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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
Os was awesome.. Loved it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mysticaldivine


😊 Gallia Thnx dear

twist , I had to, 😳

I know what do you mean .Khushi has to turn around , that silence treatment was must.
and his forgiveness makes this confession more delightful.


Yes, it would be awkward if she put aside her upbringing and morals.She couldn't be selfish.That is not Khushi.I liked the shades of Arnav here.

Rudeness, aguish, possessiveness

along with redemption, determination , acceptance,

and finally embracing love like no one.

This is ASR and Arnav who holds the power of change ,
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful os😊👏
Thanx for d pm😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Sadh123

Wow this was so beautiful.. This so makes me wish and want that IPK was like this. And there was such a scene in the serial. My day is made just like wine with lime. Wherever did you find such a diff title? The repentance, the realisation, the love, the need and the desire everything was so gracefully written with a poetic elegance. I couldn't have asked for something more! The emotions were raw and bubbling. I loved the eye conversation.. something new and enjoyable. I really loved this di <3


Thnx Sadh dear 😊

good to see you and for taking time .

I had to post the summary of his character in one Shot and her challenge to be away as well

yet the pull of them was always on with this belief that he will come and he had this that she is his ,only the matter of time was hanging and ticking in between them.

Once again thnx❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: AdiGallia


Yes, it would be awkward if she put aside her upbringing and morals.She couldn't be selfish.That is not Khushi.I liked the shades of Arnav here.

Rudeness, aguish, possessiveness

along with redemption, determination , acceptance,

and finally embracing love like no one.

This is ASR and Arnav who holds the power of change ,


yes the character who holds the power of change like no one.

I had to show his shades in one shot as that is what Diwali is all about

he was and doing all and he did try his best to bet the odd of not falling for her and then becoming mad at her and more on himself ...he cried along with her...he threw her out just to save her from his own demons ,but she was his destiny...and he tied her with him...by bandage under the scream of shunk
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: madhu1210

Wow beautiful to the t...

Wine with lime...


The wsy you describe khushi's eyes amazing...

No worries dear take your time for your story..




Thnx madhu dear😊

Khushi's eyes hold power and so do his...IPK and their eye talk is mesmerizing.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: sanasahel

Eyes are true mirror of ones mind. However u hide ur emotions ur eyes reflect it in some or the other

way. The eye convo between Arnav and Kushi was so cute. Good one. Thanks for this beautiful OS.


well said sanasahel😊

eyes are true mirror of a mind when u try to hide ur true feelings...

Glad i could still manage the hold of this part .was skeptical about it.

Thnx 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: lazychick.maria

He couldn't be able to forget her... and her eyes were haunting him! 😲😳 An OS based on that?!? Unique concept, I loved it 😳

Such a beautiful OS Faiqa! You've nailed it!

He was determined to get his love back... in ASR's style! 😉😃😆
My most favourite part was when they both met , I mean when their eyes met once again. Such a beautiful scene


How can he maria janu😊

never he could , every night he was up just in her thoughts

her eyes always were in front of his eyes...his dimaag was kharab , remember because of em and he yells at her...subhe se dimagh kharab kar ke rakha hai..having hard time saying sorry

so sweet of u janu,muahhh...thnx

always ASR style...other wise Khushi will never bein his arms...

A lot of ppl love that part, I guess it came out good.

Thank you dear as always🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: tuli_jayee

Very nice story. Really loved it. It was so simple & everything just went on smoothly.

No high pitched drama or should I say melodrama, no big dialogues, no crying or shouting , but the emotions you delivered were right on place.

It was not a depressing OS. I really really really liked it . It is not at all stretching, not highly melodramatic & quite a positive ending.


😊 Thnx J

I know we had a lot of emotions shown and displayed on Diwali and this one supposed to be like that...
without drama, or melodrama

Depressing ones and OS...yes I do have too but ending will always be happy shappy...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sunitikapoor

I love the way you described her eyes. Wine with Lime...arree wah kya title hai Faiqa. Lovely confession made by both.

Very cute and beautiful OS.


Thnx suniti dear glad u liked it...

😆 Title bas aisa hi hai...

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