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Posted: 5 years ago

Never read this story. Since its being updated again, will pick it up. Have to start at the beginning.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: coderlady

Never read this story. Since its being updated again, will pick it up. Have to start at the beginning.

Hey I'll be more than happy if you join in, Do let me know if you need pm 😀

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: .Piyali..

Part 52:

Due to misnumbering on TU, I thought this part was 50th so this blunder, But chalo lets celebrate still.

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Part 50...Seriously, we reached Part 50...after so many years of this story, I am here writing the 50th part , I don't know how to explain you all how am feeling...You know this is my first story completing 50 Parts...Golden Jublee as it is said...I am really very thankful to all of you for the support you bestowed upon me and tolerated with my such long delays and short Parts and of course weird behaviour...Thanks you all, can't take names for now because so many people have been associated in this journey that I fear I would forget many but yes , I can do say that this FF gave me some of my bestest friends and most amazing people those whom I cherish in my life and who are my friends and will remain forever including those with whom I am no more in contact...
This ff is my own favourite ff from amongst I am writing because it gave me so so so many friends...Thanks a lot to all of you...
Now as you all might be knowing by now how bad I am at expressing myself so I won't say more or rather blabber more but still there's a thing needed to be done before the part and that is the quiz I had been planning since ages....Haha...it truly took a lot of time but I know most of you didn't even understood it provided my not so good way of explaining so trying again simply I'll just ask a few questions and give the 5 options , you need to select one according to the one that matches your thoughts the most and write in the comment section, according to that I'll tell you that which character of THIS FF do you resemble with the most...like are you the sweet-innocent Kumud or the Angry-Cute Ishani or the lovestruck Saras or the confused Ranveer or the pure heart Nishant so without wasting anytime, let me ask the questions...

Ques 1: Your Defination of Love?

A. Love is confusing.
B. I can't explain as I haven't fallen in it yet.
C. Love just happens anytime and anywhere with anyone.
D. Love is the connection of souls, the one you feel your connection with, you are in Love with him/her.


I choose D



E. We love the character, the innocence, the anger or any other trait...not the face.

Ques 2: What is Life according to you?

A. Enjoying
B. Caring for loved ones


I choose A and B



C. Getting your desire
D. Making as many friends as you can
E. Studying and maybe by mistakening loving someone

Ques 3: What can you do for your Loved one's happiness (Not necessary lover, it can be family)?

A. Go miles
B. Leave my everything , even if it means leaving the very person
C. Just be with them
D. Wait for them forever
E. Try to fill their life with as much happiness as I can


I choose c and E


Ques 4: If you know someone else as well loves the one you Love, what will you do?

A. Leave it on the one whom I love
B. Leave the one whom I love
C. Fight for my love
D. I don't really think I'll do anything, life will do its job on its own
E. Comparison


I did not understand the question


Ques 5: What will you do if you realised you are being cheated in Love?

A. I don't think such situation will arrive because I might be the one cheating
B. I am not in Love yet
C. Break down
D. Break the person's head
E. My love will never do anything of that sort with me


I choose E.but if it happens C


Ques 6: Your way of taking stand against wrong?

A. Ignore
B. Keep Enduring
C. I myself am wrong at many times, still need to change myself, will think after that
D. Fight for anyone with anyone, even if it means going to jail
E. Fight but with calmness


sometimes c and sometimes E


Ok so a short quiz , I know that it might be that none of the options match your thoughts but some might come near to it so you can select that one as your option, still if you think your thoughts are completely different , you can skip that question...I hope you do participate in it, it is funny , crazy but just a small try , My interpretations would be according to the Character sketches I have shaped so it is just for fun (It is not serious) but just a game...it is not needed to be taken seriously, I'll tell you about the Character you resemble with in my Reply (On this part itself) so do participate, now enough of talking and I think I should start with the part...Do play the quiz, please...

Part:

"Kumud ki bachi...."Saras screamed as he ran behind a laughing Kumud now.

"You spoiled my favourite shirt..." Saras was surely angry.

"And you...Mr. Vyas , you spoiled my only face...what about that??" Kumud questioned, still running on the Dhaba Folding beds while Saras was running behind her, he still wasn't able to catch her.

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"Your face can be washed, my shirt can't be..."Saras replied while he almost reached her as she slowed down, as he tried to hold her, she started running faster, Saras lost it .

"Then thats great..."Kumud turned her face back while she stopped for a second as she stuck her tongue out, Saras was brimming with anger but finding the opportunity he again tried to catch her but Lo...Kumud started running again, Saras couldn't catch her.

"You know...I was wrong at calling you grandma...You are a monkey, just see yourself..."Saras screamed while now it was Kumud's turn to get angry, she stopped as she made a huge bubble of her face and turned back angrily, Saras had also stopped as he laughed at his own comment realizing what he said in a haste.


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"Saras..."Kumud stood at her place as Saras walked towards her laughing.

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"Did I say something wrong Kumud??" Saras questioned with a mischievous smile looking towards her bubble shaped cheeks and angry eyes.

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"Very wrong...Mr. Chimpanzee..."Kumud laughed as she hit Saras's head slightly and again started running away.


"Kumud..."Saras touched his head as he again started running behind her, angry again.

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"I wish someone was with me...better a girl...best either out of Ishani , Ishu or Ishita..."Ranveer thought sadly as he sat on a stone on the deserted road, he so hated his Mom for doing that with him...with her sweet innocent son.

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A thought suddenly striked Ranveer as he walked or rather ran with a smile towards his car, he opened the door and took out his bag. Frantically searching for something, he got hold of a transparent packet neatly kept among his untidily kept other necessities, he took it out and looked at it, it was the picture of Ishu he drew, his smile widened as he saw her smiling at him from within the picture.


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His eyes fixed on the smile of Ishu, he suddenly got distracted as he heard a sound of horn from somewhere, he looked towards the source and saw a truck just behind his car, the driver was continuously pressing the horn.

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"Arey Bandh Karo..."He shouted keeping his one hand on his left ear (The ear facing the truck) and holding the photo from other.

The driver blinked his eyebrows from within confused as to what Ranveer was saying.

"Bandh Karo...BANDH..."Ranveer again shouted walking towards the driver while the driver was still confused as he was himself shouting something which Ranveer couldn't hear.

"This..."Ranveer grumbled as he opened the Truck's unlocked door and pulled the driver's hand from the horn.

"Oh, You could have said loudly..."The driver came out and said in an innocent tone. Ranveer looked at him with widened eyes.

"Arey Gala Fadh Loon Apna..." Ranveer bursted out while the driver lowered his eyes seeing his anger.

"But mistake is yours na, how can you park your car in the middle and see something ...(The driver sees Ishu's sketch in his hand) Yes...a girl's Photo..."The driver questioned trying to show a bit of anger himself, he failed miserably.

"I am not happy seeing her photo in the middle of road but what to do, My car's petrol got over and I have nothing else to do...so I thought..." Ranveer bit his tongue as he realized that he was shouting about his weird love for the picture of a girl he met just once in the middle of road...So what if it was deserted? Animals might listen in the jungles around.

"So I thought to adore my Love..."The driver revealed his mischievous side while Ranveer looked at him shocked.

"No, I don't Love her..."Ranveer had his instant reply.

"I think you should think about it again, by the way, leave it...I am already late...I need to reach Kolkata soon, can you please remove your car from the middle..." The driver said checking his watch while Ranveer looked towards the sky for a second, smiled and then held the driver's shoulder.

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"You...You want to go to Kolkata??"Ranveer questioned the driver smiling while the driver nodded quite confused.

"Ok, can you please leave me there...Please...Please...I am cute innocent child in need of help, Please help me...please..."Ranveer shook the driver with 50% excitement and 50% hope.

"Ok...But remove the car..." The driver got free as he already got shaken by Ranveer's excited pulls and pushes on him.

"Yaa...We'll together push it..."Ranveer smiled while he held the driver's hand and literally dragged him towards the car.

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"You truly got me tired today..."Kumud said as she sat on her bus seat next to Saras who acquired the window seat this time.

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"Same pinch..."Saras smiled as he pinched her.

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"Ouch..."Kumud screamed in pain while Saras laughed.

"Chimpanzee..."Kumud angrily remarked as she hit his head slightly.

"Same pinch..."Saras was about to pinch her hand again but before sat she took back her hand, laughing.

Saras who was smiling looked towards her with a kiddish anger and then suddenly laughed.

They both continued laughing together for a while, they were truly enjoying each other's company.


After a lot of laughing, a question suddenly hit Kumud and so she turned to Saras.

"Sarar, how did you know that I was coming to Kolkata and you followed me na..." Kumud forgot her laughter and was staring at him angrily now.

Sarar bit his tongue, he did knew the question was coming but it was too early, still he answered with courage.

"So what, the way you asked Ranveer's number yesterday, I got suspicious and thought to ask you immediately in morning but when I came to college, you were standing in queue for the those going to Jaisalmar , I thought to talk to you but you silently slipped out so I thought...why not follow..." Sarar answered and smiled cutely as he said the last 3 words.

"Like a stalker...right??" Kumud questioned.

"Of course not but tell me , what about you...Jalisalar to Kolkata...How??" Sarar asked while Kumud turned her face to the other side.

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"For me you are a stalker and why should I tell one??"

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After much try both Ranveer and driver managed to push Ranveer's car at a side of the clearing while Ranveer with a thought to call his driver to pick the car decided his return journey by a bus.

"So go at the back and sit..." The driver told Ranveer while Ranveer looked at him confused.

"At the back...But why , I'll sit beside you..." Ranveer almost ordered while the driver blantly nodded in a 'no'.

"Why??"

"Because the seat is filled..."The driver smiled lovingly while Ranveer blinked his eyebrows.

'By Whom' was Ranveer's next question.

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"So lectures of the day over...lets call Kumu, its been ages I talked to her..."Ishani opened her bag as she took out her phone while walking in the college corridor.

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"Yes, even me..." Nishant said remembering how excited Kumud was for his proposal to Ishani.

"Acha Ishani...do you have any work today??"Nishant questioned while walking while Ishani suddenly lifted her eyes from her phone to look at him.

"No, Not really...why??"Ishani asked raising her eyebrows.

"Ok, so lets go on a long drive in my car...just like that, we'll talk to Kumud on the way..." Nishant smiled at his own amazing idea.


"Brilliant, lets go..."Ishani responded smiling.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Samud chasing scene was funny.saras complaining that kumud spoiled his shirt n kumud complaining that he spoiled her face...so funny.loved saras' answer which id true.face can be washed easily but not the shirt. I liked both enjoying each others company.when kumud called him chimpanzee saras saying same pinch was funny.come on kumud...don't consider him as a stalker n share everything with him.driver ranveer scene was so cute.frankly speaking I never expected it.each n every dialogue n the whole scene was very cute..i wish i could see this driver.ranveer missing ishani. even I am missing ishveer together.waiting for nishant ishani drive..perfect pics.I loved nishant ishani pic the most.I haven't seen it before

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Posted: 5 years ago


Hey Jasmine, You are a combination of all of them 😛 though you resemble Saras and Nishant the most 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Samud chasing scene was funny.saras complaining that kumud spoiled his shirt n kumud complaining that he spoiled her face...so funny.loved saras' answer which id true.face can be washed easily but not the shirt. I liked both enjoying each others company.when kumud called him chimpanzee saras saying same pinch was funny.come on kumud...don't consider him as a stalker n share everything with him.driver ranveer scene was so cute.frankly speaking I never expected it.each n every dialogue n the whole scene was very cute..i wish i could see this driver.ranveer missing ishani. even I am missing ishveer together.waiting for nishant ishani drive..perfect pics.I loved nishant ishani pic the most.I haven't seen it before

Aww, Thanks a lot dear for your sweet words, Even I would have loved to put the driver's pic but I doubted I could any perfect pic so decided to not put...That Nishant Ishani pic seems like some award function pic of Arjun-radhika to me, It had Mouni too whom I cropped 😛

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Posted: 5 years ago

Thanks for updating


will read and comment by the weekend

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