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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: RNpoint1857

10th JULY 2016 ❤️

OMG Mrumi love you sooo much! 🤗

You chose the right day for the shubharambh of the story 😳

Thank you dear..😊 Love you too❤️ ( Ab yeh bhi koi kehneki baat hain..😉)

POINT 1857 is indeed the aitihasik place

Thank you so much for the mention. ❤️

True, without any words it said a lot. They told us everything through their expressions, through their consciously chosen words.😊 Only if they wouldn't have chosen words consciously and would have let their hearts to do the talking then it would have been a totally different scenario today!

Agar woh yeh sab kar dete toh hamare "The Great Rajveer Naina" nahin kehlate..😉 But seriously.. aaj ke jamane without kiss film ya show complete nahin hota.. uss jamane mein aaj bhi hum ye silent love yaad kar rahe hain jaha passion and intimate moments toh chod hi do but confession bhi nahin hain.. I guess, that is the magic which Rajveer Naina created before 10 years.😳

Nevertheless it still holds a special place in our hearts! May be because of those unspoken words, the love for this scene comes with more force. 😳

Absolutely True.. They bought one corner of our heart.. They own that for lifetime. Love has no language and Love needs no language.😊


Well for us POINT 1857 does exist. End of the topic! 😆😳❤️

Agree😃

And here I am gonna get two stories and I hope they are the way I asked 👏 Yaar I am damn excited bring it on baby! 😆😛👏 I am all set to embrace the both 🤗

I know how much excited you are for these stories..😆😆.. I am feeling bad that you have to wait.. 😔

OS or SS we are fine with both. Agar tum mere samne hoti tum dekh pati how excited I am right now 🥳

Now I can imagine..😉

I am already falling in love with Rajveer-Naina and Point 1857 all over again. 😳 This time a little more than before 😛❤️

Uff.. agar maine kachra kar diya toh mera pitna tay hain..😆😆

I dedicate this thread and my both stories to my sweetest friend and an excellent writer Riya(RNpoint1857),

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! 🤗 🤗 🤗 I am damn excited right now! 😆 I doubt about being an excellent writer 😛 but thank you for liking my works. 😳 But you yourself are no less.👏 You write very well.👏 I just love reading your story.😳 I hope I can change the word 'STORY' to 'STORIES' pretty soon! 😳

You are an excellent writer and you proved it every time.. so do not doubt on your capabilities again..😊 Thanks for praising me but I know ke mujhe abhi bahot improve karna hain..😊..

But she only insisted me to write on Point 1857.
So it is because of her I am writing these two stories.

Of course I did because I knew only you are the one who can fulfill my wish.😳 And being an awesome writer yourself, I am sure you are going to do justice to this scene, in both the scenarios that you have written upon! 👍🏼Thank you so much Mrumi.🤗 It means a lot to me that you wrote it for me, because of me. 😳❤️

Itni taarif...😳.. I hope I can fulfill all your expectations.. aur agar nahin kar paayi toh sorry in advance.. and plz do tell me truth..😊.. Yes..As I mentioned already this thread is dedicated to my darling Riya🤗

Thank you Riya and I love you.❤️ 🤗

Do I need to say I love you too? I am sure you already know! Love you so muchhh...! 🤗❤️ And I wonder why you are thanking me? I have full faith in you therefore I asked you to write on the most precious scene of Rajveer-Naina. 😳 Instead I should be thanking you for writing it.😊 For considering my request.😊 Thank you so much Mrumi. 🤗

Thanks for believing in me.. I will try my best.. woh scene itna precious hain tabhi toh nervous hun😳

It may possible that I will update my first part little late. I strongly wish to start this thread today because Today is the "SHUBHDIN".

It is indeed the 'SHUBHDIN' ok take your time. I am sure the wait will be worth it. 😳 Looking forward to the both takes of yours on POINT 1857, desperately 😳

Thanks for waiting..😊

Stay blessed!
Love and hugs
❤️ 🤗

Love and hugs❤️🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mrumi



That was indeed one special day for all of us 😃
Maine kisiko PM nahin kia tha.. coz I knew ke main jaldi update nahin denewali.. aur phir tum sab wait karte.. Jo ki kar rahe ho.. mujhe acha nahin lag raha.. jab update dungi tab sabko PM kar dungi..😊

awww!!! you are so sweet murmi!! RN/LRL stories ke liye wait kya hum to kuchh bhi kar sakte hain
jaa murmi!!! le le apna time hum intezaar karenge because intezaar ka phal meetha hota hai aur jab phal dene wali tum ho to indeed it will be supersweet ⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: npksk8495

awww!!! you are so sweet murmi!! RN/LRL stories ke liye wait kya hum to kuchh bhi kar sakte hain
jaa murmi!!! le le apna time hum intezaar karenge because intezaar ka phal meetha hota hai aur jab phal dene wali tum ho to indeed it will be supersweet ⭐️


Thanks a lot VL..
but today is a special day.. toh tum sab ka wait aaj khatam ho jayega..😳
and you all are supersweet..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So.. once again I am here on the occasion of another very special day...😳

It's a day when we witness that magic of Point 1857. It's a day when every LRL/RN fan had visited that place with Rajveer Naina. From where, they both returned but we couldn't. We are still there waiting for them to return there once again and to recreate that magic. So here I am wishing you all,
a very happy 9th anniversary of "Point 1857 Scene".🥳🥳



I did shubharambh of this story on 10th anniversary of LRL and today on 9th anniversary of Point 1857 scene, I am updating my first chapter.

As I said earlier, It will be two SS. The first story is inspired by our beloved original scene. So, naturally I am using original dialogues from the show.

Enjoy..
Keep Reading..
Keep Commenting...😊

COME...FALL IN LOVE❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 1

"Nahin aayegi wo!" he repeats his previous words.

"Really? Kya sach mein main chahta hun ke woh na aaye?"

Rajveer is walking towards his quarters, thinking about the incident which has happened just some minutes ago near stairs. Thoughts are coming into his mind like tsunami. Rajveer always wants to accept all the orders of his mind but Captain Rajveer always suppresses him. Always overpowers him. What is the exact problem? Till the date he is unable to answer himself of this question. Yes! He loves her! Then why he doesn't want to express his feelings? Is that because she is his student, protge or she is a sister of his best friend who he killed?

He enters in his cabin and closes the door behind him. He goes near kitchen platform and pours the water into glass. Today, once again, he tries to find the answers of these unanswerable questions. He drinks the water and places glass back on platform. He lies on his bed and places his both hands under his head. In fact, there is no problem exist only. These are all excuses made by him for running from the situation.

When Naina has asked him that will he take her to Point 1857, it was unexpected for him but on the other side he was waiting for that moment since so long. At that moment, he tried to escape again from the situation but he couldn't. Where at one side butterflies started flying in his stomach and heart, on the other side Naina's mentor denied his permission again to him. But Naina being Naina, she knows perfectly that how to handle her mentor.

With those silly conditions, what he wanted to prove, he himself doesn't know. Why he wants her to wear one stylish dress at her visit with him at point 1857? Really, he doesn't know the answer? Yesterday, when he saw her in that Red Saree, can he deny that he wants to see her like that again? He has all the answers of his questions. He is in denial mode which he is not at all enjoying.

Suddenly, he remembers his promise to Navin.

~~~~~

"Hey Raj, Kaisa hain tu?" Navin asks him when Rajveer has called him from his posting.

"Kaisa ho sakta hun yaar main inn pahadiyon mein..? Tu KMA mein maje kar akele... main baitha hun yaha border pe.." Rajveer taunts him.

"Tu hamesha mujhse jalta hi reh Raj.. Tujhe naa meri nahin, pyaar ki jaroorat hain.. academy days se tujhe bol raha hun ke ek ladki pata le.. chahe toh main madad kar dunga.. par tu hain ke..." Navin sighs and continues, "chal.. abhi time nahin gaya.. waha pata le achisi.." Navin teases him.

"Yaha aur ladki?" Rajveer gets frustrated again with that topic and continues, "yaha barf ke siwa kuch nahin milta.. aur tu yaha ladki patane ki baat kar raha hain? Meri chod.. KMA mein tera kya chal raha hain? Janab sudhare ya nahin?"

"Dekh Raj, meri yaha image hain.. cadets mein bhi main famous hun aur faculty mein bhi... Main kal Point 1857 gaya tha.. teri badi yaad aayi." Says Navin.

"Point 1857... ? mujhe bata aaj tak kitni ladkiyon ko leke gaya hain yaar tu waha? Ek bhi nahin patti. Iss baar kaun hain wo badnaseeb? Rajveer laughs.

"Raj.. main waha jaake toh aaya. Yeh soch ke ladkiyaan mere saath waha aana chahti hain. Tera kya? Mujhe nahin lagta ke point 1857 pe tere charansparsh kabhi honge bhi ya nahin.." sighs Navin. "Raj, mujhe ek promise kar." Demands Navin.

"Kaisa promise mere dost. Tere liye main kuch bhi kar sakta hun." Rajveer states emotionally.

"Tu aise akele zindagi nahin katega. Ek rishta fail ho gaya iska matlab ye nahin ke tu khudko dusra chance nahin dega. Aise hamesha mujhe phone karke khudka akelapan tu door karta hain. Main hamesha toh tere liye nahin rahunga na Raj." Navin's concerns about Rajveer is evident from his voice.

"Tu aisa kyun keh raha hain Navin?" asks Rajveer.

"Samajh Raj.. hum soldiers hain. Kab kya ho jaye hamare haath nahin hain. Main bas itna chahta hun ke tu bhi kabhi tere zindagi ke kisi khass ladki ke saath Point 1857 ja sako aur wahanki waadiyon mein uske saath tumhara naam gunj jaaye. Main bas itna chahta hun ke tujhe tera saathi miley jo tujhe samajhe. Tera ye akelapan door ho jaaye aur meri jaan choot jaaye." Navin shares his wish with Rajveer and laughs at his last sentence.

"Achha, Toh ye sab janab apne liye kar rahe hain." Rajveer says in mock anger and continues, "Lekin sach mein Navin, Itna mat soch yaar mere baare mein. Mujhe aadat nahin hain. Main tujhe promise karta hun ke jab bhi koi aisi ladki mere zindagi mein aayegi jiske saath main apni puri zindagi bitana chahu, main usse leke tere ladle point pe chala jaunga aur sabse pehle tujhe bataunga." Rajveer makes this promise to Navin."

~~~~~

Rajveer smiles on this memory. "Navin, mere dost, aaj main shayad uss ladki ke saath Point 1857 ja saku jise main apni zindagi banana chahta hun. Tu khush toh hain na mere dost?" Rajveer asks Navin looking upward at his room's ceiling. "Kya Naina sach mein aayegi? Kya main uske saath uska mentor Captain Rajveer banke waha reh paunga? Navin, meri madad kar yaar. Meri madad kar." He thinks a bit and suddenly gets up from his bed, "Agar Naina aa bhi gayi phir bhi meri conditions toh usse puri karni hi hogi. Tabhi main usse le jaunga." He smirks. " kaash, Naina sab conditions puri kar de." He smiles at himself shyly and hits back of his head slowly and says, "Captain Rajveer, soldiers ko itna confuse rehna mana hain jante hain na aap? Hamesha mere life mein sab itna complicated ho kya aisa jaruri hain. Mujhe pyar bhi hua toh mere cadet se, mere sabse achhe dost ki behen se." Sighs Rajveer.

He opens his cupboard. First, he takes out some formal cloths. He is going for some official work. After thinking something for a while, he placess that cloths again in cupboard and brings out a jeans and leather jacket with white embroidery. "Haan, ye ache lagenge." He smiles but then says confusingly to himself, "Rajveer, tu kabse kapdon ke baarein mein itna sochne laga?" he waits and again says, "Phirse ek naya sawaal." He sighs and changes his cloths quickly. After taking some official files with him, he exits his quarter.

-----

Naina is holding her dress in her hand and lost in her own thoughts in her room. Especially after yesterday night's incident she is feeling some change in her life. When he gave her compliment, why she felt, that she is the only beautiful girl in the world? Why she felt that, only he has the right to see her in that attire? Why she agreed with Huda's condition? Why that revolt stated that much important for her? Is it because, she was doing it for him, for his reputation? What she thought after their meeting, that he liked her, is that true? Is he only like her or his eyes and expressions were conveying something different?

She is so much confused. She has very little idea about what is exactly happening with her but she is not sure about that. Many things had happened in recent days. She came to know the biggest truth of her life that only Rajveer killed her brother. This journey was not at all easy for her. It is very obvious human behaviour. Many times we are not ready to accept the thing which is so evident and that was not at all a small thing for her which she would forget that easily. In spite of these, she couldn't stay away from him. During appraisals she again came close to him. But is this all LOVE?

She has neither idea about these four words nor had time to think about it. She wants to prove her brother innocent. But then why she wants to accept this change in her life? She places that dress on her bed and goes towards nearby table. She opens her bag and takes out Navin's diary. She opens some particular page and reads it in mind-

"Aaj main phir waha gaya tha. Suriji kehte hain ke waha akele nahin jaate par kya karoon mera dil hi nahin bharta. Point 1857 aisi jagah hain jahan hum apne life ke kisi special ke saath time spend karte hain. Mujhe yakeen hain ke kismat mera saath jaroor degi. Waise aisi baat nahin hain ke waha kabhi kisi ladki ke saath main gaya nahin. Kitni ladkiyaan mujhe waha leke gayi. Par main abhi usse leke nahin gaya jiske saath main wahan jaana chahta hun.

Iss mamle mein Raj bada principle wala banda hain. Woh wahan aise kisike bhi saath nahin jaane wala. Woh waha usike saath jayega jiske saath jaane ko uska dil kahega. Point 1857! KMA ki sabse haseen jagah."

She closes the diary. Since morning, she is reading this page on 8th time. "Bhaiya ke kehne se toh yeh nahin lagta key eh jagah army se related ho sakti hain. Kisi special ke saath matlab..?" Naina is talking with herself and blushes on her line. "But jaise bhaiya ne kaha ke Rajveer sir sirf usse le jayenge jisse le jaane ke liye unka dil kahega toh Sir ne meri baat kyun maan li? Kya sach mein wo mujhe le jayenge? Aur yeh sab padhne aur samjhne ke baad bhi mujhe unhi ke saath kyun jaana hain?" as per her habit, she asks many questions but this time she is asking her only but unable to answer a single one.

"Sir ne koi stylish dress pehnke aane ko kyun kaha? Kya sach mein Point 1857 jaane ki koi rule book hain?" She continues with her question round. "Toh kya yeh dress stylish si hain? Ya jo maine fresher's ball mein pehni thi woh jyda stylish thi? Lekin Sir ne toh kuch alag pehnke aane ko kaha hain aur aisi dress maine KMA mein kabhi nahin pehni. Aur waise bhi yeh dress mere liye khass hain. Yeh dress toh mujhe..."

She remembers that last Rakhi Pournima with Navin.

~~~~~

"Toh chaliye Bhaiya, mera taufa nikaliye." Naina orders to her Captain brother.

"Tune mujhe rakhi bandh li , uske badle main teri raksha karoonga. Ab tujhe aur kya taufa chahiye?" asks Navin in teasing tone.

"Aise kaise Bhaiya? Aap do(2) saal baad Iss din ghar pe ho. Aaj ke din toh tang mat karo." Naina says with crying face.

"Tu toh waise badi sherni bane ghumti rehti hain, lekin jab mujhse kuch niklwane ki baat aaye toh bakti ban jaati hain. Tujhe MBA nahin, acting school join karna chahiye tha." Teases Navin.

"Bhaiya, kya mera itna bhi haq nahin ke mere bade bhaiya ke saamne main unki chhoti behen banke rahun?" asks Naina innocently.

Navin gets up from his seat and kisses her forhead. "Chal bas kar ab. Jyada senti mat kar. Jab baki ki ladkiyaan dekhegi ke Captain Navin ro raha hain toh kya image reh jayegi meri unki saamne." Navin winks at her. She hits him playfully on his chest.

"Toh kaha hain mera gift?" Naina asks him again.

Navin hands over one packet to her and places his hand on her one shoulder so that he could hug her half. "Meri pyari behna, ye meri taraf se tere liye. Yeh tum tab pehnna jab tum Zindagi ka sabse khoobsoorat safar kisike saath shuru karna chahogi. Tab main samajh jaunga ke meri chhoti badi ho gayi hain. Main jahan bhi rahoonga tumhare saath rahoonga." Naina hugs Navin.

~~~~~

Naina wipes her tears. "Kya jaisa bhaiya ne kaha tha waisa main wo safar shuru karna chahti hun? Kya woh pal mere zindagi mein aa gaya hain?"

She decides something. Picking up that dress from bed she gets ready for the most beautiful evening in her life.

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Rajveer parks his jeep with a jerk outside at entrance gate of KMA and gets out of it. He checks his watch. It shows exact 7pm. He is not late. He told her to report him at 19 00 hours.

"Kya Naina aayegi?" Rajveer asks to no one specifically but then he swabs that thought.

He bends down in jeep and brigs out some file when Naina is reaching to him while setting her hairs last time from KMA's entrance gate. Meanwhile he again bends in jeep to check another file, at that very moment he senses presence of Naina and he turns out with jerk to look back to assure himself that he is right. Naina is there, standing in front of him. She gives him one bright smile. He controls himself and behaves like he doesn't remember anything. "Yes, Cadet Singh?" asks Captain Rajveer, mentor of Cadet Naina Singh, giving her a big questioning look.

"YES?" Naina is in no nonsense mood. So she asks him with little annoyance and says frankly, "What sir? Aapne mujhe nineteen hundread hours pe report karne ko bola tha toh main yahan aa gayi." He again checks his watch. It is showing still same time with some extra seconds. His mind is not ready to believe that she actually comes there.

"Aur aap chahte the ki main ek different outfit mein aayu toh... ye dekhiye." She motions him to look at her dress through her eyes. Naina has a triumphing smile on her face. Her expressions state that she completed all his conditions and now he has to fulfill his promise. He has no way to escape now.

With her that sentence, Rajveer observes her from up to down. She is wearing a simple white chudidar dress with silver shiny dots which graced with little embroidered dupatta. The silver long earrings are adding extra charm in her beauty. That small bindi on her forehead just goes perfectly with her girly beauty. She has not taken any extra efforts on her makeup. She put just little makeup with light lipstick. Her eyes are looking more attractive thanks to the kajal and eye liner which she perfectly put in her eyes. She sets her hairs free without any pony tail or anything, how he always likes. It is like a dream to him. Today, she got ready for him. He never thought that any girl could take this much efforts on her attire and beauty only for him. She is looking exactly how he wishes. How he always wants. Her cadet's uniform always hides her beauty but in that attire also she is world's most beautiful girl for him. For whom, he falls long back. He smiles genuinely at her.

"Ab toh main Point 1857 chal sakti hun na?" Naina asks him. For one second, he looks at her on her that questions and then hit her forehead lightly with the file which he has holding in his hand. Then he again looks at her. She is smiling at him. A small smile is playing on his lips also, a satisfactory smile for her stubborn behaviour. He surprised, that in reality, she has completed all his conditions. It is time after sunset when moon with his stars are showering his light on his love birds. Her dress and her beauty are adding a magic in that atmosphere.

Naina smiles at her wholeheartedly. "Bilkul chal sakti ho." Finally he says these words and turns back to bend in jeep to place that file back there when Naina asks him, "Sir, hum jeep se jayenge ya... kaise?" she throws her shoulders. He again smiles at her. This smile is little different from previous one. Once again all the control of situation is in his hand which some seconds ago was in hers.

"Naina point 1857 ki ye last condition hain." Turning half he comes 3 steps ahead and places his hand on jeep's upper part and again starts with his last but important condition. It is his last try to convince her for cancel her plan to visit at point 1857 so that he could avoid what he may has to face in way emotionally. Despite of all, if she doesn't change her mind, then this condition will prove profitable for him. So, at both ends, he is in advantage.

"Wahan par.." he points out towards hills. Naina looks at that direction. He takes his finger back while continuing to his condition, "...sirf paidal jaya ja sakta hain. Sirf paidal." He repeats his words. Naina crosses him and comes forward. She tries to see through that small flank of heap in front of them, which supposed to be their journey road for today. He observes her confused face from behind. "Ahhn... bina binoculars ke nahin dekh paogi." He tries to solve her problem by saying that there is no answer. Walking from right to left behind of her he continues, "Janti ho, point 1857 sirf door hi nahin balki KMA ki sabse unchi pahadi hain." He changes his gaze from heap to Naina, observing her each and every expressions, he repeats his words again and gives emphasis on each word, "SABSE UNCHI PAHADI." She is listening to him carefully with confusion on her face. She has a new challenge in front of her.

Walking again towards jeep he says, "Raasta thoda mushkil jaroor hain, unchai bhi thodi jyada jaroor hain..." he places his hand on jeep and looks at her innocently, "Lekin... chalega.. nahin cadet?" Mentor Rajveer is taking test of his protge.

Naina turns to look at him. Determination is evident on her face. She smiles looking at him. She understands very well what he is trying to do. She knows that he wants to shoot two shot in one bullet. He is a best shooter of Indian army and it is highly impossible that he could lose his shot. She realizes that with his one shot he is trying to avoid this visit and other shot is to examine her, to check her determination. But she is also Naina, his protge. She will neither call off their visit nor fail him as her mentor.

"Unchai jeetni bhi ho sir, lekin mere iradon se unchi nahin hain." She says determinedly. First he smiles to himself. He is not at all surprised with her those words but feels immense proud. He is expecting similar answer from her. Smilingly he turns to look at her. She smiles back. She bends her neck little towards left and gives him winning smile.

At last he accepts his defeat. There is no escape chance to him. So he asks, "Tum nahin manogi?" She gets surprise with his those words. So her doubt was right. He was avoiding it. "Aur waise bhi sir, rasta jitna lamba ho utna acha hain. Utna jyada waqt milega... HUMEIN." She emphases last word. "Haan, wo toh..." He was going to express what his heart wants. What she said is the reason why this condition is so important for him. But he controls himself and asks her, "Kya matlab?"

Naina knows what she just has spoken. But still she reacts innocently, "mera matlab, rasta kitna bhi kathin kyun naa ho sir, aap toh hain na mere saath... HUMESHA?" he stares at her. She smiles at him and asks, "Chalein?" He continues to stare her for some seconds with small smile, "Chalo." Raising eyebrows replies Rajveer. For one second he glances at the direction of point 1857 and then turns to look at Naina. But Naina is happily looking at that direction where her life would get a new turn.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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The Point 1857 the lover's pont of KMA, kuchh to nasha kuchh to magic power hai iss place me ki kitna bhi iske baare me padho kam hi lagta hai
main jab padhti hoon har baar iska naya roop naya pahloo mere samne 😳
murmi! it is just awesome absolutly amazing i just love every bit of it 👏 😛 you are simply a fantastic writer ❤️
main hamesha show me raj-naveen ke scene ko dekhna chahti unki friendship ko enjoy karna chahti thi but shayad show makers nahi chahte the 😡 lekin koi na ff se hi khush hoon
yeh question to mere bhi iss chote se dimaag me hamesh se tha ki jab naina ne naveen ki diary me point 1857 ke baare me padha to kya naveen ne iske baare me kuchh mention nahi kiya tha kuchh hint nahi diya tha ? but kuchh bhi ho naina ke face ki smile naine ke face ki glow dekhne layak thi kitni pretty & happy lag rahi thi cadet sahiba
meri ek wish aur thi kash! red saree scene ho point 1857 main chahti naina ready hote samay raj ke baare me ek baar to soche but cvs yeh bhi nahi hua i just hate them
well captain saheb the mr. over emotion controler ne kya kamal ki shart rakhi thi naina ke samne kya kare directly to keh nahi sakte ready hone ke liye yahaan bhi stratgy plaanin hmm...
eagerly waiting for next update 😛 thanks for pm keep smiling keep writing
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Posted: 9 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 👏
isse jyada special day ho hi ni sakta tha is OS ko start karne ka...main bta ni skti ise padhne ke bad main kitni khush hoon..😛😛😛

actually i'm speechless...bt bolna bhi bahot kuch chahti hoon..😉😉😉

jaise tumne is scene ko define kiya hai na i don't think koi kr skta hai...i just loved it 😛😛😛

mujhe raj ki wo line bahot achi lgi...mujhe pyaar bhi hua to apni cadet se...how cute😛😛😛


jis tarah se raj n naina ne naveen k sath apne flashback yaad kiye it was awesome...👏👏👏


naina ne jb bola ki jitna jyada time mile utna acha hai...i was smiling 😛😛😛


oh gosh main itni khush hoon aaj 😛😛😛

thank you so much mrumi for this lovely update ...u r the best 🤗

pls continue soon 😛
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Awesome update.,loved rajveer-naina moments & fb of navin with raj and naina resp continue soon plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Haii dear new story? Wow its great. I am really excited . its your second story right? Just too good to comment. I am very happy . keep it up dear .let's see what's next in your mind. Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Hiii Mrumi

I m waiting for you with this new story. 😊

Yes you are absolutely right dear. POINT 1857 is the most romantic place in this whole world for us. And u r writing a whole new story on that it was great opportunity for us. i m glad that i m successful to register on IF. 😊😊

Awesome cover page as ever dear. 👏👏👏

Wish u the same dear Happy 9th anniversary of POINT 1857. 😊😊

Lots of hugs & lots of love dear. 🤗🤗

Keep writing & god bless u dear

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