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Was waiting for something like this since so long.
Please please please continue!
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Its so wonderful and thrilling to Read
Very excited to see how the story unfolds
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I loved it 😳
Please continue :)
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PART 2
Dashrath eyes filled with tears and his heart with happiness on seeing his four sons together, and to be grown up men. The four of them looked like the four hands of the gods. When all of them walked towards him and Kraanti, he smiled like he had never before. Kraanti was already crying on seeing the love and compassion in the brothers. Even though she was not a biological mother to Lakshman and Ram, they never had hard feeling against her and now she could see love for her in their eyes only. All of them touched Dashrath's feet and took his blessings. They stood up, all taller than Dashrath and hugged him. Dashrath regained his lost power. The young men moved towards their mother who welcomed each of them with the aarti. They took her blessings. Kraanti touched Ram on his shoulder and said,"Ram, come inside. We have prepared something special for you." All of them walked in.
The entire house was made up of white marble, with intricate designs on the walls and precious stones studded in them. Ofcourse, what else could be expected from the house of MD of Ishvaku Group of Companies, the biggest minerals exporter in the country! Not just exporting, but they handled businesses involving everything from obtaining the minerals to selling them in the market. There was a huge fountain in the middle, leading to grand stairs on both the sides. The house was in the form of a circle, with the four brothers' rooms on the top right. How they missed their native home! And today, the whole house was decorated. It was a special day. The four brothers were led to the grand table in the middle, on which was placed a huge three layered cake. Everyone yelled out," Happy Birthday Ram! " Ram smiled and this time let a tear of happiness escape his eye. Today he was turning 27, and the responsibilities of his family would now come on him. He cut the cake and everyone wished him again. He said," Thank you everyone. When the four of went to Switzerland last week to get the iron deal done, Dad and Maa were very upset. They thought that I would not be able to be here for my birthday. Even Dad fell sick thinking about this. But thanks to my dearest brothers, the deal was struck within no time, and we are here today! but the idea of informing Dad and Maa this morning was Lakshmans idea! " Everyone shared a hearty laugh on this. Ram thought to himself,"How nice it is when the whole family is together. If I ever find someone for myself, she has to love her family. Only then she will understand me."
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Janak had dinner with his family everyday. It was a rule, that however busy anyone may be, if he/she is in the city, they have to be present at dinner with the family, for it was these moments that bonded people together. Everyone was talking about their day, while Siya remained silent. Janak noticed this and asked," Siya, why are you so quiet today? Are you not well?" Siya smiled. "No father, I'm alright. Its just that, a question has been bugging me again." Maanvi laughed and said," Uncle, again Siya di has a question. Guys, lets go from here or else we'll be sitting here till 12 in the morning listening to this Father- Daughters over the top talks!" Siya hit her in the arm. Janak smiled. "What question do you have, Siya? " Siya asked,"Father, why had Vishwesh Uncle come to our house that day, and why was he so worried?" Janak's face lost its smile. He recalled the incident of that day-
Janak was telling his secretary his plans at the Cambridge. His flights had been booked, and he was leaving that afternoon. It was 9 in the morning, and the sisters were getting ready to go the University. Suddenly, the man servant came up to him and said that someone wanted to meet him, urgently. Janak checked himself in the mirror and walked towards the living room. He saw the back side of the man, but understood who he was. He yelled out,"Vishwesh Bhaiyya! After such a long time!" The two men, the other Senior to Janak hugged like two brothers separated at birth. Both had tears in eyes. "A long time, yes. janak, I have something to tell you." They sat on the sofa. Vishwesh Rajrshi began,"Janak, i know you have a lecture to attend to. Thats why whatever I am going to tell you, don't interrupt and just listen." Janak nodded. "Janak, being the father to 2 girls you very well know your responsibilities. The age has come for Siya to get married. The other day, Chandra, Siyas Aunt came up to me and said that until and unless Siya gets married she won't be able to get Maanvi married, and that she was not liking the fact o delaying their marriage. The time has come Janak. Even the gods are saying so. All of the next month is lucky for marriage. But listen. Siya will not just get married. You know she is special. She has the power to win people. You have seen how she is managing the university now a days right? When she was born, the University was ranked No.1 in the world and has been since then, something which never happened before for your family. She is exceptional. So, for her marriage, i want you to do this; I want you to throw a party in honour of your University completing 180 years of its existence. Invite people from all over India. Everyone who has helped you in any way. And then, introduce Siya to everyone. Ask her whom she liked. That way, let her choose her man. What will happen in the party is destiny. Leave the rest to me."
janak looked at Siya and smiled. He said,"Nothing. he just gave me a good idea for a party."
PART 3 soon.
How was it?

Edited by SenAnu - 8 years ago
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Its amazing @SenRazia :D
Continue ASAP 😃
Do you have plans for LakshMila too? :P
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Exciting and Unique!
Post it ASAP!!!
Waiting for part 3,4,5...
And yes we also need a LakshMila tale😉
Edited by LakshMila - 9 years ago
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Thanks guys for appreciating this... Yes I have a Super plan for LakshMila.. After all.. They are the cutest ones in the story!
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Originally posted by: SenRazia

Thanks guys for appreciating this... Yes I have a Super plan for LakshMila.. After all.. They are the cutest ones in the story!

Yayy :)
When are you updating? I am excited for this :)
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PART 3
(Dedicated to LakshMila and SiAm fans)

The four girls and their father/uncle retired to their special 'story' room, a room in their palatial house that Janak had made specially for spending time with his children and telling them stories , before any of them was born. Little did he know that his children would be story-fans even when they would turn adults!
The girls sat on their respective armchairs and let Janak sit in the middle. Even in the fast life of today, he believed in the principles of family bond and values. He said,"Girls, today I will not tell you a story. I will tell you about something I am planning for. I already have discussed it with your mothers and Kush, and they have agreed. So, as you know, our university will complete 300 years of its existence at Agartala. " A smile lit up on Siya's face. "So, I was thinking of throwing a party.." At this moment, all the girls leapt up in joy and went to thrash on him. Janak raised his hands to tell them to sit, and they obeyed, but butterflies were still running in their stomach. He continued," I will hold it at the house itself. All our friends and relatives will be invited. I will invite even those who helped us during our , well, not so good times, though we did have only one such time. And that too before your birth. " Siya interrupted, " But Dad, you never told us anything about this. What happened?" Janak replied,"Though it may spoil the happy mood now, I will share it with you. Just so you know what can happen in life, when you don't want it to happen.
Just before Siya's birth, a huge fire had destroyed the library of the university. It had caused a huge loss for me. Then, Dashrath Suryavanshi, the MD of Ishvaku Group Of Companies came to my rescue and helped me restore the library. Yes, even when he fell in trouble I helped him, but I never forgot that incident. And since all of you have come into my life, I have never encountered another financial problem. " Everyone smiled. Janak continued," Ok. Now enough of this. I will invite them too. And I plan to hold his party ... three days from today." "Three days?!", everyone exclaimed. "But we don't have enough time, Uncle,"said Shruti. 'Even I don't', thought Janak though to himself. "My child, I have to leave for Australia a day after that. Even I don't have time." Siya said, with her usual calm tone,"No problem father. We'll get everything done. Won't we?" All the sisters said the same in agreement and went off for a good nights sleep.
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The next morning all of them got up early, and left for shopping. They wanted to choose and do everything themselves. The convoy of their cars left the house. The sisters always travelled in the same car, they did not separate themselves even there. Today they had taken Urmila's favourite car, an Audi R8. The other cars behind them were for the guards and one car empty of the goods they would buy. Rich people, you know.
At afternoon, the sisters had completed shopping for the lights and got the party management organised. At a particular junction, Urmila, who was driving their car, took a sharp turn and met face to face with another car. Everyone jerked from their seats and was scared. After a few moments Urmila got down from the car in a fury and walked towards the other car angrily in her knee length bright red dress. Her hair was left open, and now she looked even angrier. Siya tried to stop her, but in vain. From the other car came down the chauffeur, who tried to talk to Urmila, but she repeatedly ordered him to get the master of the car out.

Lakshman could not stand the idea of sitting inside the car any longer, as his brother Ram told him to do. He said,"Bhaiyya, Im sorry. But I can't sit here like an idiot." He thrashed open the door of the car and moved the chauffeur. He looked at her. She looked at him. For some reason, the anger in both of them subsided for some time. He felt a sense unexplainable. You know, when something bad happens to us due to some human activity, we become angry on the person who might have done it. But when that person turns out to be a known one, the anger decreases to some extent. The same happened with them. They hadn't seen each other before, but their hearts said something else. Urmila cleared her throat and stated,"Hello? Why did you bang my car?" Lakshman was brought back to his senses. The anger subsided had risen up again! He said," You are the one who took a sharp turn madam!" "Oh really? Didn't I give an indicator?" said Urmila. "Im sorry, my chauffeur didn't understand your irresponsible driving." Both of them fumed. Siya could understand something was wrong. She got down and walked towards Urmila. Lakshman felt a hand on his shoulder. Ram said," Lakshman, people are looking at us. Lets go back." They turned to go, when Ram heard a voice. A girl's voice. It pinched his heart. He stopped and tuned around. Siya looked from her sister to the eyes that were now looking at hers. All sounds from the surroundings stopped. She could only see those light green eyes of his. He could smell her rose like fragrance. She was a few feet away,still he could feel her presence. Their eyes talked a story of their own. Siya had never seen such a man before. Not just handsome, but a true gentleman. They kept looking at each other for a few moments more, which seemed eternity. It was as if they were looking at themselves in the mirror. Lakshman tugged at Ram's shoulders and said," lets go." Ram said," Sorry," and turned around towards the car, but looking for one last time at her. Siya. But he didn't know who she was.
Siya sat in her car. She was silent. 'What happened to me,'she thought. All the way back home, Urmila poured her anger out. But Siya remained silent, and formed and image of Ram in her mind from their few seconds of meeting.
Lakshman said to Ram," Bhaiiyaa, I told you it was a bad idea of yours to come to Agartala by the morning flight today. See, this is just the beginning of bad." Ram said,"Nothings wrong Lakshman. Learn to see the good in bad. Who knows, it may come to you in the form of .." "In the form of?", asked Lakshman. "Somebody, god, or an angel."
THANKS!!
Hope you liked it!!

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Thank you for the comments! Keep em coming.. They motivate me so much!

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