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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: le_me_star

hey guriya!...really nice update 😉 ....poor manial she got to know about shayan and amina 😭 ...and she start loving shayan 😊 ...and shayan all nervous that what will happen next,, so he goes saving his life from there 😆 .....sadaf is all confused at manials behaviour .....at home shayan and manial finally talk 😊 , but the talk turn into a major fight coz of shayan 😡 😕 ....why can't he try to understand her 😭 ...she's also suffering 😭 ...i understand that he doesn't love her, but doesn't mean that he should talk to her like that 😡 😭 ....poor manial 😊 !.....what will happen when she goes out ahain with sadaf?...will she tell her about shayan and her relationship?....guriya are you going to put shayan's friend in the story?...i mean umair n the otehr two?....continue soon plzzzzzzz........ 👏 👏 👏 i have so many questions 😆 ....great story 👏 👏 👏

me happy u liked da part dear....n m putting them in nxt part...don worry....chk out nxt part...n see....n comment...u liked them or nt....😊

Originally posted by: togepe30

hey where are u??/

continue soon na!! 😉

m here only...m jus postng in few mins....😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
Part - 19

Its the next day...shayan came late in da night after tht....now both are awake...came across each other in kichen...bt both didn't utter a word 2 each other...n silently had their breakfast...after breakfast both gt up n leave 4 college...all da way....quitness surrounds....reach college n manial gts down..n he zooms his car n leaves...as usual...she enters da college...n see sadaf waitng 4 her...n she goes 2ward her...making herself ready 4 sadaf's questioning session....after what happen da previous day at cafe...n da way she reacted....reached where sadaf was standng...hugged her n both sat down..on da grass...
M:tu kia haal hai?
Sa:mein tu thek hoon...tum bato..akhir tumhien kya hua hai...meiney ajj se phele kabhi kisi k sath tumhein aisa behave karte nahee dekha...thek hai..i knw tum strangers se itna ghulti milti nahee ho...par atleast u could hav said a mere hi 2 both of them par tum ne tu...i don't know..shayan bhai kya soch rahein hongein...h my frnd is...??..blah blah..
M:woh m sorry...meri wajah se kal tumhein sharmindagi uthani pari...isi liye kaha tha...nahe jate kahin par tum ne..ik na suni...khair..don worry...woh tumharey barey mein kuch aisa nahee sochenge...so relax.
Sa:n how can be u so sure k woh aisa nahee sochengi...bhaye...tum tu aisey keh rahee ho jaisey..he called u n told k..nahee i didn't mind da way u behaved yesterday...huh..
M:bas na mein janti hoon...choro is sab ko..
Sa:arey choro kaisey...m feelng guilty...jo ke tumhein hona chaye...par kal se i m...umair ko bhi bataya mainey...usney tu ulta..mujhe itni sunaye...k tumhare frnds..yeh woh...kaisey frnd hai...merey dost k samney kachra kar diya..blah blah...u don no h much he shouted on me...
M:sorry yaar...mere maqsad tumhein dant parhwana nahee tha..
Sa:its ok..mein us khajoor k dant se koi darti warti nahee ho..na he mujhe koi farq parta hai..woh tu bolta rehta hai...par still thng was bad...so mujhe laga..i shld ask u...matlab akhir tumhein ho kya gaya tha...statue k tarah khare thi...shayan bhai n hi bhi bola..tub bhi no response...woh aaima ne tu...haath bhi agay kiya...bechari ko peeche karna para..aur madam tu kisi aur he duniya mein thein..
M(in her heart,,,aaima..bechari..huh..woh muhtarma kahan...aur kabse...bechari honge...becharey tu..hum jaisey..sadaf broke her thoughts..n she said):mainey kaha na..kuch nahee socheng woh..(now irritated)
Sa:par..
M(now in anger..fulto..nt realizing herself wht she sayng...):keh diya na...he will nt say u or thnk anythng...samjh nahee ata..coz he knows me v well...so woh kuch nahee sochnege..fine now...
Sa(shocked...at her anger....plus at wht she said..tht she knows shayan..):tum shayan bhai ko janti ho..i mean...kaisay...matlab..then..unhon ne kuch bolo kyun..aur tumne bhi...if
M(now a bitrelax...knowng she had 2 tell sadaf..sumthng,...as she had made a mistake..in anger):woh actually..m sorry..mein gusse mein boli tumse...aur haan mein shayan ko janti hoon...
Sa:koi baat nahee yaar...mainey tera gussa mind nahee kiya..balke ajj pata laga..madam ko gussa bhi ata hain..haan..good....bt h come u knw him...some realtive or wht??
M(guessed wht she had 2 say..):haan relative he hain..cousin hain merey so...meiney tumhein kaha na...hum logon k haan..larkiyoon ko parhai k liye..nahee ijazat par...mujhe mili...aur sirf is shart par k mein kisi se mail jol(don mix up in ppl)na barhaoon..aur jab kal shayan n mujhe tumharey saath dekh liye..tu mei darr gaye the...bas isi liye kuch bol nahee paye...
Sa:oh..sorry yaar..mere wajah se tu phas jate...par i don thnk..shayan bhai koi itne strict hongein(manail in her heart:strict..hitler ke aulad lagta hai..kabhi mereys amney..merey halaat mein milna us se..)...unhoon ne nahee bola hoga...waisay even he pretended..lik he doesn't knw u..tum dono ne kafi achi actng k haan...khair tum ne..un se baat k...k tumharey parents ko na bolein..u knw..problem mein na ajao tum..tum kaho tu mein unse bolo...
M:nahee...its f9..meiney baat kar le hai..aur unhoon ne..kaha hai...k woh nahee kahein ge...
Sa:chalo gud...bach gayee tum...ok now..time 4 class dear..chaloo..
n both go 4 their class....
meanwhile on da other sidein same collge...we see...a grp of three boys sittng in cafetaria...
one of da boys...singing song..n other hittng table as if its a tabla...da third one is jus busy lookng at da grl sittng across their table...
Frst Guy(singing):tumse mili nazar tu asar hua hai..ajj yeh dil pe...chain bhi gaya...hosh bhi gaya...na janey kya hoga ab tu...(now other 2 also join him...three of them lookng at das ame grl n singing..)ha..ha..hahha...ha....
jus then we see shayan comng frm sumwhere n abt 2 come near da grp of guys..he reaches...n hits wid a file in his hand...on three of da guys head...all scream in pain at once..
Frst guy:ouch shayan..kya karta hai yaar...lagti hai...
S:lagti k bache...yeh jo tum teeno kar rahe the..woh kaun se sahrifoon wale harkat the..gali k awara mawali lag rahee ho porey...
2nd guy:hey shayan..bisti tu na kar yaar..hum itni handsom..tujhe..gali k mawali dekhti hain...
S:oh nahee yaar...yeh tu mainey ali k mawalioon k bisti kar di..tum log tu..sarak chap...gunde dekh rahee ho ajj..pore..
3rd guy:tu na..zyada batesi maat nikal..agar hum sarak chap gunde hain tu tu bhi kaam nahe...humara he dost hai..so same lik us...kyun umair(pointing 2 frst guy...who was singing...so this is umair guys..u all were waitng 4 played by Iqbal khan)...sahe bola na mainey..
U:bilkul merey chailey...merey muna..zindagi mein pheli baar tuney akal k baat ke hai....
2nd guy:chal acha hua...Ali(played by chitanya)...ko bhi akal agaye...mujhe laga marney se shayad chand minute phele aye..par Allah ji ka karam...kuch zyada he jaldi agaye...
A:oye..mahad(played by ejaz khan) k bache tu....na..choron ga nahee tujhe...chal mein tu be akal tha..ab akal aye...tere akal ghas charney gayee the...jawab de deta na shayan ko..bara aya...
S:guys chill...ab larna band karo apas mein..n tell..kya ho raha tha...aur tu umair...apni be suri awaaz kyun poori canteen mein sab ko suna raha tha..haan..
U:ji nahe..mein koi be sura nahe gata...tum ko maloom nahee..mujhko kitne singing offfers aye hain..woh tu mein...u know..leta nahee...bas tu..warna m a born singer dude...
Ma:acha..born singer ji..app offer lete kyun nahee le lijye na..humara bhi zara fayda ho jayega...
A:haan...humre bhi phir toor(publicity)hojayegi..k humara yaar...singer hai...
U:naye oye...mein nahee baney wala....singer...
S:kyun..beta tujhe tu bari offers hain na...kar le qabool phir..sharma maat...tu nahee bol se bol sakta..sharif bacha banta hai...tu haan mein kehdoonga..bismila kar..jahan..itney besurey singer hain..tu ik aur sahee...
A:nahee...........
M:abey tujhe kya hua...
S:yeh bata raha hai..log kaisey react karengey..umair k ganey sun kar..
all three strted laughng..except umair...
U:ok..enuf guys....mein tu bas is liye nahee gata...coa mein itna acha hoon..k meiney industry join kar le...tu woh becharey..jo phele se ga rahe hain..un ka dhanda..thap ho jayega...aur mein kisi k pait pe laat...no..m nt tht bad...
A:waah..waah..khayalat suno..mr sadhu raam ke...
Ma:bara aya....diana ka chaila...sacrifice...helpng people...teri jooti..n bhi kabhi tujhe..aisey kaam karte na dekha hoga...
S:tu jooti k baat karta hai..mahad...is ke tu..hath bhi...aisay kamoon..se so gaaz bhagein ge..
U:tum log na...kadar he nahee hai...atrist k..mein chala...huh
S:oye..atrist k aulad...beth ja....aur bata..raag kyun alap raha tha..merey aney se phele..
U:mein koi akela nahe tha..yeh dono bhi merey saath shamil the..is muhim(mission) mein...
S(lookng at mahad n ali now 2...):kyun bhayee..chakar kya hai...haan..
Ma:kuch nahee yaar...woh larki dekh raha hai...
S:konsi...yahan tu buhat hain...
A:woh yaar jo humarey bilkul bajo wale table pe hai...
S:oh woh..acha...kia huwa usey..
Ma:hua kuch nahee kake...bus...apna dil agaya hai us pe...
S:bechare....
Ma:bechari kyun...
S:tumhara jis pe dil aye..woh bechari he hoti hai...kyunke..us pe sirf tumhara nahee..in dono ka bhi dil ajta hai...aur woh bechari...phas jate hai...kisey phele thapar marey...
(laughng)
Ma:koi nahee yaar...yeh thapar marney wale..lagti nahee hai...
S:mujhe tu lag rahee hai...
Ma:awain na..tujhe tu har kaam mein...phele bakwas karney k adat hai....mujhe nahee lagti..ja k milney mein kya harj hai...kya kehte ho tum dono...
A:shayan ne..bola hai tu..mein tu rsik nahe leeney wala..phicle bar bhi...dono bhag gayee the...woh us larke k security guard ne mere bari dhunai(hitted hard)k thi...mein tu...no way...mujhe maaf he rakho..
Ma:acha hai..ik tu kaam hua...umair tu bol...
U:yaar chala tu jata..mein koi ali k tarah..darpok nahee hoon...aur nahe mujhe..yeh larki..phele walioon k tarah lagti hain...magar mujhe library kuch kaam hai..mein aya..u go carry on...
n umair left da place..
Ma:gr8..ajj mauka acha hai..yeh dono bhi nahe hain saath...shayan...yaar..wish me luck....
S:haan woh tu dena he parga...zarorat parge..us k..tujhe..ajj..sabse zyada...
n mahad left..nt hearng wht shayan wanted 2 say...
n now ali n shayan were left...
A:tujhe itna yakeen kyun hai..k ajj yeh mar kha k he ayega...
S(smiling...bring face close 2 his ear):dear kyunke...kal merey smaney is larki ne...ik larke ko thapar mara..jab usney wahe harkat k..jo ab humarey mahad sahab karney ja rahein hain...
A:kya baat kar raha hai..sach...
S:yakeen na aye..beta...tu abhi thori dair baad...awaz sunlene...tab yaken ajayega...waisey...umair chalo nikla...darr khud gaya tha...phichle baar..ka waqya yaad karke..aur bahaney dekho..library...
A:aur kya...zndagi mein us ne..library mein qadam nahee rakha hoga..aur ajj..haha..
n jus then they hear a voice...yes u all r right...it was voice of slap...n we see...mahad...comng.2ward both..havng one hand on his face..n both ali n shayan laughng..on his condition...later when gng 2ward class...mahad hand..stil on face...n now three yes umair also joined them..were laughng on his condoition...
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days pass by...as days hav 2....2 weeks hav gone...in these 2 weeks...both shayan n manial was at norm..wid each other...jus talk when needed...n thts it...rest avoidng....it was time college was gtg closed...manial bid bye 2 sadaf n went out....2 wait 4 shayan...in these 2 weeks sadaf gt 2 knw..shayan..used 2 drop manial 2 hostel...thts wht manail told her...sadaf...also cmae wid her..n waited as usual wid her..till she went wid shayan...suddenly...there arose...sum panic....n we see..sum students comng wid sticks in there hand...n breakng evry thng they came across...seeing this...n ppl...comng 2ward them....both grl gt panicked...
Sa:manial.mujhe lagta hai...collge k students union ne kisi issue pe management se panga le liya hai..tabhi..they r breakng evrythng..n hittng evryone...2 arouse panic..is se phele..k the come here..we hav 2 rush...chalo..
M:par..shayan...mein..kaisey..
Sa:plz...yaar yeh time..yeh sab sochney..ka nahee hai....shayan bhai..ko hum jab situation bateyeinge..tu woh khud samajh jayenge...wht we did..is right....chalo abhi..u come wid me..i will drop u...ab chalo bhi...
n both rush 2ward sadaf's car...sadaf...drove as fast as she sould..lookng back n foward..while..manial was tense..wht shayan will do now...if he will nt find her there...
meanwhile on other side....shayan...came 2 knw..abt this sudden action of union members..n he rushed...fast 2 pick manial...as she wld be waitng...n when he came @ tht place....he saw..she was nt there...n he gt shocked...n scared....scared 4 da fact...where she went..she knew..no one...n if sumthng happened 2 her...wht he will do....he was so tensed...he didn't knew wht 2 do..whom 2 ask...she neva had..any frnd...cursing him now..why he didn't allow her 2 make frnds....searchng 4 her hear n there....nt knowng wht 2 do..remembered...sadaf...n rushed 2 chk 4 her car..if shez there...bt shewasn't...gtg a hope...she might be wid her...went wid her.....he rushed his car 2wards home...in order 2 check..she reached or nt....n if not..look somewhere else....whole while...on da way...he was tense...wht he wil tell his dad...if shez nt found...wht if sumthng happened 2 her...wht...???n so many question lik this were comng in his mind...n 4 frst time...in last few weeks...he was scared...4 her...worried abt her.....wanted 2 see her...asap....bt....was cluless...helpless.....
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ok guyz...this is da nxt part...hop u all hav liked it....do comments n tell me h it was...i will be waitng eagerly 4 ur comments...
nxt part:wht will happen...when shayan...will reach home...will sadaf...drop...manial 2 shayan's place..or....wht if she"ll nt reach home..wht will shayan do..??
2 knw answers of all these n many more questions in ur mind...keep readng...
till next time...tc..njoy...
wid luv....
guriya.....😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
oye awesome part..........really loved it.......rocking friendz of shayan.....ahan!! iqbal, eijaz n chaitanya......cool.....hmm now lets see what shayan does....yaar jaldi se continue karna, zyada wait mat karwana next part ke liye 😳

luv,
vandu 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow di awesome part love dit too toooo goooood...ohooooo shayan jee ko abbh hui madam ki fikar jab she is gayab... ismien bi zarooor shayan ka koi maqsad hai he only wants to protect her because woh uski baap ki amaanat hai just 4 that sake...i hope next part mein woh chillane nah laggge manial parr.... 😕 gr8 part continue soooon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
fantastic part 👏 so finally umair entered the story 😛 and all the four friends r just hilerious 🤣 🤣 🤣 u write wonderful dialougs i cant stop laughing during their conversation 🤣 and sadaf called umair KHAJOOR funny 🤪 but i m afriad what will b shayan's reaction to the mianal's action i hope wo gussa na kare aur uski situation ko samjhe 😳 keep posting 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
dhansoo 😆

amazing part.....that slap ws best of all....hope nxt time they watch a girl....she is nt manial... 😉

but then hw will shayan respond....imagine shayan's frnd chhedifying his wife... 😕

i liked the concern shayan had in the end fr manial!

plzz dnt keep us waiting fr week... 😭 😭
updt soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
finally shayan ki frndz ne entry maari or wat a entry.....they all are just too good... 😆 😆 poor mahad ...shayan ne warn bhi kiya..per phir bhi thapar per hi gaya 😆 😆 ...on the whole fab part..cont soon dear cant wait ... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

oye awesome part..........really loved it.......rocking friendz of shayan.....ahan!! iqbal, eijaz n chaitanya......cool.....hmm now lets see what shayan does....yaar jaldi se continue karna, zyada wait mat karwana next part ke liye 😳

luv,
vandu 😉

thnx vandana 4 likng da part....n i will cont soon this time...don worry..😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Honii

wow di awesome part love dit too toooo goooood...ohooooo shayan jee ko abbh hui madam ki fikar jab she is gayab... ismien bi zarooor shayan ka koi maqsad hai he only wants to protect her because woh uski baap ki amaanat hai just 4 that sake...i hope next part mein woh chillane nah laggge manial parr.... 😕 gr8 part continue soooon 👏 👏 👏

thnx hana...tht u liked it...aur ab shayan itna bhi burra nahee hai...aur u thnk he is....😉

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Originally posted by: captain_kia

fantastic part 👏 so finally umair entered the story 😛 and all the four friends r just hilerious 🤣 🤣 🤣 u write wonderful dialougs i cant stop laughing during their conversation 🤣 and sadaf called umair KHAJOOR funny 🤪 but i m afriad what will b shayan's reaction to the mianal's action i hope wo gussa na kare aur uski situation ko samjhe 😳 keep posting 😊

thnx 4 da appreciation and m happy u liked da frnds part and dialogues...i jus did my best...n ur comment has given me more motivation...so will try my level best in future 2 write more gud parts...n 4 knowng shayan's reaction...keep reading...😊

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