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PART 4

Siya had never been so restless before. What had happened to her? Even she didn't know. They reached home, and after her lunch Siya left for the University to finish off pending flies. Janak sat in his cabin calling the caterers. Just then, he was told someone had come to visit him. He sighed leaving his work and went out to the living room. He hoped it was not Mr. Rajrshi again. But no, here was someone else. Janak's face lit up on seeing them and he made them sit down. He said,"Ram, it is so nice to have you here!"

Ram and Lakshman got up from their seats and touched his feet. Janak stood up and blessed them and said,"My children, it is so nice to see values in today's children." Ram and Lakshman went to their places. Ram said,"No uncle. I feel it is our duty to pay the small respect that we as humans should pay to our elders. We actually arrived in Ayodhya, our native place yesterday. As soon Dad got your invitation he accepted it of course, but I wanted to come here and thank you for two reasons. One being, for sending the invitation and second for inviting us to see the AIM university also. It had always been one of my wishes to see this university, a place from where thousands of geniuses pass out every year." Lakshman thought to himself,'Thats why bhaiyya was so willing to come here.' Janak replied,"My child, this party is in honour of competition 300 years of establishment of our university. And my idea of inviting everyone to see the University is just to make everyone aware of what education can do in our lives. To show how far India has reached in education. And plus to fulfil some peoples wishes, like yours." All of them shared a laugh. The servant brought in tea for all and they were joined by Sunaina. She asked them how they were doing and if they were liking it in Agartala or not. "We love this place," replied Lakshman. Janak asked Sunaina,"Where are the children?" "They are coming to get the interiors done," came the reply. Just then, they heard a car stop at the front door. "Here they are", Janak said. "My daughters handle the University nowadays you know," he continued. Ram suddenly felt a beat go loud in his heart. He placed the tea cup on the table and got up to welcome them. Siya entered wearing a 3\4th hand floral dress and left her hair open. Urmila came behind her. Siya took off her shades and saw her parents standing there. There was someone standing behind them, only the arm was visible. Janak said,"Girls, these are our guests. They are the scions to the Ishvaku Group of Companies. " Janak moved, and revealed who they were. All their mouths fell. Urmila's fire fumed again. Siya lost herself again. "This man, is Lakshman Suryavanshi and this man here, the elder brother, is Ram Suryavanshi." Ram', Siya though to herself. Ram looked at her. Thats why he was feeling so weird. He could sense her. Sunaina said," And here our daughters. There is Shruti, and this Maanvi standing next to her. They are daughters of my brother in law, Kush Seerdhwaj. And this is Urmila and she is Siya, my eldest daughter. Urmila and Siya Seerdhwaj." Siya, Ram-Siya, thought Ram.

Janak and Sunaina walked out of the room to talk to the event manager standing outside, leaving a confused group of young people inside. Urmila walked up to Lakshman and said,"I am sorry. But it was not completely not my fault. And how did you reach here anyways?" Lakshman put his hands in his pocket and replied,"Ma'am, I know it was my chauffeurs fault also, and I apologise for that. But I didn't REACH here. I was brought here. We have been invited to the party also." Urmila's face dropped. Maanvi and Shruti apologised and pulled Urmila away. Lakshman sat down on the sofa . Ram and Siya stood there, looking around, standing in front of each other, trying to avoid eye contact. Ram took a deep breath and said,"You have a beautiful house." Siya replied,"Thank you. So, you will be attending the party right?" Ram nodded. "Very Good. I am sure you will have a good time here." She walked away, trying to hid her red cheeks. How she blushed! Ram sat on the sofa and told himself,'Ram-Siya. Siya-Ram. Not bad. But don't go too far, learn to respect her thoughts." Janak came back and asked,"Where did they go?" A servant replied,"Sir, they went to their rooms." Ram and Lakshman stood up to leave. They wished each other farewell. Back in the car, Ram kept silent all the way through. Janak and Sunaina, when bidding them away, thought to themselves,"They would be perfect. My blessings with them."


COMMENTS PLEASE!!!

THIS WAS THEIR FIRST MEET

NEXT PART: PARTY !!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Gosh!
We have two updates!
What a fire!Am already hooting.
Brilliant flow,
Continue continue fast
Muahhh
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hai. Well written 😊do continue soon. 👏👏👏
Laksh and Urmila are cute. So was our ram and Siya

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bdaygirl

Hai. Well written😊do continue soon.👏👏👏

Laksh and Urmila are cute. So was our ram and Siya

Thank you!!
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Originally posted by: LakshMila

Gosh!

We have two updates!
What a fire!Am already hooting.
Brilliant flow,
Continue continue fast
Muahhh
❤️

These responses motivate me so much that I could like give updates all day!! Thanks.. Muaah!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 5
Two days passed like nothing, and came the day of the party. All arrangements were made, and everyone was getting ready for the function which would begin at 7 in the evening. All the girls had their dresses ready. Finding a good dress had never been so hard for Siya. She thought,'I need to look my best today. It is a big day for our family, and for ME.' After lots of searching, she found herself the perfect dress form one of her favourite designers. A long green orange gown, netted near the chest and back, frilling all through and leaving a trail behind. She also got a matching orange purse and a cute orange clip to put emphasis on her black, curly hair. She walked into her room with the clothes, only to find her three sisters waiting there. "Di!", all of them shouted together. "Please tell us what to wear," Maanvi said. "Without your choice, we don't think we will look good," said Urmila. Siya smiled and called her sisters with open arms. All of them almost ran into her, pushing her behind. Siya said,"Will you all never grow up?" Shruti replied,"We all were separated from our studies for almost 3 years, Di. Now let us be together atleast. And yes, we will never grow up!" The sisters shared a laugh. Siya made the girls sit in front of three huge mirrors she had in her room and picked dresses and accessories for each of them. She chose for Urmila a pink trailing gown, studded with pearls and a long neckpiece. Maanvi wore a light purple deep back ankle length dress and topped it with a diamond set. Shruti was given a medium green semi trailing gown, netted, with a cute neckpiece. The three of them looked like angels from heaven when they stood together. Just when the three sisters were flaunting their clothes in front of the mirror, Sunaina and Chandra walked in. "How pretty you all look!", Sunaina remarked. Her eyes fell on Siya, who was still standing there in her casuals. "Siya! Don't tell me you had to get them ready again!", remarked Chandra. The sisters looked down to hide their giggles. Sunaina hit her head and said,"These girls! Siya, shall I help you or.." She replied,"I will get ready myself Maa." The women and the remaining three left the room. Siya looked at herself in the mirror and said,"Lets do this Siya!"
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Ram and Lakshman were sitting in the super deluxe suites of the best hotel in Agartala and were ready to go to the party. Lakshman wore a red velvet suit, a white shirt and smart black laced shoes. He was looking like the cutest angry man you could have ever seen! Ram wore something special - The suit given to his father by his biological mother, Kaushalya's family on their engagement. It was the first time he was wearing it, and he had saved it for apparently what would be a special occasion in his life. He thought the party to be the one. It no longer fitted Dashrath Suryavanshi, and hence was passed on as a souvenir to Ram. And my, he looked truly like a God. The blur velvet deep necked coat, which had a diamond studded in the pocket, and a white shirt inside, revealing his perfect demeanour. He wore perfect black pants and black shining shoes. The gold slim chain on his neck complemented the look. Just as they were about to go out, a worker came and said that there was someone to meet them. Ram and Lakshman were checking themselves for one last time, when suddenly came in 4 people and said,"Surprise!!" They turned to see Bharat, Shatrughan, their father and their loving uncle, Vashisth Rishiram. The two brothers looked at each other and ran to meet them. They hugged Bharat and Shatrughan and took the blessings of the elders. Vashisth said,"Ram, it was a small surprise we planned for you and Mr. Seerdhwaj. Come on now, lets leave. It'll be late." And they sat in their convoy of cars and sped off.

THE PARTY VALA PART IS HALF DONE.. TRYING FOR TODAY ITSELF!!
HOPE IT WAS GOOD!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 5

PART 5

Two days passed like nothing, and came the day of the party. All arrangements were made, and everyone was getting ready for the function which would begin at 7 in the evening. All the girls had their dresses ready. Finding a good dress had never been so hard for Siya. She thought,'I need to look my best today. It is a big day for our family, and for ME.' After lots of searching, she found herself the perfect dress form one of her favourite designers. A long green orange gown, netted near the chest and back, frilling all through and leaving a trail behind. She also got a matching orange purse and a cute orange clip to put emphasis on her black, curly hair. She walked into her room with the clothes, only to find her three sisters waiting there. "Di!", all of them shouted together. "Please tell us what to wear," Maanvi said. "Without your choice, we don't think we will look good," said Urmila. Siya smiled and called her sisters with open arms. All of them almost ran into her, pushing her behind. Siya said,"Will you all never grow up?" Shruti replied,"We all were separated from our studies for almost 3 years, Di. Now let us be together atleast. And yes, we will never grow up!" The sisters shared a laugh. Siya made the girls sit in front of three huge mirrors she had in her room and picked dresses and accessories for each of them. She chose for Urmila a pink trailing gown, studded with pearls and a long neckpiece. Maanvi wore a light purple deep back ankle length dress and topped it with a diamond set. Shruti was given a medium green semi trailing gown, netted, with a cute neckpiece. The three of them looked like angels from heaven when they stood together. Just when the three sisters were flaunting their clothes in front of the mirror, Sunaina and Chandra walked in. "How pretty you all look!", Sunaina remarked. Her eyes fell on Siya, who was still standing there in her casuals. "Siya! Don't tell me you had to get them ready again!", remarked Chandra. The sisters looked down to hide their giggles. Sunaina hit her head and said,"These girls! Siya, shall I help you or.." She replied,"I will get ready myself Maa." The women and the remaining three left the room. Siya looked at herself in the mirror and said,"Lets do this Siya!"

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Ram and Lakshman were sitting in the super deluxe suites of the best hotel in Agartala and were ready to go to the party. Lakshman wore a red velvet suit, a white shirt and smart black laced shoes. He was looking like the cutest angry man you could have ever seen! Ram wore something special - The suit given to his father by his biological mother, Kaushalya's family on their engagement. It was the first time he was wearing it, and he had saved it for apparently what would be a special occasion in his life. He thought the party to be the one. It no longer fitted Dashrath Suryavanshi, and hence was passed on as a souvenir to Ram. And my, he looked truly like a God. The blur velvet deep necked coat, which had a diamond studded in the pocket, and a white shirt inside, revealing his perfect demeanour. He wore perfect black pants and black shining shoes. The gold slim chain on his neck complemented the look. Just as they were about to go out, a worker came and said that there was someone to meet them. Ram and Lakshman were checking themselves for one last time, when suddenly came in 4 people and said,"Surprise!!" They turned to see Bharat, Shatrughan, their father and their loving uncle, Vashisth Rishiram. The two brothers looked at each other and ran to meet them. They hugged Bharat and Shatrughan and took the blessings of the elders. Vashisth said,"Ram, it was a small surprise we planned for you and Mr. Seerdhwaj. Come on now, lets leave. It'll be late." And they sat in their convoy of cars and sped off.


THE PARTY VALA PART IS HALF DONE.. TRYING FOR TODAY ITSELF!!

HOPE IT WAS GOOD!


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PART 6

The clock struck 7:30 at the Seerdhwaj household and guests stated pouring in. Over 200 distinguished guests had been invited form all over India. The house was decorated with lights, jewels and a huge chandelier in between. The cars which would take the people for a visit to the University were also ready. The four sisters were watching everything from the balcony of their house on the third floor. They were going to enter the party only when all the guests would come. They would enter as 'show stoppers'. Siya didn't get the point of standing on the balcony. She said,"Girls, why dont we just sit in our rooms and wait till someone comes and informs us that the guests have come?" Maanvi replied,"Di, it would be so boring like that. Its better we stand here, in the fresh air." The girls stood there for another half hour. Siya sighed and turned to walk away. Just then a car honked. She stopped. She felt as if someone was calling her from there. She ignored it and began to walk away. Just then, the three sisters yelled out,"Di!!" Siya turned and went back to the edge of the balcony. Even from 60-70 feet away, Siya could see his face clearly. Ram', she thought to herself. She could sense his aura from so far, and really she was confused about what was going on in her life. She saw Ram move in, behind him Lakshman, and 4 people more. Who are they? Siya wondered. She told the girls to now get ready to make their grand entry!

Ram could feel a pair of eyes looking at him. He looked around, no one. He looked up, and only saw the trail of her dress moving away. There she is', he thought to himself. Going inside, all of them stupefied on seeing the grandeur of the party. It was as if a marriage was being celebrated. As they were moving in, came in front of them the man behind the idea, Mr. Vishwesh Rajrshi. They greeted him with a namaskar. Vishwesh looked at Vashisth and smiled. Same came the response from him. Vishwesh nodded. He looked at Ram and said,"Ram, you must have met Mr. Seerdhwaj by now. But your younger brothers may have not. Come, let me take you. " They obediently followed him, but Ram's and Lakshman's eyes were searching for someone else too.


All the brothers greeted Janak and his family. Excusing himself after ra little talk, Janak went up on the stage. He took the mike and announced - "Ladies and Gentlemen. Thank you for your gracious presence here today. We here celebrate the 300th anniversary of the establishment of Indias best University in the Arts fields, and second best in the science fields, the university which was established by my forefathers in the eighteenth century to promote education and the one I have the opportunity of handling today - The AIM university." There was a thundering applause. Janak continued,"To celebrate this occasion, this is a small arrangement I have held. Also, I take this opportunity to introduce all of you to the scions of this venture. They are back from their respective colleges now. My daughters and my brother Kush's daughters. Here they are !" The spotlight moved towards the grand stairs of the house. First came down Shruti,in her green gown, leaving a long trail behind. She smiled, and my, the cutest smile ever she had. She walked across and went to her uncle. "This is Shurti Seerdhwaj, Kushs younger daughter. She handles the transport facilities of the University. A big responsibly on this young girl!" Shatrughan's eyes hadn't moved from her the second she walked down. "She is just like me," said the young man, who was also wearing a lime green suit that day. What a match! Janak resumed,"Here is my younger daughter, manager of the accounting departments, Urmila Seerdhwaj." Lakshman looked up towards the stairs. She came in walking like a fairy, a pink fairy and her heels made a sound which seemed to pinch his heart on every step. She looked all through from the top, and her eyes fell on Lakshmans face which was redder than the suit he wore. She let out a small giggle and walked o the stage and stood beside her dad. Janak continued,"Now, I will call upon Maanvi Seerdhwaj, Kush's elder daughter and the head of the creative arts department , who herself teaches art there and has held many exhibitions also." Even before she came, Bharat tugged at Shatrughan and said,"Shatrughan, this is who I was talking about. Maanvi Seerdhwaj. She is a fabulous painter. I have seen one of her exhibitions.." Shatrughan stopped him and pointed towards the stairs. There she walked like a princess in purple, and a huge smile on her face.Her diamond necklace shone bight, but not more than her bright face. Bharat thought to himself,"she looks much beautiful here." Shatrughan smiled at his brothers cute innocence. Maanvi stood beside Shruti. Ram looked at his three brothers and at Siyas three sisters. The three men looked at the three women and all six of them blushed! Jack then took a a deep sigh and continued," Now, I shall introduce you to my elder daughter. She is considered to be the lucky charm of our family. She looks after everything overall and is my assistant. Here I welcome my eldest daughter, Siya Seerdhwaj. " Ram turned to see Siya with his light eyes. The sound of her shoes silenced the entire auditorium. Everything seemed to happen in slow motion. And then, his eye fell on. Her open hair, her trailing orange gown, netted on the hands, the cute little orange clip and her soft little smile made Ram smile too. He didn't like her just because she was beautiful, but because she had a heart of gold. Seeing her that day when Lakshmila and Urila were fighting and seeing her resolve the fight was enough for him to understand that she was someone just like him. Siya kept her gave low, but the moment she lifted her gaze with her kajal-ed eyes, her eyes fell on him- Ram. He looked like a real king. She saw the emotion in his eyes, a one of respect and subtlety, something hard to find in todays men. She was impressed. She walked on the stage and the audience applauded for all four of them. Janak said," Now I request all of you to enjoy the party. Have a good time". They proceeded to the hall where everyone greeted them. Just then, Vishwesh came up to Siya and her sisters and said,"I want to introduce you to some people. Come with me." The four girls obediently followed him and were led to ... the four men who were longing to meet them..


PARTY PART 2 today itself!!!


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PART 7
Vishwesh walked up to the young men and said,"Boys, I would like to introduce you to some people.. Are you all free?" The boys replied in unity,"Yes, sure." Vishwesh looked behind and called,"Come, Siya." Ram blinked. She was coming. Better ready youself bro, he thought. The three brothers standing beside him too gulped. Siya wouldn't come alone, they knew. Even her sisters would come. And so it happened, leading the girls came in Siya. The sisters were too shy to come in. Siya called them, and they had to. Urmila, Maanvi and Shruti walked in. The boys stood like true princes and the smartest of men, enough to charm anyone who walked by. The girls were already looking like princesses, and looked in all other directions to avoid eye contact. Vishwesh cleared his throat and said,"Ok, now I shall leave you alone." The four couples looked at each other. None moved. Simply looked at each other. Lakshman was the first to open his mouth. He signalled Urmila to meet him in the Dining room and said,"Umm..Bhaiyya... I have a phone call. I need to go bye." And rushed off. Urmila excused herself and too walked away. She went into the dining room through one of the passages in their houses, which no one noticed at that moment. Bharat was next. He asked Maanvi,"So, you are the artist Maanvi Seerdhwaj right?" Maanvi blushed. "I paint, but I don't know if I can be called an artist." She's so humble,' thought Bharat to himself. "If you have any paintings here, could you show me some? Actually even I am an art enthusiast." 'I am impressed,' told Maanvi to herself. She nodded led Bharat to the studio she had in her house. Sharrughan, the brother most innocent made up the courage and asked Shruti,"I am sorry. Could you please show me the dining room?" Had it been someone else, Shruti would have just pointed towards the place. But for him, she led him to the hall. Alone were left Siya and Ram. Ram moved around the glass in his hand while Siya was taking sips from the drink in her hand. Siya began,"I am sorry." Ram looked up and into her eyes. He asked, subtly shocked,"Why?" "That day my sister told your brother a lot of things she was not supposed too." Ram smiled. He said,"It's okay. Even my brother lost his cool. But why are you apologizing?" She smiled. The cutest smile I have ever seen,thought Ram. "Don't you think that we as elder brothers and sisters HAVE to take this responsibility? We are the ones who should correct our juniors,right? And if needed, apologize for them too?" Ram looked at her in awe. Not only did she have values, but she knew how to use them and prove her point. "Yes ofcourse," he said,"but shouldn't they learn to do it themselves too sometimes? See, now my brother went off on his call without even wishing you. Isn't that bad? Lakshman is very mannered, but something is wrong with him these days. Je is a very nice boy, please don't mind him." Siya replied immediately," No! no! I surely understand that. And he did wish me before he left, didn't you see?" "I was watching something else." Replied Ram. Siya looked at him in a questioning look. "What?" She asked. Ram shook his head and said as if back in his senses,"The arrangement. " Siya nodded. She noticed Rams glass. The drink was transparent, and bubbling. She asked,"Should I get you some more Champagne?" Ram looked at the glass and laughed. For some reason, Siya too smiled. Ram said,"Its not champagne. Its Sprite. I don't drink." Siya looked at him with eyes of admiration. Where would she find a man in todays world who looked at women with respect and maintained his principles so strictly. She laughed and with him Ram laughed too. She said," To be honest. I have never seen a man of principles like you. And yes, I am too drinking Sprite." Ram looked at her glass and looked at the same thing. They both shared a hearty laugh. Ram said with a smiling face,"I too have never seen a person as beautiful as you." Siya looked at him and blushed. She walked away.

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