Rajveer Naina Come...Fall in Love 2nd CHAP UPDATED - Page 6

Originally posted by: Ayushi2608

Superb beautiful update n the way u hv described the feeling of raj n naina was awesome

Point 1857 was one of the best scene in lrl which we enjoyed seeing n the scene is still fresh in our mind

Originally posted by: lovern

Hiii Mrumi

First of all m very sorry dear for late comment. 😔 But main kal bahot hi busy thi.

No problem dear..😊

Awesome Outstanding aur kya kahu words hi nahi hai yaar mere pass. 👏 👏 Kya update tha yaar Raj & Naina ke Naveen ke saath ke flach backs superb dear too good the bonding of three of them with each other is all ways great. The way you describe it that was wonderful dear. 👏

Thank you so much.. you all are liking it my take on Point 1857 plot it is big thing for me..😳

Waiting for next update dear. 😊

Lots of hugs & lots of love dear ❤️

Lots of love and hugs..🤗

keep smiling

stay blessed..😊

Originally posted by: RNpoint1857

Sorry for the delayed comment but you already know the reason for the delay! 😉

Yup... I know.. and no problem about the delay.. comment toh kiya na..😉That's IMP..😊

Now back to the story. I always love using few original dialogues of the serial, I believe this takes the readers back to the days of 'Left Right left'. You also used few original dialogues here, and I am glad and thankful for that 😳

Ab tune hi kaha tha ke tujhe pehli story original plot pe chahiye.. so original dialogues toh use hone hi the.. But kuch bhi kaho.. that lines have magic..

Para 3 depicts how excited, how curious he was! Is it that his heart is winning the battle that he is fighting with his mind? 😉

Yeh hona chahiye tha.. uska heart hamesha haar jaata tha.. and we think that he was/is a best soldier.. Soldier always try.. but he never..😭😡

Para 4, well he is our shy Captain Rajveer afterall! 😛

Uff.. when he used to blush.. haaye..😳

Para 5, Was it that he wanted to prove something or was he trying to make the most of the situation? 😉 Come on after all he was going on a... what we call that... yeah... DATE... with his so called Cadet. I mean ab jab Naina ki baat maan hi rahe hain uske Rajveer Sir then Naina ko bhi to unki koi wish puri karni chahiye 😉 oops... I mean 'POINT 1857' ke RULES follow karne chahiye! 😆😉

Yup.. Rules made by Captain Rajveer only for cadet Naina.. aaj tak maine nahin soona ke lover's point pe jaane ke liye koi rules hote hain.. but ya.. they exist.. our dear Captain Rajveer knew all the rules..😆😆

Hold on, can we say that he was expecting her to wear a saree that day? 😉😛 Think about this, agar pehna hota to kya hota? 😆😆

Soch lia hain..😉 many times I imagine red saree scene and Point 1857 scene together..😳

I loved the whole conversation between Raj and Naveen 👏 In fact I loved the fact that you didn't forget to mention him in this story 😳 Well done Mrumi! 👏

Thank you.. main Navin ko kaise bhul sakti hun.. He holds an important place in Rajveer's life.. I admire their friendship😳

So this is the first time Naina is getting ready for Rajveer! 😳❤️

Only for him.. not for anyone else or any bet.. she just wants to visit Point 1857 with HIM..😳

Oh! Oh! So she reads the diary! 😉 Come on Naina, ab to tumhe idea ho hi gaya hoga what is in store for you tonight! 😉 Itniii innocent bhi nahi ho tum Naina! 😆😉

Naina innocent kabhi thi hi nahin.. sab samjhke hamesha anjaan bani ghumti thi..😒

Uff she has read it 8 times yaar come on!!!! Ab to samjh ja beta 😉 😆

wo samajh gayi thi.. I know.. uska chehra bata raha tha that she knows everything.. nahin toh apne mentor ke saath kahin jaane ke liye yaa usse kuch puchne keliye 2 baar kyun rukegi..😆😳😉

Baby kyun mann li apki baat ab ye aap hi samjho na! 😉😳

Maine kaha naa.. sab samajh rahe the dono bhi..humein pagal samajh liya tha dono ne..😛

Ohhoo now she is using her brain! 😆 RULE BOOK for POINT 1857 seriously? 😉

Hamesha SIR ko questions pucha karti thi.. thode khudse puch leti toh bahot pehle pata chal jana tha..😉

The truth that she is wearing a dress gifted by Naveen, it feels like Naveen ka ashirwad Rajveer n Naina ke saath hai! 😆 👏

You are sounding typical Ekta serial.. usska yeh tere saath hain toh wo hamesha tere saath hain etc..😆😆😆.. but nice thinking.. Navin unn dono ke saath hamesha tha..😊

Of course Rajveer apke saath hai Naina. How can you even doubt about it 😉

Woh usko bata rahiye ke himmat bhi naa karna mujhe chodke jaane ki..😆😉

Great update Mrumi 👏 😳❤️

Thank you dear..🤗❤️

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Nice work.

Thank you..😊

Point 1857 was always the most special place for all RN lovers. No matter how many stories are written over it we always have a chance for more.

Yes.. it is special for us... aur waise bhi hum satisfied nahin hone wale.. kitni bhi stories padh le..😆

Update soon n thanks for pm.

You are welcome😊

Chapter 2

They are walking through the jungle. Singing insects are not in the mood of maintain silence in that cold atmosphere. It is month of august and rain has already done its work at morning. Therefore now there is no mud under their feet. But the beautiful scent of soil is making them intoxicated. Now the sky is clear and moon is witnessing this journey with his stars from the sky. Though it is a night time but the light of moon is making their journey easy.

It seems all well but in their heart they are fighting with the storm of their emotions. There are no signs that it will calm down sooner. They both are walking in silence, stealing gazes at each other. Naina has many questions which need to be answer by Rajveer. She decides to break the ice between them. "Sir, kya aaj mujhe koi compliment nahin milnewali?" asks Naina.

"Compliment? Kaisi compliment Cadet Singh?" Rajveer knows her intention but still he reacts as he didn't understand her question.

"Acha? Ek toh khud kehte hon ke koi stylish si dress pehnke aao. Aapko pata hain sir, jab koi ladki poore 2 ghante leke taiyar hoti hain par phir bhi saamne wala kuch nahin kehta toh kitna boora lagta hain? Kal toh aapne bina pooche de di thi..." Naina stops deliberately. She looks at him and says, "...COMPLIMENT".

Rajveer remembers his stammering compliment of the day before which he gave her. He smiles instantly. "Toh aap chahti hain Cadet Singh ke main aapki taarif karun? Aur rahi kal ki baat toh woh red saree thi hi itni achhi ke koi bhi usse COMPLIMENT de de." Says Rajveer mischievously.

Naina stares at him and asks, "Toh kal aapne mere saree ko compliment di thi. Thik hain." She pouts and keeps walking silently.

Rajveer laughs. "Naina..." He looks at her so she. "Kya har baat kehke batana jaroori hota hain. Kal maine try kiya tha but you know, I failed miserably. Mujhe aadat nahin hain. Iss mamle mein Navin ki sari training bekaar chali gayi." Rajveer smiles at Navin's memory.

Naina understands what he wants to say. She recollects his yesterday's struggle of finding the proper words but she also recollects his instant reaction after her explanation about Huda's bet where he not at all struggled to say, he said that one line in one breath, where even he himself didn't understand when his heart overpowered his mind. The afterwards struggle was only for the shadowing his those words.

She walks in her own thoughts when she stumbles while walking. "Aaa.." yells Naina. Rajveer instantly holds her left hand by his right hand and her right shoulder by his left hand. "Tum thik ho?" asks Rajveer.

"Yes Sir. I am fine." Replies Naina. Rajveer leaves her. They start their hiking once again. It becomes arduous now. They start breathing heavily.

"Naina main tumhe discourage nahin kar raha hun par waha wakayi aisa kuch nahin hain. Itni mehnat karke wahan pe janese achha hain ki..." he takes one long breath and continues, "..ki hum abhi wapas laut chalein."

"Nahin Sir." She takes support of tree's branch and says, "Sir, Maine aap hi se seekha hain..." Hearing his own name he stops walking in mid way and turns his attention to her words. "... ke fauji ko apne mission mein successful hona chahiye. Main waha jaroor jaungi." He smiles looking at her and feels proud on her determination. She smiles back.

"All right. Move on." Challenge is evident from his voice. They start their journey again. "Aagey ka raasta aur bhi mushkil hain Naina." He still trying to make her change her decision to visit point 1857. In reality, he also knows that these difficulties are nothing for Naina. Naina already proved herself that she is capable enough for harder missions than this.

Naina only replies, "Sir." As a student, she has to give reply to her teachers every instruction, to make him know that his student is hearing his each word. But today walking with her high heels and the task of managing that dupatta, the road is becoming difficult for her. She does not have habits of these things. Actually in an era, she had. She did all these things in her collage days when she was one ordinary girl. When she was not today's Naina who wants to prove her brother's innocence. So she is walking tripling and balancing herself on that stony and hilly road.

Rajveer is aware of it. So he continues with his mission of Change mind of Naina.' "Soch lo." Rajveer asks her to think again. But his heart doesn't know that if really she decides that she has to turn back then what will he does? Is it possible for him to turn back at this point? Does he really wish? Then why he is doing this with himself?

"Soch lia Sir." Hearing Naina's voice Rajveer's chain of thoughts gets break. He stops and turns back to look at Naina who is breathing heavily and stands a little behind from him with the support of one tree. Why is Naina standing there? Has she taken her decision? Have I invited heartbreak for myself? In that one seconds many questions started capturing his mind.

"Maine soch lia." She repeats her words. Rajveer heart skips a beat. He is looking forward to listen her decision. "Main ab piche nahin hat sakti. Main mere mentor ko fail nahin kar sakti. Mujhe waha jaana hain." She concludes and starts moving ahead withour giving him a look, smiling silently. Rajveer frees his chocked breath and smiles at himself. He joins her in walking.

"Sir, ek baat puchu?"asks Naina.

"Pucho." Replies Rajveer.

"Sir, bhaiya ke diary mein toh maine padha tha ke aap kabhi point 1857 gaye nahin ho. Toh aapko kaise pata ke waha kuch nahin hain?" asks Naina.

At her this question, Rajveer stares at her. He recollects something and smiles secretly. "Yeh jaroori toh nahin hain Naina ke main mere life ki har baat tumhare bhaiyase share karu ya phir Navin meri batayi har baat ka jikra apne diary mein karein." Replies Rajveer sternly.

Naina remains silent on this explanation but her mind refuses to do so. "Kya iska matlab yeh hain ke Sir waha pehli baar nahin jaa rahein. Lekin bhaiya ne toh kaha tha... tu bhi kya soch rahi hain Naina. Aisa bhi toh ho sakta hain ke Sir bhi bhaiya ke jaise akele gaye ho. Lekin kisike saath bhi toh jaa sakte hain. Toh kya sir ko wo ladki mil gayi thi jisse waha leke jaane keliye unke dil ne kaha tha? Lekin sir ne toh kaha ke unhe aaj tak pyaar hua nahin..." Naina is thinking about all the possibilities of Rajveer's last visit at Point 1857.

They reach bottom at one acclivous hillside. Rajveer checks rope to assure that it is tighten from top and safe to climb. He looks at Naina to tell her to start the climb. But looking at her puzzled face he perfectly understands that what must be she is thinking. He knows that if Navin mentioned about Point 1857 in his diary then he surely would have mentioned the purpose to visit point 1857 and with whom we should visit that place. He smirks and calls her, "Naina."

Naina comes out of her daze and feels little ashamed for over thinking about Rajveer's personal life. He again calls her, "Cadet Singh?" Naina replies, "Yes Sir."

"Are you fine?" asks Rajveer.

"Yes sir. I am perfectly fine." Replies Naina.

"Toh chalo. Let's climb." Rajveer first starts climbing with the help of that rope and Naina follows her. "Be careful." Says Rajveer.

Naina wants answers of all her questions. So she decides to give a try. "Sir ye KMA ka highest point hain na?" asks Naina climing behind Rajveer. "Phir isse 185..." and she slips but Rajveer holds her hand and pulls her up,"Come on.. come on.. come on. Be careful." He says and then asks without leaving her hand, "Haan, kya keh rahi thi tum?"

"Phir isse point 1857 hi kyun kehte hain?" Naina finally completes her question.

Rajveer thinks a bit making is hold tight on the rope which he is holding by one hand and then looking at another direction he replies, "Cadet Singh, main tumhe teen chance deta hun." Rajveer leaves his hold on her hand. Naina looks at him confusingly. "Agar tumne sahee guess nahin kiya toh..." But Naina interrupts Rajveer and says, "Toh? Aap mujhe nahin leke jayenge?" Rajveer smirks and says, "Smart girl. Cadet Singh, your time starts now." He continues with climbing.

"Sir, kahin yeh1857 aazadi se pehle ki jagah toh nahin?" she has hard time to climb that hill.

"Keep guessing Cadet Singh." Replies Mentor Rajveer coolly.

"Shayad kisi britisher ne isse khoja hoga 1857 mein." Naina uses his second chance. They both are climbing hill but where at one side Rajveer has winning smile on his face and at other side Naina is getting irritated because of his guessing game. He is playing with her and avoiding his answer or he just loves to give new challenges to her.

"Try harder." Replies Rajveer without glancing at her.

"a.aa" Naina thinks a little and answers, "1857 feet above the sea level. I am right?" this time she is sure that this must be the reason behind place's name.

Rajveer closes his eyes and smiles wholeheartedly. "You are absolutely wrong Cadet singh." Replies Rajveer and again resumes his climbing. Now Naina irks. She gets defeated. So at last she requests him, "Sir, please bataiye naa."

But till that moment Rajveer reaches at top of the hill. So she calls him loudly, "SIR!" and climbs fast to reach at him while he is instructing her concernly, "Come come, be careful." Bending down he gives her his hand to take last step at top and pulls her up. She takes support of his shoulder to balance herself. "Come on." He encourages her. She again takes dupatta on her shoulder which has slipped from there while climbing.

They both are breathing heavily. "Ahh..." Rajveer takes deep breath and says, "Chalo, abhi aur bhi bahot... chalna hain humein." He is unable to say one sentence in one breath due to climbing. He makes his jacket straight and starts walking towards their destination. Naina follows him to catch his speed.

They are enjoying each other's company in that silence.

"Agar Naina ne Navin ki diary mein Point 1857 ke baare mein padha hain toh usse yeh bhi jaroor pata hoga ke wo kaunsi jagah hain?" Rajveer is lost in his own thoughts while walking. "Ab aisa toh hoga nahin ke Navin point 1857 ka sirf jikra karein aur baaki kuch naa likhe. Navin ke liye yeh jagah bahot mayne rakhti thi. Uske ghar aur KMA ke baad agar kahin wo apni zindagi bitana chahta toh yaha bita deta. Navin ne jaroor aur bahot kuch likha hoga yahan ke baare mein. Phir sab kuch jaante huye bhi Naina ne mujhse hi kyun kaha ke usse yaha aana hain? Kya wo mere hi saath yaha aana chahti thi jaise main bas usike saath yaha aana chahta tha? Toh kya wo bhi...?"

Rajveer feels Naina's touch on his shoulder. He turns to look at her. She looks at him confusingly and says, "Kya hua Sir? Kaha kho gaye? Main kabse bula rahi hun aapko?"

"Haan... k.. kya. Kuch bhi toh nahin. Aisa kyun pucha?" Rajveer mumbles a little.

"Toh phir aap aise achanak beech mein kyun ruk gaye? Aur main bula rahi thi toh uska bhi jawab nahin diya." says Naina.

Now reality dawns upon him. He was so engrossed in his thoughts that he doesn't realize that he stands still in midway. He looks upwards at sky and inhales deeply. Naina observes him confusingly. "Sir, are you fine?" asks Naina.

Rajveer looks at her intently and controls his all feelings. He again thinks about the possibility of his good fortune. He gathers himself again. Tucking his hands in jeans pockets he replies, "Yes Cadet Singh, I am absolutely fine. Move on. Ab hum hamare manjil ke kareeb hain." saying these he starts moving towards their destination.

And, they reach there. Numerous white flags are blowing with the rhythm of wind. In that silence, they can hear the wind sweeping in rainy atmosphere. This windy atmosphere is a sign that a hurricane is approaching in their life which will change their life for a good.

Naina observes her surroundings. "Wow..!! Toh yeh hain point 1857!" exclaims Naina and runs forward to capture the beauty of the place in her eyes. She smiles wholeheartedly. "It's amazing!" Naina exclaims again. Seeing Naina happy, Rajveer smiles with satisfaction. Smilingly he starts walking towards Naina. This moment is like a dream come true for him.

"Haan, yahi hain wo aitihasik point 1857." reaching to her says Rajveer. Naina looks at him. "Lekin maine tumse kaha tha key aha par aisa kuch bhi nahin hain jiske liye humein itni mehnat karni pade." showing her the simplicity of this place by extending his hand, states Rajveer.

"Aaa.. lekin bhaiya ki notebook mein to hiss jagah ka jikra baar baar hain. toh aisi kya khass baat hain iss jagah mein?" asks Naina after hearing what Rajveer has said about being this place not so special though she very well know the uniqueness about this place, that this is a lover's paradise. But now she wats to hear it from Rajveer.

"Hain." states Rajveer. Walking ahead with Naina he continues, "point 1857 boys cadets ke liye ek bahot hi special jagah hain. Yeh wo jagah hain jahan par faculty ke najron se door KMA ke boys cadets apni girlfriends ko lekar aaya karte the." Remembering those days Rajveer cackles a little.

"Phir.. 1857 hi kyun? Kya pyaar ke liye revolt karna jaruri hain?" asks Naina. She has still confusion about the motive behind the name of that heavely palce.

"Ohh No!" says Rajveer unbelievably. He chuckles. "Tum bhi dhoks kha gayi haan? Naina, point 1857 ka kranti se koi lena dena nahin. Yeh sirf ek count hain, ek number hain un couples ka jo yahan pe kabhi aaye the. Aur yahan pe aake kuch haseen lamhe saath gujare aur phir KMA se pass out hone ke baad shaadi ke bandhan mein hamesha ke liye bandh gaye." Naina is observing the exclusiveness of point 1857 while hearing Rajveer's explanation. But when his last line strikes her ears, she looks at him. He is not looking at her but for her, this line is like some alarm. She comes out from her trance when she hears Rajveer saying, "This is point 1857. Aur tum yeh dekh rahi hon." He points out at one pillar which is in front of them. "Come!" says Rajveer.

They walk towards that pillar. Approaching near to pillar Rajveer says "Yeh hain wo wishing pillar. Jaanto hon Naina, cadets key aha par aane ki ek khaas wajah ... yeh wishing pillar thi." He goes near that pillar. Many memories of him are attached with the wishing pillar. Uttering each world slowly he starts pacing around the pillar. "Aisa kaha jata hain ke yahan par agar koi sachhe dil se poori shradhha ke sath mannat mange ya phir kuch bhi wish karein toh woh poori ho jati hain." He completes a circle to wishing pillar and stands right side of Naina. "Tum kuch mangna chahti ho Naina?" asks Rajveer looking at her.

Smilingly Naina shakes her head in Yes' just as he expected. "Toh phir der kis baat ki hain. Come." saying he sits down on his knees looking at her. She looks at him sitting and closing his eyes. He entwines his fingers of both hands in each other and folds his hands to chest for prayer. She lost herself in looking at him intently. When he doesn't feel her presence near him, he opens his eyes and looks upward at his left. He realizes that she is still standing looking at him. He gestures her to sit down near him. She moves her hand from her hairs and places them behind her ears. Without turning her gaze from him, she sits down near him on her knees. Rajveer closes his eyes to make a wish but Naina stares at him without blinking her eyes. She is constantly placing her hairs back which are disturbing her view of his face due to wavy wind. He is looking so innocent. She looks at his folded hands and thinks about his possible wish. When Rajveer makes his wish, he opens his eyes and kisses his fingers. He feels her gaze on him and immediately turns to look at her astonishingly. Staring at him, she asks, "Kya maanga?"

"Naina, wish hamesha maangnewale aur denewale ke beech mein rehti hain. Tumne kuch nahin maanga?" creaseing eyebrows he asks amusingly.

She smiles as something come to her mind. She quickly turns to look at pillar. She closes eyes and folded her hands to pray, to make a wish. Now it's Rajveer's turn to lose in her beauty and innocence. He knows that he is unable to sit near her for some more time or he would fail to control himself. He stands up. He stands nearer pillar placing his right hand over it. Wind is playing with him with the help of her hairs which are disturbing view of her face. He wants to place them back to her ears. Her dupatta is blowing with the wind. He wants to embrace her and tells her that how much he loves her. The atmosphere is examining his patience and self control. As if this all is less, her dupatta blows and lands on his head. Today, even nature is not ready to accept his decision to stay quiet, to hide his emotions, his feelings for her. Nature gives indication to him that he has to face many more torture if he will not confess his feelings.

He removes her dupatta from his head and looks at her with pure love in his eyes. He looks at that dupatta for once and even he never realises that when he starts walking towards her as if someone controlling him, his heart commanding him. He reaches near her. He once gazes at wishing pillar as if his untold wish is fulfilling. He looks at Naina once who is praying, looking like one innocent soul. Her smile touches his heart. He again closes his eyes and wishes to give her this smile forever. Then he places her dupatta on her head and drapes it from her right shoulder to left.

As soon as she feels his touch, she feels current in her whole body. In the past also he touched her many times, but today's touch is something different. This touch is trying to convey something to her. She sits static for some seconds and feels his touch. But as he places dupatta on her left shoulder she turns to look at him. His left hand is on her left shoulder and right hand embraces her neck from right shoulder to left. She places her right hand on his right hand and clasps it and stares at him. Their eyes get locked.

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