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Posted: 18 years ago
Part - 16

Its a new day...now..last nite manial waited 4 shayan 2 come back...bt...she slept while waitng n he came v late...n neva bothered 2 chk 4 her...as he was not interested as well as was angry upon her...
now he woke up...n was abt 2 go 2 his room 2 change..when he remembered tht shez in....n he was now pissed as in his own apartment he can't even gt privacy...n jus went 2 kitchen 2 grab sumthing as he has nt eaten anythng frm last nite....
meanwhile on da other side..manial jus woke up...n went 2 change n freshen up...as she had her college 2day....she came out after changing....in a pink kurta pajma...n she was lookng so beutiful n pure..without any amout of make up on his face...she neva applied such thngs..not 4 da reason tht she was frm a village..nowadays...village grls r also 2 advanced...even her bhabhi was xtra advanced...4 da fact...bt she neva liked such thngs..n rather prefered 2 be simple...n tht was da cause of her beauty...her simplicity....
she jus looked once in da mirror..applied kajal..as she loves 2 pt it...as her mother was fond of her eyes...n she always insisted her 2 apply tht...2 make them look more beautiful....she wore a scarf on her head..as she didn't want ppl 2 talk abt her big chaddar...she alwayz has ....instead of tht she wore a big duppata on her shoulders...as aliha told her 2 do so...n she did tht...as she knew...aliha knows..better city ppl then her...she checked herself in mirror....n came out....looked 4 shayan in hall...bt he was nt there....
then she went 2ward da kitchen 2 make some breakfast...when she entered ....was stunned 2 see shayan inside...n doing something wid frying pan...she stood there n was lookng...n 2 her it was such a scence tht she was unable 2 control her laugh...as shayan was @ one time tryng 2 break da egg wid a spoon n on da other...da tea was abt 2 get boiled n he was tryng 2 off da stove..wid his other hand....bt in vain...result was tht...egg was on da floor...on his feet...smiling @ him....n tea was all ova da stove...he gt so irritated...tht he shouted...n almost throwed da spoon ...whch by manial's lck...touched her forehead...n she screamed in pain...he then realized she was also present there...fact is tht...he shld be apologizing 4 his act..bt nah hez shayan...so he..
S:tum...yahan kya kar rahee ho??aur ab sar pe hath rakh k chila kyun rahee ho..sar a sar ghalti tumari hai...peeche khare ho ke kya mera tamasha dekh rahee thi...
M:woh nahee mein tu nashta bananey k liye aye the...par jab apko andar dekha tu..
S:nastha bananey aye the...wahein kharey kharey tumhara nashata ban jata haan....bolo...aur kya mujhe andar dekha..dekh raha tha na...mein ik waqt mein dono haath nahee use kar pa raha tha...akey help karney k bajaye...madam kharey dekh rahein thein..
M:woh mein tu...ghalti meri hai...mujhe help karne chahye the...m sorry...app jaye....change kar lijye..college k liye late ho jayega appko..mein yeh sab saaf kar doon ge...
shayan didn't utter a word..n left..throwing da cloth he took 2 clean da place...
he went inside da room....n gt his clothes frm da cupboard...n went 2 change..on da other hand...manial...had cleaned da whole mess n even had made breakfast 4 both of them...when shayan came out n then in kitchen..whch had a small table @ one side....was shocked 2 see tht..evrythng was ready...n she was also sittng there...had nt eaten yt...waitng 4 him 2 come...he quietly sat near by her..n strted eatng..nt said a single thank u...coz he thought...why shld he thank her....she was on da other hand...thinkng he will say anythng....@ least would say sumthng abt how was breakfast....bt he didn't n after eatng..he jus stood up...she hasn't strted eatng yt...he walked ot...stop @ da end of da door..
S:mein bahir hall mein hoon..breakfast jaldi se khatam karke aoo...humein late ho raha hai...
n b4 manial cld say sumthng he had already left..she silently had her breakfast..n then came ot...n widout speakng anythng 2 eachother...they both went in shayan's car 2 college..both were quite in car...shayan concentrating on driving...nt thinkng..shez around..n manial lst in her thoughts...of how life will be now...@ college's main door da car stops wid a break...manial comes back 2 reality....n looks 2ward shayan..he neva bothers 2 look @ her..knows shez lookng @ her....bt ignores..5 mins hav been passed both r quite...@ last shayan breaks da silence..
S:ab utrainge bhi app neeche yah apke liye koi shahi sipahi ayengi..app ka darwaza khulenge..phir app utheinge...
M:nahee aisa nahee..mein tu bas..akele kaise andar..mujhe tu..
S:dekho mein ne tumhey phele he kaha tha..mein tumhein pick or drop kar doon ga..par us sey zyada don ask me..as i can't help u out...jo karna hai..khud karo...
M:ji..mein chalte hoon...
S:theek hai..aur college ke off time pe..mein yahein se pick karonga..so be here..mujhe intezaar na karna parey..
manial nods her head..n comes out...as she closed da door behind...shayan..zoomed of da car...she stood there 4 a moment thnkng...wht happened...n then shrugged all thoughts n came inside...was scared n even didn't knew anythng...bt gain confidence...n pulled out her time table frm her bag..n went 2 search 4 her frst class...
15 mins gone by..n still she was unable 2 find...was now tired...as it was a hot day..n she sat on da near by bench...jus then someone came n sat wid her...she didn't look @ who it was..n was abt 2 gt up n leave..when...
P:hi..app yahan nayee ho??
manial still nt said a word..n was abt 2 gt up...when..
P:mainey app he se poocha hai..jawab tu dejye??
manial was now confused..as she remembered wht shayan said...n now this grl sittng beside her wanna talk...she thought its better 2 leave...n was abt2 gt up when...da grl took her hand..in hers...
P:ajeeb ho app bhi..mein kabse appse baat kar rahe hoon aur app ho ke...khair...mein bhi buhat dhet hoon...according 2 umair mein tu maha dhet hoon...woh tu kehta hai k...sadaf...duniye mein tumse zyada chipko koi nahee hoga...bt i don care...koi kuch bhi kahe...ab dekh he lo...u must be thinkng..k mein baat karna nahee chahti n this grl...is forcng me 2 stay...per mein tu bhai aisei hoon...oops...mein ne tu apna intro diya he nahee....mein bhi na...buhat bhulakar hoon..umair tu bolta hai...mujhe koi kaam kehna apni shamat ko dawat dene ke barabar hai...kyunki...mein batein jaldi bhool jate hoon..oops dekho phir shuru hogaye..or intro beech mein he chor diya...by da way..m sadaf(aka neha bamb)..aur app??
manial was cluless wht 2 do nw..as da grl infrnt of her...was so nice n was talkng so polietly wid her...bt then again she remembered shayan's talk....n stood there...in complete silence..
sadaf on da other hand..was maha dhet..as when manial didn't respond...she strted agin..
Sa:chalein koi baat nahee don tell me ur name..mein khud he guess laga leti hoon...waisey ur v sweet n beautiful...tu apka naam bhi kuch aisa he hoga..m i rite...
manial jus smiles...
Sa:oh shukar khuda ka..k app ke awaz na sahe app ke muskan tu dekhne ko mile...waisey ur smile is sweet 2 like u....
M(@ last spoke):thanks...
Sa:haye Allah mujhe yakeen nahee a raha...kafal(@ last u spoke) tu tota...wiasey bakhuda jhoot nahee bol rahe mein...apki voice bhi na..apki smile or apki tarah...sweet hai...aisey jaisey woh...oh ab mein umair thori k larkiyoon ko flirt karney walee lines mujhe yaad hoon...khair...mein agar larka hoti..tu ..woh ho jata....woh kya kehte hain yaar...
Manial didn't said anythng bt looked @ her wid confused expression..
Sa:haan yaad aya...Love at first sight..ho jata...sachi mein...
Manial jus smiled on tht....
Sa:waisey app naturally kaam bolti hain yah..mein itni buri lagi apko k..app mujh se baat nahe kar rahe hain...
manial gt shocked on sadaf's line...n she thought..shez a cute n nice grl...n there was no harm in @ least speakng 2 her...
M:nahee aisa kch nahee hai..app tu buhat sweet ho..woh mein bas aisey he..ajnabioon se itni jaldi na..
Sa:par ab tu hum ajnabi nahee rahe na...u knw my name na...so now tell me abt u 2...
M(smiled @ her innocence):mein manial hoon..aur yahan BA mein...frst yr arts...mein admission liya hai...aur ajj mera phela din hai....abhi kch dair baad class hai..wohi dhund rahe the..magar..nahee mil rahe...is liye thak ke yahen beth gaye...
Sa:arey waah..kamal hogaya...mein bhi frst yr mein he hoon BA mein..halanke..mujhe dekh ke..aur merey freely attitude se u gt confused...woh kya hai na..umair ke wajah se mein sab ko janti hoon yahan...aur i knw class hai..mujhe malom hai kidhar hai so don worry..merey saath he chalna..
M:thnx...
Sa:is mein thnx k kya baat...after all wht r frnds 4...rite..so we r frnds...(she held her hand out 2 manial)
Manial smiles fade away...as she remembers shayan's word...sadaf gt confused as manial was nt extendng her hand....
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ok guyz this is da nxt part...hop u guyz like it...n if there r any mistakes m sorry...coz was in a hurry so neva rechecked...do comments n tell me h it was....i will be eagerly waitng 4 ur replies...
nxt part:will manial accept sadaf's frndship...????wht if she does...n wht if shayan gts 2 knw abt it...
2 knw all this...keep readng....
till nxt time..njoy...tc..
wid luv...
guriya...😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
lovely part 👏 👏 par shayan to bahut bura hai mianal ko lag gayi aur sorry bhi nahin bola 😡 😡 aur kehta hai dost mat banna jaise khud doston k bina reh sakta hai 🤢 mianal nayi thi use college to dihka deta bechari kahan kahan gumegi 😭 😭 par sadaf bahut acchai hai chalo koi to dost mila mianal ko 😊 and i think this umair may b iqbal khan tell me if i m right 😛 mianal ko dosti kar leni chahiye 👍🏼 aur plz ek request hai aaima ko mat lana plz plz plz 😡 keep posting 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
kya mazedaar part tha...sadaf is very sweet n she gonna b manial's best frnd....but shayan hope he is not angry wid manial.....

cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow di awesome part tooo tooo toooo goooood loved it awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww sadaf is sooo sooo sweeet and lovely accha hai ussseh bi ek friend mili and manial ko bi...lekin yeh shayan ki batein arrrrrrgggghhhh i hpe manial accepts her dosti ...gr8 part cotninue soooooon can't wait more.. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
great part yaar 👏 👏 👏 !!!!!!!....man shayan should get rid of that acttitude 😡 ...it wasn't manial's fault what happened 😭 ...it was destiny 😉 😆 😉 ...that had to bring them twoghter 😉 😊 😉 ....poor manila she's trying her best to talk and understand shayan, but he doesn't even say anything 😡 .......i'm so happy that sadaf is going to be her friend (i hope 😉 )....she so sweet 😛 ....a really talktive person, you can't be bore with her 😆 ....by the way who's umair (iqbal k) of sadaf ❓ ....i want to know what's gonna happen next 😉 ???????????...wwil she accept her friendship ?.....great part....continue 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: captain_kia

lovely part 👏 👏 par shayan to bahut bura hai mianal ko lag gayi aur sorry bhi nahin bola 😡 😡 aur kehta hai dost mat banna jaise khud doston k bina reh sakta hai 🤢 mianal nayi thi use college to dihka deta bechari kahan kahan gumegi 😭 😭 par sadaf bahut acchai hai chalo koi to dost mila mianal ko 😊 and i think this umair may b iqbal khan tell me if i m right 😛 mianal ko dosti kar leni chahiye 👍🏼 aur plz ek request hai aaima ko mat lana plz plz plz 😡 keep posting 😊

thnx 4 likng da part dear...n 2 knw..tht both will be frnds on nt....keep readng...😊...n abt shayan ab kya kahun...woh aisa he hai...😉...will cont soon...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

thnx...😊

Originally posted by: liquidfantasy

kya mazedaar part tha...sadaf is very sweet n she gonna b manial's best frnd....but shayan hope he is not angry wid manial.....

cont soon

thnx 4 likng it dear...n is shayan angry or nt...u will no tht pretty soon....😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Honii

wow di awesome part tooo tooo toooo goooood loved it awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww sadaf is sooo sooo sweeet and lovely accha hai ussseh bi ek friend mili and manial ko bi...lekin yeh shayan ki batein arrrrrrgggghhhh i hpe manial accepts her dosti ...gr8 part cotninue soooooon can't wait more.. 👏

thnx hana...4 likng da part...n yah sadaf is v nice...thts true...even i also hopes she accept her frndship....will cont soon...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: le_me_star

great part yaar 👏 👏 👏 !!!!!!!....man shayan should get rid of that acttitude 😡 ...it wasn't manial's fault what happened 😭 ...it was destiny 😉 😆 😉 ...that had to bring them twoghter 😉 😊 😉 ....poor manila she's trying her best to talk and understand shayan, but he doesn't even say anything 😡 .......i'm so happy that sadaf is going to be her friend (i hope 😉 )....she so sweet 😛 ....a really talktive person, you can't be bore with her 😆 ....by the way who's umair (iqbal k) of sadaf ❓ ....i want to know what's gonna happen next 😉 ???????????...wwil she accept her friendship ?.....great part....continue 👏 👏 👏

thnx dear 4 likng it....n abt shayan....hez lik tht...ab hope he changes....even i hop da same..u do..hop....n abt sadaf...frndship....lets see..wht manial does...will she go against shayan or nt...n abt whoz umair....u will gt 2 knw...in a few parts....keep readng...n i will cont asap...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey nice ff yaar.....just read the whole ff now......well 1 request , can u write in english, i mean ye tumhari language jo hai , is it urdu(i dunno ye kaunsi language hai 😕 ) ya jo bhi 😆 .....bahut time lagta hai padhne me n samajhne me 😳 .....hehehehe 😆 .....well its ok if u write like this also waise, shayad problem isiliye hui hogi coz itne sare parts saath me padhe......1 part at a time will be fine......hmm so its ok i guess.....oh god, look at me , i've gone mad 😆 😆 😆

anyways, awesome ff.......really loving it......jaldi se continue ok??

waiting 4 the next part eagerly!!!!

luv,
vandu 😉

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