#1 Check PG 150: 21st Century SKR FF: Yeh Hain Zindagi

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Anu

@SenAnu

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey Guys it's me SenRazia, or Anu, or SenFan. I havewritten some FFs before, but this is my first FF for SKR. I am going to make this a 21st century FF , and this I felt is going to be something innovative. Here I am putting up acharacter sketch, and please tell me if you enjoy it and if I should continue.

Ram Suryavanshi: A charming, smart, kind, benevolent man,

someone who treats everyone around him equal, be it animals or plants, and away from all material desires. Just like the Ram from Treta yuga. He is the scion to the Ishvaku Group Of Companies, amultinational industrialorganisation dealing in mineral ores. He sees the good in everything, and is consideredthe perfect gentleman. He is 27 years old, and is well settled and prepared for life.

Lakshman Suryavanshi: Brother to Ram Suryavanshi. He is good looking, lively and a blindfollower of his brother. He is perfect in whatever he does and a complete person. Also, if the fire within him is sparked, itdoesn't take long for him to turn into fury. He is 25 years old.

Bharat Suryavanshi: Brother to Ram, Lakshman andShatrughan Suryavanshi. 26 years old, he is calm, composed and a natural artist. Though he handles the economic accountsof the Company, his true loves lies in creating art, of all kinds. He isemotional, but at the same time is very smart when it comes to proving histhoughts right.

Shatrughan Suryavanshi: The youngest of the Suryavanshi brothers, he is jolly and sweet to theworld around him. He is pampered byall-around him and helps his brother Bharat inhandling the accounts.

In my version, Dasharath (the father) had a wife, Kaushalya , but she passed away, giving birth to Ram and Lakshman Suryavanshi. He remarried, this time to Kraanti Suryavanshi ( Kaikeyi ), who gavebirth to Bharat and Shatrughan Suryavanshi. They live under thesame roof, which is the reason for their close bond. Sumitra here is Krannti's sister, but they look up to her as their mother as she lives with them. Some parts will be changed you know!

Siya Seerdhwaj: A beautiful, calm, independent and smart 26 year old girl who loves the world more than herself, andkeepsherselfsecond in other thoughts.She is ever smiling, and knows how totackle any problem in her way. She is considered a lucky charm by her family. Her father, Janka Seerdhwaj, founderof the AIM University at Agartala, takes nodecisionwithout his dearest Siya's advice and has implied the thought into Siya thatwomen are in no way less than men and Siya to is a strong campaigner forwomen's rights.

Urmila Seerdhwaj: Sister to Siya. 24 years old, as beautiful as Siya, she isequally lively as her sisters calmness and always is making people smile. She loves hercarefree attitude and is ready to sacrifice anything for her loved ones.

Once again,here Siya and Urmila are sisters and daughter of Janak and Sumitra Seerdhwaj. Similarly, Janak's brother Kush has two daughters,Maanvi and Shruti Seerdhwaj.

Maanvi Seerdhwaj: She is the elder daughter of Kush Seerdhwaj and a year younger than Siya. She is benevolent, and smart. She loves nature and making natural things. She teaches art at the University as her hobby, because she feels that sharing knowledge with everyone is very important. She cannot stand anything against her loved ones.

Shruti Seerdhwaj: She is the youngest of the sisters, 23 years old, and is bubbly and an extrovert. She often falls prey to the tricks of her Sisters, but their bond is unbreakable.

Dashrath Suryavanshi: The MD of the Ishvaku Group Of companies, and is a true business man. He is very emotional and loves his sons, specially Ram, more than anything else. He is weak from the inside, and is constantly in need of emotional support. But at the same time, he is smart and powerful and knows how to get work done.

Kraanti Suryavanshi: Irrespective to her name, she is kind and a giver to people. She expresses her feelings with people easily and sees Ram And Lakshman as a lot more than her Step sons. However, she is easily manipulated and if she takes a decision, no one can change her from it. She is also a shrewd businesswoman.

Janak Seerdhwaj : A man with complete virtues and someone who sees education above anything else, his forefathers set up the AIM university to preach education. He is a highly honoured man in society and people almost look up to him as a Saint. He has all the luxuries of life, yet preaches a simple one and promotes true values.

Sunaina Seerdhwaj: Wife of Janak, she is his emotional anchor and a strong person. She believes in the truth being told without any hesitation and tells everyone around her to be good as a person. She is content in her life but fears something taking it away.

Vashisht Rishiram: A close relative of the Suryavanshis, and Dashraths advice giver. He is senior to them and has tried them and helped them to take the empire to success. He can see the future (almost) and plans everything in advance. A man with a personality, he is not afraid of fighting the wrong.

Vishwesh Rajrshi ( Vishwamitra): A friend, philosopher and guide to Janak, who is a smart planner and knows how to do things properly. He has left a bad past, a cherishes his present. But he lives in a feeling of guilt.

Raghavan Dharvesh : A business tycoon, who earns from and with blood. A modern equivalent of Raavana. He has spent a troubled life, but is screwed and knows the tricks of the trade. His mind and power support him to conquer all his dreams. He is a true person, highly educated, but is a narcissist. There are many shades to his character which are revealed as the story progresses.

Malini Dharvesh: Wife of Raghavan. Made to wed him by force, she was accepted her fate and has devoted her life to him, whether he be wrong or right. Her voice has died down, and she only works to fix things already disrupted. She is a woman of character and perspective.

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PART 79: PAGE 125 (RAM AND SHIPRA)

PART 80: Page 126 (Shipras Doom)

PART 81 : PG 128 (Ram reconciles Lakshman)

PART 82: PG 131 (Shipra meets Raghavan )

PART 83: PG 132 (Raghavan Plans A Revenge)

PART 84: PG 133 (RAGHAVAN AND MARDEESH)

PART 85 (LONGEST) : PG 134 (URMILAS HARAN)

PART 86 : SIYA HARAN PG 136

Part 87 : Ram's Breakdown Pg 139

PART 88: PAWAN PG 143

PART 89 : SUJIT, URMILA AND MYSTERIES PG 145

PART 90: A TALE FROM THE PAST PG 148

Edited by SenAnu - 8 years ago

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SweetSau

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Posted: 9 years ago

Beautiful.

Eagerly looking forward to the future parts of the story.

Continue soon.

Womderful start.

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Maverick_me

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Posted: 9 years ago

Liked this concept, you should continue.

in modern parlance thats how it would have ..kranti as Kaikeyi's name suits her 😃 bahut krantikari!

But both, the respective mothers of Suryavanshi bros and Seeradhwaj sisters share the same name Sumitra?

Good you changed the names of Mandavi & shrutakirti ..types their full names evrytime is just boring🥱

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Anu

@SenAnu

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SweetSau
Beautiful.
Eagerly looking forward to the future parts of the story.
Continue soon.
Womderful start.

Thank You so much... Yes sure I will continue

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Anu

@SenAnu

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Maverick_me
Liked this concept, you should continue.
in modern parlance thats how it would have ..kranti as Kaikeyi's name suits her😃bahut krantikari!
But both, the respective mothers of Suryavanshi bros and Seeradhwaj sisters share the same name Sumitra?
Good you changed the names of Mandavi & shrutakirti ..types their full names evrytime is just boring🥱

Thanks that you liked it.. And thank you for pointing out the Sumitra clich.. I changed it.. Siyas mother is Sunaina Seerdhwaj. And ya, I felt some names were just too old for todays generation.. That's why I changed them.. Enjoy!

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Beautiful...

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hai Anu. Nice and fresh concept

and well described. Please do continue soon and also update soon. Naming of character is also very good.ram suryavanshi. It's really sounds good. 😊

U kept the flavour intact by keeping the names perfectly..

Waiting more from u soon.

Thanks 😊😊

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mina

@minamma

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Posted: 9 years ago

Heyy nice plot

Do updt first part soon

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Anu

@SenAnu

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Bdaygirl
Hai Anu. Nice and fresh concept
and well described. Please do continue soon and also update soon. Naming of character is also very good.ram suryavanshi. It's really sounds good.😊
U kept the flavour intact by keeping the names perfectly..
Waiting more from u soon.
Thanks😊😊

Thank you so much..Yes I felt that the name was an integral part of the character and Since lord Ram belonged to the Suryavanshi dynasty I thought this was perfect.. Glad you liked it..!

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Anu

@SenAnu

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: minamma
Heyy nice plot
Do updt first part soon

Thank you..yes sure :)

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Anu

@SenAnu

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

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PART 1
Ayodha, UP, India
"The time has come. The time has come indeed. Its going to be a new beginning to my life. " Dashrath Suryavanshi uttered these words as he stood at the magnanimous marble gate of his house at his native place, Ayodha. His ansectors had lived here generations before, but now he and his family lived in Delhi. It was the centre of their empire. Stood beside him Kraanti Suryavanshi, his second wife, with an 'aarti Ki thali' in her hand. Even today, their family was very religious and saw the auspicious and inauspicious in everything. Just then, the huge iron doors of the palace like house opened, and came in a convoy of white Mercedes's. Dashrath felt his heart miss a beat.He could not wait any longer. The cars halted in front of the palacial house and first came out the armed guards. After taking their positions, the respective chauffers got down and opened the doors for their masters. The first door opened, and Shatrughan put his feet down on the ground. Tall, handsome with an ever smiling face and eyes like that of a child, he came running towards his parents, but stopped. Dashrath and Kranti were looking confused. Shatrughan looked up and smiled. He took the few steps back he had taken to reach his parents and stood beside his car. He said in a loud tone,"I'm out". From the car next to him stepped down the fair, manly and smart looking Bharat. He had the persona of a leader in him. He took off his shades, but then his eyes said a different story all together. They had tears, and showed the soft guy inside who was just so happy to be back home. Kranti's heart swelled with pride on seeing him. He too waited next to his car. At this time, the parents were confused: Why were none of them coming to meet them and running around like they usually did? The chauffeur opened the door of the next car and stepped down with his royal boots Lakshman. His grey suit made him look like a star down on earth and his eyes and long nose, which resembled his father, were red from crying, which everyone understood. All the brothers were too happy to be back to their native place, and specially to their parents. Suddenly a slow breeze flew, and the door of the next car opened. The chauffeur was about to open it, but the wheat-coloured hand of a man who was sitting inside stopped him. The moment he put his feet down. The breeze seemed to have come to a silence. His long hair which flew in the wind now sat in his shoulders just like a God's. He stood proud, tall but with a sense of humility in his eyes. Tears brimmed, but he put up a big smile. His black suit have prominence to his muscles which were toned and well built. He looked strong yet simple, and proud yet polite. The only word that escaped Dashrath's mouth on seeing him was,"RAM."
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Janak returned from his guest lecture at the Cambridge University and sat down on the sofa in the olympic swimming pool sized living room of their house. Sunaina brought him a glass of water and he smiled and drank it. The first question he asked was,"Where are they?" Just then, he heard the giggles of his 4 angels around the room. "Find us!" Came the sound from all sides at the same time. He stood up and said," You girls will never grow up. A game this time too?" He heard the same giggles again. He moved towards the curtains, but no one hid there. He saw a shadow behind one of the bookshelves, and caught her from behind. Shruti was smiling, her long face and oval eyes with the same expression they had everytime this game of hide and seek was played: The sadness of being caught the first. She hugged her uncle and laughed. Janak moved towards the second sofa, behind which he caught Maanvi. "You hide here everytime don't you Maanvi?", he asked. She smiled and replied," What can I do? They all run and hide before me!" She laughed and hugged her father like uncle. Janak then was caught from the behind by his cutest angel, Urmila. She said,"I didn't want to hide anymore, Dad. So I came out". He looked at her bright eyes and red blushing cheeks. He pulled her cheeks and hugged her. He left her and asked,"Where is Siya?" All of them pointed towards the fountain in the garden outside. They stepped out and Urmila said,"Siya di, come out. We all have been caught. " Janak saw that bright face from behind the fountain. Her black, curled hair covered half her face, but her beauty was unparalleled. She smiled and with her long, blue brimming eyes came running towards her father. She hugged him and said,"Welcome home, father."
Part 2 today.
I know you might be thinking where Ram and his bros had gone. Will be explained in part 2.
Comment !!

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