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Posted: 18 years ago
hey sweetie...just love ur fic...

i love the way u hv put rajeev n amna in d characters of shayan n manial...i love it...

do cont soon..
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

hey nice ff yaar.....just read the whole ff now......well 1 request , can u write in english, i mean ye tumhari language jo hai , is it urdu(i dunno ye kaunsi language hai 😕 ) ya jo bhi 😆 .....bahut time lagta hai padhne me n samajhne me 😳 .....hehehehe 😆 .....well its ok if u write like this also waise, shayad problem isiliye hui hogi coz itne sare parts saath me padhe......1 part at a time will be fine......hmm so its ok i guess.....oh god, look at me , i've gone mad 😆 😆 😆

anyways, awesome ff.......really loving it......jaldi se continue ok??

waiting 4 the next part eagerly!!!!

luv,
vandu 😉

thnx 4 da sweet comment dear....n likng my ff...i will try frm now 2 write mst of it in english 4 u...n where possible will try 2 tell meaning whch i thnk would be nt understandable or sumthng lik tht..yah its in urdu...

if still u find some wrd or line difficult 2 understand...u can ask me...😊..

n i will cont soon...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: liquidfantasy

hey sweetie...just love ur fic...

i love the way u hv put rajeev n amna in d characters of shayan n manial...i love it...

do cont soon..

thnx dear 4 likng da charachters...n m continuing it in a shrt while...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
Part - 17

Recap: shayan drops manial 2 college...she gts lost as shez new there...n sadaf comes 2 help her...n extends hand of frndship...
now story further....
Sa:is mein thnx k kya baat...after all wht r frnds 4...rite..so we r frnds...(she held her hand out 2 manial)
Manial smiles fade away...as she remembers shayan's word...sadaf gt confused as manial was nt extendng her hand....
Manial(thnking):harj he kia hai..agar mein haan keh doon tu...shayan ko kaisay pata chaleyga..aur phir mein yahan naye hoon..mujhe theek se kuch pata bhi nahee hai..sadaf..se dosti karloongi tu mera he fayda hai..aur mujhe nahee lagta woh shayan ko janti hogi...kyunke yeh bhi naye hai...tu masla he nahee hoga..mein kar he lete hoon dosti...
On the other hand sadaf was gtg confused tht y was manial taking do mch time....at last she becomes happy when she saw manial accepted her hand...n..said
M:frnds...
Sa:oh thts gr8...tu phir chalo...ab class mein bhi thora he waqt baki hai..mein tumhein...class tak le ke chalti hoon...then..after class i will show u around da college...theek hai?
Manial jus smiles...n nods in yes...n then both went 2 attend da class....
Its been now a week since..manial strted gng 2 college...she n sadaf were now good frnds...n wid sadaf she felt v nice..as all da other time she was alone...shayan..neva bothered 2 ask...or sit n talk wid her...she jus used 2 be mst of time in house...in her room...studyng...or when shayan wld nt be at home...watchng tv....she still was scared of him...as he was still tht same..shayan...nt a slightest change happened in his behaviour...in da past week...so she was happy wid her life in college wid sadaf...she neva made..any other frnds except her...as she found jus sadaf 2 be trust worthy...n she neva needded anyone...life moves on..n so it was...n wid each passng day...their frndship grew...da bond was gtg more n more stronger...n da credit soley goes 2 sadaf..as she was v patient wid manial...manial being a good listner...jus listens 2 wht she says...n sadaf gt tht...she was nt much into talkng..so she used 2 talk on behalf of manial 2....manial gt 2 knw one thng abt sadaf in these past days...tht umair was someone...v close 2 him...as she always used 2 mention him..in her talk....
today as usual...shayan dropped manial on da gate n went ahead...now manial gt used 2 it...as it was no use of hittng ur head...on a stone...whch was shayan accordng 2 him...she entered inside...n saw..sadaf pacing in da college ground..here n there...manial went 2ward her..n atpped on her back..
M:khariat...tum pagloon k tarah idhar se udhar...kyun ghum rahee ho...koi problem hai??
Sa(after seeing its manial...held a sigh of relief):oh thank god tu hai..kabse tera he wait kar rahee thi..shukar hai tu agaye..
M:kyun..kia howa..koi khas kaam hai mujh se...
Sa:haan na yaar..woh literature ka assignment mujh se nahee ho raha tha...buhat koshish k..magar nahee huwa...tuney kia??
M:haan kal he complete kar lia tha..
Sa:wow yaar tu te gr8 hai..genious yaar...mera tu demagh pak gaya tha...de na plz..mein bhi complete karloon warna tu us kharoos teacher ko janti hai..paka mujhe katal kar daley gi ajj...
M:is pe poochney k kia baat hai le...aur kar le...
Sa:oh thanks...luv u dear..ur da sweetest...(n both sit on bench..sadaf strts 2 write frm manial's note)
M:acha ab maska lagana band kar.aur kaam jaldi se complete kar le..
Sa:haan yaar..kar he rahe hoon..us kahroos umair ko tu na...dil karta hai...jotoon se maroon...
M:kyun ab us becharey ney kya kiya??
Sa:woh aur becharey..plz..mano...(sadaf loves 2 call her..nick name...sort of by her)...reham khao becharoon par...kal mein...yeh assignment k chakar mein pareshan thi..agar thora waqt aur lagati tu shayad complete kar he lete..par umair k wajah se sab...
M:us ki wajah se matlab??
Sa:adhamka na(came)..ghar par..atey he sedha merey kamrey mein aya..aur chilanaey lag para..chalo abhi chalo..buhat important kaam hai..
M:phir..hoga na imp kaam tabhi tu..
Sa:arey koi important kaam nahee tha..tum nahee janti usko..mama ne bola tha usey..m busy...par woh mujhe chain se kahan bethney de sakta tha...ik number ka maisna(cunning)hai woh...mujhe bhi laga shayad koi khas baat hai..magar..huh
M:magar kya..
Sa:kuch nahee janab apni bike dekhaney leke gaye...ke i did this in tht...latest yeh kiya abhi is mein..n all...mujhe tu kuch paley nahe para...waisey he lage..jaisey humesha lagte hai..
M:kaise lagte hai...achi hoge na..
Sa:achi..phatechar...phatpati hai..uske pass....aur khala(aunti) ke hisab se tu...bekar rupyee ka zayan(waste of money)ho raha hai us par...par umair ko kon samjhaye..uskey liye tu bike se bhar kar kuch nahee...bike na hui..mui girlfriend hogaye..
Manial strted laughng on sadaf's last line...n da way she said tht..
M:tum bhi na sadaf...mujhe tumhari samjh nahe ati hai..kabhi tu umair k dheron tarifoon karte ho..non stop koi tumhein bolney ko kahe...tab bhi chup na ho...aur kabhi tu...bas...buaraye pe shuru hoti ho tu....tu becharey ka kema he bana deti ho...
Sa:awain yaar..suey tang karney mein maza ata hai..bas..aisey he..
M:waisey pata hai.mujhe bara..ishtiaq(eagerness) hai umair se milnay ka..dekhoon tu..kaisa lagte hai..yeh apke..mr umair..jin k batein kar ke...pura din merasar khati rehti hain app..janab...
Sa:ajj tu..shayad woh college aya nahee hai...phir kisi din zaroor milwaoon gi..us sey..even hez v eager 2 meet u..
M:acha..par woh kyun??
Sa:mainey us sey buhat tarif k hai tumhari na tu..is liye...us sey kia...merey ghar mein..mama..baba...bhai...sab he tum se milna chahte hai..coz..tumhari itni batein karte hoon mein unse..baba..ne tu kaha hai..k zaroor laoon tumhein kisi din ghar...
M:nahee sadaf u knw na..mein kahein ati jati nahe..aur phir mainey tumhein apni family ka bataya na...hum logon mein..larkyion ka..is tarah parhna he..is nt...acceptable...mujhe collge mein admission leney k permission bhi buhat mushkiloon se mili hai....aur waisey bhi i live in hostel so...kisi ko pata laga..ghar mein k mein...nahee plz...(manial...cldn't tell sadaf abt shayan n her marriage..so she tld a lie..tht she lives in hostel n her family is v strict n al...thts y ...she was hesistatng in makng frnds....apart of whch was true..bt nt all...as u knw)
Sa:acha baba..itna ghabra maat(sadaf closed da notes..n gav back 2 her...as she completed)tu tu aisey react kar rahe hai..jaisey mein abhi tujhe le uroongi...don worry..jab tak tu khud nahee jana chahgi..i won't...chal ab class ka time hogaya...chalte hain..
n both gt up...n went 4 da class...after da class...as da weather frm morning was v pleasent n cloudy....when they both came out...saw it was raining...both went ahead...n stood under da shade...n were enjoyng it....at tht time..they gt da news..tht da next class was cancelled...as teacher had sum urgent work...
Sa:hurray..ab ayega barish ka maza....kyun..
Manial jus smiled...n was enjoyng da water...n its effects on her hand...
Sa:mujhe tu buhat bhook lagi hai...chal yaar...kahein baheir chal k kuch khate hai..
M:bahir...??nahee sadaf...choro..college ki cnateen mein..ache..samosey milte hain...barish mein kahaney ka maza ayega...wahe khate hain..
Sa:no ways yaar..m bored of..this..yeh sari hui canteen mein kha k..mein barish k maza kirkira nahee karna chate hoon...
M:par sadaf mein...
Sa:plz yaar...is barish mein tu ice cream khaney ka maza he aur hoga..chal na..chalte hain..kha k ajayenge..mein time pe tujhe hostel drop kar doongi...don worry...chal na..yaar..
M(no gt tensed..wht if shayn gt 2 knw...n she didn't came back on time):nahee sadaf..chor na..agar kisi ko merey ghar mein pata lag gaya na..tu...
Sa:kaisey pata lagey ga..yaar..hum koi elaan karke..thori ja rahe hain...aur..koi nahee janega..hum yun gaye.aur yun ajayenge..merey pass..gari hain na...don worry...
M(still confused):par..
Sa:no par war..we r gng..thts it..
n she took manial wid her...n headed 2wards her car...n both sat n drove ahead...n then after havng a nice drive in rain...which manial really enjoyed..as she neva saw...da place till now...n now she was seeing..it...they reached da icecream parlor...
Sa:yeh lo janab hum pohanch..gaye...chalo..utro..
M:nahee sadaf...mujhe lagta hai..tum leke ajao...mein..yaheen wait karte hoon..
Sa:come on mano...don be a bore yaar...chal na..maza ayega...kuch nahee hoga...abhi bhi we hav lt of time...mein chor doongi..tujhe...a chal..no behas ok...
n after lt of sadaf's insistng..they both enterd in da parlor..n sat on da near by table...after orderng ...were havng small chit chat when..manial jus looked up....n was shock 2 see the person sittng...on da table at da corner...near da other window...she was abt 2 look down..as da person didn't saw her yt...n she was abt 2 tell sadaf...2 leave..when...da person look up 2 call da waiter....n his eyes..made a contact wid manial...n he was also shock 2 see her there....manial froze..as she saw da perosn gt 2 knw...shez here....n strted shaking...sadaf saw tht shez shakng badly....n lookng at some place...she aksed her..bt she was nt replyng..then she move arnd...n saw where she was lookng....n.....
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so guyz this was da another part....hope u all wil like it...n do comment...n tell me h it was...i will be eagerly waitng 4 ur comments...
nxt part:who was da person???....tht manial gt so tensed after seeeing him....
2 knw tht keep readng....
till nxt time...tc..njoy...
wid luv...
guriya...😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
uh-oh is that shayan.......im sure it is......arey yaar, why be soo scared of him.....she should not even listen to him i say, usse ignore maro.....wo kya kar lega....huh!!!!....hehehehe!!!

nice part!!! 👏

continue soon......u write really well!!!

luv,
vandu 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 part 👏 👏 👏 i m happy that mianal and sadaf bcame friends 😛 and sadaf is just to good she always talk abt umair 😉 so i m also very eager to meet 😉 him plz make his entry soon and jahan tak baat use insaan ki hai jise dekh kar mianal k hosh ud gaye 😕 to i think it is none other than shyan bcoz lahore mein sirf ek wohi hai jise mianal jaanti hai aur darti bhi hai but i wish shyan k saath aaima 🤢 na ho 😡 nahin to bechari mianal to toot jayegi 😭 anyways keep continuing waiting for the suspense to b dis closed 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
di wesome part loved it tooo tooo toooo goooood masth...omg manial itni daarti hai shayan se aur woh mr shayan eehhsh karreh lekin manial ko kuch naa karne deh thats not fair...i'm 100 % sure woh zarur shayan hoga lets wait for the next part tooo goood continue sooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow..amazing part guriya... 👏
thankgod manial has a frnd like sadaf...

aur yeh shayan khud to ice-cream ka sakta hai...lekin agar manial wahan aa jaye to use gussa karega.. 😡 😡 ...very bad...

hey guriya plz put a romantic baarish scene....
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey guriya gr8 part... 👏 👏 👏This shayan na showing too much attitude to manial 😡 and..poor manial...cant say anthing to him...and sadaf is so sweet. 😛.. loved the way she talked to manial and always saying umair ye umair wo blah blah..and I guess tht person would be shayan ..kyun ke sirf shayan se hi itna derti hain jaise shayan na koi magarmuch ho.. jo use kha jaye ga😆 😆 ....cont soon dear ..cant wait for the next part..
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Posted: 18 years ago
i bet its shayan manial is in big trouble now anywayz amazing part guriya 👏i hope aaima is not with him otherwise manial is gonna get heart broken 💔 🥺 🥺 cont soon can't wait to know what's gonna happen next 😊

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