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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey interesting Start.
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Love and prayer
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Posted: 9 years ago
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luv hurts bt nvr ends
Part- 3In the hall.. evry1 gathers..

BC- I Welcome evry1 in KMA... this is a introduction clss... want evry1 to introduce urslf n ur rsns of coming here...

Boy1 (in vry serious tone) - I m ali.. hum yahan apne pariwar se dur, apne sapne pure krne aaye h.. desh k liye kch krne ka spna...hum is desh k liye jina chahta h aur agr marna pade iske liye to v hum piche ni hatenge... (praising luk-BC)

Boy 2- sir, mera naam alekh h..aur mera yahan aane ka asli maqsad ye janna h ki akhir hume desh k liye krna kya h? aisi kya prblm aa gyi h... ( evry1 laughs bt cntrls.. captains ka darr, ufff)

Puja :-D - My name is puja...and mai yahan ye dikhane aayi hun ki girls are no less dan boys.. ek girl v apne desh k liye kch v krne ka jazba rkhti h...

one of cptn- dekhte h kitna aage jati h ye..

Huda- Myslf huda, nd mere family wale lgbhg svi log army me hi h, to maine socha ki mai q piche rhu...(evry1 laughs) (naina thinks, to ye h huda)

BC-Quite evry1. .Mr. Huda, it's nt a fun class. . go..

Naina :-* -My name is naina.. naina singh.. (luks at raj nd stammer) mai..I mean mjhe apne desh pe garv h aur mai kch aisa krna chahti jisse hamare country k logon ko mjhpe garv ho...

some cadets claps

BC- No claps, its nt a tv show..
introduction continue... (nt so imprtnt cadets k intro hihi).
introduction over..
BC- The usual classes will strt tomorrow... be ready at 7 am nd read the rules on notice board.. nd the most importnt thng in KMA is punctuality. ..
A guy on KMA gate saying to guard-plzz, mjhe jane dijiye.. guard-U r late, boy- ab aa gye to aur late mt karaiye plzzz nd he enters the cllg)
BC- KMA will nt accpt any rule breakers ( the same boy enters the hall)

boy-Sir, mai jyada late ho gya kya... (hihi, bht jyada ;-))

BC- No, U r absltly on tym...jao aur ground 50 rounds lagao...

boy- wat? itni dhup me?

BC- (in anger) -Go!!
boy is going..
BC- wait,
Boy- yes sir
BC - Name?
Boy- Yudi, i mean Yaduvanshi sahni...
sir ab hstl jau...
BC- go to ground

class is dsprsd.. Naina luks at raj bt he don't care, nt paying any attntn to naina...
Naina in her mind- maine to glti se unhe maara bt us cptn ne to janbujh kr.. koi aisa kaise kr skta h.. rude...

At canteen
boys r sitting together
huda - Yaar ali tu itna sada sa face bna k kyun baitha rhta h.. thoda has diya kr, thoda chill kar na...koi prblm h kya?

Ali-(in angry tone) Ni.. hum thik h.. aur hum yahan apna sapna pura krne aaye..chill krne ni..

Huda(laughing)- Arre bhai, tu to serious hi ho gya...Ye angry dude bn k kya krega..

Ali- (ovrattitude) Hum aise hi h .. apki tarah bnna v ni chahte..

Alekh- arre chill yaar .. hata na bat ko..

Naina enters (furious)
Naina- Huda!!

Huda- ab kisne itne pyar se mera naam liye.. oh!! Naina...kya hua..mai psnd aa gya kya.. (winks)

Naina- Tune hi mere baal khole the na.. aur teri wajah se...

Huda interrupts- Accha, to tu thi wo.. aur meri wajah se kya?? (coming close to naina in flirty way)

(kya btau ise ki maine sir
ko maara)- Tu dur rah mjhse...

Huda- to tu hi paas aa ja...

Naina- (angry) huda tu..

suddenly yudi enters...
Yudi- hi evry1...

Alekh- haha.. pure ho gye rounds.. yaar kya entry maara tha tune..

Yudi- Ab kya btau.. apna style hi yahi h...

naina leaves.. nd goes to her room..
Puja- yaar mrng ne kch jyada hi tnsd thi.. isliye thoda bak bak kr rhi thi

Naina- thoda bak bak?

Puja- ni ni...actually bht jyada.. wo kya h na mai jb v tnsn me rhti hu, meri bak bak krne ki speed badh jati h...ab tujhe to jhelna hi padega na, jbrdsti...

Naina- bilkul.. jhelungi mai, jb tk h jaan.. (laughs) bt yaar kl 1st class h hmari, pta ni sb kaisa rhega..

Puja- han yaar mjhe v tnsn ho rhi..

Naina- Tjhe tnsn? fir se??? niii... (both laughs)

Puja- chl ab so jata h...

boys rum ( huda-ali)
huda singing song
Ali- aap apna ye gaana band kijiye..Hume sona h..

Huda-Tjhe gaano se v nafrat h kya..

Ali- Ni...aap jaise logon se nafrat h...yahan chill krne aaye h na aap, qki sabhi aa rhe the..

Huda-Tujhe q padi h...mai yahan q aaya, kisliye aaya

Ali- Hume aapse koi behas ni krni..

Huda goes out of the rum..
(Yudi-Alekh rum)
Yudi- Yaar aaj to puri body ki watt lg gyi..Kash ghar pe hote, care to milta..

Alekh-chl ab senti na bn..
huda enters..
Alekh- Ali ne rum se dhakka maar k nikal diya kya..

Huda-uski itni himmat kahan ki huda ko kch kahe..

they talk, sing" laugh nd finally slept..
Morning.. Class.. nd gd lck.. evry1 is on tym.. Capt naveen enters, introduce himslf n dan d study tym..jb clss ovr ho jati h.. naina, cap naveen k piche aati h..
Naina- nav...

Naveen (rudely)- sir, call me sir.. hamare bich sirf ek cadet aur captn ka rltn h..

Naina (sad)- itne dino bad mil rhi hu aur aap...

Puja interrupts- oye naina!! chl jldi.. sir aa rhe..
naina goes to class...

to be continued soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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beautiful update...,yudi entry was awesome & alekh speech too but now whats the problem between naveen & naina
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update...there is some tension b/w Naina n Naveen...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Luv hurts bt nvr ends
Part 4

Classes ovr ho gyi n evry1 was abt to go..
Raj enters... Naina(angry face)
Raj- Kal svi.. subah 5 bje.. ground pe milo..

Yudi- Why sir??

Raj- Kal pta chl jayega.. Nd I hate late comers...

Night...
Huda-Ali rum..
Huda- bhai, bht bore ho rhe.. chl na kch majedar krte h..

Ali- Hume koi dilchaspi ni h, apke msti me..

Huda-Yaar, tu kvi ni sudhrega.. pta ni prblm kya h Teri
Ali luks angrily at huda bt doesn't rply..nd huda goes out.
In alekh-yudi rum.. they are arrnging there rum... huda enters
Alekh- Aaj fir se teri biwi ne tujhe rum se nikal diya kya

Huda- yaar..biwi bekar h meri.. chl na grls hstl, kch hotiiee se mil kr aate h...

Yudi- Han chlte h bt phle chl tere biwi se mil k aate h..

Alekh-Han chl na..
Girls hstl (naina-puja)
Puja- Yaar yahan to ntwrk hi ni aa rha..mers friends ki kya halt hui hogi mjhse baat kiye bina..

Naina- Han..unki to halat mrne jaisi ho gyi hogi (laughs) .. tu bahar jaa kr chk kr..

Puja-Han mai bahar jaa rhi.. tu v chlegi kya?

Naina- Nahi.. tu jaa..

Ali in rum.. all three (ali, alekh, huda ) enters..
Yudi- Ali, tu har roj is bechare ko bahar q nikal deta h..

Ali- Hum q nikalenge.. inhe jahan accha lgta h, wahan jate h...unki lyf h..

Huda to yudi- Yaar yudi.. tu iske paas bas ek din rah k dkh..jbrdsti arrng marriage wali feeling ayegi..
(Evry1 laughs, ali in anger)
Alekh- Chal chorr, jyada paresan mt kro..
Yudi- Arre haan, ali hmlog girls hst chl rhe h.. chlega kya??

Ali- Aap logo ko jo krna h kijiye, hume ni jaana..

Huda- chorr use, hum chlte h..
they reachd a wall
Yudi- hume ye climb krna hoga..

Alekh- Yaar pakde gye to..

Huda- Huda aaj tk kvi rules todte hue pkda jaye...nvrr. ye ho hi ni skta

Alekh-Yaar tmlg jao. . I'll nt go...

Yudi- Darr gya.. (laughs)

Huda- Oye alekh! tu to darr gya.. chl na.. risk lene me hi to maja h..

Alekh- Arre jaa na.. mood ni.. (alekh leaves)
they crss the wall.. puja phn pe baat kr rhi thi.. nd usne un dono ko dekh liya...she goes to naina
Puja(excited)-u knw, 2 boys grls hstl me h..
Naina- Chl, maja chakhate h..
naina sees huda nd yudi coming nd wo corridor me oil daal deti h.. puja nd naina hides..wo log wait krti bt boys ni aate h.. as wo log dusre raaste se ja chuka hota h..
Puja-ye log aaye q ni..mai dkhti hu.. (nd she goes)
Naina dekhne k liye aage badhti h nd use dhyan ni rhta (abt the oil) nd she is about to fall..
Alekh comes nd save her..
Alekh-sambhal kr..
Naina (shckd)-tum?? Ouch.. (leg hurts)
Alekh-Kya hua?
Naina (tears)-mere legs..
Alekh-wait.. let me see.. nd wo leg ko thik krta h.. they share a swt swt wala smile...
Naina-Yahan to huda and yudi the.. fir tum yahan kaise aaye?? kar kya rhe ho yahan?? cmpln karu!

Alekh- Yaar tum aisa mt kro..mai to bs undono ko ye btane aaya tha ki warden round pe h...plzz., cmpln..

Naina interrupts- Ok ,ok.. jao.. le jao apne frnds ko v..(thinks-nvr, is huda ko mai aise nhi chorrungi)

Puja comes to naina
Puja- Wo dono to ni dikhe, par alekh tu v yahan??

Naina-Apne pagal dosto ko akele ni chorr skta tha na..

Alekh- wo log h kahan.. (suddenly naina sees warden coming there..)
Naina-Sayad warden aa rhi..
Alekh-Hey bhagawan! bacha le.. mai to gya..
Puja-tu chl hamare rum pe..
Naina-Puja..q?? hum ise q bachaye..
Puja- chorr na yaar.. chlo ab jldi..

they entra the rum nd sees huda nd yudi..
Naina- tum yahan??
Huda- Oye naiiina! tujhe kya lga.. tu mjhe girayegi?? huda ko??

Naina- mai chahu to avi v fasa skti hu..warden bahar hi h..bulau??
yudi-alekh afraid
Alekh-Yaar tum dono k ladai k chakkar me hume q fasa rhi..
Yudi- han naina jiii ;-) .. hume jaane dijiye.. aap dono subah lad lijiyega..avi plzz rhne do..
Huda- chlo chlte h.. tm log inna kah rhe to..
Naina- Jao.. bt sirf tm dono, huda yahi rukega.. (she winks at puja)
Huda- Jao yaar dosto.. ldki rukne ko kah rhi h.. ab to rukna hi padega.. (flirty smile)
Alekh-Chlo yudi.. hum niklte h (they leaves)
Huda sits on naina's bed..
Naina said smthng in puja's ear..
Naina - chl uth ab wahan se..
Puja-yaar bht bore ho rhe.. huda kch entertain to kr hume..Huda-mai to paida hi ldkiyon ko entrtn krne k liye hua hu
Naina-(smiling) puja, ek acchi si item song play kr na..huda hume dance kr k dikhayega..

Huda-Kah kya rhi h tu?? Mai??

Naina- Han.. tu.. bulau warden ko?.

Puja- Chl oye huda.. shuru ho ja..
huda starts cming close to puja..
Naina- Ye kya kr rha h tu..
Huda- chinta na kr.. kch glt ni..Ab btao kya krna h..
Naina- strt dancing..
Huda-Ni krunga.. qya bol rhi thi.. warden ko bulaogi?? bulao..mai v to dikhau unhe ye cllphn.. (puja ka cllphn, huda k hath me)
Naina- tujhe to mai..
Huda runs away-mrng me milte h..
Naina furious...
Puja-yaar, mera cllphn. .
Naina-don't wrry.. avi so ja.. kl dekhte h..
Mrng, evry1 in ground *5 am*
Raj comes there..
Raj- From today we will start our basic physical excercise..bla bla bla...
wo bolte bolte naina k paas se crss kiya.. nd naina ne use leg aage kr k gira diya nd fir bacha v liya.. evry1 laughing(including naina-yes, maja aa gya)
Raj furious- quiet cadets.. stop laughing
they do sm excercises nd runnings..
Evry1 again back to position..
Raj-ok cadets.. we will meet tommrw at the same tym..disperse..
evry1 was abt to go..
Raj- Naina!! meet me near the hill aftr class.. sharp at 4pm..

Puja-Ohho, naina kya baat h.. handsome ne hill k paas bulaya h tmhe.. wo v akele..

Naina-Chup chap chl clss..
class starts, major nayar taking class (a vry strict cap.)

Naveen sees Raj in corridor.. nav uske paas jata h bt raj notice ni krta..
Nav-Raj! kis soch me dube ho??
Raj- Naina..pichli baar maine ignr kiya qki misundrstng ho gyi thi.. bt dis tym.. she has no manners..saja to milegi use..
Nav(confusd)- hua kya h??
Raj narrates whole stry...
nav thinks-accha kiya ki maine kisi ko ni btaya ki naina meri behan h..wrna sayad aaj wo is glti k saja se to bach jati.. pr mai jo use banana chahta hu, us mukaam tk wo ni phuch pati.. ab mai kvi apne bst frnd ko v ye baat ni btaunga...
Nav- tum jyada socho mt.. tm jo kroge sahi hi kroge..
Raj-Abhi ki koi infrmtn??
Nav- han, wo 2-3 din aur lgenge use..
Raj-Ok.. now we shld leave...

In class,
Dr. Ritu mishra is prsnt..
nd huda bar bar naina ko paper ball se maar rha tha...
Naina piche turn hotind gets sclded by mam (ritu)
Ali- Pta ni .. in jaise log yahan academy me q aate h..(huda ye ni sunta h)

class gets ovr..
Naina-Huda, tm ye kya kr rhe the..
Huda- Maate, phool barsa rhe the..(smiles nd leave)
Alekh- ye ni sudhrega...
Puja to naina- ye smjhta kya h khud ko...
Naina- chlo, avi btate h isko...

Boys in canteen
Huda-Yaar us ldki ko dekh...wo last corner..
Alekh-Dekh liya.. to??
Huda - to kch ni .. tu baith... aata hu mai...(naina enters come close to huda's table)

Naina- tu phool chadha rha tha na mjhpe...
(huda smiling)
Naina ek glass pani huda pe daal diya..- Ye lijiye, maine jal chadaya...
huda (shouts)- Ye kya kiya tune... (he clutchs naina's hnd vry tightly)
Alekh- huda chorr use.. aur Chl yahan se...
Huda- tu kaam kr apna. .
Alekh-yudi ise le kr jaa..
Puja- oye naina! bht sahi kiya tune...
(naina-angry luk)
Ali to naina- Aap log yahan ladne aaye h ya padhne...
Alekh-hatao is baat ko..chlo jao apna apna kaam kro..

Naveen comes there nd calls naina...
in nav room
Naveen- Tu yahan kr kya rhi h...mjhe lga tha ki tum kch aisa krogi jisse mjhe proud feel ho..
Naina intrrpts- Bhaiya, wo huda hmesa paresan krta h to...
Nav- Mai cap. rajveer ki baat kr rha...
Naina- pta chl gya apko.. usne slap kiya tha mjhe...mai to bs maafi mang rhi thi..
Nav- dekh choti, ab tu bacchi ni h..sbse phli baat hoti h apne teacher ki rspct krna.. 1st tym jo kch v hua, raj ne ni kiya react qki wo jaan chuka tha ki wo bs ek misundrstndng thi. . baat tune aage badhayi..wo frnd ni h tmhara...Aur aaj tune glti ki h..
Naina-mtlb aaj hill pe.. mjhe maarne k liye to ni bula rhe. ..
Nav- mai fir se wahi baat repeat kr rha hu he is nt ur frnd, teachsr h wo tmhare..aur mjhe bharosa ki tm janti ho ki ek teacher k sath studnt kaise bhv krta h.. nd 1 more thing.. glti tmhari h.. now go. 4 bjne wale h..

naina hill k paas phch jati h.. 5 min phle ..
Naina thinks- u r ryt bhaiya.. he is my teacher, frnd ni jisse mai ladai karu..glti starting me v meri thi aur ab v meri h...
Raj arrives with a staff- Cadet naina
Naina- yes sir
Raj - Apko raste me obstacles bht psnd h na.. yahan 1 sack h stone bhare hue.. apko ise hill pe upar pahuchana h...nd apko girana v bht psnd h na?? to mn kre to fek dijiyega wahan se
Naina (tries to pick up the sack)- Sir ye to bht heavy h..
Raj to staff- Tm yahin rho.. jb tk ye punshmnt puri ni hoti..
Naina in her mind- Accha to ab ye badla lega mjhse, captain hone ka fayda utha rha...
raj jane hi wala tha bt waits-ab aap ye soch rhi hongi ki mai badla le rha hu...ye bs ek punshmnt qki apni faculty nd cadet k rltn ki dignity mntn ni ki..

yudi-alekh-huda
Yudi - pta chla ki naina ko punshmnt mila h..
alekh-q? kisne diya?
Yudi- Capt Rajveer ne aur rsn ka to mjhe pta ni..
Huda-Kch to accha kaam kiya us captain ne ..
Puja cms there-Tmlogo ne naina ko dekha h kya??
Alekh- Han' pta chla h ki use Koi saja mili h, us rajveer ne diya h..

Naveen kisiko dhundh rha h..
Nav- kahan ho tm?? mjhe pta h ki tm naraj ho mjhse...(he sees a girl...go towards her)..I m srry...
Girl(actually she is Dr.shalini)-Ni hu naraj.. bs ye aap ye btaiye ki bzy kahan the..
Nav-Raj k paas tha bs..
Another girl cms there(Dr. ritu)-Ohho!! luv birds are here..
Nav-han ,apka hi wait kr rhe the... (blush)
Ritu- accha, shalini k hote hue hmari wait kr rhe the aap..
Nav-Han, chliye na coffee pee k aate h..
Ritu-aap dono jaiye..
Nav- no.. plzz join us..
Ritu-Mjhe kaam h..

alekh-ali
Alekh-kya soch rhe ho..
Ali- Kch v ni, bs ghar ki yaad..
Alekh- Aap aise akele q baithe rhte h.. ghar ki yaad to ayegi na..chill kro
Ali- hn.. thik h hum

Puja in her rum- pta ni kya punshmnt mila h..kb ayegi naina.. (nd she goes to another rum nd talk to othr girls)

Naina hills pe h.. trying to go up.. bht tired ho gyi h...she was abt to fall qki kafi kinare pe aa gyi thi..
Rajveer- Naina!!! be careful
Naina-Yes sir!!
staff- Sir bina kisi training k wo ni pahuch payegi hills pe.. bht baar gir chuki h..
Raj (naina ko sbk to mil hi chuki h)- Naina!! cm down..
wo niche aa hi rhi thi...but she faints in the midway...


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beautiful update...,loved all the cadets & naina-navin are bro-sis & nobody knows..thats good
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lovely update
story toh interesting he banti ja rahi h
wait for further parts
update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Luv hurts bt nvr ends..
Part- 5

Naina faints nd falls on ground.. (hihi, ni bachaya raaj ne)
Raj to staff- pani le kr aao..
wo naina k sar utha k pakadta h..nd uske face pr thoda pani sprinkle krta h...naina opens her eyes...
Raj- R u alryt?
Naina- Yes sir.. (aftr a pause).. I m srry..
Raj-Its Ok.. now go to ur rum tk sm rst...
naina thoda aage jati h nd ek patthar(stone) se takra jati h... (raj uske pas jata h bt iske phle koi aur use bacha leta h)..*bechari kinna giregi...uff*
Alekh.. :-* ..he holds her...n use pakad kr hstl le jata h..
Alekh- Tu thik to h na..
Naina- han.. don't wrry.. tm jao.. mai khud chli jaungi. .
Alekh- R u sure??
Naina- Yes..

Naveen in his rum..raj enters...
they shares idhar udhar ki mst wali batein...*door knock*
Raj opens d door...oopss.. naina is there..
Nav- naina ...tm yahan??
Naina-Yes sir.. mjhe kch bat krni h aap se..
Nav-hum mrng me baat krenge..
Naina-ok.. (leaves)
Raj-Ye yahan??
Nav- pta ni.. kch kaam hoga.. chorr naa..(thinks- ye hmesa mera jhut pakad leta h, mai avi nikal leta hu) nd avi mjhe jana h shalini se milne.. nyt me milte h ground pe...
Raj- ok.. (nav jldi se bhagta h *hihi*)

in girls rum
Puja- Naina, tu thik h na..
Naina- bilkul.. thoda thak gyi bt ab sahi h..
Puja-tu phle ye bta ki punish q kiya gya tha. .
Naina (ab kya btau mai ise*topic chng kr deti hu*) - arre wo chora na ye bta ki tere mobile ka kya hua..
Puja- Us huda k bacche ne, use to maine chorrna ni h...
Naina (sm mischief in mind) -tu chl ab mere sath..


Puja-kahan??
Naina- tu chl na..
they reach near the wall jo boys nd girls hstl k bich tha..
Puja (suprsd)-hum boys hstl jaa rhe??
Naina-jb wo yahan aa skte to hum q ni jaa skte?? chl tera mbl le kr aate h..
they crss the wall nd hstl entr krte h..
Puja- wo corner wala rum h huda ka..
Naina- tu bahar najar rakh me aati hu mbl lekr...
naina goes to huda's rum..
meanwhile nav-raj-shalini-ritu nd suri (admstrtn dprtmnt *managing*) are sitting on grounds n talking

Naina strt searching for mobile..
puja kisi ko aate hue dekhti h, nd side wale rum me entr kr jati h.. she sees huda there...
Puja to hrslf- huda to yahan h.. to naina kahan gyi?? (*she smiles* aur desk se colour uthati h... *ooops.. huda ka face to drawing ppr bn gya.. hihi)
Naina still searching .. tvi wo ntc krti h ki koi bed se uth rha h..
Naina (* picks smthng* aur uske neck pe rakh diya)- huda ab tu chup chap se mbl de de..
he turns,
Naina-Alekh tu!! ye to huda ka rum h
Alekh-hn..huda aur ali ki ni banti.. isliye mai yahan aa gya..pr tm?
Naina- wo cllphn chahiye..puja ka..
Alekh- ruk.. dekha h maine..deta hu.. (he hnds ovr the mbl)
tvi door pe awaj aati h..
Alekh- lgta h koi aa rha h..tm kahin chup jao..
Naina-kahan..
both r totally cnfusd..
nd dono bed pe so jate h nd blanket daal lete h..
Puja enters..
Puja- naina.. ye to yahin aayi thi.. fir kahan gyi..
Naina (*ye to Puja h* wo blnkt hatati h)- puja, mil gya mbl..
Puja (shckd)- ahem ahem. . ye kya ho rha h.. (smile)
Naina- kch aisa waisa mt soch..aur ab chl
puja door kholti h..- bahar koi h..
Naina- ab kaise jaaye??
Alekh- tu ek kaam kr, window se niche utar ja..
Puja-hn chl jldi chlte h..
Puja niche utar jati h.. nd aage badh jati h...*oh god!! raj-nav-shalini-ritu sb paas me hi h*
Naina niche utar rhi hoti h.. bt tvi wo savi k hasne ki awaj sunti h nd she gets nrvs..jldi jldi k chakkar me, oooppsss fir giri.. ooouucchh!!
Raj- wahan koi h...naveen sath aa..
(hawww!! kya hoga ab.. :-(
haww naina phir se gir gyi
raj-wahan koi h..
nav-Chalo dekhte hai
(every 1 goes there...ooopppsss they sees-bechari giri hui naina, pure body pe mitti nd grass lage hue...hahahahahaha)
nav-(starts laughing)-hahaha kya haal banaya h..
raj- tum yahan kya kar rhi ho (naina afraid)*oops raj , ignrd*
nav-bhutni lag rhi hai (nd wo haath badata hai) chal aa
naina haath deti nd wo phir se chod deta hai ...naina falls again (bechari).. (both laughs nd svi bs khade soch rhe ki ye ho kya rha h*confusd*)wo nav k hath pe halka sa maarti h ( arre bba , ldki wala sweet sa thappad)
nav hlp krta h naina ko uthne me ( naina's leg hurts, phle v to chot lga tha aur ab fir)
Nav-chlo mai hstl tk chorr deta hu..

evry1 confusd
Ritu- ye log ek dusre ko jante h kya??
Shalini- Ni..
Raj- Wo aaj faint ho gyi thi, bs isliye chorrne gya h.. hum v chlte h ab sone..
svi apne apne rum chle jate h..

Nav-Naina
Nav- tu wahan kya kr rhi thi??
Naina -kch ni bs...
Nav intereupts- Jhut ni.. tu boys hstl gyi thi (naina makes sad face).. bach gyi tu..aur agli baar se koi rule todte hui dikhi to I'll be the first 1 to punish u..
Naina- ok.. ab se koi glti ni hogi..
Nav(laughs) - Rules to savi todte h, its fun, mai v todta tha...bs pakde jana is a mstk.. (naina also starts laughing)

Raj is sitting in his rum..
Raj to himslf- aaj sham me v naina naveen k rum pe aayi thi.. and avi wo dono itna friendly bhv kr rhe..may be wo log ek dusre se introduce ho chuke h nd baat krte h.. bt nav ye baat chupayega q
Raj nav k rum me jaata h..
Raj- tum naina ko jante ho..
Nav-han.. 1st yr cadet (laughs)
Raj- mzk bnd kro.. aur btao..
Nav-Ni..wo bs class k kch kaam se aayi thi mere rum pe.. aur avi..
Raj interrupt-ok. chorro..
Raj thinks.. mai janta hu naveen, naina boys hstl aayi thi..use punshmnt se bachane k liye tmne wo sb kiya tha.. bt ye bat nav mjhse q chupa rha...kahib indono k bich kch chl to ni rha..Morning tym
Huda wakes up nd yudi is laughing at him..
Huda- tu has q rha h..
Yudi (cntrls his laugh)- ni ni..kch ni..
Ali entrs nd strts laughing. .
Ali- tu rum jaa ab apne..ground pe chlna h na..
Huda- han.. pr tm log has q rhe..
Yudi- Wo kya h na.. bht kam tym bacha h isliye. . tu jaa na..
Huda *cnfusd* goes out of d rum..sabhi cadets use dekh k has rhe hote h..he is all cnfusd. .
Wo mirror me chk krta h... ( OMG!! pure face pe black black spot, rmmbrd puja ki badmashi.. hihi)
He rushed to yudi's rum
Huda (in anger)- Tune kiya h na ye sb??
Yudi- bhai tu kya bol rha h, maine to khud mrng me dekha ki..
Huda interrupt- Tujhe to mai chorrunga ni..
Alekh- Huda, tu ja yahan se.. tym ho gya h, late ho jayenge...(huda leaves)

In ground, evry1 is dere accpt huda.. Raj enters..
Raj-Morning cadets
All cadets- good mrng sir...
Raj supervise them abt the basic exercise ( ab kya karu, mjhe to ni knwldg h na unna jyada about basic exercise k bare me)
Huda comes
Raj- U r late
Huda- Srry sir..
Raj- I hate late cmrs..
Huda- sir, ab se ni krunga rpt
Raj- Go!! join othr cadets..
(naveen wahan se crss kr rha hota, naina-nav ek dusre ko dkh kr smile krte ... raj ye notice kr leta h) *chorro yaar ye ground wala scene yahi tk.. saare cadets class me h*

Puja- Huda!! agle baar se panga mt lena...wrna har baar aise hi...
Huda - tu huda se panga na le.. accha ni hoga..
Naina- Jo hona tha wo ho chuka..
Huda (cnfusd)- Mtlb??
Puja- Mtlb mera mbl mere paas h..


Huda- Ye kaise ho skta h?. maine to rum
Naina interrupts- rule sirf tm ni, hum v tod skte h...
Huda- mtlb tmlg ..
Naina-hn hmlg boys hstl gye the ( victory smile on naina-puja face)
Huda- mai tmlogo ko..( tabhi cap. nayar aa jate h..huda goes to his place nd thinks Mtlb face pe sb unhone kiya tha, i'll nt leave them)

Now, the class is ovr.. evry1 is in canteen..
Huda-ali-alekh sitting togther..
Huda- mai to us naina ko chorrunga ni..
Alekh (lgta h sb pta chl gya)- q? kya hua? ?
Huda- jo hua uss chorr aur jo hone wala h uske baare me schna h ab..
Ali- apko dusro ko paresan krne k alawa kch aata h..
Huda- tu bich me na bol..
sm1 comes there- Sabhi ko 10 min me hall me gather hona h.. BC ka order h..
Alekh- Chl dkhte h ab ise kya hua...

In hall (sabhi prsnt h)
BC- Cadets, mjhe ek imprtnt announcemnt krna h..Aap sbhi ko freshers party ka intjar hoga.. KMA kl hi frshr party organise krne wala h... bla bla bla
Huda- mil gya tarika naina ko sbk sikhane ka...

its nyt...
RAJ-NAV
Raj- yaad h jb hum KMA me 1st tym aaye the...( they remind their old days)
Nav- hn sb yad h... pr achanak purani baatein?
Raj- ni.. bs yun hi.. har baat sbse phle tu mjhe hi btata tha..
Nav ( oh@! to ye naina ki baat kr rha h).- Raj jo tu...
Shalini cms there..
Shalini- kya ho rha h..
Nav- kch v ni.. bs tympass...
Raj- tmlg baat kro mai chlta hu..
Shalini- Arre, mere aate hi bhagne lge aap.. baithiye na...
Raj- ni, kch kaam h.. bad me milte h...

In boys hstl (huda-ali-yudi)
huda yudi ko apna plan btata h*naina ko paresan krne ka*
Huda nd yudi r talking... nd laughing..
Ali- aaplogo ko kch kaam ni h.. hume to krne dijiye.. faltu ka shor macha rhe h aaplog..
Huda - teri prblm kya h??
Yudi- bhai chorr na.. chl mere rum.
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Nice update...falling of Naina was hilarious... 😊
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beautiful update...,so raj iz getting suspicious regarding naina-naveen

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