Bas Itna Hai Tumse Kehna (RTMC FF season 1) - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

Green faced suhani
That must br hilarious
Hahaha

Yup mohit was right..it is bad on shesha's part...

Thanks


I am glad u liked it..thanks for commenting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

It was good!!

Do update soon

thanks..yes..will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
wow nice i read it whn u update but comment late de rahi hu..
its was such lovely ud .. green face suhani wow ... bichara kabir ...!!! i cn imagin his face whn he saw green face suhani ... its funny ...!!
next ud soon ...!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 17


Suhani and Kabir was walking down the lane holding hands .The green view of the road and bright sky was adding a romantic charisma to the moment they were having. Dressing in a beautiful blue gown Suhani was complimenting Kabir's extremely handsome features..Kabir freed suhani's hand for a while and bent down to pluck a flower from the nearest bush..He held the flower in front of Suhani and smiled which can take over millions of heart instantly .Suhani too smiled back at him and started to take the flower with genuine shyness and blush that has reddened her cheeks adding more beauty to her features.

But then suddenly out of nowhere the bright sky darkened as clouds took over the area..thunder roared making Suhani a bit scared. Suhani looked up at the sky and then looked up kabir who was now looking down closing his eyes.

"Kabir??", Suhani called.

But a blue eyed monster looked up to his pery with thrust in his eye..

Suhani tried to move backward when an iron strong hand held her wrist forcefully and pulled her closer.

There was no sign of love or affection at his gaze ...he neared his lips to hers.

"What are you doing Kabir?? ",Suhani asked in fear.

He did not bother to answer and came even nearer and opened his mouth a bit..

Suhani saw the those thing then,stunned and shocked at the same time,Suhani tried to scream...But her throat dried .She saw the fangs coming nearer her neck and then everything darkened in front of her eyes...

"You are a monster Kabir",She mumbled taking her last breath.

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Kabir oppened his eyes quickly ..He was daydreaming..The same incident that had taken place almost 70 years ago still haunting him every passing day..It is becoming even more unbearable now a days..

"What happened Kabir ??",Sesha asked,looking up from the book she was reading.

"I just had a bad dream",He answered coolly .

"Bad dream??Vampire also dreams??",Sesha mocked

Kabir ignored the newly transformed witch's words. Sesha was a normal maiden even a year ago ..But then she found her special powers inherited from her grandmother.But living with normal people was getting a matter of worry for her so she decided to leave her family.

Kabir moved towards the room where Mohit lives. Mohit was peacefully sleeping until he heard voices coming from the opposite direction.

"Mohit how are you feeling now?? ",Kabir asked while sitting on the bed side chair.

"I am fine.but what is troubling you Kabir?? ",He aksed looking at the worried face of his friend.

"I had the dream again..I saw myself killing her again...when will all this stop Mohit??I killed Suhani ",Kabir spoke uneasily without meeting eyes.

"Suhani???", Mohit asked in confusion.

Only then the major difference struck into his mind..He has had the same dream but the person he used to dream about was Kaya...Today was different..the scenario ,the incident,the words were spoken all was same..just the face of the victim has changed..

The realization made Kabir stood up instantly .

He left the room without uttering a single world leaving behind confuse Mohit.










Edited by sofia19 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Very nice ud ... Labor had dream but bad dream ... :(
Waiting for next ...its too short ud
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Very nice update
Really an interesting story
Eagerly waiting for next part
Do update it soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
This is really a bad dream..
Hope mohit would do something..
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