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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Part 15


"What the hell are you doing here??",Kabir hissed in anger and pushed her away.

"I was just helping you",Suhani answered back.

"Who the hell needs your help??just get loast",Kabir retorted and then he saw Suhani going towards the main door.

Something struck in his mind and he followed her and yelled " Stop "

Suhani turned back and looked at the angry face of Kabir.

Kabir grabbed her wrist violently and then spoke " How did you find this place and what are you doing here??"

"I am not going to answer if you have planned to scare me every time we meet",Suhani forced a fake anger, when she actually was trembling in fear.

"I..(will kill you) I am sorry ",Kabir digested the sentence that he actually wanted to say and composed himself then apologized.

"What did you say??",Suhani asked as she could not believed that the beast was actually apologizing to her.

"Do you want to get murdered??",Kabir asked back with a annoyed face.

Okay Okay..I was just going to meet Mr.Mohit Malik. But then I spotted you near this bunglow and followed you.

Kabir was stunned to hear Mohit's name from Suhani. Some thoughts gather in his mind.

"Who is Kaya??Your girl friend??",Suhani's question broke Kabir's silence

"What makes you think that you have a right to ask me that??", Kabir snapped angrily.

"You are truly a beast",Suhani shrugged making an angry face.

"Yes..I am worst than a beast now get lost",Kabir almost pushed her out of the house.

"leave me..This is not your property..this is just an abandoned house and you are no one to get me out",Suhani yelled.

"What the hell do you want??",Kabir asked

"I just want to know where does Mohit Malik lives?? I am trying to find his house for 2 hours..",Suhani spoke,rubbing her forehead.

"Why do you want to meet that old man??He won't be able to tolerate your nonsense ..so just spare him please",Kabir answered.

"I just want to ask him if he has another copy of the book "The lost Heir".I have heard he owned a library long back.so he must have many books..but ..hey...wait..you spoke like you know him..How??You are new in this town. Aren't you??Suhani narrowed her eye brows in curiosity.

"I know him cause he is my father's friend..any more question Lady Sherlock??",Kabir spoke irritably

"Yes..his address?? ",Suhani asked eagerly.

"Not now..he is not well..I will take you there some other day.",Kabir answered,controlling his increasing anger every passing minute.


"Okay one last question..What were you doing here??",Suhani askedI


"I am not going answer that..just get lost before I convince myself to kill you",Kabir answered and Suhani started walking away admitting that it would be best to listen to him for her life' sake.


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"Why are you so upset??",Andy asked,taking another bite of chocolate bar, lying at Suhani's bed.

"I lost my locket..and someone burnt my favourite book too",Suhani informed sadly.

"You are seriously a menace .Something or the other troubling you since the day you stepped your feet here and specially that Monster Kabir",Andy spoke ,making wired faces.

"You know..he is not that bad also..he actually helped me when i was searching my locket",Suhani added softly.

"Why so generous suddenly??" ,Adny asked with suspicions

"He said that he was helping because it was my mother's last memory ",Suhani answered

As soon as Suhani finished ,a pillow hit her on her face.

"Why did you do that??",Suhani asked,looking at an angry Andy.

"I am supposed to be your best friend and You have never mentioned anything about your mother's last memory to me but you shared your feeling's with that monster..I won't talk to you anymore.",Andy answered ,looking more angry.

"I have never mentioned anything about my locket to Kabir either ",Suhani froze with the horrifying realization



Edited by sofia19 - 9 years ago
UandI thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#32
i am loving your story please update soon... waiting eagerly..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Angry kabir..
Suhani tried to be angry..
Nice

Now andy is angry too..
Everybody is getting angry here..
Hahaha
Anyways i loved it as always..
Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
will surely update soon ppl.. thanks for reading and commenting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Read all parts in one go
this ff is just awesome you are an amazing writer
Eagerly waiting for next part
Do pm me whenever you update 😛

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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: surbhijain

Read all parts in one go

this ff is just awesome you are an amazing writer
Eagerly waiting for next part
Do pm me whenever you update 😛


Surely dear..will pm you..I am glad that u liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Part 16

The ceiling fan was moving perfectly fine until the woman in black attire gave it a instruction to fall on Suhani...Peacefully asleep Suhani stired a little with the sudden increasing noise of the fan .It started falling vigoursly, targeting Suhani .

Suhani opened her eyes and saw the fatal danger coming towards her and tried to scream for help, she tried to get up from the bed but her body was not moving at all..The fan was just an inch above her body just then it abruptly stopped.

Suhani woke up with jolt...So It has been a bad dream...That's all, she thought, feeling relived at the idea that she was not into any danger. Slowly she moped her face with the back of her hand while getting up from the bed.

She looked at the big clock which was hanging on the wall just beside her bed .It was clearly indicating that she has been asleep for 2 hours as she had fallen asleep in the afternoon while reading a mystery thriller novel.

After refreshing , she made her way to hall room where her sister Simran was applying neem-tulsi facepack on her face .

"When did you wake up??",Simran asked without replacing her gaze at the mirror.

"Just few minutes ago...ummm..where is dad??",She asked after scanning the house quickly.

"College administration meeting ..he will be late today",Simran informed.

"Okay..I will make some snacks for us..",Suhani replied reluctantly .

"Hey wait..sit here and apply some facepack..your face is looking very dull",Simran insisted.

Suhani knew Simran was right.Since she has stepped in Dehradun,she has almost forgotten to take care of herself.

She sat beside Simran and quickly tied up her hair with a rubber band.

Simran passed the vessel of facepack and the cucumber slice to Suhani and slowly but steadily Suhani applied the homemade facepack to her face .

"turn off the lights Suhani..we will relax for sometime", Simran joyfully snapped.

Suhani followed the command happily and rested her back on the bed ,closing her eyes and kept two sliced cucumber on the eyes.

Few minutes have passed .No one has spoken a word..

The door bell rang loudly making the two sister jumped off the bed.

"It must be dad,I will go and open the door",Suhani adjusted her dress and strode off to the door without turning on the lights.

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"Why did you scared her like that Sesha??Controlling someone's dream is misusing your power.Don't you know that??",Mohit Malik asked ,looking extremely offended.

"I was just trying to protect Kabir ,baba...that girl is surly upto something..I have heard her talking about meeting you for the book",Sesha justified her deeds.

"But Kabir is capable enough to handle that girl.you don't need to worry my girl",Mohit tried to convince Sesha

"Kabir is doing nothing baba..he acts weirdly in front of that girl,He never use his power on that girl baba,,You have not seen him talking with the girl..did you??I have seen..Kabir turns into someone else when the girl is around. ",Sehsha complained impatiently .

"That is your jealousy talking Sesha,You must not give importance to that girl..She means nothing to Kabir and you are his close frined.He will not choose her over you..trust me",Mohit assured.

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Suhani opened the door hurriedly but due to the darkness she could not see the person's face properly..

"Welcome home dad", She hugged the person and soon the cold attitude of the person gave the impression that it was not her dad.

The lights lit up as Simran pressed the switched on

Suhani separated herself from the man she was hugging with.

Kabir's eyes fell on Suhani's face .

The most toughest heart shook a bit at the green face with pumpkin sized eyes.

"Who the hell are you??get off me..",Kabir almost jumped a feet away from Suhani..

Sudden unfamiliar act of Kabir ,mad Suhani burst into laughter..

Kabir understood that who was behind the green face.

"What the hell has happened to your face??",Kabir hissed.

"She has applied face pack..but who are you to ask her that??",Another green faced monster questioned.

" I...I am Kabir..I have just came to return her book",Kabir mumbled and forwarded a book towards Suhani,which was probably she has forgotten in college.

Controlling her laughter ,Suhani spoke "I am glad you came..I wanted to meet you myself..I have questions to ask..come inside"

"Not today...I am in hurry..I will leave now",Kabir shrugged as fast as possible and started moving away but then halted and turned his look towards Suhani.

"Please wash your face"

He left after giving a aghast look as if the green faced Suhani was tormenting him..

Finally I found a new way to torture you Beast, Suhani smiled at the devilish idea.

Edited by sofia19 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Its just awesome
Do update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
It was good!!
Do update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Green faced suhani
That must br hilarious
Hahaha

Yup mohit was right..it is bad on shesha's part...

Thanks

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