Life Not A Fairy Tale - AR FF - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
itta. chhotu sa itni jldi khtm ho gya bt bht acha tha really nice part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
hey dear
Lovely part...loved the way the story is moving.
Please write longer parts.
Love
sania
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART - 6

At evening in Gupta house atul ,anji & padma were sitting together

At: Maa wo riddhi k lie ek rishta aya hai.

P: itni jldi but beta abi to hmne iss bare me kisi se baat hi ni ki.

Anji: Ha maa wo uss din muski k ghr baat hui thi na iss bare me to unhone rishta bheja hai.

P: acha kon hai fr ldka..?

At: Armaan

P: armaan yani ki Muskaan ka devar

Anji: Ha maa whi

Padma thought about this

At: apka kya khayal hai maa...mai or anji to khush hai iss rishtey k lie but aap btaao.

Anji: Ha maa he is good at nature and well settled also.

P: Ha beta keh to tum thk rhe ho mjhe bhi wo acha lga.

Voice: kon acha laga ma...?

As they turn around they saw kirti and shubhankar were coming in

Sh: kiski baat hoti hai maa.

P: wo beta riddhi k lie ek rishta aya hai whi discuss kar rhe the.

K: acha maa kon hai ladka..?

And then padma told them about armaan and other stuff..They also like this rishta for riddhima and thought to talk about this with malik's

Anji call muski

Anji: Hey muski kaisi hai..?

M: Mai thk hu tu bta

Anji: i m good

M: so bta Kaise phn kia

Anji: wo muski subha tmne to baat krri thi armaan or riddhi k bare me

M: Ha so kya decide kia tmne

Anji: actually maa,di& jiju agreed for this and deciding to fix a meeting with u guys

M: Ha y not I'll talk to mummy and papa and then let u know

Anji: ok

Then muski told this to rahul and they go to tell this to their parents. All were sitting in living room

R: mummy papa apse kuch baat krni thi

B: Ha bolo beta

M: wo papa ji apne jo rishtey ki baat ki thi wo ready hai bss ek baar milne ka plan kr rhe hai

Any: Ha ha kyu nhi beta hum kal hi unk ghr chlte hai

A: wait a minute guys what u all are talking about..?

Any: Beta hum tere lie ldki dkhne k lie jane ki baat kar rhe hai.

A: What itni jldi

B: ammy now don't back out u were the one who earlier agreed

A: ya papa but mjhe kya pta tha ap log in itni jldi ldki dhundh loge

N: bhai jab shadi krni hi hai to jldi kya or late kya

R: Right niks

A: ok but whose d girl what's her name..?

M: u'll get to know soon when I'll directly meet her

A: But...ok

M: so mummy mai unhe bol du hum kal as rhe hai

Any: Hai beta we will be there at 6pm

R: That's great so ammy kal office se jldi off

A: Ya bhai now bye to all I have some work and he left and then muski call anji and inform her about the details

Anji: they are coming tomorrow at 6pm

P: kirti tu bhi kal time se aa jana or so shubhankar beta

Sh: Don't worry maa hum phunch jaenge infact kirti ko mai yha duphar me hi drop kar dunga.

At: That's good we should plan dinner for them

P: yes

Riddhima was looking at every one as she doesn't get what akl are you talking about

R: Hold on plzz koi mjhe btaega kon aarha hai jiske lie aap sab itne excited ho rhe ho

Antra: Maasi ladke wale

Kirti put her hand on antra mouth

R: what kon ladke Wale?

Everyone remain silent but when she glared at them

P: wo riddhi kal tjhe dkhne ladk wale aa rhe h

R: kya mjhe kisi ne kuch btaya kyu nhi

At: riddhi sab kuch abi tere samne hi to final hua hai

Anji: Yaa abhi unhi logo ka phn tha or isse phle tu unk baare me puche to wo to tjhe kal directly hi pta chlega

K: Or haa kl ache se ready hona khi lower or tee me hi ghumti rhe

R: ok

Then she is left for her room and everyone have a sigh of relief

R: Papa kal mjhe ladke wale dkhne aarhe hai mjhe believe nhi hora ye sab itni jldi ho rha hai apko gye hue itne saal ho gye but ab tk mjhse ye baat digest nhi hoti...pta nhi papa wo log Kaise honge...koi mjhe pyar krega bhi ya...and a tear drop from her eyes remembering something and she remain in her thoughts and doze off.

Other side armaan was laying on his bed

A: Dude ab finally tjhe shadi krni hi padegi...but kya mai iss responsibility k lie ready hu...u know na kitna jhamela hota hai shadi and all...biwi ki suno use the Manao...ladai jhagde and but yar pyar bhi to hota hai... but sirf kuch hi relations me khi to bss formality ya... pta nhi wo ldki kaisi hogi mjhe smjhegi..kya ma I use samajh paunga...and he also lost in his thoughts..

So finally story is coming on track and u all will surely like it..
Pm to those who have commented on last part.. but sorry if u guys don't have time for comments then i'll also not give pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
oho lovely ab mza aaega finally shadi great nice update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Hey dear
Awesome part...finally both came to knw abt their proposal nd both had diff thoughts abt it. Waiting what wil happen when AR met officially
waiting fr the next part
Love
Sania
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Nice one.
Beautiful update.
Waiting for d nxt one
Thnx for d pm
T.c
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
PART- 7

As the sun rises, hope also rises in some hearts and some fill with fear. As riddhima came down stairs already at 10, she saw her mother,bhai and bhabhi are sitting in the hall discussing something. She shook her head as she knew about the topic and asked her mother

R: kya baat hai mumma aaj apne subh subh apna jaldi uthne wala lecture start nhi kia or itni der tak mjhe sone dia no morning walk and all or bhai aap aj kaise itni jldi ready ho kar al set to go for work...

P: Chup jhalli jab sone do to problem naa sone do to problem ab se nhi sone dungi.

At: Ha riddhi tu maje le mjhe to in dono ladies ne jldi utha kar ghr se nikalne ki taiari kar li hai

Anji: shut up atul

At: ok bye everyone m shaam 5 bje tak aa jaunga or apke saman bhi le aunga...itni lambi list oh god...

P: atulll..

He went ...anji nudge riddhi

Anji: So ma'am get ready to prepare some snacks as u r master in that in our house...me and dii will prepare dinner

R: But mai kyu bnaau i m in no mood to cook today

P: But u have to smjii or apna famous pasta or paneer tikka bna...baki ka menu bhi decide kar lo market chle jao tumso or anjali jo bhi saman chaie le aao..so go now

In malik house at evening

B: are bhai sab kha ho chlna nhi hai kya

Any: Billy kyu shor macha rhe ho abi sirf 5 bje hai or hme wha 6 bje phunchna hai

R: Ha mumma but u have heard na first impression is the last impression or u also know about the traffic here.

M: waise hum sab to ready hai but ye nikki or ammy kidhar hai

B: Nikki has went to see armaan as today he is behaving like the lady of this house taking a lot of time to get ready

Rahul giggled at this while the two ladies glared at them

In room

A: Dude relax y r u so nervous. U r always cool fr aaj kyu nervous ho rha hai ...u r looking handsome so stop wondering and move everyone is waiting...but fr bhi yar mai shi to lag ra hu na

N: Nhi bhai aap thk nhi lag rhe ho

Armaan frowned at this

N: But aap dashing lag rhe ho ab chle..?

They all settled in a car and proceeded towards Gupta house

As they reached outside the house and was the one who got shocked to see the house as he knows to whom ds house belongs to

A: Don't tell me guys aap mere lie riddhima ko dkhne aae ho.

Everyone grin at him

B: Tjhe koi problem hai agar hai bhi to chup chap andar chal

They ring the bell,kirti open the door...they all greeted each other and settled in the living room

P: Beta jaao riddhima ko bula Lao

Kirti went to call riddhima ..here she was also nervous and standing in front of his father's photo

R: ufff papa aaj meri life ka itna important decision lia jaa rha hai and u r not with me...I miss u and a lone tear escape from her eyes...or pta ni wo ldka kaisa hoga ...she is pout at this and then heard kirti's voice and immediately remove her tear..

As she went with her she got shocked to see muskaan family there...and then she realized that the boy is non other than

R: ARMAAN?

I know it's short but will give next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Nice update
Thanks for PM
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Awsm one
Luvd it
Thnx for d pm
Cont soon
T.c
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Hey dear
Lovely update...waiting fr AR first official meeting fr marriage. Hoping everything goes well. Loved AR expression when they came to knw abt their proposal fr each other.
Please update soon
Love.
Sania

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