Rajveer Naina Come...Fall in Love 2nd CHAP UPDATED

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Sweetmoon

@Sweetmoon

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Cool windy whity update...loved it...

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Priya

@lovern

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Hiii Mrumi

The update is mind-blowing as always. Naina ko compliment chahiye Rajveer se she is waitng for his compliment.😉 use pasand toh aaya hoga na uska dress.

Red saree achi thi Naina nahi Rajveer is tooo good yaar. Rajveer ko flit bhi karna aata hai yeh aaj pata chala hai.

Acha ab Naina ye bhi janana chahti hai ki Rajveer POINT 1857 kisi ladki ke saath gaya hai ya nahi. Sooo sweet of Naina.

Hyeee kitne cute lag rahe the na dono jab Pray kar rahe the. Kitne Pyaar se dekh rahe the na ek dusre ko. ☺️☺️ Specially woh dupaata wala scene yaar.

Tooo good dear. Main toh fida hu yaar apke writing pe.

Keep thinking & keep writing dear. Waiting for next update.

Thanx for PM me.

Lots of loveee & Hugsss to u. God Bless U. Take Care.

Priya

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Sri

@sridhsc

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Mrumi,

Awesome dear, was waiting for this and finally worth the wait.

Take care

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luvraj4ever

@luvraj4ever

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Loving this take on the point 1857...really lovely...

Continue soon

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Manveer

@ManVeer8495

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#65

lovely & beautifull update 😛 ❤️

goonji si hai sari fiza
jaise bajati ho shehnaiyan
lehrati hai mehki hawa
gungunati hain tanhaiyan
sab gaate hain sab hi madhosh hain
hum tum kyon khamosh hain
aao na aao na saaz-e-dil gaao na

this song for your update

yeh scene one of the most romantic scene ho sakta tha but show waalon ne duptta wala part edit karke & baad me scene ko abruptly end karke dil hi tod Diya tha but tum aur dusre writer rn moments deke khush kar dete hai
thanks love you

Edited by npksk8495 - 9 years ago

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Ayushi2608

@Ayushi2608

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Beautiful and amazing update...

The point 1857 scene was the most romantic scene in LRL and u just added to it and made it more romantic and special...

Their walk in the jungle..

Raj n naina dono bhi baut ziddi h..no jana kitni baar raj ne naina ko waha la jana se rokne ji koishish ki h pr naina is naina vo kabi bhi haar nhi manti h or na koi kaam start karne ka baad picha hati h...

I lov the way raj handles naina's ques..he is not directly giving ans to any of naina's ques but playing with her...it was vry sweet..

I just ki i coupd see these scene in LRL...

The confusion..thoughts...and inner turmoil of raj n naina has been described perfectly...

Continue the nxt part soon...

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Avinanda Mukharjee

@Avinanda120

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Haii story is really beautiful.wow the way u draw their pictures is very nice.Raj & Naina is definitely made for each other. Please add some magical moments & make us happy

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1069050

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#68

i know i'm late...😭😭

bt aaj kal time ni mil rha tha...aaj fursat me baith ke ye update padhi n m bta ni skti muje kitni pyaari lgi...👏👏👏

you are just amazing👏👏👏

update is awesome👏👏👏

jo scene cut kr diya tha dupatta scene wo b itna ache se define kiya..love u for this🤗

u know what m kbi feelings ko jyada ache se smajh ni paati hu means unka matlab ni nikaal paati hu ki ye kya kehna chahte hn...bt tumne RN k unspoken words ko aawaj deke mere mann ki fariyaad poori krdi😛😛😛 (kuch jyada hi heavy line ho gyi na😆😆)

bt seriously maine jo kaha h wo bilkul sahi kaha h...u r just awesome sweetheart😛😛 hatts off to u n to ur writing..👏👏👏

i just loved the update...n eagerly waiting for next part😛😛😛waiting for their confession😛😛

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where r u? itna time ho gya knha rehti ho mrumi...i miss u sooo much😭😭😭