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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting concept :) I can't wait to read more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHARACTERS

Ananya & Billy Malik: Very Happily married couple. Have 3 children Rahul, Armaan & Nikita. Though they face ups and downs of the life but always together and a great family.

Rahul Malik: The eldest son of malik family of age 27. Works in family business. Happily married to his lady love Muskaan. Respect his parents and love his siblings a lot.

Armaan Malik: Handsome young boy of age 24. Ladla of malik family. Successful business man . Sweet,caring & possessive. Loves his family and friends a lot.
Really caring?

Nikita Malik: Princess of malik family of age 22. Doing MBA first year. Have a secret boyfriend Abhimanyu Modi who was her senior in college and now working in a MNC.

Padma & Shashank Gupta: They were happily married. But shashank died at d age pcmcia 48 due to liver failure and left his wife to nurture their family.

Kirti Shah: Elder daughter of Gupta's. Her father died when she was 21 and now she is 30 and married to shubhankar who is doctor. She runs a boutique. They have cute little girl antra of age 7.

Atul Gupta: Only son of gupta's . Handle his father's businesses with the help of his mother. He is 28 years old and happily married to Anjali. They don't have any baby still after 2 yrs of their marriage. But they are happy and in love with each other.

Riddhima Gupta: Beautiful young girl of age 22. Completed her B.com , want to study masters but can't. Very chirpy and always happy...but...in reality or just pretend?

Muskaan & Anjali Malhotra: Both r real sisters. Anjali is elder one of age 25 and had love+arranged marriage with atul. Muskaan is younger one of age 24 and had love marriage with rahul. Both sisters owned a combined beauty parlour.

So guyzz these r d characters of our story.

And guys unless u will press d like button and do comments its first part will not be going to post.

Thank u
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Life Not A Fairy Tale
PART- 1

As we enter the hall of a house,we can hear the noises all around. The hall was decorated beautifully with flowers and curtains. We see a lady instructing decoraters to Completed the work as soon as possible as the function is going to start in an hour.

Lady: Billy...Billy...kha ho?
B: Ha any yhi hu kya hua.
Any: Kitna kaam pda h...kha the tum jao dkho Caterers ne khane ka arrangement kia ki nhi or pandit hi.
He cut her in btw and said
B: Mai caterers k pass se hi aa rha hu sb ready ho gya h except u. Or pandit ji ko lene tumhara ladla chla gya h ata hi Hoga. So relax baby...
He said this by holding her in his arms
Any: Ye kya kar rhe ho.
B: Apni biwi ko shant kar rha hu.
Any: Sudhar jao Billy ab to tum dada ban gye ho or aaj hamare pote(grandson) ka namkaran hai.
B: Are chahe dada ban gya hu par dil to abi b jawan hai

Voice: papa ..mummy pandit ji aa gye.

Billy leave ananya and look towards the door where armaan was bringing pandit ji inside the house.
He offer pandit ji a place to sit and asked the servant to bring water and also told pandit ji about the necessary things for pooja are arranged so have a look at them. Then pandit ji got busy and Billy move towards his son.

A: Papa sudhar Jaaao
Any: Chup badmaash.
A: Kya maa abi aap hi to papa ko sudharne k lie keh rhi thi or ab mjhe daant rhe ho.
B: Ha yar to biwi hai ye meri to meri side to legi hi...(he said by side hugging ananya who smacked on his hand) jab teri biwi aegi tab tere 7 bhi aisa hi Hoga.
A: Jab hoga tab ki tab dekhi jaegi papa.
Any: Beta plz understand now u r 24. It's a good age for u to get married.
A: But mummy I want to concentrate on business right now.
B: U can concentrate on it after marriage also. And if you have any girl in your life so u can frankly tell us.
A: Nhi papa koi nhi hai mai whi shadi karunga jha aap log chahenge.
Any: To beta hum ladki dekhna shuru kare.
A: Yes mummy ( armaan said hesitating as he knew he can't escape now)

Both parents hug their child and beaming with happiness.

Voice: Are ammy kya aa gya hum to nazar hi ni ate maa papa ko.
A: Don't be jealous rahool Bhai.
Girl: He is saying ammy bhai aap k aage hmari to koi value hi nhi h(pouting)
B: Oye stop you 2 nautanki come here and join the family hug.

Both rahul and girl move towards them and joined the hug.

Any: Chlo ab hug and all buss kro guest ane shuru hone wale h. Rahul jaa dkh muskaan taiyar hui ya nhi and nikki tu bhi taiyar ho jaa fir jaa kar apni bhabhi ko help kar.
Rahul and Nikki: Yes mummy.

B: Any ab tum bhi ready ho jao kyunki sabse jyada time to tum leti ho taiyar hone me.
Any: Billy tum na... forget it and she goes from there.
A: Jao papa manao jaa k mummy ko yha ka kaam mai dkhta hu.

B: Yup son ab to manana hi padega. I m going and u also get ready.
A: ya papa...sigh...

Uhmmm shadi armaan get ready beta is baar to maa papa John's ladki dhundh kar hi rhenge and he also went towards d workers.

So here goes the first part guys hope u like it.
Stay blessed

Next part will be given if I get good amounts of like and comments... now it's up to you all
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey
Nice story
Armaan is yet bachelor
Ammy Rahul and niki brothers n sisters wow
Contd soon
Thnks for the PM
Luv
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb part... Hehehehehe

Armaan family is so sweet... Loved them...

Post bext soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Story toh mast lag raha h..
Looking forward to read
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey dear
Loving this story...armaan is so sweet...hope story gets interesting as it moves forward...eagerly waiting fr the next part.
Love
Sania
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
nice part loved it hero ki entry to ho gyi ab heroine ki bari hai come soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
too short update bt nyc one
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART- 2

As rahul enters his room he saw his wife sitting with their baby in her lap and relaxing. He got lost in her when his trance broken wd d ring of muskaans phone and he move towards them. Muskaan picked up d phone after passing him a smile and he took baby in his arms and got busy with him. Here muskaan answer the and started scolding the person.

M: Kya yar anji mai kab se tera wait kar rhi hi. Tune hi kha tha na ki tu aakar mjhe ready kregi islie mai baby ko b ready kar chuki hu or tu h ki ab tak aai hi nhi aisa thode hi hota h.

Anji: Muskaan...muskaan.. chup. Thand Rakh yar maine tjhe yhi khne k lie phn kia tha ki mai atul k 7 raste me hi hu or 10 min tak phunch rhi hu to plzz change kar le mai ate hi tjhe ready ka..
M: kya sirf tu or jiju hi are ho

Rahul frown at this info and asked muskaan what happened
Anji: Tu kabhi to puri baat sun lia kr. Maine kha mai or atul phunch rhe h or maa or riddhi abi aa jaenge as ridhi abi ready nhi thi.

M:Yar tu kaisi hai na wo log kya rikshaw par aenge tu thodi der unka wai..

Anji: Hold on muskaan. Kisne kha wo rikshaw par aenge yar ridhi knows to drive activa so they are coming by that as riddhi has to go to the colg after the fuction for collecting her T.C ...OK

M: Shukar hai baba ji ka maine to socha ki tu..

Anji: Tu sochti bhut hai muski pehle puri baat sun to lia kar or ab isse pehle tu mjse kirti di or jiju k bare me puche to mai tjhe btaa du ki wo abi thodi de me antra baby k 7 phunch rhe hai. Or ab phn rakh kyunki teri enquiry commission me mai tere ghar k bahr phunch gyi hu.so bye

And she cut the call and have a sigh and atul giggled all d way listening to the convo as he knew muski very well ( sali h yar Yakima)
PART- 2

As rahul enters his room he saw his wife sitting with their baby in her lap and relaxing. He got lost in her when his trance broken wd d ring of muskaans phone and he move towards them. Muskaan picked up d phone after passing him a smile and he took baby in his arms and got busy with him. Here muskaan answer the and started scolding the person.

M: Kya yar anji mai kab se tera wait kar rhi hi. Tune hi kha tha na ki tu aakar mjhe ready kregi islie mai baby ko b ready kar chuki hu or tu h ki ab tak aai hi nhi aisa thode hi hota h.
Anji: Muskaan...muskaan.. chip. Thand Rakh yar maine tjhe yhi khne k lie phn kia tha ki mai atul k 7 raste me hi hu or 10 min tak phunch rhi hu to plzz change kar le mai ate hi tjhe ready ka..
M: kya sirf tu or jiju hi are ho
Rahul frown at this info and asked muskaan what happened
Anji: Tu kabhi to puri baat sun lia kr. Maine kha mai or atul phunch rhe h or maa or riddhi abi aa jaenge as ridhi abi ready nhi thi.
M:Yar tu kaisi hai na wo log kya rikshaw par aenge tu thodi der unka wai..

Anji: Hold on muskaan. Kisne kha wo rikshaw par aenge yar ridhi knows to drive activa so they are coming by that as riddhi has to go to the colg after the fuction for collecting her T.C ...OK
M: Shukar hai baba ji ka maine to socha ki tu..
Anji: Tu sochti bhut hai muski pehle puri baat sun to lia kar or ab isse pehle tu mjse kirti di or jiju k bare me puche to mai tjhe btaa du ki wo abi thodi de me antra baby k 7 phunch rhe hai. Or ab phn rakh kyunki teri enquiry commission me mai tere ghar k bahr phunch gyi hu.so bye

And she cut the call and have a sigh and atul giggled all d way listening to the convo as he knew muski very well ( sali h yar uskia)

Here rahul frown change into giggles as he heard muskaan getting scolding from Anjali. Muskaan glared at him and rushed to bathroom to change in her red Saree.

Here anji reached the house and greeted billy and ananya. Atul got busy with armaan and anji rush towards Muskaan's room,on the way she meet with rahul who was coming with the baby. She side hug him and take baby in her arms .

Anji: Oh my baby is looking so cute. Look massi is here to make ur chatter box mumma ready. And give a peck on his cheek.

R: Anji plzz rush to muski as u know how much time she takes to get ready.

Anji: Don't worry rahul I m going here take baby.

And rahul went downstairs and meet atul and handover the baby to ananya and boys took the charge of remaining prep. Rahul rush towards armaans room to get ready as muski will not allow him to enter the room until she gets ready.

After half an hour all the guests started arriving and kirti shubhankar has also reached. Pandit ji ask ananya to call and and his parents. Ananya asked rahul to call Muskaan as he proceeded towards the stairs he saw her coming downstairs wd Anji and got lost in her beauty. She was wearing a red saree and straightened her hairs with simple make up looking just.

R: waaao

Ammy look towards him and said
A: control bhai sab dkh rhe hai

Rahul get embarrass and to cover up
R: ha beta jab tera tym aega na tab dekhenge

Ammy's smile vanished and said normally
A: ha dkh lena

Now muskaan take baby in her arms and sat for pooja along wd rahul. Pandit ji started chanting the mantras and anji proceeds towards atul

Anji: Atul
At: Ha anji... As he turned around he also got lost in her as earlier anji was just wearing a Saree but now she is already wd make up and hair style

Anji: atul...she waved in front of him
At: Beautiful
Anji shied a little but composed herself and asked him

Anji: atul be serious...maa or riddhi nhi aae abhi tak.
At: Ha anji meri abi maa se baat hui wo bas bahr hi hai...wo dkho maa aa gyi.

Anji: But atul where is riddhi
Atul goes towards padma and asked her about riddhima
At: Ma riddhu kidhar hai.

P: wo atul...wo riddhi..

Hope u liked it. If not then plzz tell... as I'm having doubt after seeing very less likes and comments...😡

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