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Posted: 9 years ago
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Luv hurts bt nvr ends
Part 6

Raj ko abhi ka cll aata h nd he infrms ki wo kl aa rha...
Girls hstl
Puja- mjhe to ye smjh ni aa rha ki frshr party me kya pehnungi..
Naina- kch v pehan lena tu to hmesa mst dikhti h..
nd they jst talk abt their exctmnt regarding frshr party...

In mrng...
Raj nav k paas jata h..
Raj- there is a gd news.
Nav- kya??
Raj- aaj abhi aa rha h..
Nav- oh!! wow.. kb aa rha
Raj- may be 1hr more..
Nav- great..
Raj- hmm.. Mai chlta hu. class..
Nav-ok.. (raj leaves)

*har din ka wahi, exrcs, running, push ups bla bla..* (oh!! aaj naina ko ni giraye.. wait girate h..)
Naina during running, leg slip kr jata h.. nd she is abt to fall but alekh hnd pakad leta h.. (lo gir gyi)
Alekh- tmhe girne me bht maja aata h na...
Naina - han.. tm aa jate ho na bachane.. (lovable smile)
Alekh- saamne rhogi to kvi girne v ni dunga... (*aur mai yun hi giraate rhungi ;-) )
Raj sees this (thinks smthng)- Alekh...nyc

Raj-naveen..
Nav- BC ne meeting k liye bulaya h..
Raj- meeting fr wat??
Nav-frshr party k orgnstn se rltd hi hoga.. chlo
Sm1 frm behind- Arre.. mjhe akela chhorr k jaa rhe...mjhe v sath le lo..
Nav turns- Abhi!! kb aaye..
Abhimanyu (music teacher hi bnate h ise)-bs avi aa hi rha hu..
Raj- bags rakh do rum pe.. chlte h fir..
(wahi boring classes nd all
. ovr)

At corridor puja is going to hstl.. nd wahan se abhi cross krta h...
they hv an eyelock..(background- pehli najar me kaisa jadu kr diya, tera bn baitha h mera jiya..jane kya hoga, kya hoga kya pta.. mai hu yahan, tu h yahan. meri bahon me aa, aa v ja)
abhi comes close to puja.. closer..closer.. closer..puja abhi k shldr pe hnd rkhti h (slow mtn wid feelings).. abhi puja k cheek ko touch krta..puja eyes close kr leti h..he caresses her cheek..she opns her eyes... oh god!! no1 is there.. :-D
Abhi to jaa chuka h.. bechari dreamy puja... she rushes to her hstl...

At canteen.. (HUDA-YUDI)
Huda- yudi aaj rat ayega maja.. tjhe kch lane ko kaha tha.. laya tu??
Yudi- han bhai.. aa jayega...
They talks abt thngs rltd to plans agnst naina..
Ali sun leta h undono ki baatein
Ali- aaplog ye kya krne jaa rhe h..
Huda- tu apne kaam se mtlb rkh..aur muh bnd rkh apna..
Ali- aaj hadd kr di aapne...hum avi jaa kr cmpln krte h apki...
Huda- Ruk ja ali.. (huda ali ki collar pakad leta h*angry*) meri baton se dur rah tu..
Ali (*super angry*)- aur aap hmse.. (wo huda ka hnd vigorously hatata h)
Huda hits ali ...ali table pe gir jaata h nd glass tutne se uski hNd cut ho jati h... ( :-( serious wound)
huda leaves frm there...
Sm othr cadet hold ali nd use medicl rum leke jaata h...
Ritu-kya hua ise?? nd kaise??
othr cadet- mam huda ne kiya...kisi baat pe ladai ho gyi inki..
Ritu (first aid box lati h)- tm yahan apne sapne pure krne aaye ho..ye faltu k ladai jhagde me q ulajhte ho...
Ali- hn..sayad hume hi in sb me intrfr ni krna chahiye..
Ritu- ye ho gya..
Ali-kya??
Ritu *laughs* - hnd...Nav-raj-abhi r talking tgthr...
tabhi wahan se naina crss kr rhi thi ho..
Abhi sees her- Naveen, wo naina h na??
Nav use isaare se chup rhne ko kahta h..
Raj all cnfusd- han.. tm jante ho naina ko.. (nav nodes his head)
Nav interrupts- frshr party k liye kch kaam baki h.. chlo, chl k dekhte h..
Raj thinks fir se nav ne naina ki baat ko ignr kara- tmdono jao..mjhe kaam h thoda. .
raj leaves..
Abhi- tune naina k baare me raj ko ni btaya h??
Nav- ni..nd he narrates the story...
Abhi (laughs)- ok ok.. chlo mjhe milna h usse..

evry1 is planning for freshers party in boys hstl...

Nav wid abhi goes to naina..
Naina- abhi bhaiya aap..
Nav (teasing)- choti.. bhaiya ni.. sir..
Naina -oh srry.. sir.. abhimanyu sir (the three laughs)
Abhi- ab to tum v yahan aa gyi... mil kr maje krenge..

*ufff.. raj ne fir dekh liya*...
Raj to himslf- iska mtlb abhi v janta h...sayad naveen mjhse ye baat isliye chupa rha qki use dar hoga ki mai shalini ko bta dunga.. par wo shalini ko aise cheat kaise kr skta h..mjhe baat krni hogi naveen se...

In girls hstl, puja khoyi hui h apne sapno k duniya me...naina enters
Naina- puja.. yaar koi dress choose kr de na kya phnu.. nd tu to itni excited thi party ko lekr aur ab (naina notices ki puja uski baat pe dhyan ni de rhi) Puja !! oye puja..
puja ( ufff.. her dreams break) - hn.. kch bol rhi ho..


Naina- kya hua?? kya soch rhi...with this pretty smile
Puja- nthng...chl ready hote h..
Naina- bta na.. kiske bare me soch rhi thi.. btao btao. .
Puja (dreamy style)- pta ni yaar kaun tha..bt jb se dekha h, bs uski h khyaal aa rhi...na dil se jaa rha, na hi sapno se..avi v lgta h ki najro k samne hi h...
Naina- arre btao to h kaun wo??
Puja- ye to mjhe v ni pta..bs dikh gya... aur ab ankhon k samne se jaa hi ni rha..
Naina- tu ab bs kr.. aur ready ho.. chl...

PARTY TYM... YESSS !!!
Frsher party...uff sbki mst entry.. evry1 luking stunning...
evry1 is rated as per their luks.. :-*
Alekh-9/10..huda-9... yudi- 8.. Naina- 9, puja- 9, Ali-7 :-D

Raj stares at naina *without any thought* naina ye notice krti h.. wo v raj ko dekhti hu.. alekh cms to naina...raj eyes niche kr lta h...naina alekh k toward turn hoti h..
Alekh- luking nyc...
Naina- tm v.. sacchi.. bht jyada acche dikh rhe..(luking at raj *aaye haye tirchi nigahein*)
Alekh smiles- hn.. bht acche lg rhe h.. raajveer sir..
Naina- han.. ni.. mtlb kya kaha tmne. rajveer sir??
Alekh- rajveer sir?? maine kaha??? kch v sunti ho...
Host announces the dance round..evry1 cms on the dance floor...
they dance on song...om-shanti-om title song ...
Dance round:; won by alekh, huda nd 1 more cadet in boys nd naina, puja nd 1 cadet in girls...
Fresher party...
So sm more events takes place..
nd now its voting tym...
Hosts announces Alekh nd naina as Mr. and Miss frshr...

Huda- party to ab shuru..
Yudi(brings a coke bottle)- ye le.. isi me h..
Huda (coke ko do glass me dalta h *actually its wine* nd thode cld drink milata h)- Waiter!! dkho wo dono (pointing to naina nd puja) kch le hi ni rhi.. jao ye cld drnk de aao...( waiter goes) .. ab ayega maja..
Yudi- let's see...

Naina nd puja drinks the clddrink

Evry1 are at the dancing floor..
Huda cms to naina- tujhse dance ho payega?? mtlb huda k level ka dance..
Naina- tu khud ko michael jackson smjhta h kya...
Huda- wahi smjh le...oye yudi!! koi mst sa sng play karwa.. hum dance krenge..

lights off.. a focusd light on naina...nd she dances with huda..
(jhumka gira de, jo milale agar wo najar se najar me taale..nach ke dikha de, sbki dhadkan me kadam se kadam milale... *desi girl*)
puja sar pe hnd deti as if paining...nd she goes out...Huda sees dis- use le kr aao..bahar chli gyi to drama kaise hoga..

Yudi goes out, puja ni dikhti h use...
puja k piche ek boy rhte h nd he strt teasing her.. (puja is all drunk, stammering)
Puja- ye.. ye kya kr rhe ho..
Boy strt touchng her. ..
Puja use dur dhakelti h..
Boy holds puja'a hnd wildly..
Yudi ye dkh leta h...he argue with the boy nd hits him.. bt is bich puja k sar pe chot lg jati h... yudi takes her to sick rum nd dresses the wound...
puja- tm...tm to hero ho na..mere hero.. film type wale...he...hero aaya.. ldki ko bachaya..fir.. pyar.. pyar .. haha (*fully drunk*)pyar ho..Mjhe tmse.. mtlb tm.. mere hero bn k mjhe...pyar hoga ab...
Yudi (silently jst luking at her)- I m srry..
Puja- q? Mtlb srry q?? mere.. prince ho .. hero ho na.. q? fir.. q srry?? ni bnoge?? hero?? mere??

In party hall..
Naina starts dancing lyk mad.. full on crazy.. msti.. falling here nd there...
Naveen goes to naina..
Nav- naina stop dis.. ye kya kr rhi ho??
Naina(stammering *in drunk voice*); Aap mjhe rokiye mt na.. mjhe dance kr na h.. (falls nd nav hold her)
Nav- naina chlo yahan se..
Naina (khud ko nav se churrati h)- Aap na..rokiye mt..mjhe rokiye mt ...dance kr na h...avi dance krungi.. aur dance krna h..(ek boy k taraf dekhti h) tm v kroge?? dance?, dance kroge?? aao...aai yahan aao. (falls nd nav hold her)
Nav- naina chlo yahan se..
Naina (khud ko nav se churrati h)- aap.. aap to.. smjhte ni h.. smjhte ni.. plzz mjhe dance krne dijiye..aap.. aap v kijiye..chliye kijiye... (evry1 is laughing at her)
Nav baar naina ko pakad rha aur wo har baar nav ko dur kr deti h..
Raj thinks nav hi q naina ko sambhalne gya..kam se kam shalini k samne to naina se dur rhe.. kinna hurt ho jayegi shalini...
Raj- naveen.. tm hato.. mai le jata hu...
Raj holds naina.. wo use dhakka de deti h- daance.. daance krna h na.. mjhe dance krna h.. chorro...(naina puts her hand around raj neck) aap v kariye na.. sb dance kro.. sb kro.. dance kro...
Raj holds her nd drags her out of thehall..Raj naina ko pakad k le ja rha h..
Naina raj ko dur krti h- mjhe..e..aap.. marnge fir.. fir aap mjhe.. marenge aap..
Raj agn holds her tightly- naina..chlo..
Naina strts hitting on raj chest *cutely*- ni.. ni.. ni. ni jaungi. . aap ..marte ho.. maara. mjhe apne..mara tha.. aise... (touches her cheek with a cute sad face) aise kr k..maara tha.. chorriye.. mai ni jaungi.. maara h.. tha.. aap.. mjhe mara tha ...
Raj stares at her cute face (softly says)- Naina
Naina..- han.. boliye..
Raj (jst staring at her)- I m srry..chlo avi plzz
Naina sees raj inncntly bt doesn't says anythng..
Raj comes closer to her nd lifts her nd move towards her hstl..both, jst luking into each othr eyes...(ankhein teri kitni haseen, ki inka ashiq mai bn gya hu..mjhko basa le inme tu..maula mere maula me... ishq h.. maula mere maula mere..mera dil yahi bola, mera dil yahi bola, yaara raaj ye usne h mjhpr khola ki hai ishq mohbbt jiske dil mein, usko psnd krta h maula)

At party hall..
Nav- Cadet naina was drunk.. aur mjhe pta h ki wo drink ni krti.. kisi ne ye use paresan krne k liye kiya h..
Alekh to himslf-ye jadur us huda ka kaam h..
BC- party is ovr.. aur kl tk us cadet ka nam v pta chl hi jayega.. jisne ye kiya h...
Evry1 leaves..

In boys hstl..
Huda cms to alekh..
Huda- ye yudi kahan h..
Alekh- pta ni.. hoga kahin pe..
Huda- yaar aaj to kamal ho gya ni.. mtlb naina.. aise. . haha (laughs)
Alekh- tere liye to bht accha hua..
Huda- ni yaar.. bht bura lga ..mtlb jisne v uske sath aisa kiya h.. yaar.. bht glt kiya..
Alekh (angry)- tu drama q kr rha h?? tune hi kiya h na.. dusro k bare me sochte ho kvi..
Huda- yaar ab tu ali na bn.. mai chlta hu.. (nd he leaves)At sick rum (puja-Yudi)
Yudi- puja.. chlo avi hume chlna chahiye .
Puja- ni.. bolo.. mere hero.. hero ho na.. mere... hume v.. pyar hoga hume v??
Yudi (lost in thoughts)- pta ni..
Puja- q?? pta ni q?. bolo ..
(nd udhar cllg ka main door lock kr diya jata h, coz party is ovr nd sabhi ja chuke h..nd d main switch of light is cut)
*uff andhera kayam rahe*
Puja gets afraid nd holds yudi (in filmy ya jyada bttr bole to serial style)- yudi...yudi.. ye kya hua..light..ye ight q gayi..
Yudi- chlo.. mai hstl chorr deta hu tmhe..
(dono andhere me kisi tarah manage kr k main door tk jate h)
Yudi- Oh god!! ye bnd ho gya...ab kya krenge..
Puja (crying)- kya hua.. darr.. mjhe dar lg rha h..
Yudi- tm hi to kr rhi thi drama.. now its lock...

(RAJ-NAINA)
raj reaches naina's rum..still eye-lockd..raj apni eyes hatata h , frm naina's face) nd puts naina down to her bed...
Raj- jst tk sm rst..
Naina- han..
Raj turns to leave..
Nain- rajveer sir (he turns).. ab mt mariyega.. (nd she sleeps)
Raj smiles with a deep breath nd jane lgta h bt again turns back to naina... (background music- maula mere, maula mere, maula ... ishq h... maula mere maula mere..mera dil yahi bola, mera dil yahi bola, yaara raaj ye usne h mjhpr khola ki hai ishq mohbbt jiske dil mein, usko psnd krta h maula) he goes to naina..opns her sandals nd puts blanket on her.. keep staring at her.. nd leaves...
Yudi nd puja gate k paas hi baith jate h.. as they can't see any way out...they cll fr hlp bt none Is there...
Puja- mjhe dar lg rha h..
Yudi puts her hnd around puja...nd puja keeps her head on yudi's shldr...

Raj in his rum.. rmmbrng naina's cute wala face.. nd smiling..

Mrng
NAINA
Naina opns her eyes...nd rmmbrs how rajveer sir lifts her nd bring her to rum.. nd there is a smile in shyness...she hugs her teddy nd turns around with a big smile on her face...suddnly the smile disappears..
Naina thinks- Dance.. god!! maine bhaiya se kaise baatein kari h... pta ni kinni badtmiji ki h maine kl.. nd mai drunk kaise hue.. (naina all cnfusd)..ye puja kahan h?? sayad chli gyi hogi..

boys hstl (HUDA)
Huda-ye yudi ab tk ni aaya.. ye gya kahan ( he searches for yudi..but in vain)

Evry1 is at ground (excpt yudi, puja)..
huda luking fr yudi
Naina to hrslf- puja to yahan v ni h...
Alekh comes to naina- tm thik ho ab??
Naina- han...pr kl jo v hua..
Alekh intruppts- kisi ne dhoke se tmhe drink *wine* pilaya tha..
Naina- hn.. bt...
Suddnly raj arrives... (evry1 quite)
Raj naina sees each other but raj turant eyes hata leta h...
naina (closes her eyes *heavily breathing)- mai inna nervous q ho rhi hu...exrcise k bad mai srry kah dungi sir se...
Cadets are busy with usual warm up...
raj is staring at naina but bcms conscious nd move his eyes away from naina..
evry1 goes to hstl
Naina goes behind raj but alekh calls her
Alekh- Naina, ruk jara..
Naina-hn bolo..
Alekh- I knw ki tmhe wine kisne pilayi thi .
Naina- Huda??
Alekh- han..
Naina- mjhe v lga tha...
they both go to their rum..

Cllg gates opn nd yudi nd puja are seen lying togethr beside the hstl gate..they wake uo nd are embarrassed...

NAINA goes to huda..
Naina- Huda, tune hi kl wine diya tha na mjhe...
Huda- ye kya bol rhi h tu.. mai q krne lga aisa..
Naina- wo sb to tu hi jane.. avi chl mere sath BC k pas. .
Huda- aur jaa kr kya bolegi?? maine pilaya h?? jao bolkr aao...mai aata hu fir..
Naina fumes nd leaves...

IN College, Abhi was crossing nd comes to puja-yudi
Watchman says dat they were found togethr inside the cllg nd that to vry close. .
Abhi - Aao dono wahan kya kr rhe the..
Yudi (thinks agr drink wali bat btayi to mai hi fasunga)- Sir, mai washrum gya tha. pta ni party kb khatm ho gyi..nd gate lock ho gya..
abhi (in anger) -dono washrum gye the??
Puja (nervously)- Yudi jhut q bol rhe.. Sir mai gir gyi thi.. nd humlg sick run me the..bandage k liye gye the.. nd..
ABHI- ok.. go to ur rum..

HUDA-ALI-ALEKH
Huda ali k rum pe jata h.. alekh is already there..
Huda- Ali , tune hi naina ko btaya na ki mai le kr aaya tha drink..
ALI- humne ni btaya h aur hume apse baat krne me ya apki bat kisi ko btane me koi intrst ni..
ALI goes away frm there.
Alekh thinks.. mtlb ali ko sb pta tha..
nxt scene
Shalini and naveen are together arguing on some topic...
Raj sees this nd goes to them..
Raj- kya hua. .
Nav-kch ni yaar.. dkho tm hi..
Shalini - raaj dkho tmhara frnd mjhpe cheat kr rha..
Nav *gets irritated*- fir wahi baat.. mai jaa rha hu..
Raj (thinks lgta h ise naina k bare me pta lg gya)- shalini...aisi koi bat ni h. mai bat krunga naveen se, kahunga use naina se dur rhne ko..
Shalini (shckd)- Naina!!!??,
Raj- hn..
Shalini strts laughing out loud- ye kya kah rhe ho rajveer... naveen cheat ni kr rha mjhe.. wo to mjhe maja aata h use tease krna.. *in dreamy style* accha lgta h jb wo pyad jata k khta h ki mere siwa koi aur ni aa skti uski lyf me..(smile)
Raj- to naina??
Shalini- tm glt soch rhe ho...aur rahi baat naina ki to wo nav se hi puchna.. (laughs) *raj confusd*

Yudi (in anger)- Huda!! its nt funny.. kl kch v ho skta tha uske sath.. agr ni jata mai wahan to..hmara ek mjk uski zindagi barbad kr skta tha.. aur tujhe hasi aa rhi...tujhe dusro ki prblms dikhati ni deti kya?? sahi kahta h ali tere bare me.. (yudi leaves in anger)

Raj in his rum...getting desperate..
Raj thinks- ye chl kya rha h..naveen aur naina k bich...aur naveen mjhse chupa q rha h.. (aftr a pause) mjhe pta h ki mere sawalon k jawab kaun dega...
Raj clls a staff mmbr..
*aftr smtym*
Sm1 knocks the door..
Raj- Come in.. cadet singh
Naina- Sir apne bulaya mjhe..
Raj- han.. kch bat krni h tmse..
Naina-bat to Mjhe v krni h apse..
Raj- phle tum bolo..
Naina- no sir phle aap hi boliye.
Raj- bolo na tm.. kya baat krni h..
Naina- ni sir. aap hi boliye..
Raj (calmly)- Cadet singh!! aap boliye..
Naina- sir wo.. kl rat k bare me ..mtlb I m srry.. I was drunk..maine jo v kiya..mjhe acche se to yad ni.. bt.. (raj smiles) I m srry
Raj- mjhe yaad h na (teasingly) Cadet singh, apne maara tha mjhe... (naina cnfusd nd sad) mai to count v ni kr skta ki kitna mara tha.. (raj laughs out loud nd naina also starts laughing)
Naina- sir.. apko kya baat krni thi..
Raj- mjhe kch puchna h aapse..
Naina- yeS sir.. puchiye..
Raj- aap sahi ans kijiyega na??
Naina- yes sir..aap puchiye to
Raj- Captn Naveen ko kaise janti h aap..
Naina (nrvs) - sir..wo.. cptn naveen...wo..
Raj- boliye cadet singh..
Naina (closes her eyes nd blabber fastly)- Sir wo bhaiya h mere.
Raj (mixd exprssn of shock nd
smile)- wat!! naveen bhai h apka? ?
Naina- yes sir.. (head down)
Raj- ok.. cadet singh..u cn go..
Naina (leaving)
Raj- cadet singh
Naina ( turns)- yes sir..
Raj- aap ye bat naveen ko ni btayengi ki humari is bare me bat hui h..smjh rhi h na aap??
Naina- yes sir..
Raj- i can trust u na??
Nain- dfntly sir
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Amazing update.. Especially drunken Naina was too cute Atlast Raj got to know About Naina n Navin
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update...,this huda is too much even yudi was regretting in the end but not dat huda & poor raj only he had nt known about nav-naina but its good dat naina told him at last & loved raj-naina moments
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superb update loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Luv hurts bt nvr ends
Part- 7


Nxt day...
All cadets are returning aftr mrng exercise...
Staff- there is an announcmnt for u all.. each nd every cadet are supposed to gather at hall.. in following 15 minutes

At hall
BC- Aaplogo ko yaad hi hoga ki frshr party k din kisi ne wine laya tha nd naina aur puja k cld drink me milaya tha..Huda!! nd Yudi!!
Both- yes sir!!
BC- come here!! yahi dono h wo...nd they will surely be punished for dis..KMA me approx 20 cleaning staff h) cleaner).. aur un sabhi ka kam do dino k liye, ye dono krenge...dats all..dismiss! !
(Bc leaves)
nd huda also leaves furiously

Naina- achanak..bc ko pta kaise chla ki in dono nr hi drink milayi..
Puja- pta ni..
Alekh also thinks the same. .
Naina comes to Alekh- tumne ki h kya in dono ki cmpln? nd yudi v invlv tha in sb me?
Alekh- ni.. mjhe to khud, avi pta chl rha h..
Naina- to fir bc ko pta kaise chla..
evry1 murmuring abt the same *confusd*

Nav-Raj
Raj- mjhe ek bht hi jaruri baat btani thi tmhe..
Nav- han bolo na..
Raj (dreamy style)- ek ldki h..pta ni kya hua h mjhe.. din rat bs uske bare me hi sochta rhta hu...kvi saamne aati h to na chahte hue v mere chehra pe use dekhne ki khusi najar aane lgti h.. automatically ek smile aa jati h face pe..jb v uske bare me sochta hu...eyes close krta hu to bs wahi najar aati h..pta ni kya hua h mjhe..
Abhi (frm behind, who hears evrythng)- oohho.. to hamare raj ko pyar ho gya h...
Nav- kya baat h raj...bilkul filmy dialogue bol rhe ho..
Raj (blush)- pta ni.. jo v h..bs kch smjh ni aa rha.. par yaar pyar ni ho skta inni jldi..pssbl hi ni..
Nav- h kaun...ye to btao...
Raj (stands)- avi ni.. kisi din jarur btaunga.. (nd leaves..)

Huda nd Yudi wiping the floor..
Yudi- Ye ab teri wajah se hua h...pta ni maine teri baat mani hi kyun..
Huda- dekh oye yudi! dimag phle se hi kharab h...tu aur garam mt kar...( both in anger, thode dur chle jate h)


In canteen...
Alekh- cmpln jisne v kiya..accha h ki unhe saja mil gyi..
Puja- han..unke sath to aisa hi hona chahiye tha..mjhe to ye blv ni ho rha ki yudi v huda k sath mila hua tha..mjhe to lga tha ki wo sahi bnda h..
Naina- kch log hote h..samne kch aur piche kuch aur..tu sochna bnd kr...
Alekh (sees ali)- mai aata hu..(naina follows him)

alekh goes to ali who is sitting alone.
Alekh (smilingly)- tune kiya h na bc ko cmpln...
Ali (luks at Alekh with confusd exprssn) *naina is also there* ali kch rpky ni deta h..uth k chala jata h wahan se..
Naina- tu q aaya isse baat krne..nd ye q cmpln krega..Mr. arrogant..
Ali turns behind and gives a mischievous smile to alekh.. (alekh also smiles follwed by a wink)..
Naina (shockd seeing dis)- mtlb sach me isne kiya tha cmpln?
Alekh- ab btao..tmhe kya lgta h..
Naina- tm itne acche se kaise smjh lete ho na sbhi ko...jadu h kya... (showing affctn)Alekh (in a sad tone)- jo log akele hote h na..jinke paas baat krne k liye koi ni hota..apni feelings share krne k liye koi ni hota..wo dusro ko kafi acche se smjh skte h...bachpan se yahi to krta aaya hu..
Naina (emtnl)- aisa q bol rhe ho..tm akele ni ho..tmhari (alekh ni sunta h naina ki batein, he gets up nd walks away)...

Nav- shalini. .
Shalini- raj ne kch pucha tmse??
Nav- ni to..q kuch kah rha tha kya?
Shalini- narrated the incidnt..
Nav (laughs)- haha.. bhai behan me affair chala diya raj ne to..

Naina nd puja together in corridor..abhi crosses by..
Abhi- Naina. . u r alryt??
Naina- yes sir.. (they continue talking)
Puja starring at abhi...(background music- dil q ye mera shor kare, Idhar ni, udhar ni, teri ore chals...zara der me ye kya ho gya, najar milte hi mai kahan kho gya...bheed me logon ki wo h wahan..aur pyar k mele me akela kitna hua mai yahan..)... again fantasize ki wo (puja) nd abhi baatein kr rhe h.. (instead of naina)..they r laughing.. puja lukng at abhi's face lovingly..
naina- puja .. Puja. .oye puja (waves her hnd in frnt of puja eyes)
Puja- hn..
Naina- kahan kho gyi..
Puja (dreaming) - pta ni..koi aur hi duniya h wo..
Naina- uff..tmhari batein...mjhe smjh ni ayegi...night, boys hstl..
Huda to yudi-Naina ne cmpln ni kiya h..itna to cnfrm h qki use tere bare me ni Pta.. (thinks fr a while) ali.. ali ne hi kiya h cmpln sirf use hi pta h ki tu isme invlv tha..
yudi (anger)- mjhe ni janna h ki kisne cmpln kiya...ni fark padta mjhe.. glti thi meri jo maine is kam me tera sath diya.. bs ab tu dur hi rah mjhse.. (yudi leaves)
Huda goes to ali..
Huda- tune cmpln kiya na.. tjhe..
Alekh interrupts- huda jao yahan se...
Huda- tjhse bat ni kr rha mai..
Ali- hume aapse koi bat ni krni..hum apko safai dena jaruri ni smjhte
Akekh- sun liye? (huda leaves

Raj-nav-abhi sitting togethr (as usual)
Nav- raj.. kya hua tmhari us ldki ka...
Abhi- kaun h ye to btao..
Raj - hn.. wo ldki na.. aaj kah hi diya Maine usse apne dil ki bat..bht darr lg rha tha mjhe...wo v mjhse utna hi pyar krti h..jitna mai usse..pr pta ni kya prblm h kahti h ki kch rsns h jiske wajah se hum ek ni ho skte (sadly)...
Nav- kya rsn h?. aur h kaun ye ladki?? tmne propose kr diya use aur hume btaya v ni??
Abhi- btao na raj.. ladki h Kaun?
Raj - btaunga kisi din..bs avi ni.. *their talks continues*

Girls hostl..
Puja nd naina on their beds lost in their own thoughts..
Puja still thinking of abhi.. kch sweet moments imagine krti h abhi k sath.nd she keeps blushing
Naina thinking- alekh kitne acche se smjhta h sbhi ko...par aaj phli bar aisa lga ki wo bht sad h, kch to prblm h..pr sayad wo avi mjhe kch btana na chahe... (wo sochte hue..ground pe jati h... near boys hstl *rmmbrd?. jahan wo giri thi!!*) she sees raj-nav-abhi...(dur se) she smiles nd sit on a wall...
Alekh apne rum k window se naina ko dekhta h ( yad h na alekh's rum k window se hi giri thi :-P )
Alekh comes there...naina is sitting silently jst luking at the sky..
Alekh(looking at sky)- kitna accha lgta h na.. yahan..khuli hawa me..chand taro k bich..aisa lgta h ki hum akele ni h... jb v hum pure din thak kr, rat me asman ki taraf dekhnge, ye chand tare hmesa sath rhenge.. (naina jst lukng at him silntly, alekh naina ki tarf dekhta h nd dey share an eyelock for a while)
Naina- tm?? yahan??
Alekh- hn.. bs dkha tmhe ki akele yahan ho.. to aa gya.. sayad kisi baat ko lekr paresan ho..
Naina *lukng into alekh eyes* - hn
. hu presan ek baat ko lekr..
Alekh- bta skti ho mjhe.. agar chaho to...
Naina- tmhare bare me soch rhi thi.. soch rhi thi ki q kaha tmne ki tm akele ho.. kya prblm h..bs.. bs yahi soch rhi thi...
Both jst staring at each othr without sharing a wrd...fir naina smile krti h , wo dono wahi baith jate h...
Naina- mai Janna chahti hu pr jb tm btana chaho tb...
Alekh says nthng.. they jst share glimpsesAlekh *aaj phli baar lg rha h ki koi mjhe smjhna chahta h..svi to is baat me hi khus rhte the ki alekh mjhe smjhta h...kisi ne mjhe aaj tk smjhne ki kosis hi ni ki..*
Naina- kch soch rhe ho?
Alekh- han..(aftr a pause) jo tmne kaha, us bare me hi soch rha...
aftr that they share no wrds, jst luking at each othr
Alekh- bht tym ho gya..chlna chahiye ab...
They both leave...nxt day... (ground, all cadets r prsnt there)
Raj- Cadets!! aaj aap logo ki week 1 cmplt ho jayegi...u hv got the basic knwldg..kl se aplogo ki real training start hogi...bt for today I want u all to tk 30 rounds of this ground with weight on ur back...
cadets- yes sir.
Raj- get startd...
alekh is the first 1 to cmplt, ali falls In between bt manages to cm 2nd, huda, nd then naina..yudi and puja struggles to reach the destination...
Raj (comes)- ok cadets...well done.. that's all fr today..dismiss. .
evry1 leaves, huda accidntly gir jata h nd chot aa jati h.. svi dkhte h, bt no1 helps him ..
Raj (use uthata h nd ek staff ko kahta h huda ko le jane ko)
sabhi jane lgte h..
Raj- cadet singh!!
Naina- yes sir..
Raj- lgta h aap drink wali incdnt ko bhuli ni h?.maaf ni kiya h aap ne huda ko...
Naina- ni sir, aisi koi bat ni...
Raj- huda se apki narajgi to smjh aati h.. par sb k narajagi ki kya wajh h??
Naina- sir..wo...
Raj - aisa kch ni h.. .mjhe ni pta yahi kahna h na?? alekh ka mjhe pta h, yudi shayad punshd hone k wajah se... par huda ko saja to mil rhi...fir aap maaf q ni kr deti use...
Naina- sir...Maine maaf kr diya h.
Raj- hope so...u cn go..
Naina leaves.. nd raj ko usi tym nav dikhta h...
Raj goes to nav- naveen suno na..
Nav- hn bolo..
Raj- usi ldki k bare me soch rhe the..
Nav- kya? aur tm btaoge ki wo ldki h kaun?
Raj- milwa dunga..par kisi aur din.. par jo imprtnt bat h, wo to suno..Nav-btao
Raj- wo ldki v mjhse utna hi pyar krti h jitna mai usse..
Nav- to prblm kya h??.
Raj- wahi to btane aaya hu.. suno to sahi. .prblm h uska bhai..wo bta rhi thi ki bht hi ajib khyalo wala h uska bhai.
Nav- mtlb?
Raj- mtlb kafi akdu, khadoos, gussa type wala...aur v bht kch..
Nav- to kya hua?, pyar krte ho na.. to uske bhai ko v smbhl lena..
Raj- hn.. hmlogo ne to plsn v kr liya h.
Nav- ye to acchi bat h..hlp ki jarurat hogi ti btana.. aur milwao na jldi...kitna wait krna hoga. .
Raj- aaj milwa hi deta hu.. chlo avi..
(raj classrum k pas aata h with nav)
Raj (pointing to naina)- wahi h.. my love.. naina. .
Nav- aisa kaise ho skta h?? mjhe to ni btaya..
Raj- hn.. ab bta rha hu na..
Nav- tune ni.. naina ne.. btaya ni..
Raj- ni btaya hoga..tmhe q btayegi..
Nav- ni ni.. bs yun hi..aur usne bhai k bare me kya kaha h..
Raj (in a sad tone)- yahi ki...bht drink krta h uska bhai...Bht baar to hath v uthaya h usne naina pr.. aur ldkiyo ko v bht buri najar se dkhta h..
Nav (confusd)- aisa kaise ho skta h?? wo q bolegi aisa?? jhut kah rha h tu..
Raj- ab ye kya bat kr rhe ho.. kah to aise rhe ho jaise uske bhai ko jante ho..
Nav- hn yar. wo .. bat ye hai ki..
Raj interrupts- chorro na jo v h.. avi jana h mjhe... naina k bhai ko marne wale h hmlog..
Nav (still cnfusd)- aisa kya ho gya...bechare ne to avi...
Raj- arre..murdr ni..bs dhamki *winks*
Raj leaves..


huda-yudi bzy in cmpltng their punishmnt...
puja cms there- yudi!!
Yudi- hn bolo..
Puja- mai to tere bare me accha soch rhi thi..mjhe lga tha ki tune bachaya h mjhe. pr mjhe ye kahan pta tha..ki us prblm k rsn tm hi ho..pr mjhe blv ni ho rha..
Yudi- hn..mai hi tha jisne tmhe drink karaya tha.. meri glti thi...
naina cms there- kb se dhundh rhi hu tjhe. .
Puja- hn.. chlti hu..
Naina- chl jldi..

Raj-alekh. .
Alekh- sir aap ne bulaya mjhe..
Raj- yes cadet..ek kam tha aap se..
Alekh- yes sir...boliye..
Raj- maine notice kiya h ki u r vry undrstndng..mai chahta hu ki tm ali se bat kro...kch prblm h uske sath.. try to cheer him up..
Akekh- sure sir..
Raj- sare cadets me ek bonding hona jruri h..its really a imprtnt thng...
Alekh- mai krunga bat sir...

raj was on a way to his rum bt sees naina. .
raj- cadet Singh!
Naina- yes sir
raj- aap ne apne bhaiya se..I mean cap naveen se kch kaha to ni h na.ki mai janta hu ki..
Naina- ni sir..don't wrry mai btaUngi v ni..
Raj- ok..gd.. (raj leaves)

nav sees them talking...(thinks ki kahi naina ne sach me to aisa ni kaha h mere bare me??)) - Naina.
NAINA-hn..
Nav- tjhse ek bat puchni h.. raj k bare me..
Naina (nervously)- ni ni.. meri to bat v ni hui unse..mai to krti hi ni hu bat.. mai. .mai. .mai chlti hu.. (nd she leaves in hurry.. uff sir ne kaha h bat chupane ko, aur bhaiya se mai chupa ni skti)
Nav to himslf- Naina ne ye q kaha ki raj se bay hi ni hui..avi v to raj se hi bat kr rhi thi wo.. ye bat mjhse q chupa rhi?..kahin sach me undono k bich?? ... ni ni. aisa ni hoga. ..par, naina ne chupaya ni hota. .kch chl to pakka rha h..
Nav-shalini..
Shalini- kya soch rhe ho?
Nav- kch khas ni..
Shalini- btao na..ab mjhse v batein chupaoge??
N- ni..aisi koi bat ni...mjhe smjh hi ni aa rha..ki chl kya rha h...
S- mjhe ni pta tmhe kya bat pareshan kr rhi.. par tmhari baatein mjhe cnfuse jrur kr rhi..
N- raj mjhse kah rha tha ki wo kisi ldki se pyar krta h aur uska bhai bht bura, nd they r planning smthng agnst her brother...
S- to isse tmhe kya prblm h.. aur raj ne hume btaya ni..
N- mai presan hu qki wo ldki Naina h.. aur uska bhai yani mai... (*confusd*)
S- par raj ko to pta h na ki tm naina k bhai ho... to fir?
N- use kaise pta??
S- usne pucha ni tmse?? maine ni btaya pr maine hint de di thi..
N- ni.. mjhse to ni pucha...par ab to cnfrm hu ki use ye bat pta h...aur wo mjhe presan kr rha.. ab btata hu use.. (smiles)

Nav goes to abhi...
Nav- mjhe kch bat krni tmse..
Abhi- thoda kaam h. kch der baad bat kare..
Nav- chlo.. imprtnt h..
Abhi- aata hu.. jao tmhare rum pe aata hu..
Nav (drags abhi)- chalo..
(in nav rum)
Abhi- bolo..kya kahna tha..itni imprtnt kaun si bat h...
Nav- raj ne kch btaya tmhe??
Abhi- mtlb?? kya??
N- yahi ki raj aur naina ek dusre se bht pyar krte h...
Abhi (interrupts)- kya?? ye kya kah rhe ho.. raj nd naina?? ye to bht badi gd news h.. aur raj ne mjhe ni btaya...raj ne naina ko btaya?. tmhe kb pta chala??
N- arre.. ruko to sahi..bat to suno. .
Abhi- kya?
N- agr ye bat hoti to mai v bht khus hota..par raj bta rha tha ki naina ka bhai is bat k agnst h..
Abhi- uska ek aur bhai kahan se aaya??
N- sb jhut kah rha h wo.. qki maine usse ye bat chupayi ki naina meri behan h..
A- oh!! to ye bat h.. pr ab kya?
N- ab kya.. ab usne itni planning ki h. pyar ki h... to pyar ko to aage bdhana hi padega. .
A- ab btai ki soch kya rhe..
(they discuss a plan)
Abhi- chlo..ab evng me milte h.. agr tmhara imprtn kaam khtm hua.. to jate hu thoda kaam kr leta hu...

alekh-naina-puja..
They r talking..waha se ali cross kr rha tha.
Alekh- Ali.. yahan aao na..
Puja (in low voice) - is khadus ko yahan q bula rhe?
Naina- ssshh! chup kr..
Ali- hn.. kahiye.
Alekh- tm akele q rhte ho hmesa..baitho sath me..
Ali- ni.. hum thik h..
Alekh- arre.. aao na
Ali (sits there)- hn boliye..
Alekh- hmlog to movies k bare me baat kr rhe the...bs ek dusre ki janne k liye..
Puja- mjhe ni lgta ki ye movies dkhta v hoga..
Naina- tu bht bolti h puji..chup rah na. .
Nav *comes there*- naina! !
Naina-yes bh.. yes sir..
Nav- yahan aao tmse bat krni h..
Naina- hn. kahiye na..
Nav- acche se drss up ko evng me mere rum pe milo..
Naina *cnfusd*- mai??
Nav- hn tum..
Naina- pr q?? mtlb kahin jaa rhe h hum..
Nav- aana.. fir bta dunga...avi chlta hu..

at hstl..
Huda to ali- tune cmpln kiya.. pr tjhe uskd badle kch mila?. ni na? dkhna mai dunga...
Ali- aap ne rum shift kr li h na.. to jaiye yahan se.. hume baat ni krni. .
Alekh - aaj hi punshmnt khatm hui.. aur tu fir se shuru ho gya?? lgta h kafi maja aa rha tha saaf safai krne me.. *laughing*
huda- tu hadd me rah apne..
Alekh- jao.. rst kro. . thk gye hoge..

Naina-puja *rum*
Naina- kaun si dress pahnu?? ye wali?? (keeping a dress in her hnd)
Puja- kahin jaa rhi h kya tu??
Naina- hn.. bhaiya ne kaha.. evng me milne..
Puja- bhaiya aa rhe h?? tune btaya ni..
N- hn.. bhaiya aa rhe h...aaj hi.. *thinks smthng* .. actually. .ek bat btau tjhe..
Puja- hn. bol na..
N- tu kisi ko btayegi to ni na??
P- arre. itna to trust kro..ni btaungi kisi ko v..
N- actually na.. naveen sir hi bhaiya h mere .
Puja- kya?? naveen? ? mtlb naveen sir? tere bhaiya??
N- hn hn.. ab itna shockd mt ho..bhaiya hi h...itni surprise wali koi bat ni h..
P- agr aisa h fir to acchi bat h..bht acchi bat h..
N- ab kya hua?
P- tu bat chla na mere liye.. setting Kara de na..
N *shckd* - bhaiya se??
P- ni ni..bhaiya se ni.. wo.. actually.. *aftr a pause* accha wo chorr.. tujhe ready hona h na.. chlo dress choose krte h..

Nav-shalini-abhi goes to raj rum...
Raj- kya baat h?. tino ek sath? yahan??
Shalini- hn.. apke liye...ek surprise h..
R- surprise? mere liye??
tino sath me-hn.
Nav- tu dkh k hi khus ho jayega...
Abhi- sirf khus?
nav- ni ni ni.. bht bht
S- bht jyada khus. . (the three laughs)
R- aisa kya surprise h?
Abhi- ab tum kya chahte ho?? surprise v bta du??
S- chlo chlo. ready ho jaoNav- hn hn.. ready ho jao..acche se..
Abhi- ahem ahem. . bht acche se..

Naina-puja
Naina- mjhe to smjh hi ni aa rha ki kya phnu..
P- tu.. ye phn na.. sahi lgega.
N- pta h.. mjhe to lgta h ki bhaiya na apni gf se milwane wale h..
P- oh.. dats great...bt tu khali hath jayegi kya? ?
N- mtlb?.
P- mtlb kya.. Kch gft to le le..
N- pr yahan kahan se laungi..
P- ek kam kr... ye perfume rakho.. Maine liya tha.. bt ab tk use ni kiya..
N- ok.. thnx puji...ab mai jldi se ready ho jati hu..bhaiya wait kr rhe honge..
Naina cms to nav's rum..
Nav- tu aa gyi..chl
Naina- par hum ja kahan rhe h?
Nav- tm bs chlo
shalini cms there- is bechari ko q bich me paresan kr rhe.
Nav- behan h meri.. bhai k liye itna ni kregi..(turns to naina) aur tjhe, acche se ready hone kaha tha na, ye kya casual pehan k aayi h?
Nain- pr bhaiya..
Nav- abhi chup.. shalini ise acche se ready kro. aur 7'O clck tk pahuch jana.. exact 7 pm.. smjh aaya?
Shalini- han mere aaka. aa jaungi..
(nav leaves)

At raj's rum..
Abhi- mst.. sahi lge rhe ho..
Raj- pr ye sb q.. ab btao..kahin jaa rhe?
A- surprise h.. wait kro thoda..
Nav enters- hn. thoda to wait krna hi hoga..
R- mjhe to kch smjh hi ni aa rha..aur tmlog ready q ni hue??
A- qki mere bhai.. aapko jana h.. hum ready hokr kya krenge..
N- exactly.. thodi privacy.. (the duo *abhi-nav* strts laughing)
R- lgta h mere pas wait krne k alawa aur koi optn ni h...
N- sahi smjha aap ne..
A- 7:10 ho chuke h..
N- oh!! chlo chlo...
R- ab dar lg rha h mjhe.. jrur tmlogo ka koi khatarnak plan h..
N- ni ni.. tu to wo dkh k bht khus ho jayega...
R (cnfusd)- college k piche??
A- arrem. tu chl na..
N- ye lo.. aa gye.. ab dkho wahan...(raj sees thodi dur pr, naina sitting on a chair nd the place romantically decorated)
R (nrvously)- naina?? wo yahan? ?
N- khus ho gye na?? mjhe pta tha. . (raj gave a cnfusd luk)
A- hn.. khus kaise ni hoga?? pyar krte h dono ek dusre se..
R (mixd exprssn of nrvsness, confusion)-pyar?? yes..ofcourse..pyar krte h...bht pyar... naina...naina se..
N (teasingly)-hn.. to jao na..
A- ab wahan tk chorr k aana hoga kya...jao na...
they push raj..

Raj goes to naina.. vry nrvsly..
Naina (stands)- sir...aap??
Ra (bar bar piche mud k dkh rha tha, abhi nd nav ko..)- yes.. cadet singh..actually...*aftr a pause*.. sit..let me xpln..
(with confusion in the envirnmnt they sit )
Raj (luks at naina)- wo...
N (jst luking in raj's eye, trying to find the answer)- yes sir...
R *jst staring at beauty of naina* - kafi ajib lg rha h na..yahan..
N *lost (ab raj dekhega to koi kaise na khoye)*- hn.. pr..
R (naina ko dkh k sayad sb bhul hi gya..the damn pretty naina, jst luking fab)- actually..mai..wo.. I want to say...(nd he stops)
N (jst hypnotizd, jaise raj dkh rha tha...it was enough to hypnotize her) *after a moment*- yes sir..
R- aap acchi dikh rhi h... mtlb...bht acchi.
N (embarrassd nd ofcrse shy)- thnx.. I mean... aap v..
R- mai v??
N- kafi acche dikh rhe.. hmesa dikhte h...
R (sighs in relief)- srry...wo...I m really srry..
N- for wat?? s...ssryry q? cmplnmnt k liye?,
R (laughs)- no no no.. cmplmnt k liye ni...bt bura lga kya??
N *shy*- ni.. aisa ni h...bht accha lga.. I mean.. bht ni.. mtlb.. accha lga.. aap smjh rhe na.
R *smiles*- hn.. smjh rha hu...
N *nrml*- kya?.
R- bura ni lga..
N- yess.. exactly..

Nav-abhi-shalini.. chup k dur se dekh rhe..
N- ye log to acche se bat kr rhe. .
A- mtlb sach me indono me kch chl rha h..
S- ab ye to wahi bta skte h..
N- bta kahan rhe h?? kash bta dete..

Naina-Raj
N- apko to bura ni lga na??
R- kya? cmplmnt??
N- hn..
R- aapne cmplnt diya.. to bura kaise lgega.. I mean.. koi v deta.. koi v.. to bura ni lgega.. kisi ko v bura ni lgta *too mch cnfusd, nrvs* (don't knw wat to do) *naina shy na ho to kya ho*
N- pr.. hum yahan kya kr rhe h?
R- hn.. usi k liye.. srry kaha tha maine. .
N- mtlb?
R- mere majak ki wajah se aap...apko prblm hui..yahan aana pada..
N- prblm?? nt at all..i mean prblm jaisa kch ni h..its ok
R *smiles*- ni...prblm to hui na.. bekar me bich me aap fas gyi..
N-mjhe accha lg rha h...mtlb ni hui prblm..aap bar bar prblm prblm q kah rhe...*jst out of hsr mind*
they share a small eye lock..
N- I mean.. yahan aane me kya prblm ho skti h...
R- hmm.. thnx... sry.. uff...*cnfusd* nothing. ..
both starts laughing...
N- hmlog kaise bhv kr rhe h.. lgta h arrange marriage k liye 1st tym mile h..
R (laughing)- its awkward...sry.. sb meri wajah se...
thodi thodi barish hone lgti h...
R- oh!! barish!!
N- hmm. .. chlna chahiye sayad ab..
R- hn.. bye...cadet singh...
N *cute wala smile*- bye sir...
they laugh agn..

both turns to leave..
Raj thinks maine to bataya hi ni... aise milne ka rsn..
Naina thinks raj sir ne kaha hoga kya nav bhaiya ko.. yahan q mile..
Raj nd naina ek dusre k taraf turn krte h...
agn no wrds exchangd.. bs wo sweet luks.. nd smiles...nd dey leave...

Abhi- ye dono to gye..
Nav- pr indono me agr sach me kch chl rha to naina apne bhai k bare me...mtlb mere bare me jhut q bolegi..
A- ab mrng me sochenge.. sath me..
S (sad)- haww.. is barish ne meri dcrtn barbad kr di..
Nav *laughs*- han..wrna maine socha tha.. tmhare kch rmnc kr lunga. (teasingly)
S *comes close to nav*- wo to ab v ho skta. ..
Abhi to himslf- ab mera yahan koi kaam ni.. *he leaves*
N - dkho tmne abhi ko bhaga diya..
S (puts her arm around nav) - accha h na..
N- mmm... aaj aap kch jyada hi romantic lg rhi..
S- ab kya karu mausam hi aisa h..
N- mera to coffee pine ka mood kr rha...agr academy ni hota to pakka apko utha k le jata.. avi khud hi chliye..coffee bnaiye aur pilaiye..

to be continued..
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Amazing update...specially the way they all are trying to fool each other... 😊
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awesome update...,raj-naina & even alekh-naina moments were lovely,even i love ali today even yudi too he doesnt care who complained against him coz he was wrong now dats d big thing to accept ur mistakes & trying to correct dem,continue soon
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Luv hurts bt nvr ends
Part 8

Boys hstl...
sabhi so chuke h..ali bed se uthta h nd rum se bahar niklta h...wo chupke se faculty's room side pahunchta h... ankho me dar ki koi use dkh na le...tabhi ali shAlini aur naveen ko aate dkhta h...ghabrakr wo chupne k liye place dhundhne lgta h...
uske shldr pe koi hnd rkhta h..frm behind..
Ali gets evn more scared... he turns..
Ali *scared*- mam.. wo... (its Ritu)
Ritu (in anger)- ali?? tm yahan kya kr rhe ho?? wo v itne rat me...
Ali- wo.. hum...
Nav -shalini reaches there..
N- cadet ali! yahan kya ho rha h?
Ritu- wo..mjhe hi kch kam tha ali se... (sees ali in anger) go Ali! kl mrng me bat krenge...
Ali- yes mam (he leaves)
Ritu (to nav-shalini)- ok.. mai v chlti hu sone.. kafi rat ho chuki h..

RAJ's rum
Raj to bs khayalon me khoya hua h with a big smile on his face...
Raj to himslf- Mr. Rajveer sekhawat aap itne nrvs to kvi ni hue...pta ni ho kya gya tha. . aur maine to use btaya v ni reality.. pta ni kya soch rhi hogi mere bare me...*eyes close kr k fir se apni khwabo ko duniya me kho jata h*

NAINA-PUJA
Naina- puji.. aisa hota h kya, ki hum sbse nrmlly bat krte h.. pr us ek insan k sath jb v akele hote h, pta ni kya ho jata h, smjh hi ni aata h ki kya kahna chahiye kya ni.. kya krna chahiye, bht hi weird bhv krne lgte h..

Puji (in sleepy voice)- hn hota h.. hm v aisa hi krte the jb schl me homewrk ni bnate the aur cmpln princi tk pahuch jati thi..so jao.. tnsn mt lo... (nd she covr herslf with blankt)
Naina smiles, *jo v aaj hua use soch kr to koi blush krte hi rhe*
naina thinks raj sir ne wahan q bulaya mjhe.. pta ni.. bt jo v tha.. pta ni kya tha..

Mrng mrng...
Evry1 at ground
Raj- maine aplogo ko btaya tha ki aaplogo ki week 1 cmplt ho chuki h.. its tym to wrk harder...so today let's start with net climbing... u hv to cilmb this net , jitna speedly kr skte ho.. keep trying...

evry1 starts climbing aftr a demo..
naina and raj ki eye cntct hoti h..
naina *shy, lost agn* apna net pe grip loose kr deti h.. nd was abt to fall...
Raj stnds nd apna hath badhata h *worried face*
bt alekh naina ko hold kr leta h...with 1 hnd, *1 hnd se bechare ne net v to hld krna h*

Alekh- dhyan kahan rhta h tmhara??
Naina- wo.. pta ni .. nd thnx.. wrna gir hi jati..tmne bacha liya. . (still luking at raj, jo dur khada naina ko hi dkh rha tha)
Alekh- Maine to kaha hi tha... girne ni dunga kvi v...
Naina- tm bht acche ho.. (finally alekh ki trf dkhte hue)
Alekh- ye pta h mjhe...
they laugh nd get invlvd in their own wrk...

outsise the classrum
Huda- naina!! sun na.
Naina- bolo..
Huda- jo v kiya maina uske liye Srry...aur sacchi me I mean it...
Naina- koi bat ni.. tu smjh gya na.. bs yahi kafi h.. (naina turns to leave)
huda (keeps his hnd below naina's shldr)- maaf to kr diya h na??
naina- hn ji.. (smiles)

in class.. evry1 is laughing
Naina- kya hua.. sb has q rhe...
Ali-alekh enters...
Alekh- kya bat h.. aaj sb kch jyada hi has rhe h..
Nain- pta ni..
Alekh-ali goes to tk their sits behind naina..

Alekh rushes to naina nd uske back se ek paper nikalta h..
Nain- ye kya h..
"WANT TO SEE A JOKER, LOOK AT ME"
Alekh- kiya kisne ye??

Major bhargav enters nd Alekh sit pe chla jata h..

bhargav- aaj aplogo ko mai kch weapon k bare me btane wala hu.. kl se hm.. ise use krna sikhenge (actually yahan major bhargav girls boys ni krenge, he is jst a strict cptn)

aftr classes evry1 is in canteen..
Puja-naina-ali-alekh
naina- ye kaam huda ni hi kiya hoga..
Alekh- mjhe v yahi lgta h..
puja- ye huda khud ko smjhta kya h..
Alekh- Naina ek bat manogi meri?
N- hn.. bolo na..
Alekh- plzz tum is bar react mt kro..
Naina- par
Alekh- par kya? tmne kaha tha ki manogi..
N-ok.. ni krungi react...
Alekh- ali, tm kch bolte q ni..
N- hn.. hmesa yun chup chup rhne se kya milta h??

huda cms in canteen..
huda to himslf- ye naina ko pta to chl hi gya hoga ki ye sb maine kiya h.. fir kch kah q ni rhi...
goes to naina..
Huda- aaj to maja aa gya.. ni??
Alekh- hn...bt hume apna maja tmhare sath share ni krna..
N- yeah.. u may go...

Nav-Abhi
Nav- koi to smjha do mjhe ki naina aur raj k bich kch chl rha h ya ni...
Abhi- kl dekha ni kya tmne.. uske bad v koi doubt h kya?
Nav- aisa kaise ho skta h.. naina apne bhai ko, mtlb mjhe itna bura kaide bta skti h??
Abhi- ek kam kro.. dirct naina ya raj se bat kro..
N- ab wahi krna hoga...

Raj -naina crossing from the corridor. .collides *bang*
R- oh..srry. .
N- hmm.. jst a mstk..
R- yes
N-ok..
R- hn..
N-bye...
R- no no. wait
N- yes sir..
R- wo kl.. actually.. wo maine ni naveen ne bulaya tha..
N (smiles)- I knw sir.. mjhe bulaya tha. mjhe to pta hoga hi ni..
R- ni wo ni.. actually. . maine naveen se kaha h ki hum dono ek dusre se...matlb mai aap se... ni ni... humdono..
N- humdono kya sir??
R - nthng.. jst nthng. . u can go...
Naina nodes with smile nd leaves..

At night

Naina is agn at the same spot (jahan wo nd alekh ne nyt me baat kara tha) luking at the star...
Alekh window k pas hi rhta h, he sees naina..wo rum k bahar aata h naina k pas jane k liye.. bt he sees Ali

Alekh- ali!! (bt ali ni sunta h)
ali aaj fir faculty's rum side jaane lgta h...
Alekh - ye udhar q ja rha?? (he follows ali)
bt ali glass window pr alekh ka image dkh leta h nd wo wapas hstl chls jata h...
Alekh- koi to bat h.. yahan q aaya tha ali...sayad avi isse bat krna sahi ni hoga... ( wo naina k pas jane lgta h bt naina jaa chuki hoti h)

mrng (major bhargav-cadets)
major bhargav instructs evry1 to shoot *gun*
naina gun ki awaj sunte hi darr jati h.. nd she starts crying..
bhargav- cadet naina!! cm here... gun uthao and shoot at the aim..
Naina (fear in her eyes)- yes sir. .
wo kaanpte hue gun uthati h, bt she is too afraid to shoot .. wo gun chorr k darr se bhag jati h *hstl rum*

huda- ye ladki yahan aayi hi q h..jb ek gun se darr lgta h..
Alekh- tu apne kaam se mtlb rkh na...
bhargav- quite every1.. I hate cowards.. nd sb ko ye infrm kiya jata h ki cadet naina singh 1 mnth tk meri class attend ni kregi..

nav-raj
Raj- naina yahan academy me tmhare kahne pe aayi h na??
nav- mtlb? aisa q kah rhe?
R (anger )- mtlb ye koi intrst ni h use military me..darti h weapons se, uske awaj se v darr lgta h use..aur tmne use yahan, KMA me entry kara diya, qki tum chahte the..q ki tm yahan the? tm chahte the wo v tmhare kadam pe chle?
uski marji ho ya na ho??
N- aisa kch v ni h.. hn ye sach h ki wo ek dream me jine wali ladki thi..koi mtlb ni tha use desh se, unke dushmano se..jaise baki log bina apne farj ko smjhe jite h, ye v jiti thi..naina ko koi intrst ni tha in sb me..pr maine koi jbrdsti ni ki uske sath.. usne khud kaha tha Mjhe, wo khud chahti thi academy join krna.. maine uski aankhon me ek akrosh dekha tha maine..jb usne kaha tha ki wo desh k liye kch krna chahti h...mai jaata hu usse bat krne
R- ni.. tm ni bat kroge.. kvi kvi insan ko khud ko smjhne k liye tym dena chahiye, akele rhne do use..

alekh sees ali going to girls hstl side (aftr classes) alekh ali k piche jAta h..
Alekh- ye ali kch jyada hi ajib h, kvi faculty rum aur kvi grls hstl.. pr bat kisi se ni krta. . prblm kya h iski...
Alekh sees ki ali grnd k pas kisi se bat kr rha h, pr wo us prsn ko ni dkh pata h...
ali leaves frm there

alekh thinks- kch to mystery h is ali ki.. ek bar bat kr k dkhta hu

huda-yudi
Huda- naina ne khud hi apna mzk bna liya. . hume to kch krne ki jrurat hi ni padi..
Yudi- ye sahi kaha tmne.. aaj to maja aa gya.. sacchi..
Puja overhears it..
Puja- tmlogo ka kch ni ho skta..dusro ka bura hi sochte ho har waqt...chahe usse kisi ko kinni hi prblm q na ho..
Yudi- puja aisa ni h..
Puja- tm kya safai de rhe ho? frshr prty ki rat jaanbujh kr mjhe musibat me fasaya, fir hero banne chle aaye..
Y- tm glt soch rhi ho.. wo bs ek glti thi.. maine to...
P inntrpts- plzz.. rhne do...mjhe to lgta h ki wo ldka v tmne hbhja hoga..hero bnne k liye. .
Huda- apna ye drama bnd kro.. aur jao yahan..
P- u idiot. . mai tjhse bat to kr hi ni rhi... (leaves in anger)
Y- tune puja se waise bat q ki.. hadd se jyada mt badho..
Huda- tu apni aukat mt bhul.. ek lagaunga na.. to yahan najar ni ayega. .
Y- tu bht jyada bol rha h.. (he hlds Huda's collar)
ritu sees this..
Ritu- kya chl rha h yahan..
Huda- mam kch v ni..
Yudi- hn.. bs batein.. kch v ni..
Ritu- leave frm here...

Nav in his rum. with abhi
nav- pta ni kya karu.. kaise smbhalu naina ko..
Abhi- sayad uska yahan aane ka dcsn hi glt tha. . wo ni hndl kr payegi ye sb.. she is nt so strng, na emtnlly aur na hi physically..
N- mjhe to kch smjh hi ni aa rha..
A- i knw tu bhai h uska, tjhse bht close h wo.. pr log sbse jyada close apne beloved se hote h.. raj ko usse bat krne bolo. .
Nav- han.. sayad usse bat bane..

Ali-alekh
Alekh- ali bat krni h mjhe tjhse..
Ali- hn boliye..
Alekh- tm kl rat faculty rum q jaa rhe the?
Ali (scared, nrvs)- hum.. kl.. wo.. hum kb gye?? faculty rum??
Alekh- jhut mt bolo ali.. maine khud dekha tha...
Alekh- aap kya bol rhe h.. mjhe kch smjh ni aa rha.. hum q jayenge? aur aap wahan kya kr rhe the..
Alekh- leave it.. sayad gltfehmi thi meri...
Ali- ho skta h.. (ali leaves)
Alekh to himslf- koi gltfehmi ni thi meri.. pr ab itna cnfrm hu ki ye koi simple bat ni, wrna ali chupata ni...


Naina sitting on ground..
Alekh comes there, nd uske bagalme baith jata h..
Alekh- tm thik ho na?
Naina- hn.. thode tym k liye nrvs ho gyi thi. pr ab thik hu..
A- nthng is impssbl in this wrld..
N- I knw..don't wrry mai Thik hu.. haar ni manungi itni jldi...
Raj undono ko dkhta h..
Raj to himslf- sayad alekh hi kafi h avi naina ko console krne k liye.. (he leaves)



Yudi comes to puja in canteen..
Yudi- puja.. tm glt soch rhi ho.. maine ni bhja tha us ldke ko..
Puja- tu na rhne hi de.. mai to tjhe accha smjh rhi thi..
Y- mai bura to ni hu..bs ek mstk ho gyi thi...maf v kr de ab to.. punshmnt v mil hi chuki h...
P- tu jaa yahan se.. mjhe bat hi ni krni.
Y- ab ye kya bat hui...tu maaf ni kregi to tere piche lga rhunga..
P- jo krna h kr...

Raj comes to nav rum.. (nav-Abhi already there)
N- mai tmhare paas hi aane wala tha. .
R (laughs)- bs socha hi tha tmne aur lo mai hajir ho gya...ab bolo kya bat thi
N-naina se bat krna tu..may be wo mjhse kch batein share na kare.. tjhse to kregi.
Raj (smiles) - tum itni fikr q kr rhe..ek cadet ki itni parwah kbse hone lgi tmhe?
N- wo actually.. ni ni . koi rsn nahi h.. bs yun hi...tum itna pyar krte ho usse.. fikr to hogi na..
R- accha ye bat h.. tum fikr mt kro.. mai hu na..
N- hn.. tm to ho hi.. mai to bs yun hi..
Abhi- ab to tm dono ye drama khatm kro.. ab v ek dusre ki leg pulling krte rhna h??
nav-raj laughs togethr. .
R- haha.. hmlog pyar vyar ni krte yAr ek dusre se.. naina to bs mere bst frnd ki behan h..pr mjhse ye bat chupayi ja rhi thi..
Ab- mai to kah hi rha tha ki raj aur naina k beech kch ni chl rha...
Nav- hn beta..ab to tu bolega hi..
Abhi- ab bolega se kya mtlb h..mai to hmesa se kah rha tha..
N- hn hn...tu na.. tu hi to sbse jyada kah rha tha..ki dkho Kaise baat kr rhe h dono.. indono me pakka kch chl rha h..
Abhi- dkho dkho..Kitna jhut bol rha h.. tm ye bat kah rhe the na...
R- arree.. chup kro.. tmlog ladne lge.. pause kro apni ladai ko.. avi to mjhe ladai krni h...tum smjhte kya ho khud ko? (to nav) sbko bta diya tune.. bs mjhe hi paraya kr diya??
N- ab ye ladki type kya bol rha h?? paraya kr diya nd all.. mai agar bta deta tjhe to tu pnsh ni krta use..
R (teasingly) - ni..mai ni manta.. tune sach me parya kr diya.. yahi sach h..abhi tera frnd h, aur shalu teri gf.. mai hu hi kaun..
N- bs kr pagle.. rulayega kya.. bnd krna apna melodrama. ...
A- tmdono ko dkh k tv serial ki yaad aa rhi h yaar...bs v kro plzz...
N- ok.. srry maine tmse ye bat chupayi.. pr badla to tumne v le hi liya..
R- thoda to bdla lena bnta hi h..
Nav- ye sb chorr na ab...ek jruri bat btani thi tmlogo ko..
R- hn bolo
Nav- mai soch rha tha ki shalini ko shadi k liye propose krun..
Abhi- ohho... ye to bht badi khuskhabri h..
R- kb? kch plan kara h??
Nav- wahi to kah rha hu yaar.. hmesa kahti rhti h romntic ni ho.. koi accha sa idea do na..
Raj- thoda sochne de.. btata hu..
Abhi (in a dramatic way)- ye dkho... sahi kahte h duniya wale.. ladki mili ni ki apno ko bhul gye.. naina ka tnsnkhatm?? mai hi saccha wala bhai hu yaar uska. .
Nav- haha.. aisi bat ni..
R- ni..tnsn lene ki jrurat v ni h..mai hndl kr lunga..
Abhi- arre wah..sach me to kch chl ni rha tm dono me??
R- arre kch v...pgl..
nd they cntinue with their talks..

naina-puja *rum*
Puja- naina to thik to h na.. kya ho gya tha aaj tujhe?
Nain- kch ni.. bs thoda nrvs ho gyi thi.. I m alryt..
Puja- ek bad news h yaar.. us bhargav k bacche ne tjhe 1 mnth tk class na attnd krne ko kaha h..
Naina- wat?? mjhe unke pas jaana hoga.. mai bad me milti hu..

alekh in rum..
Alekh- avi to ali v yahan ni.. ek bar uski luggage chk krta h may be kch pta chl jaye..
he strts searching ali's table, drawers nd bed..
he opns a box, kch powdery sa bht sare packets me tha.. kch bottles me v liquids the..
Alekh- ye kya h??
he is abt to opn it..
Ali cms there
Ali- ye kya kr rhe h aap??
Alekh (hiding the box behind himslf)- wo mai bs...
Ali comes near alekh nd tks the box frm his hnd- ye?? chk kr rhe the aap? kya doubt h btaiye?
Alekh- hn kr rha tha mai chk..tmne kaha ki tm faculty rum ni gye the par maine khud apni ankhon se dkha tha tmhe. tmhe jhut bolni ki kya jarurat pad gyi?
Ali- hum jhut q bolenge aapse..
Alekh- fir jhut..tm the wahan..jhut q bol rhe..kya chupa rhe ho..
Ali *nrvs* - hn.. us din hum the wahan..wo Hume. nind me chlne ki adat h..
alekh *isne ullu smjh rkha h mjhe*- accha.. ok.. I hope tm jhut ni bol rhe.. (alekh turns to leave) pr us box me.. accha.. hn.. usme med hoga... ni??
Ali- hn hn.. wahi h.. alekh- thik h.. (he leaves)

naina cms to nav rum bt naveen wahan ni hota h..she is abt to go..
Raj- cadet singh!
Naina- yes sir..
Raj- naveen se milna tha? kch kaam h?
Naina- hn.. kch kam hi tha..
Raj- if u want, I cn hlp u..
Naina- yes sir. actually kch puchna tha..
Raj- puchiye..
N- BC ki rum kaun si h??
Raj- sir k rum k bare me q janna h?? avi wo apne chmbr me hi honge..
N- no sir.. he is nt there..aur mjhe kch urgnt wrk h..
R- unki rum is building me ni h.. college cmpus me hi ek alg quarter h unka.. maine gate k left side jana..
N- oh.. ok sir. thnx. .
R- mjhe v kch bat krni h aapse..
N- aaj bhargav sir k class me jo hua usi bare me bat krni h na??
Raj *smiles* - lgta h sb us bare me hi puch rhe apse?? rhne dijiye fir mai ye gustakhi ni krunga..
N- haha.. ni aap puch skte h..
R *outside his rum*- andar chl kr bat kre?
Naina *laughing, entrs rum*- hn hn..ab puch hi lijiye..
R- mai kma aane ka rsn jaan skta hu aap se??
N-mtlb??
R- mtlb aap to intrstd ni thi in sb me...sit na.. (naina sits on bed) to achank mind kaise chng ho gya??
N- bhaiya ko dkh k hi inspire hui.. bs isliye. .
R- wrld me impssbl jaisa kch v ni hota.. bt u hv to think ki aap ye krna to chahti h na??
N *stands*- yes sir...may be thoda tym lge bt i'll succeed..
R- I lyk ur cnfdnc.. mjhe ni lgta ki apke bhaiya ya mjhe apki firk krne ki jrurat h..
N- dfntly nt sir...
R- ok.. u cn go..
Naina leaves bt cm backs (with a preety smile) - Rajveer sir! !
Raj- yes...
N- thnx
Raj- thnx?? q?
N- mere bare me sochne k liye.. (nd she leaves)
Raj smiles at himslf..
Naina goes to major bharagav's room
N- may I come sir?
B- no..classes ki tym khatm ho chuki h.. mjhe bilkul ni psnd ki class k bad koi apne prblms k wajah se mjhe bother kare..
N- sir plzz .. aaj glti ho gyi.. (enters rum) bht jyada nrvs ho gyi thi.. bs ek chance to aur mil skta h na sir... nd I prms is bar koi glti ni hogi. .
B- ho gya?? do u want to say anythng else? *in anger*
N- no sir.. nthng else. .
B- good.. firstly, get out. (shouts). maine tmhe permit ni kiya tha room me entr krne.. (naina goes out of the room) ab boliye, aap 2nd chance ki bat kr rhi thi.. ok.. mai dunga apko 2nd chance. .
N- thnx sir (with a big smile)
B- let me cmplt my wrds cadet naina (loud voice) i'll give u a second chance bt aftr 1 month.. now go..
N- bt sir...plzz
B- aage ek aur shabd ni.. go.. (full on anger)
naina leaves with tears in her eye...

Raj in nav rum
R- tmhe ab naina ki tnsn lene ki jrurat ni .. she is a bold girl..
Nav- I know bt aate hi class se suspnd kr diya gya use.. I don't knw kya soch rhi hogi wo, kahin safar shuru hone k phle hi haar na maan le..
R- tum bekar me tnsn le rhe ho..
Abhi cms frm behind - hn..tnsn leni hi h to apne madam ko propose krne k bare me socho (laughingly)
N- accha.. naina ki tnsn na lo to prblm , kahte ho accha bhai ni hu..aur agr tnsn lo to v prblm..
R- naina k bare me sochne k liye h na.. hum teen.. to tum thoda kam v sochoge to chlega. .
Abhi- hn.. pr bechari shalu k pas ek hi h.. (raj-abhi laughs)
N- arre.. majak mt udao yaar..
Abhi- ab majak kya.. mtlb tum chahte ho ki shalu k v 3-4 ho...bolo dhundhte h..
N (starts hitting abhi) - tjhe to mai chorrunga ni..

Naina at hstl ground.crying
she felt a hand on his shldr..
Naina- alekh..
Raj- no, it's me..
N (stands, wiping her tears, bt obviously can't hide it) - srry sir, mjhe lga alekh hoga..
R- hmm.. I knw wo aksar yahan aata h, nt ur fault..
N- hmmm.. (downs her head, to hide her eyes from raj.. to hide her tears more precisely..)
R (hands on naina's shldr, directed her to sit) - sb thik h na?
N (sits nd agn wipe out tears, jo rukne ka nam hi ni le rhe the) - yes sir, sb sahi h..
R (naina k aansu pochta h) - wo to mai dkh rha hu..
N (raj k aansu pochne se jaise aur rona aane lga" atleast there was someone jo use chup kara rha tha , bt still cntrlng her tears) - no sir.. I m fyn..
R (holds her chin nd makes her face towards him)- C'mon don't lie.. I knw u r nt.. (luking deep in her teary eyes) I knw u r nt fyn..
N ( raj was lukng at her eyes, aisa lg rha tha ki wo un ankhon k piche chupe aansu ko dkh rha ho, jise naina behne se rok rhi thi) - I M FYN.. (she nearly shouts)
R (naina k yun chillane se, use lga ki sayad usne yahan aa kr glti ki, ni aane chahiye tha use , he stands up) - ok.. bye.. take care..
N (she knows ki usne raj ko hurt kr diya, holds raj hnd lyk a child nd starts sobbing)- sir.. plzz don't go.. (strts crying, eyes full of tear, red nose) I m nt fyn.. (raj sits, nd hold her shldr) I m nt fyn sir.. q ek gltik liye maafi ni mil skti mjhe (with evry wrds, wo aur jyada ro rhi thi) I was nrvs, mjhe 1 mnth k liye suspnd kr diya sir ne apne class se.. (raj jst trying to calm her down, wiping away her tears, bt can't say a wrd) I prms ab kvi koi glti ni hogi. sir jst one chance, pr wo ek chance v ni mila mjhe..( nd she starts crying more, use pata hi ni chala kb wo raj k itne close aa gyi, she was keeping her head on raj shldr nd bs rote ja rhi thi)
R ( he knws ki majr bharagav kisi ki ni sunenge, pr wo naina ko aise rote hue v to ni dkh skta tha, he keeps hsr hnd on naina's head: patting, trying to calm her down) - plzz don't cry naina.. mai bat krunga major bhrgv se.. I m sure he will gv u a chance...

Naina ko v pta tha ki ye ni ho skta, nav ne majr bhargv k nature k bare ne use bataya tha...wo bs ro hi rhi thi.. na uske aansu ruk rhe the.. aur na hi raj aur naina ki najdikiyan, naina's hand was all arnd raj's nck, head on his shldr.. pr dono bekhabr the, naina apne prblms me khoyi hui thi aur raj ko bs use chup karana tha.. they were holding each othr so close...

N- I knw maj bhargav apni punshmnt wapas ni lenge..
R ( taking a deep breath, still holding naina in his arms) - believe me..i'll do smthng abt it..
N (blankly)- I do.. I do blv u..

Naina stps crying nd she realised how close she held raj.. mixture- shy, embarrass, guilt... she loses her grip from raj.. raj also feel awkward.. he distance himslf frm naina.. dono bs ek dusre ko dkh kr apni aankhei chura rhe the. they don't know how to react..

both nrvs
R- I m srry... I guess it was Nthng...
N- yes.. I was jst of my mind.. I m really srry.
R- ni.. srry ki koi jrurat ni.. I mean aisa v kch..
N ( nrvs) - ofcourse.. aisa v kch ni hua.. it was jst.. mtlb. .
R - hmmm .. it was nrml. .
N- hn.. wahi to..mai bs pta ni .. bs rote rote..
R (strts laughing) - its ok naina.. sach me.. it's ok... koi crime ni kiya h tmne..
Both laughs..
N- yes..
R- I think tmhe ab jana chahiye. .
N- hn.. bye.. (naina leaves , bt she turns aftr few steps) - gd nyt..
R (who was jst luking her, smiles nd nodded ) - hmm..

Raj turns away frm naina.. closes his eyes nd lets the air blow on his face with a big blush...
Naina walking through corridor jst reminding the momnts.. how close she was to raj.. wo bahar ki taraf dkhti h, ankhein bnd kr leti h bs mehsus krna chahti h un hawao ko... wo hawayein jo dono ko chu rhi thi..
thodi der phle wo log jitne karib the, sayad wo hawa ko ni, ek duje ko mehsus kr rhe the, ek dusre k karib...


Alekh on his bed waiting for ali, ki ali kb bahar jaye nd alekh uska picha kr k pta lagaye ki wo akhir jata kahan h...
bt ali ab tk sambhl chuka tha, wo bechara ab pakadana thodi na chahta tha hmare alekh se...
bt aftr smtym he gets up nd takes out a mobile phone hidden under shoe box..
Alekh - iske paas cell phn h!! bt ali rules k khilaf jaa kr phn q rkhega...

ali makes a cll nd goes outside the rum...alekh v uske piche jaa kr, uski batein sunne ki kosis krta h..

Ali- I knw u r tnsd..-bt hume himmat ni harni h.. -hum ab wahan ni ja skte, alekh ko doubt ho gya h humpe..ab hume savdhan rhna hoga..-ok.. I hope aap sb kr le.. -aap humare liye itna kch kr rhe h...- plzz, aap khud ka dhyan rkhiyega..
Alekh- ye bat kisse kr rha h?? aur kch to khichdi pak rhi h.. pta ni kya.. sayad mjhe is bare me kisi se bat krni chahiye.. pr kisse??

Puja in rum (sleeping)
Sm1 comes inside from window..
bed k bgl me aakr baith jata h.. with a torch.. - Puja!! puja utho na...
Puja opns her eye- kaun h..
The prsn lights the torch aur apne face pe focus krta h (u can imagine na, bhut wali shakal.. darkness me face pe focus.. huuhhaaa hihi...)
Puja screams. - aaa.. koi bachao.. koi h.. plzz...
The prsn put his hnd on puja's mouth.. - plzz chillao mt, koi aa jayega...mai yudi hu...plzzz chillana mt.. (puja trying to remove his hnd from her mouth) plzz .. Mai hnd hata rha hu pr chillana mt.. *nd he removes his hnd*
Puja- tm kya kr rhe ho yahan..
Yudi- kaha tha na, maaf ni krogi to presan krta rhunga..
Puja- tm aur gussa dila rhe mjhe..itni v tamij ni h, kisi k rum me yun hi ghus jate ho..
Yu- hadd ho.. mai tmhe mana rha hu aur tm ho ki aur chillaye ja rhi ho...
P- chle jao yahan se. wrna mafi ki bat to bhul hi jao..
Yudi (winks) - chla jaunga to mafi mil jayegi na..
P (smiles)- pta ni, sayad..
Y (leaving) - wait krunga..
Pu *smiles, actually blush* - pgl h.. (she hugs her teddy nd sleeps)

Mrng..
Nav-raj..
Raj- nav, ruko mjhe bat krni h tmse..
N- hn.. bolo na..
R- kl rat mai naina se mila tha..
N- thik h na wo..
R- ab thoda sad to hogi na *ab ye v to ni skta ki wo kitna ro rhi, bekar me nav presan ho jayega* bt maine ek prms kr liya usse.. I don't knw mai wo prms kaise nibhau..
N- aisi kya prms h, jo hmare raj se na ho paye..
R- maine usse kaha h ki mai maj bhargav se bat kr k unhe mana lunga, bt u knw na ye pssbl ni h..
N- tjhe bat krne ki jrurat v ni h, bekar me tjhpe chilla dega wo bhari gav..
R- haha.. ni yaar.. ek bar bat kr k dkhta hu..
N- tjhe v pta h, unka reactn.. jane de, mai dkhta hu kch..
R- tmhe dkhne ki jrurar ni" mai hu na...
N- arre han.. shalu k bare me koi idea aaya??
R- ni.. bt nyc idea.. mai bad me milta hu tmse..

class... *ritu*
Huda- yaar.. ab bechari naina kya kregi.. *naina ko sunane k liye* jo ldki ek gun k awaj se drti h, use yahan aana hi ni chahiye tha. *naina -mixture of anger nd hurt* darpok...
Ritu- huda.. wat r u doing? focus on studies..
Raj outside the class, to peon- maj bhargav ki class kb h?
Peon- kariban 2 ghante bad...

raj in bc's chmbr..
Bc- mai isme kch ni kr skta, maj bhrgv ko rok ni skta koi v, ye bat tmhe pta h na..
R- atleasr u cn do smthng abt it, wrna wo baki sare cadets se 1 mnth piche ho jayegi.. choti si mstk thi bs uski. .
Bc- i'll think abt.. mai bula lunga tmhe, avi jao..
R- fyn sir..

Naina at canteen...*it's maj bhrgv class* jst sitting silently..
R- naina!! cm with me bat krni h..
N (stands) - kya sir? (with a hope in her eyes) aap ne bat ki kya maj bhrgv se?? (they walk in corridor)
R *eyes down* - wo to ni ho paya bt i'll do smthng..
N *agn eyes full of tears* - ummm...ok sir.. don't wrry apko tnsn lene ki jrurat ni. I m fyn *she turns to go*
R- naina! !
N- she turns. .
Raj goes closer to her nd keeps his hnd on naina's shldr..
Naina uske hnd ki taraf dkhti h..
R - plzz trst me.. mai thik kr dunga sb..
N *fir se uske hnd ki taraf dkhti h, she closes her eye nd rmmbrs the last night moment, how they were embraced in each othrs arm.. wo aankhien kholti h* - yes.. I trust u.. pta ni q.. bt I trst u...
R (smiles nd hnd hatata h) - thnx...
N - ab chlti hu mai.
Raj noded nd she is abt to leave..
R- arre... ni.. wait.. ek hlp chahiye..
N- boliye na..
R- aaap ke bhaiya ji apke bhabhi ko shadi k liye propose krna chahta h...unki hlp ni krogi??
N *smile on his face* - oh!! wow... u mean shalini na.. I mean shalini mam..
R- hn ji..
N- bt mai to aaj tk mili hi ni hu unse
. bhaiya to milwane se rha..
R- koi bat ni.. avi hlp kr do.. fir mai milwa dunga apko unse..
N- ok..
R- to evng me milte h..wahi..ground pe..
N- ok sir.. i'll be there...

huda crosses by naina..
Huda to a boy- suna tmne.. naina k bare me..
Boy- hn.. usne academy join hi q kara h..
Huda- wahi to.. coward ko yahan se to chle hi jana chahiye..
Naina lstns it aur wahan se chli jati..
raj v ye sunta h bt kch ni kahta - Huda ka kch to krna hi hoga..

yudi puja ko dkhta h..
nd he holds his ear nd comes to her..
Yudi- plzz yar.. maaf v kr do.. kya mil rha h tmhe is nanhi jaan ko presan kr k..
Puja (laughs) - svi dkh rhe h yudi..
Y- to maaf kr do na.. (makes a childish face )
Puja- tm pgl ho..jao.. kr diye maaf..
Y- haye...finally I did it..
Puja- pgl.. (laughs)
Y- to sk coffee to bnta h na..
P- ni..
yudi puja ka hnd pakadta h nd cantn le kr jane lgta h..
P- jbrdsti h kya?.
Y- ji. bilkul. .

Abhi-Nav..
A- tmhe bc ne bulaya tha na.. kya hua??
R- naina k bare me...
A- kya,?
R- actually use aise ni dkh skta hu. to bc sd bat ki thi maine..
A- bc ka chorro. tm naina se kb mile?? kya bat hui? thil h wo?
R- kl nyt.. thik to ni h... bht ro rhi thi.. bt ab sb thik ho jayega. bc ne kaha ki wo mjr bhrgv ko bolenge ki aftr 1 mnth wo ek tst le le.. nd agr naina pass kr jati h to 1 mnth bck na kare..
A- hn.. bt naina ko train kaun krega..
R- hmlog h na.. we will do it. aur filhal maine uska mind divrt krne k liye shalini k prpsl me hlp krne ko kaha.. (pain in his eyes) I hope she will be fyn..
A- tu thik h na??
R- hn .. mjhe kya hoga..
A- nthng.. itna mt socho...

to be continued...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update...,yudi is so cute he finally got pooja to forgive him & raj-naina moments were lovely but whats wrong wid ali continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
nice
yudi ko uski mafi mil gayi...
ali ka secret toh alekh jan kar he ahea ...
huda ka kuch karo plz
RN ko jaldi se saath lao ...

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