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Originally posted by: archnahardik123
Beautiful OS dear. Yes story could have been different if she was engaged with some one else other then Shyam.
Beautifully wRitter about his emotional condition when she was not around. Finally his ego take a back foot and got courage to accept his feeling for her. Better late then never.Loved how you describe their talking with eye. Eyes are very important in their love story. And you pick right point.Sorry I am late for commenting. These days are very busy.Thansk for PM too.
THnx archu😊
It was fun writing small things 😆 and I did all this on my phone except the edits...
I had a rough weekend and to pass my time under those circumstances was unbearable so started watching IPK on my phone and then writing...
if there s another word other than crazy then do let me know as that fits on me.
Yeap after her his Dimag ki batti jal gaye
I really want to see now if she would have engaged with someone else then what?
Thnx
Kumkum Bhagya
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