhi akal hai..mere yaar...(laughng..teasing tone..)

M:awain matlab kya hai tera...aur mein..sirf sab ko grp mein..hasaney k liye ulti sedhe hankta hoon...bt truly...kuch kar merey dost...apni life ko suljha..aur mess mein maat phans..

S:hmm..chal mein chalta hoon...manial andar he hai...raat ko aoonga...she might go then...u take care...bye buddy..n thnx..

M:bye..n no thnx in frndship dude...

n shayan left....n all while driving he was thnkng wht 2 do...n when he reached his home...he had decided..wht he has 2 do next...

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ok guyz this was da nxt part..hop u lik it...do comments n tell me h it was...i will be waitng 4 ur coments...n sugestions..if there was somethng missing...plz comments guys..if u wana say..part was bad..say it out...i won't mind..4 sure...bt tell me...will be waitng 4 ur feed back...

till nxt time..tc all..

wid luv..

guriya...😊

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zaira

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Posted: 17 years ago

#277

hey awesome part yaar!!!!....so their plan worked 👏 👏 👏...with so help of raheela!....n also mahad is helping shayan 😊....the good things is that mahad got to know about shayan and manial rishta 😉 👏 😊....n is making him understand things/......good job mahad 👍🏼!!!....s leaves 4 his house thinking wht 2 do?..n he finally decide about it!....lets see what will he do?..will he tell aaima the truth?..wht will happen 2 manial?...continue soon plzzzzzzz........can't wait!!!...u r creating suspense!!😉

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Hana

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Posted: 17 years ago

#278

wow di awesome parts tooo tooo goood loved them yaaar i think whn shayan will tell aima the truth she won't agreee n maybe leave him.... heheheh i hope something like this happends continue soooon 👏

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saba

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Posted: 17 years ago

#279

hey great part 👏 👏 Mahad is so nice 😊 😊 wish Manial and Shayan come close 😳 and Aima gets out of the picture 😉 😉 continue soon pleeeeeeeeeeease 😊 😊

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Imaan-Ki-Duaa

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Posted: 17 years ago

#280

Originally posted by: le_me_star

hey awesome part yaar!!!!....so their plan worked 👏 👏 👏...with so help of raheela!....n also mahad is helping shayan 😊....the good things is that mahad got to know about shayan and manial rishta 😉 👏 😊....n is making him understand things/......good job mahad 👍🏼!!!....s leaves 4 his house thinking wht 2 do?..n he finally decide about it!....lets see what will he do?..will he tell aaima the truth?..wht will happen 2 manial?...continue soon plzzzzzzz........can't wait!!!...u r creating suspense!!😉

will cont shortly dear...thnx 4 likng da part...😊

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