Rajveer Naina Come...Fall in Love 2nd CHAP UPDATED - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: tr_eta

Awesome update.,loved rajveer-naina moments & fb of navin with raj and naina resp continue soon plz


Thank you so much..
I am glad that you liked the way I constructed Point 1857 plot..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Avinanda120

Haii dear new story? Wow its great. I am really excited . its your second story right?
Not really new.. purane mein naya tadka😛😆 Yaa... it's my second story.. jiske baare mein actually maine kabhi nahin socha tha..😆😆

Just too good to comment. I am very happy . keep it up dear .let's see what's next in your mind. Thanks for the pm.
Thank you so much😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: lovern

Hiii Mrumi
A big wala hello..😊

I m waiting for you with this new story. 😊

Yes you are absolutely right dear. POINT 1857 is the most romantic place in this whole world for us. And u r writing a whole new story on that it was great opportunity for us. i m glad that i m successful to register on IF. 😊😊
I am glad too that you are on IF... Point 1857 is something different for me.. I can never describe it in words actually..😳

Awesome cover page as ever dear. 👏👏👏
Thank you..😊 waise yeh SLNE ke chapter ka hi hain.. naya banane ke liye time hi nahin mila..😔

Wish u the same dear Happy 9th anniversary of POINT 1857. 😊😊
I hope we will together celebrate many more LRL's anniversaries..😊

Lots of hugs & lots of love dear. 🤗🤗
Love you too dear..🤗


Keep writing & god bless u dear
Stay blessed😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Thank you..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: saalfi

superrrbbb...point 1857...very nice..


Thank you..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: saiaarti

Well... Once again a very wonderful story...

And that too it's about point 1857, is like cherry on the cake...
Really point 1857 is very special for all lrl fans... We really lived those moments with Raj and Naina...
It was one of the best moments of the show...
Indeed.. Point 1857 and red saree scene are the best moments of LRL... Best romantic moments I have ever seen.. we are still living those moments..

And no day can be perfect then today to start a story on point 1857...
Well it's a treat for all lrl fans, so thank you soo much for this beautiful and amazing story...
Thank you so much..😊

It's true that whatever they showed in show related to point 1857, we have thoroughly enjoyed it and those moments became a very special part of our memories related to the show... But still I m sure most of the fans were not satisfied by those scenes... We all wanted more...
Not more but jitna shoot kia tha utna bhi dikha dete toh achha hota..😡

We all wanted Rajveer and Naina to express their emotions and feelings little more... Especially from Rajveer we expected that at least now he will break his silence and come out from his silence love zone... But it didn't happen...
Bahot kuch nahin hua show mein.. list badi lambi hain.. let it be😔

Also what they felt after red Saree scene or after coming from point 1857 we never came to know... What Rajveer was feeling when he was there on point 1857, what he was thinking about being there Wid Naina at that moment and what Niana felt about Rajveer there we never came to know...
True.. unhone ek bhi monologue nahin dikhaya.. ab yeh baat aur hain ke we enjoyed RN's silent staring sessions but iska matlab yeh nahin ke we didnt want to know ke unhe kya laga..

But now thanks to you, we are not only able to live those moments once again but also able to see so many other things, which we expected from the CVS to show...
Not only me.. but thanks to we all.. we writers and readers all.. who after 10 long years still remembered those moments and cherished them...😊
Your story is just fantastic...
You wrote just amazingly...
While reading this I was feeling nostalgic, remembering Rajveer and Naina and their moments related to point 1857.
I was literally able to imagine them and sure all of the readers were too...
So just wanna say thank you so so so much for writing about point 1857, in a way which we all the fans expected and wanted all the long... Just amazing...fantastic... Fabulous...
Thanks a lot for your all compliments.. I am glad that I am giving what you want to read and feel.. you can imagine while reading this is big compliment for me as a writer which encourages me to improve..😳


Update soon..
Will be waiting for the next part...
You are amazing Mrumi...
Stay blessed...
Love
Thank you so much dear.. stay blessed😊
Love and hugs🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: vssdp

Awesome update

So beautiful
Loved the way you depicted all thoughts and emotions of Raj and naina
Continue soon and thanks for the pm mrumi di


Thank you so much dear..😊
I am glad that you love it..
You are welcome..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Shona91

Amazing...

loved it...
continue soon...
Thanks for the pm...


Thank you so much..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: sridhsc

Mrumi,

There r no words for me say,but I say u have outdone it.
Agar mai kahu ke it was religiously penned and is simply SUPERB!
Mujhe laga it says it all, if u feel not then will add more synonyms to it.
Hats off.
Take care


Thank you so much..😊
No there is no need to add something.. I completely understand what you said and believe me it is a big compliment for me.. feeling touched.. thank you..😳
stay blessed..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50

Thank you..😊

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