Life Not A Fairy Tale - AR FF - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Riddhi what?
Y suspense hamesha?
Nyways nice part
Thnks for d PM
Contd soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SoniTrueLuv

Riddhi what?

Y suspense hamesha?
Nyways nice part
Thnks for d PM
Contd soon
Luv


I like to end it on suspense😉

Anyway thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Hey dear
Awesome update...loved it bt I think story is moving slowly plz write longer part...waiting fr ridz nd armaan frst meeting.
Please update soon
Love
Sania
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
really nice part cute couples thanks for the PM next part soon plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Nice part.
Good start.
Cont soon
Thnx for d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
PART- 3

P: Wo atul riddhi na mjhe chod kar college chli gyi h uski frnds ka call aa ya tha ki 12 bje college office bnd ho jaega or kl se vacations start hai to islie wo chli gyi.

At: Chlo koi baat nhi wha uska thodi der ka hi kaam h. Jldi hi wapis aa jaegi.

Any: are padma ji kaisi hai aap or riddhima nhi aai.

P: mai achi hu wo ridhi kisi jaruri kaam se college gyi hai abi thodi der tak aa jaegi.

Then armaan came there and touch Padma's feet.

P: khush rho beta kaise ho? Tumse to milna bhut kam hi hota h
.
A: m acha hu anty wo bass...

Any: Rhno do ammy sbko pta and h tmhari hi zid thi masters krne k lie banglore jaoge or ab dkho wha se ate hi business me lag gye ho.

A: Mummy to khali baith k kya krta or waise b rahul bhai ko ajkl muski or baby pr dhyaan dena hai to papa ko b to meri jarurat thi na.

Anji: Right armaan akele work load handle krna bhut mushkil ho jata h. Mjhe hi dkh lo muski k bina akele parlour manage krna is very tough for me.

A: Dkha maa...thanks Anji koi to h jisne meri side li.

Anji: anytime.

Any: acha chlo pooja start ho gyi h.

Here rahul and muskaan are doing the havana and pandit ji was chanting mantras. All guests were sitting around them,then pandit ji asked baby's nani for new clothes which is changed by ananya baby was looking cute in his new clothes.
Then pandit ji gave the letter for baby's name 'A' . All were thinking about the name when they heard a girls voice

Voice: Aniv

M: Hey riddhi nyc name haina rahul.

R: Ya it is but what does it means.

Ri: Aniv is sweet.

M: awww

B: Bhai hame to ye name khub pasand aya beta good choice.

Ri: Thanks uncle.

Any: To rahul muskaan beta final h ye name

Muskaan look towards rahul wo nodded in agreement

M: Ha mummy g

B: chlo ji ab pandit ji bche ka naam final hua ab aap bhojan khaie

Then rahul Muskaan take blessings from elders and the function goes on

Anji: yar riddhi tune naam to bhut bdia dhunda.

At: par riddhi tu bheeg kaise gyi.

R: wo bhai bahr barish shuru ho gyi h islie

Anji: ek kaam kr mai tjhe muski k kpde de deti hu tu change kar le

Then riddhi goes to change clothes and anji came down but riddhi was taking lots of tym.

Armaan was going upstairs when padma asked him to call riddhima downstairs.

A: riddhima?

P: Ha beta meri choti beti bhul gye ho kya abi jisne baby ka naam btaya.

A: oh ya...wo sorry anty use do teen baar hi milna hua h so it's just slipped out of my mind. U wait I'll call her.

Then ammy enter the guests room and saw one girl standing near window looking towards rain.

A: uhhm riddhima right..?

Ri: Yes...and u r Armaan?

A: Yup...Hi

Ri: Hey. How's u? Long time?

A: yes..I m good...u?

Ri: fine and smiles

A: wo actually padma anty calling u downstairs.

Ri: ohh han wo barish ko dkh kr mai bhul hi gyi mjhe neeche jana hai mai chlti hu bye.

A: Bye. See u soon.

Then riddhima goes from there and armaan keep looking at her till she disappeared...nice girl ...

After an hour all d guests were gone only family members were sitting in the living room when riddhima's phn ring

Ri: what? Kaise ok ok I'm coming tu mjhe raaste me mil
...
Ri: Ha mai bass nikal hi rhi hu 15 min tak phunch jaungi.
...
Ri: Bye

P: kya hua beta.

All were looking at her as she was looking tense

Ri: actually mumma divya k papa ko do din phle heart attack aya h hme abi pts chla hai so nupur ka phn tha we r going to divya as she need us right now.

At: Ha riddhi tu jaa koi problem ho to call kar dena

Ri: thk h bhai i'm going...bye to all
And she left

B: bhut samajhdar hai riddhima

P: ji bhai sahab ab bdi ho gyi h...bs ab jldi se iske lie ldka dkh k shadi krwani hai.Bss ek baar isse baat kr lu iss topic par.

Any: Ha bhabhi ab to hum b armaan ki shadi krwane ki soch rhe hai...or armaan ne to is matter me haa bhi kar di hai

M & R : what?

R: ammy tu maan gya...he got happy and hug armaan...nikki to jump on armaan.

N: bhai apne hume to btaya hi nhi.

A: guys chill aap log to aise khush ho rhe ho jaise meri shadi ki date final ho gyi ho...abi maine sirf ldki dkhne k lie haa kri hai.

N: bhai ye b koi khushi ki baat we are kam thode hi hai.

And d talk goes on for some time and everyone retired towards their home.

No next part until get good response and it's final
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Nice part
Continue soon
Thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Nice part. Please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
lovey best story thanks for the pm next soon plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Cute update
Nice part
Luvd it
Thnx for d pm
Plzz cont asap
T.c

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