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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am eagerly waiting.😃
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Originally posted by: Ankita.11

Aawww!!

this was so nice! ❤️ it
keep writing!

Thank you! Glad you liked it!
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PART 8

Lakshman stood near the dining table, and when Urmila didn't come to meet him, he lost hope and walked towards the door. He stood there and started losing hope that she would even come. He turned around, and met face to face with Urmila. "You told me to stand near the table, but here you are. And why did you call me in the first place?" said Urmila. Lakshman took a minute to first observe her and then replied,"Two things. One, you are looking very beautiful today, and Two, sorry." The first one itself was so dangerous, and now this!', thought Urmila, contemplating what she should say next. Urmila looked down and smiled. Not that it went unnoticed by Lakshman. She looked up with her staring gaze at Lakshman and said,"Well, thank you. And you don't have to say sorry. I know it was my fault too." Lakshman laughed. Urmila looked at this and questioned,"Why are you laughing?" Lakshman put his hands in his pocket and said,"I just wanted to make you say sorry. And I succeeded!" Urmila fumed, but she laughed. For some reason, she did not feel the anger now as she would have felt otherwise. He ran around and she followed him. Just like little children. Lakshman was proficient in running in suits, but for Urmila it was difficult to run around in a dress. Now they were not high elites, or scions, but just two young people on the doorstep of love. Lakshman went in the garden and stopped there. Urmila sat on one of the benches there. Lakshman sat next to her and placed his hand behind her. Urmila calmed down and told Lakshman,"You're bad." Lakshman took a deep breath from running and replied," I know."

Bharat stood in awe as he looked at Maanvi's paintings . "They are gorgeous," he said. Maanvi blushed,"No, nothing like that. It just that its my hobby. " "I wish my paintings were as good as this." said Bharat. Maanvi turned to look at him. "You paint too?" she asked. He looked down,"Ya, but not so much." He was looking around when she asked,"Should we eat?" Bharat raised his hand to take her hand in his. She didn't reject. Ram walked towards the dining hall and saw Shruti and Shatrughan and Bharat And Maanvi sitting on the same table and eating and having a lively discussion. Siya too stood there, and Ram looked at her and smiled. She had her plate in her hands. Ram stood beside her in the buffet line. She didn't resist. As she went to lift the lid of the hot Biryani, the heat hit her hand and she let go of the lid. Ram picked up the lid, and held it for her. She thanked him and took her food. She asked him,"Would you like some?" He smiled. She gave a heartful of the delicacy to him, with the emotion as if she had made it herself. He put the lid down and moved on. They walked towards the table where the other siblings sat and started to have their dinner. Ram asked Bharat,"Where is Lakshman?" Hearing about Lakshman, Siya asked Maanvi,"By the way, where is Urmila?" They looked around, but no one in sight. Shruti couldn't control the cheeky thoughts that came to her mind. Same with Bharat. Soon, everyone else started laughing. In the midst of this, Lakshman and Urmila walked up to them with their plates and sat down on the two chairs left at the round table. Ram asked Lakshman,"Where were you?" . Lakshman gulped. "In the garden. Phone call." All of them smiled. After some time, all of them had finished their dinner. They got up and stood together and talked. Dashrath called for them suddenly. The brothers excused themselves and went. The sisters talked amongst each other. Shruti said,"Di, they are so good na?" Siya nudged her. She said,"Shruti, control your emotions. They are just aquaintances now." Maanvi said,"But di, can't we atleast call them friends?" Siya sighed. "Ok. We can." The sisters laughed. Just then, Urmila, felt a hand on her shoulder. She turned to see a drunk face trying to look into hers. As a natural instinct, she slapped the man. Everyone looked at her. She yelled,"WHO are you idiot? How dare you touch me?" Two more drunk people came from behind her, and one of them said,"Aree yaar! How can I resist myself when I see you?" and walked towards Urmila. Siya walked forward and caught his hand and looked straight into his eyes. "If you can't control yourself, don't even come out in public", she said in a cold gruelling tone. The man said,"Oho! look at her! My babe.." and he stopped. He felt a hand on his shoulder. He turned to see, and SLAP right across his cheek. Ram looked at him as he looked up and said,"This time, only a slap. Next time, much more." Lakshman, Bharat and Shatrughan caught hold of the other two men and slapped them. Janak and the other elders rushed in. Janak asked,"What happened?" Ram replied,"Sir, these people were misbehaving with Siya and her sisters. I can stand everything, but not harassing of women or elders. Please see to it." Siya looked at him and tears swelled in her eyes. All her life, she had asked for such a man, as is the dream of every girl. And here, her wish came true. She closed her eyes and thanked God. Ram asked her if she was okay. She opened her eyes and wiping her tears replied she was. The same all the other men asked the girls. Lakshman went to hit the man again, but Urmila stopped him. She was the second woman after his mother who could calm him down. Janak walked up to the brothers and said,"Children, today you have proved yourselves to be true men. I am proud of you and thank you." The brothers smiled. The girls could only admire. Ram said,"Sir, even they (pointing to Siya) have shown courage. They were the first ones to object. Every woman in India should be like them." The girls looked at their father(s), who too looked at pride in them. Dashrath too added,"It is their teachings which make them so great. " Janak laughed lightly. "Anyways," he said "I hope you all are having a good time and sorry for the interruption." An hour or two afterwards, they left, leaving behind and taking with them the changed lives of these 8 young people."

HAPPY HOLI!!

HOPE IT WAS GOOD!!

IT WAS MY HOLI GIFT!!

Edited by SenRazia - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I love love love ❤️
Do update fast please :) You are an amazing writer :)
I am an impatient fan waiting to read more. Not to mention greedy ;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Read all parts in one go
Awsum story
Cant wait for more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: TwinMadness

I love love love❤️

Do update fast please :) You are an amazing writer :)
I am an impatient fan waiting to read more. Not to mention greedy ;)

Oh thank you thank you!! Sure It has become my hobby to write these updates now cz I wanna match pace with the show.. And greed is perfect in this case friend!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: minamma

Read all parts in one go

Awsum story
Cant wait for more

Welcome!! Glad you liked it!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thankyou for updating!you are such a darling ❤️
I found it totally outstanding.
What are you waiting for?Update daily pleeeaaassseee
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 9
The four girls were extremely tired and retired to their respective rooms. Janak, Sunaina, Kush, Chandra and Vishwesh sat in the living room of their house. Vishwesh told Janak,"See, I told you something good will happen today." Janak replied with a grin,"Yes, indeed. Except for that small little incident in between. But thank God Siya was there with them and those 4 boys also.. they are very good." Vishwesh looked at him in the eye and said,"Janak, something better is still to happen." Janak looked at him in question when suddenly the phone rang. He excused himself. He took the call and it turned out to be Dashrath. Their conversation went something like this:
J:Yes Mr. Suryavanshi, how may I help you?
D: (hesitantly) Mr. Seerdhwaj, I was asking if you would be free tomorrow. I know you have a meeting a day after that, but if its possible..
J:Sure Mr. Suryavanshi! I will be free. Any specific reason?
D:No, just I request your family to be present there too. I mean, your daughters too.
[Janak's heart thumped faster and faster. He thought he understood why Dashrath wanted to meet them.]
J: Yes, of course.
D:Ok then, meet you tomorrow.
J:Same here.
[END OF CALL]
Janak turned to see his family's faces. He looked at Sunaina and said,"Mr.Dashrath is coming tomorrow. He wants to meet all of us, even the girls." Sunaina too could sense the reason. But she nodded and walked away. He looked at Vishwesh, and he smiled. Vishwesh got up and said,"Ok then. Lets get ready for tomorrow."
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Dashrath walked up to Ram the next morning and said,"Ram, tell your brothers to get ready. We have to go for a very special occasion." Ram looked at his father and asked,"What Dad?" He replied,"You will know."
Dashrath and Vashisth sat in the same car while the brothers followed them in the SUV behind. Dashrath asked Vashisth,"Are you sure Sir that we should do this? " Vashisth placed his hand on his shoulder and said,"Dashrath, whatever is about to happen is fate. For both our establishments and the children." In no time, they reached the Seerdhwaj household. Ram could sense where they were going, but why again? They were welcomed by Janak and Sunaina themselves. Dashrath walked in with Vasishth by his side and his four sons behind. They sat in the living room of the house, with the four of the brothers looking around, obviously searching for someone. Vishwesh walked down with the four girls behind him. All of them smiled. Ram so badly wanted to meet Siya again, and he didn't have to wait 24 hours for that! Siya and the others were shocked pleasantly to see them. But they just came down, greeted the elders, and sat in front of the men. Vishwesh looked at Vashisth and the latter nudged Dashrath to speak up. Dashrath leaned forward and spoke,"Mr. Janak, I have seen a lot in my life. And I don't know if you noticed this or not, but I have seen a change in mine and my children lives from a few days. At this age, I think that what has happened between these young people is natural. And thus, it is obvious that as parents, both you and me would want the happiness of our children. And hence, I Dashrath Suryavanshi, ask for the hand of your daughters in marriage for my sons. " The whole room fell silent. Sunaina looked at Siya and her sisters, who seemed confused. Maybe they liked the boys, but marriage! The boys looked at their father in surprise. Ram hadn't anticipated this. He could marry Siya, but he needed more time and needed to understand her. Sunaina said,"But Mr. Dashrath, they do not even know each other properly." Dashrath replied,"I know, Mrs.Seerdhwaj, But I was thinking.." Janak looked at Siya and asked Dashrath,"Mr. Suryavanshi, how about we let them get to know each other properly first? For this purpose, let us send them on a tour somewhere where they can get to know each other well and once they come back, they can decide for themselves." "A very good thought, " said Dashrath. He looked at his sons and asked,"My children, are you okay with it?" Lakshman replied,"Dad, if the ladies are okay, so are we." Janak got up and hugged his daughters. He told them slowly," Girls, it is going to be a new phase of your life. Are you prepared?" The girls nodded, shedding a tear. He wiped their tears and controlling his emotions said,"Dashrath, they have agreed. So, where should we send them?" Siya said,"Sorry to interrupt, but if we have to go somewhere, let it be Delhi. As far as I know, Mr. Suryavanshi's family resides there. It would be nice to see those new surroundings." Dashrath smiled and said,"It is these qualities that make me feel that you all are perfect for my sons, and I am ver happy that you thought about it. " Vishwesh then added,"Ok then, so tomorrow, these young people leave for Delhi. I hope you all have a good time there." Ram looked at Siya, and they smiled.
THANKS!!
NEXT PART: TOUR!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Woohoo🥳😉
A tour!!that's super exciting!
update ASAP!

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