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Posted: 18 years ago

thnx dear....n keep comentng...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Paru_M

Gr8 part guriya 👏 awwww shayan cares abt her 😛 well that's good 4 a start 😳 hope he doesn't yell at her 4 not waiting 4 him 👏 👏 👏 good 👏 cont soon guriya nd sry 4 commenting so late 😛

thnx paru 4 likng da part..n yah...shayan bhi itna bura nahee hai..yaar..u guys were so much after him...n no need of sorry dear...keep readng...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
Part - 21
Its night time now,after that both did not had any contact,manial was aas usual in her safest hideout that is her room and shayan was out in da hall.As it was night,manial thought of eating sumthing as she was hungry so she slowly came out of room,shayan looked up on da noise of door opening n saw her n than turned back his attention on da tv he was watchng previously,manial a bit shock bt relief gt courage 2 move ahead n then she went 2 kitchen and prepared sumthng 2 eat,as she was in a mood of cooking and was a v good cook to she made rice and curry along wid salad.Meanwhile in da hall shayan was feelng hungry 2 as now lovely smeel of food was comng frm tht side..bt he was unable 2 go n hav sumthng as she was in...so he was waitng 4 her 2 leave...manial on da other hand...was so happy 2day..she even didn't knw herself...n now as she made such good fod 2...she wanted him 2 hav it 2..bt was scared 2 face him...at last she decided she will go n give him...n was some what sure..he won't say anythng...as till now he didn't utter a word abt da evening incident...
She came out wid servings in hand..went 2ward da hall...he saw her comng...thought she will move 2ward her room...bt when saw her comng there...he who was lying a min b4 carelessly on da sofa...gt up...she came 2ward him n kept da thngs on da near by table 2 him...n was abt 2 leave when he took her name..
S:manial...
her back was 2ward him...she gt scared as he would now shout at her 4 wht happened....bt 2 her amazement...this was wht he said..
S:tumney khana nahee khana kya?
she was still at same position bt answered..
M:woh mein andar he..
S(he spoke in b/w):yaheen par beth ke khao...waisey bhi..mujhe tumse kuch baat karne hai..
M:ji(n she turned n sat on da near by sofa...now both infront of each other...jus a table in b/w both of them...)
4 a while there was silence as both were eatng...no one spoke...manial was confused..as he said..he wanted 2 talk..bt he wasn't...so she was nt able 2 wait more n spoke..
M:woh app ko kuch kehna tha..??
S:haan...par mere khayal hai..tumhe itna tu pata he hoga k khate waqt zyada baat nahee karte,so aram se khana khao..phir baat karte hain..ok
M:ji(kuch sharminda ho jate hai..at wht he said)
after he had finish eatng...he went 2 wash hands...n she who was so hungry at frst n made food wid such hardwork...was nt in mood now 2 eat anythng...so she took all da thngs..n was gng 2 wash them off...when he came n spoke...
S:abhi yeh yehi rehney do...baad mein le jana...phele baat karlein...agar tum ne..kha liya ho tu..
M:ji..mein kha chuke hoon..
S:gud..dekho manial..mere tumse koi personal dushmnai tu hai nahe...k mein tumhare saath jaan bhoj ke bura bartav karoon..bas woh jab tum samney ati ho tu..woh rishta jo humarey beech hai...phir se yaad ata hai...i hope app tak tu tum jaan he chuke hogi...k mein kyun na khush tha..is rishtey se..
M:ji..
S: wajah hai aaima..mein usey buhat pyar karta hon..aur shayad tum agar beech mein na ati tu..hum dono k shaddi ho he jate kisi din..magar..meri kismat dekho..khair...mein bus tum se kuch favor chahta hoon...umeed hai tum mana nahee karogi...
M:kaisa favor??
S:main nahee chahta k aaima ko kisi bhi tarah humareybarey mein pata chale...is liyemeiney tumhein zyada ghulney milney se mana kiya tha..magar tum ne..khair...mein janta hoon..its nt easy...ab sadaf achi larki hai...aur mein umeed karta hoon..tum ne usko humarey barey mein zyada kuch nahee bola hoga..
M:app fikar maat karein mein ney usey kuch nahee bataya..mein tu us se dosti bhi nahee karna chahti thi..magar..woh peeche he par gae...tu mein..
S:hmm..koi baat nahee...mein janta hoo..sadaf hai he aise...woh umair k cousin hai na tu..woh umair...mera dost hai na tu...ik do baar phele bhi mil chuke hain...
M:ji..bataya tha us ne...meiney usey kuch nahee bola..bus itna kaha k hum cousins hai..aur baba ne merey parhai tak..yahan app ko kuch responsibility de hain..
S:hmm...waisey ajj tum..ghar kaisey pohanchi...sadaf k saath..
M:woh...wahan kafi hungama ho gaya tha na tu..sadaf ne kaha..wahan rehna..safe nahee hai..aur app bhi nahee aye the..is liye mainey...par meiney usey bol diya k ajj merey koi relative yahan aye hain..unsey milney app k ghar jana tha..so..app pareshan maat hoon..
S:thanks..i knw tumharey liye yeh sab...merey liye bhi asaan nahee hai..par jab halat ney aisay mor par la diya hai tu..kya karein...mein tumhein zindagi bhar woh khushi nahee de paonga...jo dene chahye mujhe...is liye..ik rasta hai..jo shayad merey liye bhi sahee hai..aur tumhare liye bhi..
M:rasta..kaisa rasta..?
S:dekho manial...aisa rishta is ka koi wajood he na ho..kab tak tik sakta hai...so..jab tak tum apni parhai nahee mukamal kar lete...hum saath raheinge..par..
M:par kya(was scared)
S:degree milney k baad tum is kabil ho he jaoge k..khud ik independent life je sako...mein janta..hoon...ab tumhara wapis gaon jana na mumkin hai...tum yahen isi shehar mein rehke..apni naye zindagi shuru kar sakti ho...mein tu tumhare kabil bhi nahee shayad...tum really buhat achi ho...aur tumhein apney jaisa he koi acha humsafar milna chaye...mein koshish karonga..k tumhein...ik achi zindagi ik achey humsafar k saath..ik naye raah mei le janey mein madad karoon...
M:yeh saab...aur madad..magar..
S:mujhe pata hai abhi tumhein suney mein ajeeb lagey ga...magar guzarte waqt ke saath sachayi ko tum bhi tasleem kar he logi...k hum dono ka rishta...ik kache dhage jaisa..hai..jis ne..tootna he hai...tu behtar hai ke..hum is rishtey ko..miyan biwi k rishte k bajaye..kisi aur nazar se dekhien...zindagi shayad..tab dono k liye asan hogi...
M:matlab..mein samjhe nahee..kisi aur nazar..se.
S:dosti k nazar..hum dono..achey husband wife k bajaye..ache dost bhi tu baan sakte hain na..mein bhi tumhein danta yah..tum par chilana nahee chahta..magar jab woh rishta samney ata hai tu...is liye mainey socha..k kyun na hum do achey doston k tarah rahein...bajaye..u knw...takey...hum kuch comfortable life jiyen..aisaey nahee..jaisay je rahee hain...tu bolo banogi mere dost??
M:jii(quite confused)
S:come on..itna pareshan honey k zrorat nahee hai..mein itna bura bhi nahee hoon..ya hoon..chalo ajj...khul k bol he do...k ab tak mein kitna bura laga.haan..
M:nahee..meiney kab kaha..app burey hain..app bhi na...agar app ki baat khatam hogaye ho..tu mein jaoon..
S(laughng now):i dono yaar..tumhara guzara kaisey hoga..is shehar mein...itna bhi koi sharmila nahee hota...bt u knw one thng...tum kafi cute lagti ho sharmatey huey...khair..don worry..ab dost bana he liya hai..tu tumhein..tohra..bold...or courageous hona bhi sikha dein ge..kyun..sekh lenge na app...(lookng wid quite innocent expression)
M:mujhe nahee pata..aur app mujhe app tu maat bolye...
S:kyun...jab app.."app" bol sakte hain mujhe..tu mein kyun nahe han..why..bolo bolo..tell tell??
M:jo apki marzi ho bolye..mein chale...(n as she was gng...he spoke again)
S:waisay da dinner was really gud...thnx 4 tht...
she didn't said anythng n went inside......leavng a smiling shayan....meanwhile inside was a shy manial...
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It had been now a month after there convo...evrythng was nomal...both were now on gud frndship terms...bt no feelngs were yt at shayan side..he was still in love wid aaima...n he used 2 talk abt lt her wid manial 2...she neva told him she didn't lik tht...as she knew after tht day talk tht wat her fate is...so she jus wana spend as much time as she has wid this man...she was strtng 2 fall 4 by each passing day...she was happy tht...atleast he was being nice 2 her...wht if it was as a frnd..atleast they talk... this was enough 4 her...
On the other side..frm past 2 days sadaf was tellng manial 2 come on her birthday 2 her house...as her mom n dad has kept a party 4 her...bt she was avoiding da topic by gvng lame excuses...at last when she was nt convinced...manial told sadaf tht..shayan won't lik...n if he gt 2 knw..will tell his dad...so..sadaf remain silent at tht moment after tht...bt gt an idea...h 2 call now manial 2 her house...
It was a day b4 sadaf's birthday...da whole day 4 manial at college was as usual...n now she was standng at main gate...wid sadaf waitng 4 shayan...n when he came she bid bye 2 sadaf n went 2ward da car...
It was silence 4 a few mins....at last shayan broke da silence n spoke...
S:suna hai kal sadaf k birthday hai..
M:ji.par app ko kis ney bataya..?
S:sadaf ka phone aya tha mujhe kal...
M:acha...app ne subah tu koi aisa zikar nahee kiya..
S:yah i 4gt...abhi usey dekha tu yaad aya...
M:kia kaha us ney?(she knew...bt wanted him 2 say)
S:k uskey ghar ik choti si birthday party arange k hai...aur invite kiya hai hum dono..
M:dono ko??
S:kyun...mujhe invite nahee kar sakte woh??
M:nahee..mera woh matlab nahe tha...woh us ney mujhe kuch aisa nahee kaha..
S:us ney tumhein khud invite nahee kiya?
M:kaha tha..par meiney mana kar diya..mujhe laga k..
S:mein kuch kahoon na..yahe na..
M:nahee woh..(confused..ab us ke muh pe kaisey bolti k haan...coz of u...)
S:sach bolodo...yaar..kuch nahee kahonga..chalo...kia hoga..zyada..akhein he dekhaon ga..kha tu nahee jaonga..
M(2 herslf..bt a bit loud):kia pata..kha he..
S:kuch kaha ..mujh se..
M:nahee...nahee tu...kuch bhi nahee..
S:acha..haan...tu..mein tu nahee ja paonga coz...mera frnds ke saath kuch program phele se bana hua hai...n she was insistng k tumko zaror ijazat doon..tu meiney bol diya hai..k ur comng..thek hai na..
M:kya..mein jaongi..par mein wahan...kaisey..
S:don worry mein tumhein drop kar doon ga...aur jaisey mein wapis ghar k liye nikloon ga..will pick u...ab theek hai..yah ab bhi koi problem hai?
M:nahee sahee hai...
S:hmm..kuch nahee hoga...meiney phele bhi bola hai..be confident..aur wahan sadaf hogi na..wid u...so..relax..
M:ji..
n wid tht...they reach home....
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ok guyz this was da nxt part...do tell me h it was...do comments..i will be waitng 4 them...
nxt part: new entry....
till nxt time...tc u all..njoy..
wid luv...
guriya....😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey guriya!....awesome updates yaar 👏 .....too good.....nice to know that shayan is worried about manial 😊 ....he search for her everywhere but can't find her there, so he goes to his house, where he finds manial asleep at her room...seeing her there gives him some relief 😊 😭 😊 .....manial who was acting to be sleep coz she knew that he would scream at her 😭 ....after a while when she was feeling hungry....she came out of the room n saw shayan sitting wachting tv ....she went to the kitchen n start making food 😊 ...shayan was also feeling hungry but didn't go to the kitchen coz manial was there 😭 ....after a while she come out n put the food in front of shayan 😊 ....she was about to leave when he stop her n tell to have the food with him n not alone 😊 😉 .....shayan told her that abt aaima n also ask her if they can become friends 😉 (hope he falls for her 😉 ...).....it has been a month that they have become friends.....sadaf's brithday was the next day....she has invited manial, but she keep's saying no coz of shayan.....sadaf talk to shayan n also invites him....but he has plan's with his frinds already 😭 ...but he gives permission to manial 😉 ....i can't wait for the next part....and the new entry 😉 .....will this change something in the story ❓ ....will shayan develop a soft corner for manial ❓ ....can't wait .....continue 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
finally u updated! 😊

wow shayan has changed....cool....amazing
i luvd the way shayan told her to b frns...well he has a nice plan fr manial... 😉 😉 ....but hw will manial live without shayan 😭 😭

this sadaf is so cute....she really has a good role... 😛 😛

i wish sadaf ke b'day par kuchh aisa ho jis se shayan thoda to jealous ho 😆

cont soon...amazing part 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
cool and amazing update, love the change in Shayan's behavior, hope everything goes well and Shayan falls for Manial. cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Nice part!!!!! Who is this new entry.........im waiting 4 the person to come......!!


Continue soon!!

luv,
vandu 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow di awesome part loved it toooo tooooo goooood gr8 loved it finallly shayan maaaan gaya oh thhnx god and now unka rishta bohot hi accche buniyaad pad hai gr8 continue soooon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesomee!!! guriya 👏 love the new shayan 😳 i'm sure he'll also fall in love wid her very soon 👏 👏 😆 cont soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey continue soon !!! cant wait anymore......and write a very lambaaaaaa saa part !!! 😛

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