Hogaye Hai Mohabbat..RA Last Part (Pg:43) - Page 20

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: liquidfantasy

dhansoo 😆

amazing part.....that slap ws best of all....hope nxt time they watch a girl....she is nt manial... 😉

but then hw will shayan respond....imagine shayan's frnd chhedifying his wife... 😕

i liked the concern shayan had in the end fr manial!

plzz dnt keep us waiting fr week... 😭 😭
updt soon!

tht means u want mahad 2 gt slap by shayan next,..kool idea..😉..n thnx 4 likng da part...will update soon...n won't let u wait 4 longer this time...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ImPrEsSiVe_Grl

finally shayan ki frndz ne entry maari or wat a entry.....they all are just too good... 😆 😆 poor mahad ...shayan ne warn bhi kiya..per phir bhi thapar per hi gaya 😆 😆 ...on the whole fab part..cont soon dear cant wait ... 😊

so u liked da entry...actually it was nt da entry...coz they have come up..previously 2...u might hav missed...anyways..happy u liked it....n yah.. 4 mahad..even m feelng sad 4 poor chap..😆..warning bhi dhi...par dhet hai na...tu kya karein...😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
Thnx 2 all 4 commenting and i will continue Inshallah till tomorrow...m working on it at da moment...till then...be patient....n take care u all... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part - 20

Recap: Manial tells sadaf abt shayan being his cousin...shayan's frnds are introduced....later as manial was waitng 4 shayan 2 pick her up after college...some prob arises in college...n sadaf takes manial wid her...when shayan comes 2 pick her up..shez nt there...n he get tensed n strts searchng 4 her...bt in vain....
now story further....
shayan was even tensed while driving back home...wht if she has not reached...wht if sumthng had happened wid her...wht if sadaf was not wid her...or shez in some problem...all while more n more questions were occupying space in his mind...n he had no clue of wht he will do next if shez nt there at home 2....he thought of calling his dad n informing....bt again gt scared as...wht will he react lik...as he was given da responisbility of her...n wht now..shez missing...
he reached home v quickly..n ran as fast as he can 2ward his flat...frst he thought he would rung da bell....bt wht if she was nt inside..n he used his own keys..2 open da door...n he step inside...his heart beating so fast..anyone could hear....n he came inside...saw da hall was empty...worriness was so clear now on his face..bt he didn't loose hope...n came inside...da kitchen..bt even tht was empty....he gulp down his sliava in terror...fear of where she would be...n moved 2ward da last place..where she can be...in her room...n if shez nt....da thought of her jus being nt there...made him shiver....n he step 4ward...each step was like an eternity 4 him...n he came closed 2 da door...kept his hand on da knob..n slightly opened it...n wht he saw inside...gave him da chance...2 let out a sigh of relief...as manial was quietly sleeping on da bed....her head on bed crown...tellng da story...h tired she was...n slept...as if thnkng abt sumthing...he closed da door quietly n came into kitchen 2 gt some water....
meanwhile inside da room..as da door gts close..we see manial opening her eyes...n she lets a sigh of relief..as she was scared of h she will face him...when she heard da main door open...she knew...now he will look 4 her,...n then will ask questions...so she when heard his footsteps nearing...she pretended like shez sleepng....n now as he was gone...she sat on her bed..n remembered wht happened..few hours ago....
she gt in da car wid sadaf....n as she told sadaf she was living in hostel...she was droping her there....now manial gt scared...h she will tell sadaf 2 nt drop at hostel instead at where shayan lives...even she didn't knew da address...as she was new 2 city...she had no info....wid lt of courage she spoke at last..
M:woh sadaf...mujhe hostel nahee drop karna hai..
Sa(confused):hostel nahee tu kahan...drop karo tumhein??
M:woh..muje ajj..shayan k saath..unke ghar jana tha..
Sa:shayan bhai k ghar...kyun...woh tu wahan akele nahe rehte..phir tum wahan..i mean...
M:haan..woh darasal...ajkal..meri aunti aye hui hain..gaon(village) se....unhe se milney jana tha...shayan ne subah batya tha na...so..ab woh wait kar rahe hongi mera..
Sa:oh..acha..no problem..mein tumhein shayan bhai k ghar drop kar deti hoon...
M:thnx...par u knw his address na..kyunke...mujhe nahee maloom...(making a m sorry face)
Sa:haan...don worry mujhe pata hai..ik bar umair k saath gaye the...usey koi kaam tha..shayan bhai se..
M:ok...
n da rest of da drive was i silence...n they reached da place...n manial jus grab her bag n sayng bye in hurry left...leaving sadaf in shock...as she thought she might call her in to meet her aunty..bt there she went...lettng sadaf thnkng...wht a grl she iz...as still she was able 2 undertsand her...after knowng 4 so many months...still she was unable 2 gt..wht was actually in manial's heart...n sheddng all thoughts away she drove 2ward her home...
Now manial came out of da thought of wht happened few hrs back...
M(herself):mein janti hoon sadaf..tum sochti hogi..kitni ajeeb larki hai...andar bulaya bhi nahe...par m sorry my friend..mein majboor thi...aunty ka keh k yahan tu aye..the..par tumhein andar late tu..asliat samney ajati...is liye..mainay tum se chupaya....m so sorry dear...aur shukar hai..time pe pohanch gaye..shayan..ahegaye the...agar mujhe ghar par na pate...tu janey kya ho jata...par abhi bhi..mujhe darr lag raha hai...unhoon ne..pucha tu kia kahoon ge...kis k saath aye...par darney k kya zarooart hai manial..sedha boldongi..halat he aisaey..the..emin aur kya karti..haan yanhi theek rahega..i hop...woh samjhein...
n wid tht...she stood up...n moved 2ward washroom 2 change...
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ok guyz this was da part 4 now.....sorry if it was short....i had nt much time...bt promise 2 update...so here it is....4 u all....do tell me h it was...did u liked it or nt....do comments..i will be wiatng 4 ur all comments....
nxt part: manial visits sadaf's place....n a new entry there.....
till next time...tc 2 u all...hav nice time...njoy...
wid luv....
guriya....😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
it ws good to c the update.... 😛 😛 😛 😛

hope ki shayan usko daante na....wo samajh jaye...

n who is the new entry?? 😛 😛

great part!
cont soon! 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
Oyee nice part.........u know i thought manial sadaf ke ghar chali jayegi coz of all that union fights.......hehehe!! chalo agle part me hi sahi.........hey new entry........who's this??? koi manial ke peeche padne wala hai kya 😆 ???

Oye but bahut chota part tha..........continue soon isilIye!! 😳 😛


LUV,
VANDU 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
Gr8 part guriya 👏 awwww shayan cares abt her 😛 well that's good 4 a start 😳 hope he doesn't yell at her 4 not waiting 4 him 👏 👏 👏 good 👏 cont soon guriya nd sry 4 commenting so late 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: liquidfantasy

it ws good to c the update.... 😛 😛 😛 😛

hope ki shayan usko daante na....wo samajh jaye...

n who is the new entry?? 😛 😛

great part!
cont soon! 😆 😆

thnx dear...4 likng....n sorry 4 dealy 2....i will post nxt part soon...n abt new entry u will gt 2 knw soon...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

thnx....😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

Oyee nice part.........u know i thought manial sadaf ke ghar chali jayegi coz of all that union fights.......hehehe!! chalo agle part me hi sahi.........hey new entry........who's this??? koi manial ke peeche padne wala hai kya 😆 ???

Oye but bahut chota part tha..........continue soon isilIye!! 😳 😛


LUV,
VANDU 😉

thnx dear..u liked da part...n abt its length...was busy..n m still..bt this time i wrote..a lng 4 u all...so njoy...n comment....😊

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