ISHMUD (DIL KI DOR ) WITH SAMUD AND ISHVEER - Page 57

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Posted: 7 years ago
Hello Piyali 😃😃😃
Jasminerahul recommended this FF to me when I told her about my fondness for Shikar's and Ishani's pairing 😳❤️. I really liked your FF from the start-it has many attractions such as the characterisation, relationship between the characters and the royal theme 👏👏👏

There's something about your writing style that makes the reader journey along with the characters...especially in the friendship scenes 😳 the camaraderie between the friends is really delightful 👏 they make me happy 😳👍🏼

Your FF is a superb package with all the emotions involved 👏⭐️there has never been a dull moment in your 40+ episodes 😃😳 l love the storyline too, it weaves all the characters together beautifully ❤️ I have no apt words to describe Kumud's and Ishani's relationship ❤️😳

I started reading this FF since Jasminerahul told me that it had many Shikar + Ishani (Nishani) scenes 😳 Hehehe I know that the real love story is between Ranveer and Ishani, but I am super satisfied reading the cute moments between Nishant and Ishani😳👏❤️

Of course, Ranveer's and Ishani's flashback sequence was very entertaining 😆😛

Apart from them, I also appreciate the sweet scenes you write for Samud 😳 I did not watch Saraswatichandra but I thoroughly enjoy their scenes in your FF 👏⭐️ Even Harsh's 👍🏼

Great job girl ⭐️⭐️⭐️Waiting for more 😳😃😳

P.S. loads of thanks to Jasminerahul for this recommendation😳😳😳

Edited by sugar.and.spice - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sugar.and.spice

Hello Piyali 😃😃😃

Jasminerahul recommended this FF to me when I told her about my fondness for Shikar's and Ishani's pairing 😳❤️. I really liked your FF from the start-it has many attractions such as the characterisation, relationship between the characters and the royal theme 👏👏👏

There's something about your writing style that makes the reader journey along with the characters...especially in the friendship scenes 😳 the camaraderie between the friends is really delightful 👏 they make me happy 😳👍🏼

Your FF is a superb package with all the emotions involved 👏⭐️there has never been a dull moment in your 40+ episodes 😃😳 l love the storyline too, it weaves all the characters together beautifully ❤️ I have no apt words to describe Kumud's and Ishani's relationship ❤️😳

I started reading this FF since Jasminerahul told me that it had many Shikar + Ishani (Nishani) scenes 😳 Hehehe I know that the real love story is between Ranveer and Ishani, but I am super satisfied reading the cute moments between Nishant and Ishani😳👏❤️

Of course, Ranveer's and Ishani's flashback sequence was very entertaining 😆😛

Apart from them, I also appreciate the sweet scenes you write for Samud 😳 I did not watch Saraswatichandra but I thoroughly enjoy their scenes in your FF 👏⭐️ Even Harsh's 👍🏼

Great job girl ⭐️⭐️⭐️Waiting for more 😳😃😳

P.S. loads of thanks to Jasminerahul for this recommendation😳😳😳


Hello dear, Thanks a lot for such sweet words and literally reading 40+ updates, I am really very happy that you liked the FF, your comment was truly a delight for me to read, something that brought a huge smile on my face , really, your each word brought a feeling of satisfaction in me, the fact that I could make you happy and make you enjoy this journey.
Thanks a lot for reading dear.
P.S.-Really, loads of thanks t to Jasmine for recommending this story to you.😊
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Posted: 7 years ago


Part 48-

The follower came back after the call while he saw the closed door of bus , he was confused , he heard some slow screams from inside , He raised his hoddy as he started banging the door.

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Nishant looked towards his surroundings , he smiled , "Ishani, you'll get the biggest surprise of your life tomorrow..."


It was the collage terrace decorated with all kinds of balloons and flowers , mostly the one's Ishani loved , " I love everything that you love Ishani...Even singing..." He said as he moved out of the terrace.

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" What is happening? Why is the door locked?Kumud... Kumud..." The follower said as his scared yet angry eyes were revealed.

Kumud heard the shouts , " Saras..." She thought to herself as her face was covered by the goon.

" Sar...Sara..." She tried hard to speak getting free from their hold but she wasn't able to.

She closed her eyes as her tears started to fell down from her eyes , " Kumudini...You are even stronger than me..." She remembered what Saras used to tell her in childhood.

" What yaar Kumud , You need to fight for yourself , only then others fight for you..." She remembered what Ishani used to tell you when she was being mistreated by her Chacha-Chachi.

She opened her eyes not caring about anything and bit the one who held her face on his hand , he screamed while the other goon's attention were diverted on him and so they left her in that moment of time , Kumud pushed one of them aside while she ran towards the front seats of the bus.

The one who fell down seemed to be down while other three didn't realize what was happening and were looking towards the one who got injured and so she got the time to run.

" I won't be able to open the door in this much time..." She thought to herself and so tried hiding between the seats lowering herself knowing she'll be caught but still gaining some time.


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In a hurry , she tried searching her phone never realizing that she had forgotten it on her seat out of tension , she searched her hand bag which was still by her side and took out her books , files and little necessities she had to search for her phone but she couldn't find it , atlast she saw something in her bag and something tickled in her mind.

"Arrey woh Ladki mujhe Dhaka marker bhag gayi...(That girl has ran away pushing me)" The goon who had fell down said as he got up.

All looked towards him while Kumud hearing them got more tensed, they looked towards the gate , " Gate is closed , she hasn't gone out..." One of them said. They nodded and started searching for her here and there in bus.

Soon one of them found her and dragged her out by her arm , " What you thought? You'll run away..." He said while as he dragged her with force , she got up crying.


A piece of sleeves of her suit got tore by his force , she looked at him and then pulled out her other hand which she had hidden behind herself and pushed something in the goon's arm , " Ahhh..." He screamed as she took out the injection she has injected in his arm.

She saw him with anger as she remembered Ishani giving her those injections , His vision blurred and he fell down while other three seeing him came running towards her , she showed them the other injections she has prepared , " These injections are of unconsciousness , you too'll fell down the same way..." She said angrily pointing the needle towards them while they all maintained a safe distance from her.


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" Once that happens , you'll wake up in police station..." She angrily said as they all looked at her in horror.

One of them kept looking at her while trying to come forwards stedily but she slapped him hard on his cheeks before he could touch her , " I don't wanna use them because they are specially for surgeries and are really dangerous in normal use , don't compel me..." She said as she tried hard to hide her fear behind the layers of anger she was showing them.

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" Kumud..." Saras kept shouting while now he had tears in his eyes , " Someone open the door..." He hit the door trying hard to open it.


Kumud showing them the injection moved out of the seat and to the front row gate and opened it while all kept looking at her as she did that , she soon succedded in opening it and ran out , the tears she had controlled till now came out rolling down her eyes again. She looked at her sides and the view of Dhaba while her eyes fell on Saras who was standing on the other gate banging it hard , she cried hard as she ran to him throwing the injections mid way and in a moment hugged him tightly keeping her head on his chest and crying badly. Saras was left shocked as he realized what had happened. He held her head and tears rolled down his cheeks as well as she hugged him tighter and tighter with each passing second.


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Jab tak tujhe pyar se
Beinteha main bhar na doon
Jab tak main duaaoon sa
Sau dafa tujhe padh na loon
Haan mere paas tum raho
Jaane ki baat na karo
Mere saath tum raho
Jaane ki baat na karo

" Saras , saras..."She said as Saras moved his hand through her head comforting her , she broke the hug and looked into his eyes , then hugged him again more tightly.


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Wo...
Tum aa gaye baazuon mein mere
Sau savere liye
Sau savere liye
Haan baadalon se utaara gaya
Tumko mere liye
Sirf mere liye

" Woh...Woh...Those people , they are really bad , Saras..." She cried while he kept his hand on her head and hugged her more tightly.

" Kumud , , don't cry...What happened ? Nothing ,..." Saras said as he himself started crying by now.

Jab tak meri ungliyan

Tere baalon se kuch keh na le

Jab tak teri lehar mein
Khwahishein meri beh na le
Haan mere paas tum raho
Jaane ki baat na karo
Mere sath tum raho
Jaane ki baat na karo
Wo...

" Nothing happened na Saras..." Kumud said as she looked at his eyes.


https://i.imgur.com/KUe3sC4.jpg

Saras caressed her face and tried to smile , nodding in a 'No' , Kumud hid her face in his chest still crying while he too kept his face on her's.

" I love you Saras...I love you..." Kumud said as she and Saras were hugging. Saras didn't reply just kept hugging her.

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A/N: Hello friends, read some comments stating that hope Saras saves Kumud, just wanted to say that Kumud doesn't really need Saras to save her, she can save herself like every girl can.😊 Have a nice da.

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Edited by .Piyali.. - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: .Piyali..


Hello dear, Thanks a lot for such sweet words and literally reading 40+ updates, I am really very happy that you liked the FF, your comment was truly a delight for me to read, something that brought a huge smile on my face , really, your each word brought a feeling of satisfaction in me, the fact that I could make you happy and make you enjoy this journey.
Thanks a lot for reading dear.
P.S.-Really, loads of thanks t to Jasmine for recommending this story to you.😊

I'm really really really glad to read of the effect my post had on you dear 😃⭐️
it was my sincere appreciation for your work 😳❤️
Keep on rocking dear 👍🏼
And yaye you've posted the next episode 🥳 I've been waiting !!! Can't wait to read 😳😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
A nice sweet episode where Kumud manages to save herself successfully 👏👏👏
I really liked the way by which Kumud fought the goons- with the injections from Ishani 👍🏼👍🏼 Ishani's love is always by Kumud's side (regardless of her physical presence/ absence) ❤️😳

Kumud confessed to Saras !!! ⭐️😳 what will Harsh do now??? 😲

And my poor Nishant 😭😭 he is going to be heartbroken soon 💔😔hope he'll have a pair here unlike in MATH 😉

Waiting for the next episode dear 😳
Edited by sugar.and.spice - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sugar.and.spice

I'm really really really glad to read of the effect my post had on you dear 😃⭐️
it was my sincere appreciation for your work 😳❤️
Keep on rocking dear 👍🏼
And yaye you've posted the next episode 🥳 I've been waiting !!! Can't wait to read 😳😳


Thanks a lot for wishes dear, Sorry for making you wait dear...Exams on head being one reason.

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Originally posted by: sugar.and.spice

A nice sweet episode where Kumud manages to save herself successfully 👏👏👏

I really liked the way by which Kumud fought the goons- with the injections from Ishani 👍🏼👍🏼 Ishani's love is always by Kumud's side (regardless of her physical presence/ absence) ❤️😳

Kumud confessed to Saras !!! ⭐️😳 what will Harsh do now??? 😲

And my poor Nishant 😭😭 he is going to be heartbroken soon 💔😔hope he'll have a pair here unlike in MATH 😉

Waiting for the next episode dear 😳


So happy you liked the update dear and actually remembered the injections from Ishani thing, that was something I wished to highlight, though in a subtle way, well , why think he'll get a heartbreak?😉
Sorry, no pair for him but our Ishani is here to be his for long, though not forever.😊
Will try to post soon.
Edited by .Piyali.. - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
kumud saving herself was adventerous. loved it.i am relieved too.seeing saras how she emotionally broke down and hugged him...saras trying to console him were lovely perfect pics too how long did you spend on searching for these pics?in the emotional moment how kumud's feelings for saras burst out. ..her confession of love was beautiful. waiting for saras' and harsh' reaction.nishanth making arrangements to propose ishani.I am really tensed about their scene.waiting for the next update
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: .Piyali..


Thanks a lot for wishes dear, Sorry for making you wait dear...Exams on head being one reason.



No problem at all dear!!! Please don't say sorry 😳 of course I understand 😊 you take your time and give your best 👍🏼 waise sabr ka phal meetha hota hai 😳 i'll be patient 😛 all the best for your studies too dear ❤️
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Originally posted by: .Piyali..


So happy you liked the update dear and actually remembered the injections from Ishani thing, that was something I wished to highlight, though in a subtle way, well , why think he'll get a heartbreak?😉
Sorry, no pair for him but our Ishani is here to be his for long, though not forever.😊
Will try to post soon.



hmmm yes dear, I've an eye for detail 😉 i never guessed the significance of the injections when Ishani gave them to Kumud though... nice connection 👏

hehe really ??? okayyy now I am very curious 😛

btw don't rush dear 😳 once again, take your time and give your best 👍🏼

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