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Saumya

@SamBricka

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#71

beautiful os dear..

Sorry for late reply .. L'll busy wth job nd studies..

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Roop_P

@Roop_P

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: xZoyax

Roop you are bang on this part ⭐️👏👏 Love it

Thank you😊

She really has her essence in her writing and I don't miss it.Layered with meaning.

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Sanaya Javaid

@Hope_Life

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Roop_P

Thank you😊

She really has her essence in her writing and I don't miss it.Layered with meaning.

Roop di awesome👏👏👏

never thought of that

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: xZoyax
😳Lady you are testing my patience 😡😆

This is a fresh one though, new setting with new concept yet a possibility we all have discussed many times.

He would strangle everyone who would even dare to eye on his Khushi.

I love the description of her eyes👏👏👏

How could he ignore , he couldn't and the way he realized with determined feet, which flew him right in her sangeet and dance with her in his arms, uff imagining.😊 his own sangeet😳

Her one rolling tear he absorbed in between his fingers, that is reminding me off Hospital scene.Drop in his sweater.😊

He left with tilting head to show her his intention and she followed, only ASR and Khushi can do that.
He let her take her anger out and confession comes.

Are you still running away ? Love her words here. hitting right notes in him.

I like when he said , I had stopped running , just didn't know I am standing at the door of my destination.

LOVE THE ANOKHA TITLE⭐️ and the marvelous edits

Wine with Lime👏👏👏

Thanks for the treat after so much time.You hardly write OS, me like it.😊

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: pmohan89
Beautiful 👏 Title and intriguing too😆

It felt for a second that Khushi will be married to Dr.Haksh ,but within seconds everything changed .
Lovely confession of both.

Very cute⭐️ OS

Thnx Priya😊

😆 My doge was good...I know, and if u ask I wanted to make her go through with this wedding ,but then thought...nah

u all will be disturbed...😉

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: -She-loSarun
Hi dear,
Its been so long since I read your work.

This one is refreshing and welcoming.
Thanks for the pm

Thnx Priyanka 😊

Good to see you dear

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Beautiful OS dear. Yes story could have been different if she was engaged with some one else other then Shyam.

Beautifully wRitter about his emotional condition when she was not around. Finally his ego take a back foot and got courage to accept his feeling for her. Better late then never.

Loved how you describe their talking with eye. Eyes are very important in their love story. And you pick right point.

Sorry I am late for commenting. These days are very busy.

Thansk for PM too.

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: chinnulu
Beautiful OS
Loved it.
Arnav describing Khushi eyes and their covo thru them was wonderful.

Thanks for the PM

chinnulu😊

Their eyes delivered so much every time that no matter how much I described, couldn't be justified.Thanks as alwys

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: 7APK
Wow !!!! Mind Blowing ...
Super - Duper Amazing ...
Awesome OS ...
Loved it...
Thanks for the PM... 😳

Thnx dear😊

glad you enjoyed it

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: Heatsha8176
loved it
Arnav really hurt khushi

but as well as her he suffered too

was kinda glad she didn't say yes straight to his proposal at her sangeet

showed that Arnav was willing to wait

n also would've been kinda awkward for everyone related

thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

Thank you Heatsha😊

Yes on Diwali , he really really really have hurt Khushi and I never liked that moment regardless I know why he did what he did.

How can she say Yes, right away .

Absolutely not ...def Haksh would have made others understand and def the display of love and care of ASR in front of everyone didn't go unnoticed by anyone either.

She came there and and he knew he has to be humble and all...he did let her do what she was bubbling with ...after all ASR and his style...with attitude

who can beat that

Edited by Mysticaldivine - 9 years ago

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