Hogaye Hai Mohabbat..RA Last Part (Pg:43)

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Daebak

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Posted: 18 years ago

#161

i hope manial sees aaima.....nd gets heart-broken n stops bothering abt shayan nd stops getting scared of him......hehehehe.....and make lots of friendz.....lolzz tabh shayan ko kadr hogi uski......

hey continue soon yaar......when r u gonna continue!!!! 😭

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Imaan-Ki-Duaa

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Originally posted by: togepe30
i hope manial sees aaima.....nd gets heart-broken n stops bothering abt shayan nd stops getting scared of him......hehehehe.....and make lots of friendz.....lolzz tabh shayan ko kadr hogi uski......

hey continue soon yaar......when r u gonna continue!!!! 😭

lol...seriously u want tht 2 happen...i don't thnk anyone wld want....anyways...i wld try 2 cont soon...as i continued 2day my other ff...i didn't did this one.....so will cont soon...don cry now...😊

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Daebak

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Originally posted by: **-**Guriya**-*

lol...seriously u want tht 2 happen...i don't thnk anyone wld want....anyways...i wld try 2 cont soon...as i continued 2day my other ff...i didn't did this one.....so will cont soon...don cry now...😊

yeah i do yaar, see shayan was in a way smitten by her right......so if she makes lot of friendz n ignores him , then he be kind of jealous n all......so he will try to talk to her n manao her coz she's hurt by his affair......hehehe....warna wo shayan ke age peeche ghumti hai sehmi sehmi , isilye shayan mis-treats her.......mazaa to tab ayega na jab barabar ki takkar n gussa ho.....hehehe😆.....and both will realize each others worth.....waise she should know abt this fling of shayan's, lolzz u might think i've lost it.....well i've got idiotic concepts.....plzz ignore it n forget it😆😆....i just go mad at times😆😆😆....sorry!!!

Ya continue soon, i read the other story too, it was awesome....i love both your stories!!!

But im missing this one too........jaldi post karo na!!!

luv,

vandu😉

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Imaan-Ki-Duaa

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Posted: 18 years ago

#164

guys will post Inshallah by tonight...so jus a lil more wait...till then tc... 😊

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Daebak

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Posted: 18 years ago

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yaar kaha hai part.....jaldi karo guriya......ab aur time nahi milega.....part post karo warna main yahan bomb blast kar doongi !!!! 😆 😆

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Hana

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Posted: 18 years ago

#166

di jaldi post karro na...can''t wait more...
heheheh warna vandu blast karne walli hai...

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Imaan-Ki-Duaa

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Posted: 18 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: aishwaria
yaar raaat ho gayi

i knw dear..bus part complete hogaya hai...postng in a while..sorry 4 da dely

Originally posted by: togepe30
yaar kaha hai part.....jaldi karo guriya......ab aur time nahi milega.....part post karo warna main yahan bomb blast kar doongi !!!! 😆 😆

chill vandana...IF..pe sab pareshan hojayenge...so blast mat karo...m post kar rahee hoon...

Originally posted by: Honii
di jaldi post karro na...can''t wait more...
heheheh warna vandu blast karne walli hai...

m postng hana..as i gt scared 2 na...😉..blast hua tu...hehe...😆😆

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Imaan-Ki-Duaa

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Posted: 18 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: togepe30
uh-oh is that shayan.......im sure it is......arey yaar, why be soo scared of him.....she should not even listen to him i say, usse ignore maro.....wo kya kar lega....huh!!!!....hehehehe!!!
nice part!!!

continue soon......u write really well!!!

luv,
vandu

thnx 4 appreciatng...n likng da part dear...😊

Originally posted by: captain_kia
gr8 part i m happy that mianal and sadaf bcame friends and sadaf is just to good she always talk abt umair so i m also very eager to meet him plz make his entry soon and jahan tak baat use insaan ki hai jise dekh kar mianal k hosh ud gaye to i think it is none other than shyan bcoz lahore mein sirf ek wohi hai jise mianal jaanti hai aur darti bhi hai but i wish shyan k saath aaima na ho nahin to bechari mianal to toot jayegi anyways keep continuing waiting for the suspense to b dis closed

thnx 4 likng dear...i will surely bring umair soon..so u can meet him up...n abt ur guess...read nxt part..n gt 2 knw...😊

Originally posted by: Honii
di wesome part loved it tooo tooo toooo goooood masth...omg manial itni daarti hai shayan se aur woh mr shayan eehhsh karreh lekin manial ko kuch naa karne deh thats not fair...i'm 100 % sure woh zarur shayan hoga lets wait for the next part tooo goood continue sooon

thnx hana 4 likng it...😊

Originally posted by: liquidfantasy
wow..amazing part guriya...
thankgod manial has a frnd like sadaf...
aur yeh shayan khud to ice-cream ka sakta hai...lekin agar manial wahan aa jaye to use gussa karega.. ...very bad...

hey guriya plz put a romantic baarish scene....

thnx dear 4 likng..n i will try 2 implement ur request...bt stry doesn't allow now..bt will surely try...😊

Originally posted by: ImPrEsSiVe_Grl
hey guriya gr8 part... This shayan na showing too much attitude to manial and..poor manial...cant say anthing to him...and sadaf is so sweet. .. loved the way she talked to manial and always saying umair ye umair wo blah blah..and I guess tht person would be shayan ..kyun ke sirf shayan se hi itna derti hain jaise shayan na koi magarmuch ho.. jo use kha jaye ga ....cont soon dear ..cant wait for the next part..

thnx 4 likng dear...n ur sayng shayan a magarmuch..rajeev will nt lik it..or will he..lol...😆

Originally posted by: Paru_M
i bet its shayan manial is in big trouble now anywayz amazing part guriya i hope aaima is not with him otherwise manial is gonna get heart broken cont soon can't wait to know what's gonna happen next

thnx paru 4 likng it...😊

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Imaan-Ki-Duaa

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Part - 18

Recap: manial n sadaf are now v good frnds...sadaf insits manial as its free time so we go out 2 eat...n there she saw someone n gt shock...

now story further....

after lt of sadaf's insistng..they both enterd in da parlor..n sat on da near by table...after orderng ...were havng small chit chat when..manial jus looked up....n was shock 2 see the person sittng...on da table at da corner...near da other window...she was abt 2 look down..as da person didn't saw her yt...n she was abt 2 tell sadaf...2 leave..when...da person look up 2 call da waiter....n his eyes..made a contact wid manial...n he was also shock 2 see her there....manial froze..as she saw da perosn gt 2 knw...shez here....n strted shaking...sadaf saw tht shez shakng badly....n lookng at some place...she aksed her..bt she was nt replyng..then she move arnd...n saw where she was lookng....n.....she saw shayan there....sadaf stood up n went ahead...manial was shock as why sadaf is movng in shayan's direction...on da other hand..even shayan saw sadaf comng 2ward her...frst he was shock 2 see her wid manial....n now as she was comng 2ward him...n b4 he could do anythng...she came..

Sa:hi shayan bhai..app or yahan?

S:hi sadaf...hru?mein bus aisey he..musam acha tha tu...

Sa:oh..ok..m fine...app sunaye...aur app k saath yeh??

jus then a lady wid her stood up....n its none other than aaima...

S:yeh..meri frnd...aurw oh tumharey saath kon hai(as he was eager 2 knw..wht manial was doing wid sadaf...he asked)

Sa:arey woh..mein tu bhol he gayi..intro karwana..abhi ayee...

n she came 2 manial...

Sa:chal manial tumhein kisi se milwati hoon...

M(confused):chor na sadaf rehne de..mein kya karoon gi mil ke..chalte hain..mujhe dair ho rahee hai...

Sa:arey baba...5 min mein kuch dair nahee hoti...chal na..(n she drags..manial wid herself...n came 2 shayan n aaima...now both shayan n manial r face 2 face...manial 4 once looks up...then looks down...as shez scared now wht will happen..)

Sa:shayan bhai...yeh hain meri buhat pyari...aur sweer se friend manial...aur manial yeh hain..shayan bhai...umair k buhat achey frnd hain...

(both shayan n manial..didn't utter any word..n were jus quiet..sadaf broke da spell..)

Sa:arey bhaye...hi hello...tu kijye...app dono..come on manial...atleast say hi..

S(knew he had 2 spaek..as wht will sadaf thnk...n mst importantly aaima wld thnk...so he spoke):hello...nice 2 meet u(bittng evry word..)

manial still remained quite...so sadaf spoke again..

Sa:woh actually manial ko logon se zyada ghulna milna pasand nahee...n she doesn't speak out 2 strangers on frst meetng..s m sorry 4 tht..

S:its ok..sadaf ...koi baat nahe...hoti hai...aksar logon k adat...

manial..jus look up at him on this comment...

Sa:waisay app ne inka naam bataya nahe...anyway...(movng 2ward aaima)..was nice meetng u 2...

A(atlast spoke):same here sadaf...m aaima...

Sa:ok..nice name u hav...

A:thnx dear...

Sa:ur welcome...waisay hai tu personal sawal.....par shayan bhai tu bolongein nahee app he bata dein..waisey barey barasukh zarai(some v close ppl..i gt 2 knw)se mujhe kuch pata tu chala hai...app muhar(assurance)laga dein...k app...shayan bhai..k sirf frnd hain ya...(winkng..at shayan..he was confused...as he doesn't want this 2 be done infrnt of manial...bt now situation was lik...it has 2 be revealed)

A:acha..mujhe nahee pata tha..shayan..itna sharmila...kyun shayan..yeh kya keh rahee hai...anyway..tumharey jo bhi zaraye hain..woh ghalat nahee hain...

Sa:yani..khabar paki hai...ur his girlfriend..(on sadaf's wrd..manial looked up...gt shocked..frst saw aaima's glowng face...n then shayan...who was jus lookng down)

A:koi shak...(shayan's situation was lik any moment he will run frm there...as he knew..manail's eyes were on him....n manial was jus starng at aaima's face)

as shayan didn't won't situation 2 gt worst..so he spoke..

S:aaima..wer gtg late...i hav 2 go 4 sum wrk..so sadaf...it was nice meetng u...n ur frnd...see u later than..

Sa:ok then...bye...n hav a nice time u both..

A:was nice meetng u sadaf...will sure meet again..bye..n u 2 manial...(manial jus smiled..a forceful smile...sadaf hugged her n both shayan n aaima..left da place)

after they went...sadaf spoke..

Sa:ye kia batamezi thi manial...tum ne sahee se baat bhi nahee k unse..problem kya huwa...tum aise tu na thi..

M:plz sadaf is waqt mein kisi se baat k mood mein nahee hoon...so plz..mujhe college drop kardo...tu behtar hoga..

Sa:par...acha usey choro..ice cream tu..kha lein hum..

M:plz sadaf...tum nahe ana chahte...mein akele chali jaongi...(n she went out of parlor...n sadaf ran after her mumbling..wht ahppen 2 her now..)

Sa(gt hold of manail's hand..n grabbed her 2war her car..n made her sit..n drove 2ward college...all da drive back was quite n both didn't utter a wrd...sadaf wanted 2 ask..bt saw manial was in a bad mood so she thought..she will talk any other day abt it...they reached college...n widout sayng anythng 2 sadaf...nor she bid her goodbye...she jus opened da door n wnet out..sadaf gt shocked..as she saw 4 da frst time...in last few weeks manial behavng lik tht...manial whom she neva saw in anger..she always was wid a smile...now she was lookng so different..she let a sigh..n went 2ward her home...)

It was now raining heavily..n manial was standng under a shade..waitng 4 shayan 2 come n pick her up...after waitng for 15 mins...she saw his car...n he stopped da car infront of him...n she went ahead n gt seated...da drive 2 shayn's apartment was quite...which was unusual 4 both...as both were thnkng one will say sumthng...bt no one spoke...they reached...manial went directly 2 her room n shayan was out..watchng tv...she gt changed..n remain indside..

It was now...night time...manial was thnkng h 2 go out..she didn't hav courage..bt had 2 go...as she knw...she had 2 serve dinner...so wid lt of courage she stood n came out...went into kitchen...warmed da food..n came out wid it...as shayan was't comng in...so she went 2ward da lounge...n saw his head was lyng on da sofa...eyes closed ...she kept da thngs on near by table...now was confused h 2 wake him up...managed courage...n went ahead...b4 she cld touch him..he opened his eyes...feelng someone arnd him...n when he looked up..saw manial infront...

S:tum yahan..koi kaam tha..

M:woh main khana layee the...par app..so rahe the..tu mein..

S:thek hai..mein ab jag gaya hoon...aur thnx ayenda is zehmat ki zarorat nahee mujhe bhook lage tu khud le liya karonga...

M:ji..mein tu bas..ainda dehan rakhoongi...(n she was abt 2 leave...n jus turned when..)

S:tum ne kha liya..

M:nahee woh mein...khaney walee the..

S:yahein beth jao...

they both quietly had dinner...n after finishng she was takng thngs back...when he called..

S:suno...

M:ji..

S:mainey tumhein mana kiya tha na...kisi se dosti nahee karni..phir ajj tum sadaf ke saath..haan..

M:ji..app ne kaha tha..par..

S(now in full anger):par kya haan...mainey agar kisi cheez

se mana kiya tha..tu kuch soch kar..kuch jaan kar kiya..tha...kuch maloom bhi hai..tumhein...aur dosti bhi k tu ik sadaf he mili tumhein...purey college mein..bolo..

M(verge of cryng):mainey jaan bojh kar nahee..woh usney buhat zor diya..aur maan nahee rahe thi..tu mein kya karte...

S:huh...maan nahee rahee the...khush hogaye ab...dosti karke..aur dosti k tu ki..awara gardiyan bhi shuru hogaye...college se bahir kyun gayee..bolo..

M:woh sadaf ne..

S:haar baat mein sadaf..yeh woh..tum bachi ho..ik dafa k baat samjh nahee ati...hazar baar samjha chuka hoon...par tum na...

M:ghlati hogaye..ainda mein..

S:bas ik he lafz ata hai..ghalti hogaye..ainda nahee..karoongi...blah blah...bas karo..yeh sab tamasha..ne khud ka bano..na he mera..samjhein..

M(now strted cryng..):akhir mera kasoor kya hai..app mujhe bat dein ajj...app agar yahee chatein hain k mein kisi ko miloon na...kisi se baat na karoon tu bhej dein na wapis mujhe...mein aur bardasht nahee kar sakte...buhat howa...theek hai app dil se mujhe biwi nahee mante..par is sach ko bhi nahee jhutlayee k mera app ka ik rishta hai...usi nate...baksh(leave me..have pity on me)dei mujhe...thakney..lagein hoon mein..bas..ab aur nahee(fell on floor n cried her heart out)

S:tumhein kya lagta hai...mein tumhein yahan rakh kar bara khush hoon..sirf baba se kiya hua wada nibha raha hoon..warna ik sec bhi tumhien yahan na rehne deta..aur tum kya bardasht kar rahee ho..bardasht tu mein kar raha hoon..tumhari wajah se..apne pyar se ab khul k mil bhi nahee pata..usey jhoot bolna shuru kardiya hai mainey..jis se kabhi kuch chupaya na tha..us se chupata phir raha hoon..apni is shadi ka raaz...safar tum nahee mein kar raha hoon smajhe..mein...(n storms out of da house..sayng this)

manial is left alone...n cryng still in smae position...remembrng his each n evry word..his sayng..he loves..sumone else..n he jus kept her here..on insistance frm his father...she was cryng bitterly..n tears were flowng frm her eyes..non stop....

a song in background was being played...

mujhe khabar thi
vo mera nahin paraya tha(remembrng when he said abt his love..tht hez on verge of loosng it..cause of her)
mujhe khabar thi
vo mera nahin paraya tha(thnkng of moment went..aaima..in parlour..said shez her gf)
haan dharkano ne usse ko khuda banaya tha(remembrng moments when she praised him...his personality..his attitude when she used 2 thnk of him....in her lonliness...n was now strtng 2 love him...bt)
mujhe khabar thi
vo mera nahin paraya tha

main khwab khwab jise dhoondta phira barso
main khwab khwab jise dhoondta phira barso(thnkng she thought of him as his saviour when he married her..she thought of him as her dream man)
vo ashq ashq meri ankhon mein samaya tha
vo ashq ashq meri ankhon mein samaya tha(a tear drops frm her eyes..thnkng of there frst meetng...she remembered his smile....)
haan dharkano ne usse ko khuda banaya tha(n now remembrng his anger...)
mujhe khabar thi vo mera nahin paraya thaaaaa

tera kasoor nahin jaan meri tanhaiyeeee
tera kasoor nahin jaan meri tanhaiyeeee
tera kasoor nahin jaan meri tanhaiyeeee(looks up n sees no one there now with her...its seems 2 her now..evryone lefther alone...2 live in this world..no one was 2 support her anymore)
ye rog maine hi khud jaan ko lagaya tha
ye rog maine hi khud jaan ko lagaya tha(thnkng...she was only cause of this situation as she would hav neva born..such thng wld hav neva happen..all tngs in her life...was cause of her own..mere existance)
haan dharkano ne usse ko khuda banya tha
mujhe khabar thivo mera nahin paraya tha

tamaam shehar main ek vo hain ajnabi mujhse(stood up..n was now standng by a window...thnkng of wht happen jus few mins back...n da way he went out...leavng her in same position..nt carng 4 her)
tamaam shehar main ek vo hain ajnabi mujhse
ke jis ne geet mera sheher ko sunaya tha
ke jis ne geet mera sheher ko sunayaaa tha(thnkng he only agreed 2 marry her...she neva said him or forced him....)
haan dharkano ne use ko khuda banaya tha
mujhe khabar thi vo mera nahin paraya tha
mujhe khabar thi vo mera nahin paraya tha
haaaahaaaaaan hmmmmm haan haan hmmmmm hmmm......

lst in her thoughts she lied down on bed..n went 2 sleep....

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ok guyz this was next part...of da ff...hop u all will like it...do comment n tell me..h it is...i will be waitng 4 ur response...

nxt part:manial again goes out wid sadaf...

wht will be now shayan's reaction...he was angry on frst instance...now wht he wld do abt second attempt of her....2 knw all tht...

keep readng...

till nxt time...tc...njoy life

wid luv...

guriya.......😊

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Hana

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Posted: 18 years ago

#170

wow di awesome part toooo toooo goooood loved it awesome...and damn sad...yeh shayan apneh app koh samajta kya hai..khud awara gard karrreg aur jab manial apni dost keh saath icecream keh liyeh chali bi gaii toh ussseh burra laggga...and now usne manial ka itna dil dukhaiya bharra khudgarz insan hai shayan i hope manial ussseh badal deh... 😊 gr88 part fantastic continue sooon 👏 👏 👏

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