Hogaye Hai Mohabbat..RA Last Part (Pg:43) - Page 14

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Honii

wow guri di gr888 parts loved them just tooo goooood abbhbh yeh shayan hero jeee bohot bhaooo khaa rahe hai ...aur hukum bi chala rahe hai this guys is getting on my nerve..i reallly like manial's character sweeet and innocent she reminds me of prachi in kayamath...tooo gooood continue soooon 👏

thnx a lt hana 4 likng da parts...n ab hero hain na..tu bhao tu khaeinge he...bt don u thnk it suits him...😉....n thnx 4 likng manial's character n yah she somewhat resembles prachi...will cont soon...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: captain_kia

lovely part she is really an angel 😛 😳 par shayan ise kitna gussa aata hai 😡 bechari mianal ko dara diya 🤢

thnx 4 likng dear...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
great part yaar.....really awesome 👏 ..........for the first time shayan and manial talked to each other 😊 ....and shayan got lost in manil's beauty 😉 ...... his so rude with manial with her 😡 .....hope he chage his acctitude 😊 .....who's going to be her new friend ???????......is she aaima 😉 .....great part.....continue soon plzzzz
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Posted: 18 years ago
hi dear just caught up with ur ff.its really very good. 👏 plz cont soon cant wait for the next part.
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: **-**Guriya**-*

aisa bhi nahe...gussay mein haan thoray aur khobsurat lagte hain..par phir bhi

god he is mad @ u nd ur thinking how hot he looks when he is angry😆😆 😆gr8 part guriya👏 now they r living togther things will be better😆 cont soon can't wait to know whoz manilal new friend😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Originally posted by: le_me_star

great part yaar.....really awesome 👏 ..........for the first time shayan and manial talked to each other 😊 ....and shayan got lost in manil's beauty 😉 ...... his so rude with manial with her 😡 .....hope he chage his acctitude 😊 .....who's going to be her new friend ???????......is she aaima 😉 .....great part.....continue soon plzzzz

thnx 4 likng da part dear...n u will gt 2 knw soon abt her frnd...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ImPrEsSiVe_Grl

hi dear just caught up with ur ff.its really very good. 👏 plz cont soon cant wait for the next part.

thnx dear...n will cont asap...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Paru_M

god he is mad @ u nd ur thinking how hot he looks when he is angry😆😆 😆gr8 part guriya👏 now they r living togther things will be better😆 cont soon can't wait to know whoz manilal new friend😊

thnx paru 4 likng it...n yah...our heroine na...so she has 2 be different na...😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
guriya dear..me here with my comments after a long time..sorry itne time se comment nahii kar paayi... ab me coming to the comments on the part.. well tumhari story kaafi achchi jaa rahii hai..bohat hii mast..jaa rahii hai..absolutely amazing... kya baat hai..shayan ke dad is just too wonderful... he understands the situation so well... & he is tackling everything in a very perfect way... he knows shayan & maniyal need some time with each other so that unke rishthe ko ek mouka tho mile..... ab what he has done is awesome... a very good idea.... 👏 then next ab coming to the scene between maniyal & shayan..shayan ka maniyal mein kho jaana.. being so lost in her... looking at her with intense gaze.. & then to over come this feeling of his his being rude to her... shayan ka rookhapan with maniyal is just because of the reason kii he is getting attracted to maniyal & he is running away from it... lekin is baat par i would like to tell shayan kii woh jitna durr chahe utna bhaag le... lekin woh maniyal ke pyaar ke jadoo se bach nahii saktha.... then next coming to maniyal... uska shayan ke baare mein sochna.. kii he looks good when he is angry..how sweet.. then she thinking kii shayan is supposed to be loving & caring par uske sath he is rude... well is baat par mujhko maniyal se kehna hai kii maniyal tum bas thoda rukh jao jab shayan ko tumse pyaar hoga na tab tum par woh apne pyaar kii bouchaar karega.. tab you will know how loving he is..... well i can see sparks coming in a way that both shayan & mayinal will come pass thoda thoda karke..... 😳 ab guriya next part ke liye mera guess yeh hoga kii shayan & maniyal aur kareeb aayenge... na chahthe hue bhii shayan will get attracted to maniyal.. aur yeh bhii ho saktha hai kii maniyal ko bohat jaldi patah chal jaye kii why shayan married her..& she also gets to know kii shayan loves & maniyal will be broken... lekin phir bhi i think shayan & maniyal dost banega... aur shayan maniyal ko behtar samjega... & dono kareeb aayenge... this is my guess for the forth coming parts.. do tell me if my guess is sahii yaa ghalat.... 😉 guriya i'll be waiting for the next part..do post soon.... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sun_423

guriya dear..me here with my comments after a long time..sorry itne time se comment nahii kar paayi... ab me coming to the comments on the part.. well tumhari story kaafi achchi jaa rahii hai..bohat hii mast..jaa rahii hai..absolutely amazing... kya baat hai..shayan ke dad is just too wonderful... he understands the situation so well... & he is tackling everything in a very perfect way... he knows shayan & maniyal need some time with each other so that unke rishthe ko ek mouka tho mile..... ab what he has done is awesome... a very good idea.... 👏 then next ab coming to the scene between maniyal & shayan..shayan ka maniyal mein kho jaana.. being so lost in her... looking at her with intense gaze.. & then to over come this feeling of his his being rude to her... shayan ka rookhapan with maniyal is just because of the reason kii he is getting attracted to maniyal & he is running away from it... lekin is baat par i would like to tell shayan kii woh jitna durr chahe utna bhaag le... lekin woh maniyal ke pyaar ke jadoo se bach nahii saktha.... then next coming to maniyal... uska shayan ke baare mein sochna.. kii he looks good when he is angry..how sweet.. then she thinking kii shayan is supposed to be loving & caring par uske sath he is rude... well is baat par mujhko maniyal se kehna hai kii maniyal tum bas thoda rukh jao jab shayan ko tumse pyaar hoga na tab tum par woh apne pyaar kii bouchaar karega.. tab you will know how loving he is..... well i can see sparks coming in a way that both shayan & mayinal will come pass thoda thoda karke..... 😳 ab guriya next part ke liye mera guess yeh hoga kii shayan & maniyal aur kareeb aayenge... na chahthe hue bhii shayan will get attracted to maniyal.. aur yeh bhii ho saktha hai kii maniyal ko bohat jaldi patah chal jaye kii why shayan married her..& she also gets to know kii shayan loves & maniyal will be broken... lekin phir bhi i think shayan & maniyal dost banega... aur shayan maniyal ko behtar samjega... & dono kareeb aayenge... this is my guess for the forth coming parts.. do tell me if my guess is sahii yaa ghalat.... 😉 guriya i'll be waiting for the next part..do post soon.... 😃

thnx a lt surya 4 commentng n likng da stry so far...hop u like in future 2...n yah his dad is v nice..tabhi tu dono ko milwaney k koshish kar rahein hain..lets see wht happens...when they live along...n abt ur guess dear...u will see in nxt part soon wht happens..tht is they cmae close or....😉....keep readng n commentng...😊

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