ISHMUD (DIL KI DOR ) WITH SAMUD AND ISHVEER - Page 58

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Posted: 7 years ago
I'm totally impressed with the way Kumud saves herself from the goons
and another highlight Kumud confesses to Saras
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Posted: 7 years ago

very brave kumud...
well written update 👍🏼
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

kumud saving herself was adventerous. loved it.i am relieved too.seeing saras how she emotionally broke down and hugged him...saras trying to console him were lovely perfect pics too how long did you spend on searching for these pics?in the emotional moment how kumud's feelings for saras burst out. ..her confession of love was beautiful. waiting for saras' and harsh' reaction.nishanth making arrangements to propose ishani.I am really tensed about their scene.waiting for the next update


Thanks a lot for your sweet wordss dear, well for searching pics, it literaly took just 2-3 minutes...luckily I got them easily...Well...lets see what happens next, will update next part just now.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sugar.and.spice



No problem at all dear!!! Please don't say sorry 😳 of course I understand 😊 you take your time and give your best 👍🏼 waise sabr ka phal meetha hota hai 😳 i'll be patient 😛 all the best for your studies too dear ❤️


Thanks a lot for understanding dear and your wishes too, my exams went well..
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Posted: 7 years ago

" I love you Saras...I love you..." Kumud said as she and Saras were hugging. Saras didn't reply just kept hugging her.

" Catch her or we'll be caught up..." The goon said to other goons while they saw Kumud and Saras , as he tried coming towards Kumud , Saras saw him and gave a punch on his face , kumud broke the hug as she turned , " Saras.." She screamed while Saras looked at her and nodded in a 'no'.

He sat down near the goon and started beating him blue and black on his face, Kumud tried getting the goon free.

" Saras leave him...please...Saras..." Kumud shouted while at the end Saras left him.

" How dare him?" Saras said angrily as he looked at Kumud who was trying to stop him.

" Saras...he'll get his punishment...Stop it..." Kumud said as she got the goon free and again hugged Saras crying , she was in fear , deep fear while Saras understood it and caressed her head , soon the Driver of the bus came.

Saras looked at him, left Kumud and went to him, "These people tried to...tried to mistreat Kumud..." He said while the Driver who was quite an old man looked towards the goon fallen on floor and others standing by his side , " Don't worry...I'll handle them...you take the girl..." The Driver told Saras who nodded and held Kumud , before going he passed a last glare at the goons who were then handled by the driver and his men.

" Saras...I need to call Ishani...My Phone..." Kumud said once they were inside and seated on a 2 seater.

" No Kumud, she would get worried if she hears your voice in such condition...talk to her later..." Saras said as he caressed her cheeks , Kumud nodded.

**

The sun had dimmed till now , morning turning into night, the stars came out while Saras looked towards Kumud who was sitting at the window side and looking out at the moon as it was shining among the stars.

The stars hung above them, as if strung in the air by invisible strings. Somewhere in the starry night was a beating human heart , Saras was feeling weird as for the first time from the time he had seen the apparent change in Kumud , he felt like the old Kumud was back , the one scared of the world , he looked towards her while a drop of tear escaped his eyes unknown to his own self.

"Kumud..." He whispered lightly which Kumud didn't seem to hear.

" Kumud..." He this time said a bit loudly while Kumud turned to look at him.

" Ji..." She asked confused. Saras smiled and nodded in a 'no'. " Nothing..." He said tensed.

Saras turned his face towards other side , he couldn't control his tears , what she meant to him was something out of the world , her silence pierced his heart.

He looked towards Kumud gaining up enough courage when he suddenly realized that she had been fast asleep taking the support of the window.

Suddenly the bus had a bolt which led to Kumud to move and as she was about to hit the window , Saras kept his hand to protect her

"Ahhh..." He whispered while tears fell from his eyes , he was hardly hit by Kumud's head.

" If she gets hurt..." He thought as he slowly held her head and put it on his shoulder.

He smiled as he looked at her.

Tu safar mera
Hai tu hi meri manzil
Tere bina guzara
Ae dil hai mushkil

He remembered what she told him , " Joh Pyaar Hai Kumud , usse Kyun Chupa Rahi Ho..." Saras thought as he knew that her confession was just her subconscious mind's truth which she actually never knew .

Tu mera khuda
Tu hi duaa main shaamil
Tere bina guzara
Ae dil hai mushkil

Mujhe azmaati hai teri kami
Meri har kami ko hai tu laazmi

" Sab Kuch Hai Kumud...Par Tumhare Chehre Ki Woh Khushi Nahi jiske Liye Mein Jann Bhi de Sakta Hun..." Saras thought.

Junoon hai mera
Banu main tere kaabil
Tere bina guzaara
Ae dil hai mushkil

Yeh rooh bhi meri
Yeh jism bhi mera
Utna mera nahi
Jitna hua tera

" Nahi Janta , Mera Pyaar Kamzhoor Hai Kai Jo Tumhe Ab Tak Apne Hone Ka Yakeen Nahi Dila Saka Yaa Mera Pyaar Shayad Hai Hi Nahi...Intezar Karne Ke Liye Tayiar Hun Kumud Par Intezar Ke Mayne Bhi Toh Tabhi Honge Na Jab Mujhe Pata Hoga , Ki Iss Intezaar Ka Ant , Kabhi Toh Hoga..."

Tune diya hai jo
Woh dard hi sahi
Tujhse mila hai toh
Inaam hai mera

Mera aasmaan dhoondhe teri zameen
Meri har kami ko hai tu laazmi

Saras put his head on top of Kumud's head as he too slept , tear drops falling down his eyelids.

Zameen pe na sahi
Toh aasmaan mein aa mil
Tere bina guzaara
Ae dil hai mushkil

The stars in the sky looked at them , they lay under the stars, which were like a beautiful, surreal blanket above their heads. Sometimes people become like stars- They fall to make someone's wish come true , jut like Saras did , his heart had always beaten for his Kumud, he didn't knew when he'll get her , he'll get or not...His Trials would end or his trials would never end but his love always gave him the strength to live for her , because she was the reason for his survival...The stars above saw the beautiful couple as they blessed them to always remain together...bounded by this surreal feeling of...Love...

Maana ki teri maujoodgi se
Yeh zindagani mehroom hai
Jeene ka koi dooja tareeka
Na mere dil ko maloom hai

Tujhko main kitni shiddat se chaahun
Chahe toh rehna tu bekhabar
Mohtaj manzil ka toh nahi hai
Yeh ek tarfa mera safar safar
Khoobsurat hain manzil se bhi
Meri har kami ko hai tu laazmi

Adhoora hoke bhi hai ishq mera kaamil
Tere bina guzara ae dil hai mushkil


Edited by .Piyali.. - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
a complete samud update.wow.it's a treat.
kumud hugging saras and saying I love you was beautiful. I wondered why saras didn't react.later I understood that Sara's realized that its her subconscious mind which made her confess her love.is it right? kumud doesn't know that she confessed her love?kumud freeing the goon from saras. ..saras' anger...hug...so emotional.Saras protecting kumud by keeping his hand over there. ..keeping her head in his shoulder...so beautiful.Saras' tears...his monologue were emotional .nice pics
Edited by jasminerahul - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Fabulous Chapter

Though I was so surprised as to why Saras did not confess his love to Kumud too
so does this mean Kumud has no idea that she actually confessed to Saras
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update...Kumud confessed his feelings to Saras...Saras saves Kumud whereas Kumud is still in fear...waiting for the next update...thank u 4 pm...
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Posted: 7 years ago

interesting confession...
little emotional...
nice update
thanks for the pm 👍🏼
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Posted: 7 years ago
glad that your exams went well dear 😳 👍🏼

as for this episode, what a sweet and romantic one 😳 ❤️

kumud's confession (even though it arose from the subconscious) was awesome 😳 great placement ⭐️

i loved the the special characters in this episode...the stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️ what a poetic style of writing, giving great importance to the stars 👏 and your comparison of people with stars, superb 👍🏼

lovely choice of using Ae Dil Hai Mushkil too ❤️

great job Piyali 👏 this episode has shown me another side of you as a writer 👍🏼

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