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Posted: 18 years ago

Part - 22

Recap: both shayan and manial are now on good terms and a bond of frndship is building steadily b/w them....sadaf invites manial 2 her house on her birthday..manial is confused but when shayan allows her 2 go...she agrees...

now story further....

Its the next day..n as its saturday so no college 4 both....so both are sleepng nicely....in there respective places...manial wakes up..n after gtg freshen up...goes out..in hall...she see....shayan still sleepng soundly...lookng so handsom..with da cute smile on his face...she comes a lil more close 2 him...n sits near by him on da floor(as hez sleepng on da sofa)...some time passes by n she still lookng at him intently wid so much love in her eyes 4 him...suddenly she feels an urge 2 touch him 2 feel him....n she lifts her hand n was abt 2 touch...when she thnk wht shez doing is wrong....she has no right on him...as he tld himslef...he jus belongs 2 aaima...so now she has no right 2 thnk abt him in such ways....n as she feels hez abt 2 gt up ....as he changed side...she gts up...n went 2 make breakfast 4 both....shayan gts up as soon as she leaves....n feels as some one was v near 2 him...v close 2 him....he was nt able 2 understand why he was feelng so...bt he was havng it....n he gts up....n is sittng in da posture of thnkng....when manial comes out wid a cup of tea....n wid a smile greets him....he when saw manial infront...shrugs any thought comng...n takes tea frm her...n both sit n quitely do there breakfast...

The day passes by...quickly...n busily....wid both...busy in there respective work...shayan...went out for some work...as he had plans wid his frnds tonight...n manial was busy in house chores....after tht she strts 2 gt ready 4 da evening as shayan told she should be ready when he comes.
Manial had a hard time selecting clothes as she was unable 2 thnk wht 2
wear as she has neva in her life attendng a bday party..she used 2 celebrate bday's wid her family n all...bt neva...a bday was celebrated lik this...so she had no clue..wht she shld wear...n after lot of thnkng she decided 2 wear a white dress..which had a lil embriodery on it and bead work was there in diff color combination...whch made da dress more delicate n yt was seeming classy n simple..it had a white plain churidar wid it n da shirt was more of lik a long frock..which was till then her knee..da duppata was plain..wid jus minute works o da border...she went 2 washroom 2 change..n when she came out...one word can describe her da best in tht outfit n tht was gorgeous...she was lookng really beautiful...n yet widout any make up n accesory...her cheeks were red with inner glow and her eyes were glowing wid beauty of her soul...she needed no make up...yet she applied a lil gloss on her lip...n nothng more...as she neva likes these thngs...n remaining simple was her beauty...
On other hand shayan entered home...n as he thought...he tld her 2 be
ready...n widout even knockng...he opened da room door...n wht he saw...infront of himself....turned him speechless...he neva saw someone..lookng so beautiful...so gorgeous...yet so simple n delicate...yes infront of him at da moment was..manial...she was standing by da window..lst in her own world....she had no idea..some one lookng at her...n shayan on other hand was so lst..tht he 4gt why he came...n they were gtg late..evrythng was put aside..by him...n he was jus starng at her...leaning on da door...finally...she turned back...as she thought..to chk he came or nt...n when she ..she was shocked..2 see him there...n he was still staring at da place she was standng previously...she had no idea..wht 2 do..atlast..she came close 2 him...n spoke..
M:shayan....
shayan when heard her callng..came back 2 reality...as he gt lst in her
beauty so mch..was in another world only...
S:haan..manial..kaho..kuch kaam hai..
M:nahee..kaam..mujhe nahee..app yahan actually woh..isliye..
S:haan..woh mein poochney aya tha..k are u ready..??
M:ji...
S:ok gud...tum bahir intezar karo tab tak..mein bhi change
karloon..ok..
M:theek hai..
n she went out...n shayan..grabbed his clothes frm da cupboard n went 2
take a shower..he came out..was wearng jeans wid white t-shirt n a light brownish jacket on it..lookng really handsome..wid gelled hair..n as he was combng his hair...thought came in his mind...as y he was staring at manail lik tht...wht was da reason tht his eyes were jus focused on her...n he himself lst control over his mind....as y he 4gt...tht she is jus no one 2 him...jus a gud frnd...n his all thoughts shld be jus related 2 aaima..nt anyone else...nt even manial..
n he no more wanted his thoughts 2 wander...so he just shked him once
more in mirror...n came out..n both went out...2ward there destination...
both were quite all da way..n then shayan dropped her 2 sadaf
house...where sadaf was already standing on da gate 2 recive guest n as she saw both comng she went n hugged manial..she was really happy she came...she invited shayan 2 come in 2...for a while...bt he excused himself..n tellng manial he will pick her up...on his way back..he went...
Sadaf went inside da party where she introduced manial 2 her mom...n
dad...n both liked her....n thought of her as a v cute n innocent grl...were happy 2 meet her..as sadaf talks abt her a lt...both frnds gt busy in talkng...when someone called sadaf..n she huried away leaving manial alone...manial...was now gtg v confused..as wht 2 do...she was feelng odd..as all da ppl in da party were lookng at him..n she had no clue y...she was feelng scared now..standng alone..n was lookng here n there 4 sadaf...bt she was no where..
meanwhile as she was busy in search of sadaf...two pair of eyes..saw
tht...n gt worried 4 her...as they firstly saw her...comng inside wid sadaf...n gt lost in her beauty...as she was lookng like an angel on this earth...the eyes...full attention were frm tht time..on tht angel...n were constantly...moving around her only..when she met..sadaf's mom n dad...da way she behaved...showed so much gratitude 4 them..eyes were amazed such a grl still exist in this world...then when she was talkng wid sadaf...da way she laughed..pure laugh..full of innocence...n da glow whch came on her face....n eyes were jus fixed on tht face...nt wanted 2 move away frm there....such a sight it was 2 them...n now..when her face was showing tension...eyes gt da hint...n so da person whom they belonged 2 moved..4 da frst time...2ward tht grl...nt knowng who she iz..still wanted 2 help her..nt knwng why..bt still felt lik....n so he came close n said..
P:excuse me miss...can i help u?
M(gt confused...n now sweatng badly 2..as all of a sudden who this
came...n she who was lookng down..looked up at da person standng infront of her..tall..n handsome..askng her somthng..bt she was so confused..tht words were nt comng out of her mouth)
P:hellooo..lady...m askng u only??
M(at last spoke..)ji..no thanks..m f9..
P:i don thnk so...app mujhe batye..do u need any help...i think ur
searchng 4 some one??
M(no idea...wht 2 say...):ji woh..mere frnd...woh jiske...yeh party
hai..woh..(no more words were comng out now..)
P:ok tu app sadaf..ko dhund rahe hain..don worry..woh ajayegi...(n then
he saw sadaf comng 2ward them only)arey yeh lijye..ahegaye..
S:kya howa..evrythng alrite?
P:nothng's alrite...yeh tumhari frnd...she was searchng 4 u...n i
came..here as i saw her standng here...so tense..so..
S(wid concern now 2ward manial):manial..kya howa.sab theek tu hai
na.mein bas..andar tak he gaye the..
M:nahee sadaf sab theek hai..woh u knw..m nt used 2 all this..aur tum
chale gaye tu...
S:oh m sorry..mujhe tumhein akela nahee chorna chaye tha..sorry yaar...
M:its ok..
S:hmm..arey inse tu mein tumhein milwana he bhol gaye..(pointng 2 da
perosn infront of her)...yeh hain merey sweet sey cute say...bhai(huggnghim frm side)..thorey din phele he US se apne..studies complete kar ke ayein..hain..mainey bataya tha na tumhein...my...Zeshan bhai...(played by Apurva Agnihotri)
Manial jus smiles lookng at him...n da person's heart skips a
beat..lookng at da gorgeous grl..standng infront of him...
Z(now continously lookng at her):hmm..mera introduction tu tum ne karwa
diya...mere natkhat bhena..par...inka bhi tu karwaye...yeh kon hain..
S:oh...haan..sure y not..yeh hai..manial..my best frnd...halanke..hmare
dosti huey..zyada arsa nahee hua hai..par shez da bst frnd i eva gt..app nahe jante..zeeshan bhai...she so sweet n nice...
Z:acha...ahan..mujhe tu aisa nahee lagta...agar yeh itni he sweet n
nice hain..tu...mujhe se tu mil ke..yeh aisey react kar rahein hain.jaisey..inhe..bara bura laga ho..m i tht bad sis..
S:arey aisi baat nahe hai..actually..yeh logon mein..zyada nahee ati
jati..kind of reserve u knw...warna...jo isko kareeb se jante hain..they all knw...h she iz...
Z:acha ji..chalo...phir hum bhi us din ka intezar karein ge..jab hum
inhe kareeb se jaan payein..
on tht comment of him..manial...gt shocked..she was nt likng...his gaze
on her...n she was feelng he was continously starng at her...she wanted 2 go away 2 avoid him...bt she had no choice...
Z:tu sis..cake katna hai k nahee..yaar..kab tak..sab ko bhuka
marwaoge...kyun manial..apki bhi bhook ap tu jaag he gaye hogi..
S:ji nahee bhai..har koi apki tarah thori..hota hai..24/7 munh bas
chalta he rehta hai...
Z:yaar..kuch tu izaat rakh...apni frnd k samney he atleast...
S:acha..chalien kya yaad karenge..thori buhat jo ab bach gaye hai..rakh
he leta hain...
Z:bara shukriya apka madam...waisay..kab tak irade hain cake katney..k
mera na sahe..mehmano..ka he khayal kar lein app..
S:mein tu ready hoon..yeh umair...abhi tak nahee aya hai..kabse wait
use ka kar rahee hoon...
Z:tu phone mila k puch lo...
S:mila chuki hoon..phele milaya..tu muasuf..nikal rahee the..aur
ab..mila mila k thak gaye...bt no reply..aney do..dekh loongi usey..bara keh raha tha.i willbe frst one 2 come..aur yahan..huh..
jus as sadaf..was shoutng..umair..who was standng at back of
her..heard..wht she said..n said 2 himself..
U:ajj tu tumhari khair nahee umair..yeh jangli bili tu ajj
tujhe..shaheed kar k he dam lege..
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ok guyz this was da nxt part...hop u all hav liked it...do comments n
tell me h it was...i will be eagerly waitng 4 ur comments..
nxt part:shayan gts angry at manial...once again...
2 knw y...?? n how???...keep readng...
till nxt time...
tc u all...njoy...
wid luv..
guriya...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
wow di awewsome part loved it yaaar tooo tooo gooood heheheh yeh zishan bhai barrrah flirt hai larki dekhi aur hogya shuru lekin isseh shayad shayan ko jalan ho seeing manial with zishan...heheehh umair toh abbh gaya sadaf usseh chodne walli nahin hai eheheheh continue soooon fantastic 👏 by the way di your sigz are just gr8 ...awesome 👏 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow...shayan agn lost in her beauty....thats a good sign... 😳 😳 ....yeah this zeshan bhai is very flirt....he has his eyes on manial frm the begining....well he can b the person that brings shayan n manial close to each other.... 😉 ....

oh no shayan agn angry on manial....wt happ this time...i hope its coz of jealousy 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey guriya..... 😊
finally caught wid ur story.... 😛 its gng gr8... 👏
wonderfully written parts.... 👏 😉
njoyed reding it a lot.... 👏 😛
shayan is feeling attraction for manial 😉 but desnt want to accept it.... 😳 lol 😆
n yeah want to knw soon dat now y will he scold manial.. so do cont soon.... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
lovely part 👏 mianal is really so beautiful that anyone can lost in her beauty 😳 but i dont like sadaf's bhai 😡 and that umair aaj to gaya 😆 sadaf use nahin chodegi 😆 😆 😆 but i m scared shayan got angry with mianal once again why 😕 😕 😕 plz continue soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part yaar......but ye shayan phirse gussa kyun ho gaya......hehehe!! he is mad......uski pitai karo.....haha!!! jealous ho gaya kya ki zeshan is taking too much interest in kashish......hehehe....ab ye to hona hi tha.....lolzzz kyun aaimna ke peeche ghoome aur dusre log kashish ke paas na aye.....hehehe!!

continue soon.....next part ka intezaar nahi hota ab.....jaldi post karo,.....infact abhi post kardo 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Honii

wow di awewsome part loved it yaaar tooo tooo gooood heheheh yeh zishan bhai barrrah flirt hai larki dekhi aur hogya shuru lekin isseh shayad shayan ko jalan ho seeing manial with zishan...heheehh umair toh abbh gaya sadaf usseh chodne walli nahin hai eheheheh continue soooon fantastic 👏 by the way di your sigz are just gr8 ...awesome 👏 😳

thnx hana 4 likng da part...n 4 likng da sigs 2...will cont soon...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: liquidfantasy

wow...shayan agn lost in her beauty....thats a good sign... 😳 😳 ....yeah this zeshan bhai is very flirt....he has his eyes on manial frm the begining....well he can b the person that brings shayan n manial close to each other.... 😉 ....

oh no shayan agn angry on manial....wt happ this time...i hope its coz of jealousy 😳

thnx dear 4 likng da part....n u will see soon..y he gt angry on da poor grl again...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: KulBin

hey guriya..... 😊
finally caught wid ur story.... 😛 its gng gr8... 👏
wonderfully written parts.... 👏 😉
njoyed reding it a lot.... 👏 😛
shayan is feeling attraction for manial 😉 but desnt want to accept it.... 😳 lol 😆
n yeah want to knw soon dat now y will he scold manial.. so do cont soon.... 😊

thnx dear 4 likng da stry till date...n will update soon...keep readng n commentng...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: captain_kia

lovely part 👏 mianal is really so beautiful that anyone can lost in her beauty 😳 but i dont like sadaf's bhai 😡 and that umair aaj to gaya 😆 sadaf use nahin chodegi 😆 😆 😆 but i m scared shayan got angry with mianal once again why 😕 😕 😕 plz continue soon 😊

yah thts true..shez v pretty anyone..can jus gt mesmerized by her...will cont soon...keep readng..😊

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