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Posted: 18 years ago

thnx...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Paru_M

that was a really good part 👏 now they have a chance to come closer 😉 😛 wonder what'll happen if aaima finds out gr8 job guriya cont 😃 soon

thnx a lt 4 likng it dear...even i wonder da same wht will happen when she will gt 2 knw....so 2 knw tht..keep reading...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: captain_kia

nice update hope shyan can understand mainal and give her all she deserves 😊 . she is sweet and really masoom. 👏

thnx 4 likng it...n even i hop he does tht..bt wht he does u will gt 2 knw soon...n shez v sweet so hope he gts fida on her sweetness only...😊

Edited by **-**Guriya**-* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i simply love ur fic dear...!!
gr8 work!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: liquidfantasy1

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i simply love ur fic dear...!!
gr8 work!

thnx a lt dear 4 likng it....😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

Part - 15

The nxt day Shayan's dad leaves 4 his home after getting manial admitted....Now manial is at shayan's place...bt they still didn't had any conversation wid each other...while manial was inside...n shayan was watchng sumthng on tv....we see manial comng out of da room...in a beautiful white shalwar kameez...she has jus taken a bath so is lookng fresh...n da innocence n sweetness on her face is clearly seen...her hair are wet so they are open on her back...and her duppata is on her shoulders....she is in her own world..n didn't relaize..shayan was out in launch watchng tv...she was gng 2ward kitchen....abt 2 cross when shayan...who jus stood up 2 gt water 4 himself...both bump into each other on da way...n shayan...jus stares at her...as she was lookng so cute..like an angel..pure...in tht white dress...as he just gt lost in her beauty..n his eyes were monitoring her features....he looked 2ward her face...was abt 2 gt lost in her pink cheeks...when he gt a glimpse of her open hair...n was so shocked...(as manial always wears duppata on her head..he has neva seen her hair..whch are in real v lng..n beautiful)...he jus was mesmerized by her beauty now her hair were making him more mad...manial on da other hand was nt able 2 move..as she knew..he was lookng v intensly 2ward her...she was blushng lik anythng..n her head was bowed down..as she was nt bale 2 face him....n wid evry passng moment he was gtg lst...she was blushng more n more....
bt da trance has 2 be ct down..n so it was...by da noise of da goal...(as shayan was watchng football match on tv)...da team scored a goal n so was now shouts hearable...n tht broke the trance b/w both...n frst shayan realized wht he was doing..n suddenly went 2 his place....
leaving manial all alone...n in thoughts..she 4 a min....thought of wht jus now happened..n then wid shruggng all thoughts behind..went 2ward da kitchen..placing now her duppata on head...as she still remembered shayan..lookng very keenly 2ward her hair....she still ws out of breath...n her heart was thumping at just the thought of shayan's eyes..on her...
meanwhile on the other side...shayan..was blabering 2 himself...n was cursing himself 2 be so dumbfound...n 4 letting himself lst in some grls beauty lik tht..
S(himself):come on shayan..tujhe kya hogaya hai...aisey bhi koi hoor pari nahee the woh k tu bas bewakoofon k tarah dekhta he ja raha tha..aaima tu us k muqable mein kitni haseen ahi aur tu....sharam ani chahye tujhe aisa soochte hui...(his heart again)par us ke baal..kitne lambe aur haseen the..(his mind)shayan tu..hosh k dawa le...us larki se tujhe dur rehna hai...kuch nahee hai woh teri..bas thorey arsey k baat hai...maat behak in batoon mein....maat...
n these last words he said out loud..nt knowng he was doing tht...
S:haan bilkul sahee...mujhe koi lena dena nahee us se..tu mein kyun soochon us k barey mein..apna kaam karegi...
as he said tht..manial was gng 2 her room...n she heard him speak..as no one was accept both of them in da house she thought..he spoke 2 her...
M:ji app ne mujh se kuch kaha..??
S(realized tht by mistake he had raised his voice n she heard tht...bt nt want 2 show her tht..he care 4 her or sumthng else): nahee mainey kya kehna hai...aur tumhein aisa kyun laga k mein tumhein kuch keh raha hoon haan..
M:nahee woh is waqt hum dono k ilawa koi aur yahan hai bhi nahee tu..mujhe laga shayad app mujh se..khair...app ne nahee k hogi..mujhe dhoka huwa hoga...mein andar jate hoon..
S:dhoka howa hoga kya..howa hai....aur mujhe bar bar bataney k zaroorat nahee tum kya kar rahe ho...samjhe..jo marzi aye karo par mera demagh maat chato...(don't eat my brain)
M:ji woh mein tu bas...ghatli ho gaye ainda nahee karongi(she was scared by his behaviour..she neva thought he would behave in such a way..she knew...tht sumthng was wrong..n gt hint also tht he was nt so happy of this marriage b/w them...even she told shayan's dad 2 take her wid him..as she doesn't want 2 study further...knowng he wold nt bear her..as she saw his reaction on there sudden appearance tht day at his door step...bt still he didn't agree n went..n she was here..bt was scared frm tht moment only..n now when he spoke after such a lng time...he had nt said a word 2 her since she came...or since they gt married 2 be exact....she gt more scared)
she was abt 2 move ..when..he called back..
S:aur haan suno..kal se tum college join kar rahee ho...mein tumhari koi responsibility nahee lena chahta tha..par baba k majboor karne par leni pari...so kal se tum college se merey saath aoo gi aur saath he jaogi..samjhe ..
M(still scared):ji..
S:aur college sirf parhney k liye behja ja raha hai tumhein...so kisi se..dosti waghira barhaney k koi zaroorat nahee hai tumhein...wahan pe sab mujhe jante hain..aur mein nahee chahta k koi yeh janey k tum..meri..kya..yah merey tumharay beech koi rishta hai...samjh gayee na tum..
M:ji..mein kisi ko kuch nahee kahongi..
S:hmm...theek hai..ab jao bhi...kya poora din merey sir pe...sawar rehne ka irada hai kya...
M:nahee woh mein..
n she left hurriedly 2ward her room....
on da other hand..shayan was so...irritated frm her tht..he jus switched off the tv..n jus throwed away da remote..n left da house wid a bang...
manial in da room..when heard he left wid da bang...let a relief of sigh..she was really scared frm him..n his temper..she saw tht b4 also...when he was talkng to his father tht day..n b4 tht also..when they were nt married..n he came 2 his house..n left in anger after an argument...takng all his temper on her...
M(herself):pata nahee...inko itna gussa kyun ata hai..halanke(however)jab yeh gussey mein nahee hote tu kitnay sweet lagte hain..par gussey mein...nahee ab aisa bhi nahe...gussay mein haan thoray aur khobsurat lagte hain..par phir bhi..mujhe bara khauf ata hain inke gussey se...agha g se tu behtar he hain..unka gussa tu jaan nikalta tha...inka bhi kaam nahee meri jaan jalata..ab ik aur hukum..dost maat bano..khair mujhe kia..bas yahan rehna hai...dosti waghira ka mujhe bhi koi shok nahee...batoon se tu lagta hai..mausuf k bari toor(is a v famous person)hai college mein...dekhna pare ga...waisey honi bhi chahye...kya kami hai un mein...bas haan ik baat pata chal jaye..k woh aise kyun hain merey saath...jabke humare darmiyaan tu rishta he dusra hai...aliha tu bari tareef karti thi..bhai ye bhai woh..hai..sweet hai..lovng hai..kahe k sweet aur lovng...merey saath tu...kaat khaney ko dorte hain..par ajj jab...us waqt..unhoon ne...yeh kya soch rahee hai manial tu bhi na bas...pagal hai..
n sayng tht..she hit herslef lightly on head...
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ok guyz this was da nxt part..hop u all hav liked it...do comments plz..n tell me h it was....i will be waitng eagrly...
nxt part:manial's frst day in college...n a new friend.....will this entry of a new friend..change manial's life 4 ever...wht will happen when shayan will get 2 knw abt manial's frnd...or he will gt 2 knw...
2 knw answers of all these..keep reading....till next time...
do take care u all..
wid luv...
guriya....😊
Edited by **-**Guriya**-* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
amazing part dear....the part rockd....so finally shayan felt something for manial...good... 👏 he shud feel more and that too soon...may be wen she has made a male frnd...wow.. 👏

but that was very rude of shayan to talk to manial like that....it was his own fault that he was lost in her beauty.... 😭 😭

update soon dear...
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow guri di gr888 parts loved them just tooo goooood abbhbh yeh shayan hero jeee bohot bhaooo khaa rahe hai ...aur hukum bi chala rahe hai this guys is getting on my nerve..i reallly like manial's character sweeet and innocent she reminds me of prachi in kayamath...tooo gooood continue soooon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
lovely part she is really an angel 😛 😳 par shayan ise kitna gussa aata hai 😡 bechari mianal ko dara diya 🤢
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: liquidfantasy

amazing part dear....the part rockd....so finally shayan felt something for manial...good... 👏 he shud feel more and that too soon...may be wen she has made a male frnd...wow.. 👏

but that was very rude of shayan to talk to manial like that....it was his own fault that he was lost in her beauty.... 😭 😭

update soon dear...

thnx 4 likng da part...even i hope tht he feels sumthng 4 her...n abt manial's frnd...who it is...u will gt 2 knw soon...even i felt bad..da way he talked 2 her...bt...he can't even be nice...as he's nt happy wid her na...will update soon...😊

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